ばか！バカ！　馬鹿ー月！

I usually prefer to translate the colour illustrations when that scene appears within the context. So I TL them as it comes within the story to make an appropriate TL for it.
Anyway for the other two colour illustrations:

"Do you want to come with me?"
Just that one phrase.
Ren wasn't able to comprehend that one phrase right away.

Using will/would isnt wrong. But using "will/would" here would sound like she's asking for a request to him.
So using "Do" here would be appropriate since she's giving Ren a choice.

"......You've got some nerve.
Peeping on my body, are you?"

Yeah. Even the direct TL would be "guts", it doesnt sound appropriate in this context. So using "You've got some nerve" is definitely better here.

lifeman120 wrote:You've got guts

sounds nice

also doesn't this sound better:

The legendary Dragon-Princess who just woke up from her seal, she saved the world in the past with the brave hero.

how does it look so far?

http://puu.sh/awfZJ/960f855041.jpg

g'job. the cleaning is good too.
one question though, is it possible to make it a vertical top to bottom Chinese alphabet format? not Arabic.
like well u get it ~(=3=)~ . its just a suggestion though. might make it look better but idk, dont have any experience so idk

i tried that once and its very hard to read.

the only other option is that i put the text horizontal but that may cover up important places of the image

(meant horizontal not vertical - vertical is the best solution )

lifeman120 wrote:i tried that once and its very hard to read.

the only other option is that i put the text vertical but that may cover up important places of the image

Yeah that's always the problem of using vertical space.
The next best thing is to make it horizontal but yeah that would be killing it.

Record.2 was a cute chapter~ Thanks for the translation~
Here's some TLC request from me~

Finished the introduction color page what do you think?

http://puu.sh/ayab6/ce1fdc90c5.jpg

acolyte wrote:
Record.2 was a cute chapter~ Thanks for the translation~
Here's some TLC request from me~

Record 2 is completed now(Added the last 5 page just now).

Yeah, thanks for the TLC lists.
About Kyelse's hand...

lifeman120 wrote:Finished the introduction color page what do you think?

http://puu.sh/ayab6/ce1fdc90c5.jpg

Looks awesome Nice job.

Can you fix Kyelse's section? The word Brave Hero wasn't captalised and the comma was used in a weird place.

Dragon-Princess Kyelse
The legendary Dragon-Princess who just woke up from her seal and had saved the world in the past with the Brave Hero.

I'm read a bit of it, and so far, I'm... not sure how I like it? I"m a huge fan of your Translations Code-Zero so I'll prob keep reading. But I feel like the author tried to make the MC in the direction of "feel sorry for me please". I guess its more my preference to not liking MC's who qq a lot AND aren't very good at anything (so far anyway).

fixed it:

http://puu.sh/ayK8Y/d2418ad9a2.jpg

Shuiko wrote:I'm read a bit of it, and so far, I'm... not sure how I like it? I"m a huge fan of your Translations Code-Zero so I'll prob keep reading. But I feel like the author tried to make the MC in the direction of "feel sorry for me please". I guess its more my preference to not liking MC's who qq a lot AND aren't very good at anything (so far anyway).

There were actually more stories like this than the OP MCs that is rampant in animes nowadays. I think this focuses on growth rather than OP, just like his Tasogare-iro work. The MCs went thru tough times too.

Even Phia said he's growing fast, just not as strong. (DanMachi also is similar. Weak at first thwn grows quick. Stronger than average afterwards but still weaker than his love interest)

Thanks for the TLC C-Z!
B-T caching is seriously annoying me. I didn't even realize you finished your TLC.

Finished color page 3 I've made 3 version which one is the best?

Version 1

Version 2

Version 3

My vote goes to 1

I was finally able login...

Nice! Three samples. Awesome.
I personally like number 3.

Code-Zero wrote:I was finally able login...

Nice! Three samples. Awesome.
I personally like number 3.

your the boss just use the image that u like, just right click and save image

Finished the last color page:

i made it based on version 3 of the other color page:

Image

Awesome! Thanks mate!
They look terrific!