Talk:Hidan no Aria:Volume1 Chapter4

2010-08-06T11:35:55Z

122.107.124.192:

OOOOH GASP GIVE ME THE NEXT PART QUICK!
I want to see Kinji in Hysteria Mode again

The next chapter is more than 40 pages in the novel so it'll take a long time. It is indeed awesome though.--[[User:Spadey|Spadey]] 04:25, 6 August 2010 (UTC)

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I have a question. In the line "The Sunday morning of the day I heard Aria's hospital leaving plans" (Line 13), should "leaving" be changed to "discharge" ? Although "hospital leaving" is still grammatically correct, "hospital discharge" is the right word in this case I think.

Also in the line "I saw her as I was leaving the laundry place" (Line 17). I believe the "place" you were referring to is called a "Laundromat" but the term is not used often so it might be confusing for readers of a non-English/Western background, so changing the term is debatable.
--[[User:Asian InvAsian|Asian InvAsian]] 01:23, 6 August 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, 'hospital discharge' does sound a lot better. I'll change it later along with some brushing up of some translations. I thought about using 'laundromat', but it sounded kind of off in my head so I just left it as laundry place. Thanks for the input. --[[User:Spadey|Spadey]] 04:14, 6 August 2010 (UTC)

No problem XD
--[[Special:Contributions/122.107.124.192|122.107.124.192]] 11:35, 6 August 2010 (UTC)

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