Talk:Campione!:Volume 1 Chapter1

2011-12-04T06:54:09Z

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Just wanted to let the translator know that I really appreciate the work he is doing on this project. It seems really interesting!

If you think there is anything wrong with my edits please let me know.

Some suggestions I have:

For names, translating [Old Lady] as either Nonna or Oba-san.
For [female wolf], either Ookami or Lupis.
Instead of [Capital of Lilies], perhaps [City of Lilies]? I don't know, it just sounds too frilly to be a knights order. Which seems ironic as Erika's order sounds quite manly.--Diss

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Thanks! I thought that no one would care editing a sole teaser project. I really appreciate your help.

[Old Lady] can be trasnlated in [Rokifujin], but not obaa-san or such (at least what I got from Google Translate. I'm translating from Chinese.)

As for [Female Wolf], from my little knowledge of kanas, it is read as [めろう]。I<m not sure though. [[User:Kira0802|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802|Talk]]) 20:24, 1 August 2011 (UCT)

And for [Capital of lilies] I put it like this because there is '都', which means, literally, 'capital'.

== Diavolo Rosso ==

While surfing JCafe, I saw that Dark red Devil could be 'italianized' as 'Diavolo Rosso'. What do you guys think? - [[User:Kira0802|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802|Talk]]) 17:02, 3 August 2011 (UCT)

I like it! I'm all for Italianizing stuff. Maybe you should just put a footnote the first time you refer to Erika as 'Diavolo Rosso' saying that it means Dark Red Devil in Italian.--Diss

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There's several missing " in dialogues. Is it intentional? [[User:Castor212|Castor212]] 09:38, 19 August 2011 (CDT)

==Grammar==
Honestly, does anyone actually edit for grammar? I can understand that the translator might not have great grammar (I'm referring more to punctuation than word order and such), but this is really sub-par. It's on the level of mediocre fanfiction. Someone should take the time to edit it. There's a large number of errors regarding commas and quotation marks. Also, thoughts should be italicized. [[Special:Contributions/188.74.119.102|188.74.119.102]] 10:25, 3 December 2011 (CST)

this project is going 2 be re-translated. As a result editing is just put on hold...sure u can understand this -- [[User:Chancs|Chancs]]

And frankly, if you don't like something, you are always welcome to get off your electronic internet ass and actually do something. Demanding stuff isn't exactly polite. --[[Special:Contributions/188.64.204.90|188.64.204.90]] 00:54, 4 December 2011 (CST)

Talk:High School DxD

2011-12-02T22:07:30Z

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This project requires a '''synopsis''' and '''registration page''' before it can be submitted for approval; that aside, we're still waiting for the higher-ups to come back of course --[[User:Larethian|larethian]] 23:33, 14 November 2011 (CST)

Very nice ! Thanks a lot for translating the novel Code-Zero.

Tnanks for translation. Plot is very interesting and main hero is not narrow-minded japan schoolboy. It looks like Itsuka Tenma no Kuro Usagi but more interesting than the last. (Palert)

Huh? I dare you to say that again after reading every volume after volume 5 of Itsuten :D --[[User:Larethian|larethian]] 10:02, 2 December 2011 (CST)

Hahaha, I sure would love that opportunity Larethian. So translated faster! :p jk [[User:Starkiller4299|Starkiller4299]] 13:39, 2 December 2011 (CST)

IMO, Ise and Taito should meet though. That Dragon Booster or whatever it's name is would be awesome on Taito, considering his overall cockroach status (going by hardness to perma-kill). --[[Special:Contributions/188.64.204.90|188.64.204.90]] 16:07, 2 December 2011 (CST)

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