7 Nights:Chapter 01 part1 - Revision history

Simon at 21:42, 13 October 2012

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Chapter 1 - The woman warrior dances in the night - Part 1

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	I carefully touch my head with my hands… With worried thoughts, I slowly rub my hands around… But my head does not have a bruise, nor is it damaged in any way… My hand does not get covered in blood and the pain is not there anymore.		I carefully touch my head with my hands… With worried thoughts, I slowly rub my hands around… But my head does not have a bruise, nor is it damaged in any way… My hand does not get covered in blood and the pain is not there anymore.
	~~lol~~

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Chapter 1 - The woman warrior dances in the night - Part 1

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	I carefully touch my head with my hands… With worried thoughts, I slowly rub my hands around… But my head does not have a bruise, nor is it damaged in any way… My hand does not get covered in blood and the pain is not there anymore.		I carefully touch my head with my hands… With worried thoughts, I slowly rub my hands around… But my head does not have a bruise, nor is it damaged in any way… My hand does not get covered in blood and the pain is not there anymore.
			lol

74.178.196.38: Is this book supposed to be in past or present tense...? Grammar/awkwardness fixes.

2009-08-16T01:28:01Z

Is this book supposed to be in past or present tense...? Grammar/awkwardness fixes.

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Vaelis at 09:23, 15 February 2009

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Vaelis at 09:21, 15 February 2009

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	~~~Volume 1~~- ~~The woman warrior dances in the night~~: ~~chapter 1~~~		<!--(note: middle school = year 7, 8, 9. high school = year 10+)-->

	~~(note: middle school = year 7, 8, 9. high school = year 10+)~~		My name is Sakuya Hoshi

	~~My name is Sakuya Hoshi~~
	I go to Suijou academy		I go to Suijou academy

	I’m in high school, from the 1E group and my student class number is 33.		I’m in high school, from the 1E group and my student class number is 33.

	I’m just a normal high-schooler.		I’m just a normal high-schooler.

	Or rather, I think I should say I ‘was’ normal. These past few days, I’ve been involved in some rather strange events.		Or rather, I think I should say I ‘was’ normal. These past few days, I’ve been involved in some rather strange events.

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	“Shi-”		“Shi-”

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	“ARGHHHHHHH!”		“ARGHHHHHHH!”
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Vaelis: 7 Nights:Chapter 01 moved to 7 Nights:Chapter 01 part1

2009-02-15T09:14:27Z

7 Nights:Chapter 01 moved to 7 Nights:Chapter 01 part1

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Lord jagganath at 09:15, 10 February 2009

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	~~[[User~~:~~Lord jagganath\|Lord jagganath]]~~		09:15, 10 February 2009 (UTC)~~

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	“Did I sleep walk all the way here…?”		“Did I sleep walk all the way here…?”

	Mumbling, I shook off each ~~guess~~ of ~~one~~ happened one by another… I don’t understand the current situation at all. It’s useless to think of how I came here.		Mumbling, I shook off each possibility of what happened one after the another… I don’t understand the current situation at all. It’s useless to think of how I came here.

	I put my hand in my pocket… And, it was there, my mobile phone. I took it out, unfolded it and I checked the time. It said it was 2:14am. Today is the Monday 25th of June.		I put my hand in my pocket… And, it was there, my mobile phone. I took it out, unfolded it and I checked the time. It said it was 2:14am. Today is the Monday 25th of June.
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	Just as I thought, there was a map of this area on the sign post.		Just as I thought, there was a map of this area on the sign post.
	This small park does not have any light-posts. So I use my mobile phone to ~~shine~~ the map and the first thing which got to me was the ~~parks~~ name. ~~That~~ was…		This small park does not have any light-posts. So I use my mobile phone to light up the map and the first thing which got to me was the park's name. Which was…

	“Shiraishi city park… Shiraishi!?”		“Shiraishi city park… Shiraishi!?”
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	I was currently 1 hour walk away from my place.		I was currently 1 hour walk away from my place.

	For me Shiraishi city is a city filled with memories. When I was young I lived in this city, and I played in that park. But, when I was in middle school I moved houses and since then, I haven’t ~~ever~~ visited this city once.		For me, Shiraishi city is a city filled with memories. When I was young, I lived in this city, and I played in that park. But, when I was in middle school, I moved houses and since then, I haven’t even visited this city once.

	If the situation was different, I probably would’ve been glad I came here. But, unfortunately I am dreadfully worried. I just want to hurry up and go home.		If the situation was different, I probably would’ve been glad I came here. But, unfortunately I am dreadfully worried. I just want to hurry up and go home.

Lord jagganath at 09:11, 10 February 2009

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Lord jagganath: Edited for flow, hopefully it is satisfactory

2009-02-10T09:10:04Z

Edited for flow, hopefully it is satisfactory

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