http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/api.php?action=feedcontributions&feedformat=atom&user=Watem 2026-05-17T18:50:12Z User contributions MediaWiki 1.43.1 http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Magika_No_Kenshi_To_Shoukan_Maou:Volume_3_Chapter_2&diff=446747 2015-06-11T01:42:47Z

<p>Watem: Grammar Correction</p> <hr /> <div>&quot;After all isn’t he a joyful guy who make who knows who many women to serve him?&quot; in part 2. It is a weird sentence that needs to be rephrased, perhaps as &quot;After all, isn't he a joyful(? odd word choice) guy who knows how to make many women serve him?&quot;<br /> <br /> At the end of that same line it says &quot;I don’t want to side with that kind of shameless guy however much.” which also needs to be rephrased.<br /> <br /> ~Watem</div>

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