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User:Shiratoriryuuko

2008-03-22T06:04:41Z

A: Undo revision 25585 by Special:Contributions/JUMP (User talk:JUMP)

Haruhi compels me! What else to say...

I am terrible grammar wise and will cause untold horror to the editors. I have little to no care in terms of spelling so beware! (right now I am not sleep deprived so it's all good...)

I go to Animesuki and sort of live there. Right now, I exist as an alterego to my Animesuki self here though.

By the way... Keiichi-san is the culprit of it all! He was there in Hinamizawa, 1983. The timequake makes confirmation impossible... everything makes sense now!

User:Magus

2008-03-22T06:04:20Z

A: Undo revision 25584 by Special:Contributions/JUMP (User talk:JUMP)

It's Magus!!!!! NOT magus!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE DIFFERENCE IS LIKE PUMPKIN AND SQUASH!!!! GOT THAT?
:Sure, magus. Keep on the translation, magus! Don't slack behind, magus! You've got weird feet, magus.

==Chapter Registration Removal Notice==
Due to absence of contributions to Zero no Tsukaima translation project from your part within last three months, you were unregistered from translation of '''Zero no Tsukaima Volume 2 Chapter 8'''.

Zero no Tsukaima translators registration system has been revised according to [http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=1831 discussion on Baka-Tsuki forums], and new version is available [http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Zero_no_Tsukaima:Guideline_%7EDraft%7E here].

[[User:Const2k|Const2k]] 12:59, 3 March 2008 (PST)

User:Kinny Riddle

2008-03-22T06:03:36Z

A: Undo revision 25583 by Special:Contributions/JUMP (User talk:JUMP)

Just filling in this blank space so that my name won't be in a brownish-red colour all the time when others have a nice blue-ish feel to their names.

The reason's that simple, honest.

User:HolyCow

2008-03-22T06:03:13Z

A: Undo revision 25582 by Special:Contributions/JUMP (User talk:JUMP)

I think it's about time I cleaned this up ;P

{| border="1"
| '''HolyCow'''
! [[Image:HolyCow_Profile.jpg|left|150px]]
!
| align="left" |
'''Characteristics:'''
*Oyashiro-sama like
*Haruhiist
*Higurashiist
'''Favourite Things:'''
*Ryugu Rena
*Morino Yoru
*Annoying Smidge204
*Horror/Mystery/Gore Anime
'''Quotes:'''
*"Moo."
*"/me claws out throat and dies"
'''Current Projects'''
*Suzumiya Haruhi
*GOTH
'''Languages'''
*Chinese
*English
*Malay
|}

I'm a total n00b when it comes to the wiki. I can't code or script even if my life depended on it. That's why I tend to make a mess out of the wiki pages, but I guess that's what editors (Smidge204 particularly) are for ;P

Horror/Mystery/Gore are my favourite genres. That's why I love Higurashi so much; it's a perfect blend of all three. Having by chance stumbled upon a novel named GOTH mentioned in the 'Novel Teaser Initiative', this psychological horror novel is quickly becoming one of my favourites /gg Other favourites include GANTZ (see the GANTZeque table above), Elfen Lied and Ergo Proxy. Oh and don't forget Haruhi xD

You can email me at holycow1989@hotmail.com or find me lurking in the IRC channel. Since my translations are mostly from Chinese --> English, I apologize for any inconsistencies or errors.

Horror/Mystery/Gore FTW!

User:Deskoh91

2008-03-22T06:02:51Z

A: Undo revision 25581 by Special:Contributions/JUMP (User talk:JUMP)

Thank you for visiting deskoh91 (Notice the small 'd') the Project Translator's profile page! (=.=")

I live in a minuscule sovereign city-state island near the equator that has one of the most open economies and yet ranks among the lowest for press freedom. 

'''Completed Projects:'''

The Dissociation of Suzumiya Haruhi: Prologue (May 2007) 
The Dissociation of Suzumiya Haruhi: Chapter 2 (June 2007) 
The Dissociation of Suzumiya Haruhi: Chapter 3 (July 2007)

User:An Engrish speaker

2008-03-22T06:02:20Z

A: Undo revision 25580 by Special:Contributions/JUMP (User talk:JUMP)

An Engrish Speaker is currently a Translator for the Interview script, s/he is a fluent Japanese speaker, but has only a moderate command of English.

Please lend him/her a hand, whenever you can.

[[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 18:13, 16 May 2007 (PDT)

User:A

2008-03-16T05:25:33Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

Taking a break for finals.

Ah, it's amazing what horrible grammar native English speakers can have... remind me to never criticize you guys' grammar ever again.

Waiting for a response:
<pre>
6416 (this one really needs to be looked over by someone who actually knows Japanese.)
</pre>
See [[:Category:ClannadCleanup]]

Finished Editing(first pass):
<pre>
2417
2425
2428
3415
3426
3503
3504
4421
4422
4430
4501
4502
4503
4504
4505
4507
4508
4509
4510
4511
4512
6417
6420
6444
6728
</pre>

Category:ClannadCleanup

2008-03-11T07:09:29Z

The following pages have been marked for cleanup. See [[Template:Clannad:Cleanup]] for more information.

== Files To be TL Checked ==
'''Translators, please pass over the list of files here and mark when it's done. Thanks.
*[[Clannad:SEEN6801]]
*[[Clannad:SEEN6802]]
*[[Clannad:SEEN6803]]

== Files to be reviewed ==
Editors, please enter here any SEEN files that you feel you would like to change tense for, but have no idea if it will affect Japanese meaning. A Translator will look over your change and approve it if it is deemed acceptable. Format is the following:

<pre>
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
</pre>

*[[Clannad:SEEN2419]]
**Line 0000, <Sunohara appeared after first period ended, so the tense should reflect this.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN2421]]
**Line 0038, <This line should be the same tense as line 39.> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0069, <There's and was should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0105, <"They made a bitter smile" sounds weird - maybe "They smiled bitterly"? Also, who are they bidding farewell?> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0174, <showed, pretend, and doesn't should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0229, <called and we're should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0385, <tumbles and started should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0395, <arrive and rang should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN2426]]
**Line 0031, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0033, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN3416]]
**Line 0081, <talked should be the same tense as walk> --[[User:A|A]] 13:04, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN3424]]
**Line 0010, <Although the sentence is grammatically correct, I recommend changing it to "She stares at me with her hands on her hips."> --[[User:A|A]] 23:04, 9 March 2008 (PDT)
**Line 0191, <left and move should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 23:04, 9 March 2008 (PDT)
**Line 0401, <says and showed should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 23:04, 9 March 2008 (PDT)
*[[Clannad:SEEN4423]]
**Line 0004, <turn and saw should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0016, <Should this be 'about giving lessons'?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0017, <was and writes should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0042, <Should this be consistent with the other times it's been used?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0046, <was and eat should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0089, <take, started, and made should all be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0095, <punched and watch should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0102, <looks and picked should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0112, I can't quite put my finger on why, but this sentence needs to be reworded. --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0118, <If the use of "we" here is correct, then the last part of the sentence would be "grow up to be splendid people"> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0161, <widen and recieved should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0176, <Should this be 'lean against the wall'?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0207, <said and step should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0243, <bend and picked should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6421]]
**Line 0168, <First part of the sentence should happen before or at the same time as the second.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0181, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0423, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6422]]
**Line 0403, <Fuuko should use third person, right? This also applies to lines 405-408.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0558, <Check that revision is still correct(See history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0763, <Have should be had so that it matches the tense of the rest of the clause> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0816, <Sentence should be one tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6423]]
**Line 0325, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6425]]
**Line 0296, <Should this be "Just let him go"?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6426]]
**Line 0268, <Check that revision is correct(See history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0470, <"Stepped out" sounds awkward> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6427]]
**Line 0086, <Needs clarification> --[[User:A|A]] 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
**Line 0199, <Should this be "that big of an accomplishment"?> --[[User:A|A]] 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
**Line 0400, <Needs clarification (What does 'a notes' mean?)> --[[User:A|A]] 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
**Line 0434, <Needs clarification (What does 'please tuck in' mean?)> --[[User:A|A]] 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
**Line 0462, <Needs clarification> --[[User:A|A]] 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
**Line 0465, <pressed, reads, and packs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
**Line 0499, <See line 400> --[[User:A|A]]
**Line 0540, <See line 434> --[[User:A|A]] 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6726]]
**Line 0116, <Check that revision is correct ("for that" seems redundant)> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6727]]
**Line 0118, <what is plotters supposed to mean?> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6729]]
**Line 0268, <Should this be "Furukawa Bakery's land mine"?> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)

You may return to the main page [[Clannad|here]].

User:A

2008-03-10T06:04:49Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

Waiting for a response:
<pre>
6416 (this one really needs to be looked over by someone who actually knows Japanese.)
</pre>
See [[:Category:ClannadCleanup]]

Finished Editing(first pass):
<pre>
2417
2425
2428
3415
3426
3503
3504
4421
4422
4430
4501
4502
4503
4504
4505
4507
4508
4509
4510
4511
4512
6417
6420
6444
6728
</pre>

Category:ClannadCleanup

2008-03-10T06:04:12Z

The following pages have been marked for cleanup. See [[Template:Clannad:Cleanup]] for more information.

== Files To be TL Checked ==
'''Translators, please pass over the list of files here and mark when it's done. Thanks.
*[[Clannad:SEEN6801]]
*[[Clannad:SEEN6802]]
*[[Clannad:SEEN6803]]

== Files to be reviewed ==
Editors, please enter here any SEEN files that you feel you would like to change tense for, but have no idea if it will affect Japanese meaning. A Translator will look over your change and approve it if it is deemed acceptable. Format is the following:

<pre>
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
</pre>

*[[Clannad:SEEN2419]]
**Line 0000, <Sunohara appeared after first period ended, so the tense should reflect this.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN2421]]
**Line 0038, <This line should be the same tense as line 39.> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0069, <There's and was should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0105, <"They made a bitter smile" sounds weird - maybe "They smiled bitterly"? Also, who are they bidding farewell?> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0174, <showed, pretend, and doesn't should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0229, <called and we're should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0385, <tumbles and started should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0395, <arrive and rang should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN2426]]
**Line 0031, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0033, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN3416]]
**Line 0081, <talked should be the same tense as walk> --[[User:A|A]] 13:04, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN3424]]
**Line 0010, <Although the sentence is grammatically correct, I recommend changing it to "She stares at me with her hands on her hips."> --[[User:A|A]] 23:04, 9 March 2008 (PDT)
**Line 0191, <left and move should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 23:04, 9 March 2008 (PDT)
**Line 0401, <says and showed should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 23:04, 9 March 2008 (PDT)
*[[Clannad:SEEN4423]]
**Line 0004, <turn and saw should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0016, <Should this be 'about giving lessons'?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0017, <was and writes should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0042, <Should this be consistent with the other times it's been used?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0046, <was and eat should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0089, <take, started, and made should all be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0095, <punched and watch should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0102, <looks and picked should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0112, I can't quite put my finger on why, but this sentence needs to be reworded. --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0118, <If the use of "we" here is correct, then the last part of the sentence would be "grow up to be splendid people"> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0161, <widen and recieved should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0176, <Should this be 'lean against the wall'?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0207, <said and step should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0243, <bend and picked should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6421]]
**Line 0168, <First part of the sentence should happen before or at the same time as the second.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0181, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0423, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6422]]
**Line 0403, <Fuuko should use third person, right? This also applies to lines 405-408.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0558, <Check that revision is still correct(See history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0763, <Have should be had so that it matches the tense of the rest of the clause> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0816, <Sentence should be one tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6423]]
**Line 0325, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6425]]
**Line 0296, <Should this be "Just let him go"?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6426]]
**Line 0268, <Check that revision is correct(See history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0470, <"Stepped out" sounds awkward> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6726]]
**Line 0116, <Check that revision is correct ("for that" seems redundant)> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6727]]
**Line 0118, <what is plotters supposed to mean?> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6729]]
**Line 0268, <Should this be "Furukawa Bakery's land mine"?> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)

You may return to the main page [[Clannad|here]].

Category:ClannadCleanup

2008-03-09T01:44:46Z

A: oops.

The following pages have been marked for cleanup. See [[Template:Clannad:Cleanup]] for more information.

== Files To be TL Checked ==
'''Translators, please pass over the list of files here and mark when it's done. Thanks.
*[[Clannad:SEEN6801]]
*[[Clannad:SEEN6802]]
*[[Clannad:SEEN6803]]

== Files to be reviewed ==
Editors, please enter here any SEEN files that you feel you would like to change tense for, but have no idea if it will affect Japanese meaning. A Translator will look over your change and approve it if it is deemed acceptable. Format is the following:

<pre>
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
</pre>

*[[Clannad:SEEN2419]]
**Line 0000, <Sunohara appeared after first period ended, so the tense should reflect this.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN2421]]
**Line 0038, <This line should be the same tense as line 39.> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0069, <There's and was should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0105, <"They made a bitter smile" sounds weird - maybe "They smiled bitterly"? Also, who are they bidding farewell?> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0174, <showed, pretend, and doesn't should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0229, <called and we're should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0385, <tumbles and started should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0395, <arrive and rang should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN2426]]
**Line 0031, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0033, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN3416]]
**Line 0081, <talked should be the same tense as walk> --[[User:A|A]] 13:04, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN4423]]
**Line 0004, <turn and saw should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0016, <Should this be 'about giving lessons'?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0017, <was and writes should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0042, <Should this be consistent with the other times it's been used?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0046, <was and eat should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0089, <take, started, and made should all be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0095, <punched and watch should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0102, <looks and picked should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0112, I can't quite put my finger on why, but this sentence needs to be reworded. --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0118, <If the use of "we" here is correct, then the last part of the sentence would be "grow up to be splendid people"> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0161, <widen and recieved should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0176, <Should this be 'lean against the wall'?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0207, <said and step should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0243, <bend and picked should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN4512]] - Done checking, waiting for confirmation
**Line 0033, <... I don't get it.> --[[User:A|A]] 12:29, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0122, <Check that revision is correct (see history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 12:29, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0137, <Shouldn't it be 'because of' instead of 'to', then? As it is, it sounds like Tomoya is walking to the evening> --[[User:A|A]] 12:29, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6421]]
**Line 0168, <First part of the sentence should happen before or at the same time as the second.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0181, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0423, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6422]]
**Line 0403, <Fuuko should use third person, right? This also applies to lines 405-408.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0558, <Check that revision is still correct(See history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0763, <Have should be had so that it matches the tense of the rest of the clause> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0816, <Sentence should be one tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
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**Line 0325, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
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**Line 0296, <Should this be "Just let him go"?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6426]]
**Line 0268, <Check that revision is correct(See history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0470, <"Stepped out" sounds awkward> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6726]]
**Line 0116, <Check that revision is correct ("for that" seems redundant)> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6727]]
**Line 0118, <what is plotters supposed to mean?> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6729]]
**Line 0268, <Should this be "Furukawa Bakery's land mine"?> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)

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Category:ClannadCleanup

2008-03-09T01:42:23Z

The following pages have been marked for cleanup. See [[Template:Clannad:Cleanup]] for more information.

== Files To be TL Checked ==
'''Translators, please pass over the list of files here and mark when it's done. Thanks.
*[[Clannad:SEEN6801]]
*[[Clannad:SEEN6802]]
*[[Clannad:SEEN6803]]

== Files to be reviewed ==
Editors, please enter here any SEEN files that you feel you would like to change tense for, but have no idea if it will affect Japanese meaning. A Translator will look over your change and approve it if it is deemed acceptable. Format is the following:

<pre>
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
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*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
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*[[Clannad:SEEN2419]]
**Line 0000, <Sunohara appeared after first period ended, so the tense should reflect this.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN2421]]
**Line 0038, <This line should be the same tense as line 39.> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0069, <There's and was should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0105, <"They made a bitter smile" sounds weird - maybe "They smiled bitterly"? Also, who are they bidding farewell?> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0174, <showed, pretend, and doesn't should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0229, <called and we're should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0385, <tumbles and started should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0395, <arrive and rang should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN2426]]
**Line 0031, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0033, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN3416]]
**Line 0081, <talked should be the same tense as walk> --[[User:A|A]] 13:04, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN4423]]
**Line 0004, <turn and saw should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0016, <Should this be 'about giving lessons'?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0017, <was and writes should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0042, <Should this be consistent with the other times it's been used?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0046, <was and eat should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0089, <take, started, and made should all be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0095, <punched and watch should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0102, <looks and picked should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0112, --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0118, <If the use of "we" here is correct, then the last part of the sentence would be "grow up to be splendid people"> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0161, <widen and recieved should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0176, <Should this be 'lean against the wall'?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0207, <said and step should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0243, <bend and picked should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN4512]] - Done checking, waiting for confirmation
**Line 0033, <... I don't get it.> --[[User:A|A]] 12:29, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0122, <Check that revision is correct (see history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 12:29, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0137, <Shouldn't it be 'because of' instead of 'to', then? As it is, it sounds like Tomoya is walking to the evening> --[[User:A|A]] 12:29, 8 March 2008 (PST)
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**Line 0168, <First part of the sentence should happen before or at the same time as the second.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0181, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0423, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6422]]
**Line 0403, <Fuuko should use third person, right? This also applies to lines 405-408.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0558, <Check that revision is still correct(See history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0763, <Have should be had so that it matches the tense of the rest of the clause> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0816, <Sentence should be one tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6423]]
**Line 0325, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6425]]
**Line 0296, <Should this be "Just let him go"?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6426]]
**Line 0268, <Check that revision is correct(See history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0470, <"Stepped out" sounds awkward> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6726]]
**Line 0116, <Check that revision is correct ("for that" seems redundant)> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6727]]
**Line 0118, <what is plotters supposed to mean?> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6729]]
**Line 0268, <Should this be "Furukawa Bakery's land mine"?> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)

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User:A

2008-03-09T01:16:59Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

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Category:ClannadCleanup

2008-03-08T23:34:55Z

User:A

2008-03-08T21:05:16Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

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User:A

2008-03-08T09:19:03Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

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User:A

2008-03-08T08:35:38Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

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Category:ClannadCleanup

2008-03-08T08:33:28Z

The following pages have been marked for cleanup. See [[Template:Clannad:Cleanup]] for more information.

== Files To be TL Checked ==
'''Translators, please pass over the list of files here and mark when it's done. Thanks.
*[[Clannad:SEEN6801]]
*[[Clannad:SEEN6802]]
*[[Clannad:SEEN6803]]

== Files to be reviewed ==
Editors, please enter here any SEEN files that you feel you would like to change tense for, but have no idea if it will affect Japanese meaning. A Translator will look over your change and approve it if it is deemed acceptable. Format is the following:

<pre>
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
</pre>

*[[Clannad:SEEN2426]]
**Line 0031, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0033, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN4512]]
**Line 0005, <touch and confirmed should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0010, <try and noticed should be the same tense(placed and raised can stay the same)> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0018, <Clarification needed- what does 'fetched up' mean?> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0031, <work and was should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0033, <Clarification needed> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0058, <change and oiled should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0087, <Both translations have tense problems, but choose one first.> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0101, <flip and began should have the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0122, <Check that revision is correct (see history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0125, <Clarification needed> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0137, <Both translations have verb problems, but choose one first.> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0149, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0171, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0192, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0218, <bursts and said should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0219, <didn't and what's should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0258, <lisp is not an adjective.> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0263, <said and glows should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0284, <Should that be dust, or is it some weird phrase I don't know of?> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0318, <Is this some weird phrase I don't know of?> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0322, <This could go two ways- either put single quotes around the 'I have to...' part of the sentence or change have to had> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0323, <See 0322> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0328, <have and was should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0343, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0364, <Needs to be rephrased> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0382, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0594, <Check that revision is correct> --[[User:A|A]] 00:33, 8 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6421]]
**Line 0168, <First part of the sentence should happen before or at the same time as the second.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0181, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0423, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
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**Line 0403, <Fuuko should use third person, right? This also applies to lines 405-408.> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0558, <Check that revision is still correct(See history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0763, <Have should be had so that it matches the tense of the rest of the clause> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0816, <Sentence should be one tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6423]]
**Line 0325, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6425]]
**Line 0296, <Should this be "Just let him go"?> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6426]]
**Line 0268, <Check that revision is correct(See history for details)> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
**Line 0470, <"Stepped out" sounds awkward> --[[User:A|A]] 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6726]]
**Line 0116, <Check that revision is correct ("for that" seems redundant)> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6727]]
**Line 0118, <what is plotters supposed to mean?> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
*[[Clannad:SEEN6729]]
**Line 0268, <Should this be "Furukawa Bakery's land mine"?> --[[User:A|A]] 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)

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User:A

2008-03-08T01:15:53Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

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User:A

2008-03-03T05:23:49Z

A: New page: Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- i...

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

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User talk:A

2008-03-03T05:22:26Z

A: Removing all content from page

User talk:A

2008-03-03T02:10:39Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

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2008-03-03T01:29:13Z

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User talk:A

2008-03-02T21:29:32Z

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Talk:Clannad:SEEN7500

2008-02-26T09:01:10Z

== Comments ==

Funny thing is, if you play one round and pick the first selection every time you encounter a choice, you will get Misae's ending, because you'd be picking the first option for every encounter, meaning you'd raise all the flags.

I don't get this scenario at all. What happened? What did that last part mean? What's the connection to Tomoyo's scenario? --[[User:24.221.176.159|24.221.176.159]] 18:58, 27 June 2007 (PDT)
:It's meant to be vague. And in Tomoyo's scenario, if you talked about Misae's cat during her route, you'll find her cat's run around during Founder's Day. Help her find the cat, and then Tomoya will suddenly feel something and tell Misae to have fun with the cat at Founder's Day because she ''promised'', somehow (that is, with Shima). You'll know what I mean. --[[User:Velocity7|velocity7]], 28 June 2007 12:06 AM EST
::So let me see if I understand. Somehow, he...turned into the cat? And then, Misae's gonna have fun with the cat, but remain terribly unaware that it's that guy? And she's still going to end up guyless, too? --[[User:24.221.176.159|24.221.176.159]] 23:49, 3 July 2007 (PDT)
:::No, he didn't turn into the cat. He was the cat the entire time; the cat that the original Shima Katsura had. And when Shima Katsura passed away, he gave the cat a light. (probably a near-death experience allowed him to perform something that only Tomoya could) --[[User:Velocity7|velocity7]], 4 July 2007 08:44

== Quotation mark problem? ==

From line 1278 to 1280 the Quotation marks ("...") didn't transform in to the Brackets 「…」[[User:118.172.8.142|118.172.8.142]] 23:50, 24 February 2008 (PST)
:Please read guidelines. The special "…" character is not allowed. --[[User:Velocity7|Velocity7]] 07:52, 25 February 2008 (PST)
::Umm... I mean in game, every Quotation marks will be transform to Brackets. Right?
::e.g. code for line 0002 is
:::\{Misae} "Here, right?!"
::in game you will see
:::Misae 「Here, right?!」
::The problem is line 1278 it start with a Quotation mark, and stop with another one in line 1280. So you will see this 3 lines (when you play game) with Quotation marks, not the Brackets. [[User:118.172.10.245|118.172.10.245]] 00:48, 26 February 2008 (PST)

You're using the unofficial patch, aren't you? The quote replacement was done by the person who compiled that patch because the game kept crashing- it's not automatic.

User talk:A

2008-02-10T20:16:38Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

Waiting for a response:
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3503
6416 (this one really needs to be looked over by someone who actually knows Japanese.)
6417
6421
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Finished Editing(first pass):
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2008-02-09T18:08:56Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

Waiting for a response:
<pre>
3503
4509 (still one tense problem left)
6416 (this one really needs to be looked over by someone who actually knows Japanese.)
6417
6421
6422
6726
6727
6729
</pre>

Finished Editing(first pass):
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2417
4421
4430
4501
4502
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4504
4505
4507
4508
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6728
6420
</pre>

User talk:A

2008-02-04T12:35:38Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

Waiting for a response:
<pre>
3503
4421
4507
4509 (still one tense problem left)
6416 (this one really needs to be looked over by someone who actually knows Japanese.)
6417
6421
6422
6726
6727
6729
</pre>

Finished Editing(first pass):
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2417
4430
4501
4502
4503
4504
4505
4508
4510
4511
6728
6420
</pre>

User talk:A

2008-02-03T21:56:35Z

Note to anyone checking my edits: I know absolutely no Japanese. All my edits are from the point of view of someone trying to make the script sound like what I believe is normal English- if my proposed changes go against what the actual Japanese says, feel free to erase/delete/revert them.

Also: I don't change lines I think have a good Alt translation already.

Formerly 71.202.158.239 and 128.97.179.68 (and a few others)

Waiting for a response:
<pre>
4421
4502
4505
4507
4509 (still one tense problem left)
6416 (this one really needs to be looked over by someone who actually knows Japanese.)
6417
</pre>

Finished Editing(first pass):
<pre>
2417
4430
4501
4503
4504
4508
4510
4511
</pre>

User talk:A

2008-02-03T21:55:41Z

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2008-01-28T12:15:43Z

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2008-01-28T12:01:01Z