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Talk:Spice & Wolf:Volume4 Chapter 05

2009-06-24T18:17:57Z

24.184.131.16: problem

:"What came next was to see whether Elsa and Ivan would be frightened. Yet, the forms of their backs without even around was enough to cause a sigh from Horo."

I can't make heads or tails of the second sentence. --[[Special:Contributions/24.184.131.16|24.184.131.16]] 18:17, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Talk:Spice & Wolf:Volume3 Full Text

2009-06-22T21:04:35Z

24.184.131.16: terminology

:"Deanna’s fringe (note: not sure if I’m using the correct terminology here. What I’m referring to is the hair that comes down from the top and partially or completely covers a woman’s forehead) was blown aside slightly, and for a moment Lawrence thought a wave of wind had swept across."

I think the word you're looking for is 'bangs'. --[[Special:Contributions/24.184.131.16|24.184.131.16]] 21:04, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Talk:Spice & Wolf:Volume 1 Full Text

2009-06-22T03:36:00Z

24.184.131.16: errors

== Errors ==
:'"Alright, we shall take is as the Medioh Company has yet to finish preparations. So, what actions are you going to take?"'

Shouldn't that be 'take it that'?

:""You want to pay first? That'll be twenty three Lutes.""
...
:"Here! Thirty-three Lutes."<br>"Mm......exact..."

That would seem to be a contradiction.

:"No, thank you, it's fine. Instead, could you please tell me the details of the deal?"
:"Alright, understood."
:It was very like someone of the south to always offer food to his guests, and this behavior perplexed Lawrence. If he was a citizen here, Lawrence presumed he would be insisted into eating the food."

Extra quotation mark. --[[Special:Contributions/24.184.131.16|24.184.131.16]] 03:36, 22 June 2009 (UTC)