7 Nights:Chapter 01 part3 - Revision history

Simon at 21:42, 13 October 2012

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2009-12-19T08:27:46Z

Chapter 1 - The woman warrior dances in the night - Part 3

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	I rushed for my classroom at the first-year corridors of the high school building. I usually still have time when I arrive every morning, but I lost it this time as I dusted off ~~myself~~ at the shoe racks.		I rushed for my classroom at the first-year corridors of the high school building. I usually still have time when I arrive every morning, but I lost it this time as I dusted myself off at the shoe racks.

	"Good morning..."		"Good morning..."

74.178.196.38: /* Chapter 1 - The woman warrior dances in the night - Part 3 */

2009-08-16T01:58:40Z

Chapter 1 - The woman warrior dances in the night - Part 3

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	"Good morning..."		"Good morning..."

	Passing through the classroom door, it's ~~0825H~~ as I looked at the wall clock, 5 minutes till HR period. Most of the students are already inside, amusing themselves with morning talk.		Passing through the classroom door, it's 8:25 as I looked at the wall clock, 5 minutes till HR period. Most of the students are already inside, amusing themselves with morning talk.

	"Yo, Hoshi! Got all dirtied up, ''ne''?		"Yo, Hoshi! Got all dirtied up, ''ne''?

	"Yup, got up late and had to run ..."		"Yup, got up late and had to run..."

	With a vague smile, I replied to my ~~friends~~ back carelessly as I hurried to my seat, breathed a sigh of relief, and slumped myself into the desk. My backside still throbbed from the pain, my face red from that slap. What a messy morning.		With a vague smile, I replied to my friend's back carelessly as I hurried to my seat, breathed a sigh of relief, and slumped myself into the desk. My backside still throbbed from the pain, my face red from that slap. What a messy morning.

	After that, Teru-san <!-- Note: Dammit! --> interfered and the incident was settled. After the girl thoroughly scowled at me, she left with her shoulders squared. I looked at the swinging twin ponytails at her back as I massaged my swollen face.		After that, Teru-san <!-- Note: Dammit! --> interfered and the incident was settled. After the girl thoroughly scowled at me, she left with her shoulders squared. I looked at the swinging twin ponytails at her back as I massaged my swollen face.
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	"''Iiiyaa'', Sa-kun's unexpectedly daring, ''ne''?"		"''Iiiyaa'', Sa-kun's unexpectedly daring, ''ne''?"

	''Gaaah''! I knew she witnessed it !?		''Gaaah''! I knew she witnessed it!?

	"What do you want!? Is it Vittoria's Montblanc ...!?"		"What do you want!? Is it Vittoria's Montblanc ...!?"

	"You're way ahead--! Anyway, for hush-hush, I wish for the Montblanc from that well-known cake shop, and I won't say a word♪ Well, I wanted to say 'give me', but then ..."		"You're way ahead--! Anyway, for hush-hush, I wish for the Montblanc from that well-known cake shop, and I won't say a word♪ Well, I wanted to say 'give me', but then..."

	"I ... I'll think this over ..."		"I... I'll think this over..."

	"All riight! I like Sa-kun♪ I'll be so tight-lipped so don't worry, ''ne''"		"All riight! I like Sa-kun♪ I'll be so tight-lipped so don't worry, ''ne''"
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	Ah, ''mou'', what are you talking about. Get back on topic!		Ah, ''mou'', what are you talking about. Get back on topic!

	"Anyway they call her Akeno, right? Just who is she? What's her relationship with you?"		"Anyway, they call her Akeno, right? Just who is she? What's her relationship with you?"

	"So you don't know apart from jokes ..." <!-- Note: Again! -->		"So you don't know apart from jokes..." <!-- Note: Again! -->

	As Nazumu murmured "love is blind", she answered seriously with earnest.		As Nazumu murmured "love is blind", she answered seriously with earnest.
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	"I see, you knew each other through club activities"		"I see, you knew each other through club activities"

	Nazumu's with the lacrosse club. Juniors and seniors play separately, that explains the "I played lacrosse with her until last year."		Nazumu's with the lacrosse club. Juniors and seniors play separately, so that explains the "I played lacrosse with her until last year."

	"Anyhow isn't she cute? Besides her nice character, her success rate's terrible. Every month, she was confessed to --"		"Anyhow, isn't she cute? Besides her nice character, her success rate's terrible. Every month, she was confessed to --"

	"12 boys in one year!"		"12 boys in one year!"

Vaelis at 09:27, 15 February 2009

2009-02-15T09:27:40Z

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			===<noinclude>Chapter 1 - The woman warrior dances in the night - </noinclude>Part 3===

	~~''... continued from part 2'' '''(!~~<!--To fellow translators and editors: please refer to http://rkmg.higu.biz/?a=alche&m=1&story_idx=5&list_idx=152 if you want to correct this page. Thanks -- joay -->~~)'''~~		<!--To fellow translators and editors: please refer to http://rkmg.higu.biz/?a=alche&m=1&story_idx=5&list_idx=152 if you want to correct this page. Thanks -- joay -->

	I rushed for my classroom at the first-year corridors of the high school building. I usually still have time when I arrive every morning, but I lost it this time as I dusted off myself at the shoe racks.		I rushed for my classroom at the first-year corridors of the high school building. I usually still have time when I arrive every morning, but I lost it this time as I dusted off myself at the shoe racks.
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	With a vague smile, I replied to my friends back carelessly as I hurried to my seat, breathed a sigh of relief, and slumped myself into the desk. My backside still throbbed from the pain, my face red from that slap. What a messy morning.		With a vague smile, I replied to my friends back carelessly as I hurried to my seat, breathed a sigh of relief, and slumped myself into the desk. My backside still throbbed from the pain, my face red from that slap. What a messy morning.

	After that, Teru-san ~~'''(!~~<!-- Note: Dammit! -->~~)'''~~ interfered and the incident was settled. After the girl thoroughly scowled at me, she left with her shoulders squared. I looked at the swinging twin ponytails at her back as I massaged my swollen face.		After that, Teru-san <!-- Note: Dammit! --> interfered and the incident was settled. After the girl thoroughly scowled at me, she left with her shoulders squared. I looked at the swinging twin ponytails at her back as I massaged my swollen face.

	Due to the accident at the school gate, I was the center of attention for many students. Someone seen in that acquaintance would probably burst flames from his head and burn to death --		Due to the accident at the school gate, I was the center of attention for many students. Someone seen in that acquaintance would probably burst flames from his head and burn to death --
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	"Anyway they call her Akeno, right? Just who is she? What's her relationship with you?"		"Anyway they call her Akeno, right? Just who is she? What's her relationship with you?"

	"So you don't know apart from jokes ..." ~~'''(!~~<!-- Note: Again! -->~~)'''~~		"So you don't know apart from jokes ..." <!-- Note: Again! -->

	As Nazumu murmured "love is blind", she answered seriously with earnest.		As Nazumu murmured "love is blind", she answered seriously with earnest.
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	"''Nya''. Summer vacation, festival, graduation seasons included, well about 20 ... eh, are you serious?"		"''Nya''. Summer vacation, festival, graduation seasons included, well about 20 ... eh, are you serious?"

	Nazumu talked herself into astonishment. She recalled the girl going for me at the school gates. Then her eyes must have turned to disgust ~~'''(!~~<!-- Note: Unsure of this sentence! please check it for me -->~~)'''~~. It's as if she was unable to notice. ~~'''(!~~<!-- Note: Unsure of this sentence! please check it for me -->~~)'''~~		Nazumu talked herself into astonishment. She recalled the girl going for me at the school gates. Then her eyes must have turned to disgust <!-- Note: Unsure of this sentence! please check it for me -->. It's as if she was unable to notice. <!-- Note: Unsure of this sentence! please check it for me -->

	"And you didn't go steady with anyone despite of your looks .... Anyway, be on your guard. 'Strengthen your defenses, how many have fallen before impregnable defenses' they say. You hear?"		"And you didn't go steady with anyone despite of your looks .... Anyway, be on your guard. 'Strengthen your defenses, how many have fallen before impregnable defenses' they say. You hear?"
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	"Hm? Right, I'll keep that in mind. Thank you."		"Hm? Right, I'll keep that in mind. Thank you."

	"''Mou''! Freshen up! No matter how desperate, don't despair. Don't ever lose hope. Until that day your feelings reach her, keep on attacking! ... Ah, but stalking or depression is a no go, ''ne''. Keep on moderation your heartsickness and agony, and you'll keep on moderation you amusing me. ~~'''(!~~<!-- Note: Unsure of this sentence! please check it for me -->~~)'''~~		"''Mou''! Freshen up! No matter how desperate, don't despair. Don't ever lose hope. Until that day your feelings reach her, keep on attacking! ... Ah, but stalking or depression is a no go, ''ne''. Keep on moderation your heartsickness and agony, and you'll keep on moderation you amusing me. <!-- Note: Unsure of this sentence! please check it for me -->

	"That's your real intention, you're wicked."		"That's your real intention, you're wicked."
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	~~''continued on part~~ 4 ~~...''~~
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Joay: some minor edits

2009-01-11T04:03:57Z

some minor edits

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	With a vague smile, I replied to my friends back carelessly as I hurried to my seat, breathed a sigh of relief, and slumped myself into the desk. My backside still throbbed from the pain, my face red from that slap. What a messy morning.		With a vague smile, I replied to my friends back carelessly as I hurried to my seat, breathed a sigh of relief, and slumped myself into the desk. My backside still throbbed from the pain, my face red from that slap. What a messy morning.

	After that, Teru-san '''(!<!-- Note: Dammit! -->)''' ~~entered~~ and ~~sat down~~. After the girl thoroughly scowled at me, she left with her shoulders squared. I looked at the swinging twin ponytails at her back as I massaged my swollen face.		After that, Teru-san '''(!<!-- Note: Dammit! -->)''' interfered and the incident was settled. After the girl thoroughly scowled at me, she left with her shoulders squared. I looked at the swinging twin ponytails at her back as I massaged my swollen face.

	Due to the accident at the school gate, I was the center of attention for many students. Someone seen in that acquaintance would probably burst flames from his head and burn to death --		Due to the accident at the school gate, I was the center of attention for many students. Someone seen in that acquaintance would probably burst flames from his head and burn to death --
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	"I see, you knew each other through club activities"		"I see, you knew each other through club activities"

	Nazumu's with the ~~lacross~~ club. Juniors and seniors play separately, that explains the "I played lacrosse with her until last year."		Nazumu's with the lacrosse club. Juniors and seniors play separately, that explains the "I played lacrosse with her until last year."

	"Anyhow isn't she cute? Besides her nice character, her success rate's terrible. Every month, she was confessed to --"		"Anyhow isn't she cute? Besides her nice character, her success rate's terrible. Every month, she was confessed to --"

Joay: left behind a link for later reference corrections

2008-12-24T04:23:04Z

left behind a link for later reference corrections

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			''... continued from part 2'' '''(!<!--To fellow translators and editors: please refer to http://rkmg.higu.biz/?a=alche&m=1&story_idx=5&list_idx=152 if you want to correct this page. Thanks -- joay -->)'''

	I rushed for my classroom at the first-year corridors of the high school building. I usually still have time when I arrive every morning, but I lost it this time as I dusted off myself at the shoe racks.		I rushed for my classroom at the first-year corridors of the high school building. I usually still have time when I arrive every morning, but I lost it this time as I dusted off myself at the shoe racks.
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	Today's order resounded in the classroom.		Today's order resounded in the classroom.

			''continued on part 4 ...''

Joay: that's it for now ...

2008-12-23T16:04:07Z

that's it for now ...

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 With a vague smile, I replied to my friends back carelessly as I hurried to my seat, breathed a sigh of relief, and slumped myself into the desk. My backside still throbbed from the pain, my face red from that slap. What a messy morning.
-After that, Teru-san(???) entered and sat down. After the girl thoroughly scowled at me, she left with her shoulders squared. I looked at the swinging twin ponytails at her back as I massaged my swollen face.
+After that, Teru-san '''(!<!-- Note: Dammit! -->)''' entered and sat down. After the girl thoroughly scowled at me, she left with her shoulders squared. I looked at the swinging twin ponytails at her back as I massaged my swollen face.
 Due to the accident at the school gate, I was the center of attention for many students. Someone seen in that acquaintance would probably burst flames from his head and burn to death --
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 "Anyway they call her Akeno, right? Just who is she? What's her relationship with you?"
-"So you don't know apart from jokes ..." (???)
+"So you don't know apart from jokes ..." '''(!<!-- Note: Again! -->)'''
 As Nazumu murmured "love is blind", she answered seriously with earnest.
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 "12 boys in one year!"
-"''Nya''. Summer vacation, festival, graduation seasons included, well about 20 ... eh, you serious?"
+"''Nya''. Summer vacation, festival, graduation seasons included, well about 20 ... eh, are you serious?"
-(つづく。。。)
+Nazumu talked herself into astonishment. She recalled the girl going for me at the school gates. Then her eyes must have turned to disgust '''(!<!-- Note: Unsure of this sentence! please check it for me -->)'''. It's as if she was unable to notice. '''(!<!-- Note: Unsure of this sentence! please check it for me -->)'''

Joay: this is it for now, have work to do ...

2008-12-23T06:28:13Z

this is it for now, have work to do ...

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 "Yup, got up late and had to run ..."
-With a vague smile, I replied back carelessly as I hurried to my seat, breathed a sigh of relief, and slumped myself into the desk. My backside still throbbed from the pain, my face red from that slap. What a messy morning.
+With a vague smile, I replied to my friends back carelessly as I hurried to my seat, breathed a sigh of relief, and slumped myself into the desk. My backside still throbbed from the pain, my face red from that slap. What a messy morning.
 After that, Teru-san(???) entered and sat down. After the girl thoroughly scowled at me, she left with her shoulders squared. I looked at the swinging twin ponytails at her back as I massaged my swollen face.
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 "All riight! I like Sa-kun♪ I'll be so tight-lipped so don't worry, ''ne''"
-"''Phew'' ... relief ..."
+"''Phew'' ... safe ..."
-(to be continued ...)
+"''Moou''! And I talked to you seriously ..."

Joay: Continuation of chapter 1 ... my god, nobody's working on this???

2008-12-23T04:53:23Z

Continuation of chapter 1 ... my god, nobody's working on this???

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I rushed for my classroom at the first-year corridors of the high school building. I usually still have time when I arrive every morning, but I lost it this time as I dusted off myself at the shoe racks.

"Good morning..."

Passing through the classroom door, it's 0825H as I looked at the wall clock, 5 minutes till HR period. Most of the students are already inside, amusing themselves with morning talk.

"Yo, Hoshi! Got all dirtied up, ''ne''?

"Yup, got up late and had to run ..."

With a vague smile, I replied back carelessly as I hurried to my seat, breathed a sigh of relief, and slumped myself into the desk. My backside still throbbed from the pain, my face red from that slap. What a messy morning.

After that, Teru-san(???) entered and sat down. After the girl thoroughly scowled at me, she left with her shoulders squared. I looked at the swinging twin ponytails at her back as I massaged my swollen face.

Due to the accident at the school gate, I was the center of attention for many students. Someone seen in that acquaintance would probably burst flames from his head and burn to death --

"Sa-kun!"

A sweet girl's voice knocked at the back of my downed head.

Raising my head, in front of my raised eyes is a sweet smile. Kure Nazumu. My classmate since 3rd year middle school, she's still my closest classmate among the girls.

I've got it; right now she's all cheery.

"... morning, Nazumu"

''No way'' -- As a wary me replied cheerfully, Nazumu smiled brightly.

"''Iiiyaa'', Sa-kun's unexpectedly daring, ''ne''?"

''Gaaah''! I knew she witnessed it !?

"What do you want!? Is it Vittoria's Montblanc ...!?"

"You're way ahead--! Anyway, for hush-hush, I wish for the Montblanc from that well-known cake shop, and I won't say a word♪ Well, I wanted to say 'give me', but then ..."

"I ... I'll think this over ..."

"All riight! I like Sa-kun♪ I'll be so tight-lipped so don't worry, ''ne''"

"''Phew'' ... relief ..."

(to be continued ...)