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Prologue
Suzumiya Haruhi was very (law-abiding/obedient - need a word~).
Even though she is very (melancholic) and sometimes (moaned and groaned), she is actually very sociable. Even so, she's been surprisingly tranquil these past couple days. This quietness from who-knows-where even scares people like me.
Of course, this wasn't her (semblance) being quiet, and it defenitely wasn't a change of heart. Haruhi never doubts herself. Even if her personality has a slight or quiet change, she will never question herself. Anyways, if anything like that ever happened (refering to personality change), I would be put in an problematic situation. So, at this moment in time, I wouldn't bother to try and (correct) her. How do I say this.., (there's a type of quietness that's like a continuously radiating kirlian photograph in which the light has gone from the fieriest red to an orange which is subtly surrounding her.) - note : I'm not sure about this line.
Of all the people in the class, only one, at most two, will be able to realize that she is not quite the same as before. Of these two, one is identifiable as me.
Me > Sorry I only translated this much, but I need to do a SS project due on Monday...actually, I need to start it..
meh, constructive criticism plz~
edit : T__T...then again, people probably won't read this until the fourth book's done...^^
Suzumiya Haruhi was very (law-abiding/obedient - need a word~).
Even though she is very (melancholic) and sometimes (moaned and groaned), she is actually very sociable. Even so, she's been surprisingly tranquil these past couple days. This quietness from who-knows-where even scares people like me.
Of course, this wasn't her (semblance) being quiet, and it defenitely wasn't a change of heart. Haruhi never doubts herself. Even if her personality has a slight or quiet change, she will never question herself. Anyways, if anything like that ever happened (refering to personality change), I would be put in an problematic situation. So, at this moment in time, I wouldn't bother to try and (correct) her. How do I say this.., (there's a type of quietness that's like a continuously radiating kirlian photograph in which the light has gone from the fieriest red to an orange which is subtly surrounding her.) - note : I'm not sure about this line.
Of all the people in the class, only one, at most two, will be able to realize that she is not quite the same as before. Of these two, one is identifiable as me.
Me > Sorry I only translated this much, but I need to do a SS project due on Monday...actually, I need to start it..
meh, constructive criticism plz~
edit : T__T...then again, people probably won't read this until the fourth book's done...^^
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typhonsentra wrote:So we're finally going to see parts of Book 7? That's excellent news.
You're both right. BaKaFiSh, it's wonderful that somebody's finally starting Book 7. But we can't assume that everybody who reads the novels comes over here (although the more the merrier) so please do post it on the Wiki.Haiyami wrote:go post it in wikipedia
I see you've registered your name on the prologue and first 3 chapters of Volume 7, so we're counting on you to follow through on that commitment.
If you don't follow through on your commitment...you'll make Haruhi frustrated...you know what happens when Haruhi gets frustrated...
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Hello bakafish!
First off, welcome to Baka-Tsuki
secondly, thanks for taking your time to contribute to the Suzumiya Haruhi project.
I have just had a look at your registration and your prologue. very nice.
So, i'll just send off a message to the all mighty Baka-Tsuki Boss about your contribution and give you the necessary translator access powers onthe wiki and on this forum.
So welcome to the community, and I look forward to your contribution in the future.
First off, welcome to Baka-Tsuki
secondly, thanks for taking your time to contribute to the Suzumiya Haruhi project.
I have just had a look at your registration and your prologue. very nice.
So, i'll just send off a message to the all mighty Baka-Tsuki Boss about your contribution and give you the necessary translator access powers onthe wiki and on this forum.
So welcome to the community, and I look forward to your contribution in the future.
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