Sword Art Online Bahasa Indonesia

[Lawrence Craft]

Maybe 'wajahnya yang terlihat lumayan feminim'

the word 'gloom' is not really important, what important is the meaning of the full sentence

[silereamer]

but after the sentence after that stated that he was looked like a girl, being androgynous, do they need to re-state that he was just looked feminine?
I think there should be more than that

[achtalionz]

Vol. 1 Chap 12 50% up..

[Lawrence Craft]

'tracing a line on her brother's cheek. During the long coma, Kazuto's muscles began to wane, and that razor-thin line gave his profile an exceedingly feminine gloom, despite his originally androgynous impression.'

'menelusuri garis yang tampak di pipi kakaknya. Selama koma panjang ini, otot-otot Kazuto mulai menyusut dan garis tipis di wajahnya itu membuat wajahnya yang seperti perempuan menjadi terlihat agak suram.'

how about that?

Chap 7 is complete

[achtalionz]

I think 'wajahnya yang feminin' more suit than 'wajahnya yang terlihat seperti perempuan'.. but that's just my opinion..

[Lawrence Craft]

'wajahnya yang feminim menjadi agak terlihat suram'

hmm, it's not sounded too bad...

[Lawrence Craft]

achtalionz, your name in the registration page is on chapter 13. so i will edit that to the chapter 12

[Lawrence Craft]

chapter 9 is done

and chapter 10 is halfway

[achtalionz]

ups.. sorry..

[Lawrence Craft]

Chap 10 & 11 is done, i will stop translating for a while, because i have an exam.

and i will continue after i finishing UnH...

tell me if you guys need help

[Lawrence Craft]

are you guys still alive??

[Gwilthyunman]

I'm still alive, but I can't help translate anything until the end of June...

[Lawrence Craft]

okay, you don't need to rush it, quality is important after all.

and i just want to confirm if someone is still alive...

[arczyx]

I want to contribute translating volume 2.
it's okay for me to start right away, right?
thanks for your attention

[Gwilthyunman]

I want to contribute translating volume 2.
it's okay for me to start right away, right?
thanks for your attention

Yeah, sure, but just don't forget to register your name on chapter that you want to work on ^^

btw Lawrence, where art thou