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Prologue

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	In the darkness, the white-blue shining tip of the blade slashed through the monster, burning away ~~it's~~ outer shell.		In the darkness, the white-blue shining tip of the blade slashed through the monster, burning away its outer shell.

	<!--SE: --><nowiki>GRRAAAAH! SPLORGHHH</nowiki><!-- (slashing through a monster)-->		<!--SE: --><nowiki>GRRAAAAH! SPLORGHHH</nowiki><!-- (slashing through a monster)-->

74.178.196.38: Fixed some awkwardness/incorrect grammar. Were there this many exclamation marks and ellipses in the Japanese text?

2009-08-15T23:08:29Z

Fixed some awkwardness/incorrect grammar. Were there this many exclamation marks and ellipses in the Japanese text?

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Vaelis at 09:17, 15 February 2009

2009-02-15T09:17:25Z

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	~Prologue~~~ ‘SE~~ = ~~Sound effect’ (note: please think of a good SE for those parts)~~		==Prologue==

	SE: FSSSSHHH SSSHIIIIINNNGGGGGG(swinging/slashing sword - Burning monster as well)		<!--‘SE = Sound effect’ (note: please think of a good SE for those parts)-->

			<!--SE: --><nowiki>FSSSSHHH SSSHIIIIINNNGGGGGG</nowiki> <!--(swinging/slashing sword - Burning monster as well)-->

	In the darkness, the white-blue shining tip of the blade slashed through the monster, burning away it's outer shell.		In the darkness, the white-blue shining tip of the blade slashed through the monster, burning away it's outer shell.

	SE: GRRAAAAH!* SPLORGHHH* (slashing through a monster)		<!--SE: --><nowiki>GRRAAAAH! SPLORGHHH</nowiki><!-- (slashing through a monster)-->

	The monster moaned, but only for an instant. It swung its serrated scythe-shaped claw towards us at full speed!		The monster moaned, but only for an instant. It swung its serrated scythe-shaped claw towards us at full speed!
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	Inside my hand is a metallic cylinder-shaped handle, and coming out of it is a shining blade, creating rays of blue and white light.		Inside my hand is a metallic cylinder-shaped handle, and coming out of it is a shining blade, creating rays of blue and white light.

	“GIII… GIIGIGIII!!!” (Think up a better noise a pray mantis would make -Bucket)		“GIII… GIIGIGIII!!!” <!--(Think up a better noise a pray mantis would make -Bucket)-->

	I point my ‘Laser Blade’ at the monster who is taking its time pulling it's claw out of the crushed asphalt. Its head resembles an upside-down triangular shape, with multiple eyes on each side of its face.		I point my ‘Laser Blade’ at the monster who is taking its time pulling it's claw out of the crushed asphalt. Its head resembles an upside-down triangular shape, with multiple eyes on each side of its face.
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	“GIGUIII~!!!”		“GIGUIII~!!!”

	The monster jumped with no wasteful movements and lashed out at me with its deadly claws! I managed to avoid a direct hit, but there was a burning pain in my left shoulder. The serrated, scythe-like claws must have ripped into my flesh. No matter! Without hesitation, I kicked off the ground and launched myself straight at the monster. Gripping my Laser Blade tightly… (Does this sword have a name? -TGM)(lightsaber? -anon)		The monster jumped with no wasteful movements and lashed out at me with its deadly claws! I managed to avoid a direct hit, but there was a burning pain in my left shoulder. The serrated, scythe-like claws must have ripped into my flesh. No matter! Without hesitation, I kicked off the ground and launched myself straight at the monster. Gripping my Laser Blade tightly… <!--(Does this sword have a name? -TGM)(lightsaber? -anon)-->

	“Hiyaaaah!!!”		“Hiyaaaah!!!”
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	The praying mantis’s ‘feast’ had started. Its scythe-like claws and sharp fangs were only used for dismembering their prey. The larger jaws were chattering away, while the smaller jaws were preparing to eat. As if I was some French dish, it started to cut the meat into pieces and place them into its mouth.		The praying mantis’s ‘feast’ had started. Its scythe-like claws and sharp fangs were only used for dismembering their prey. The larger jaws were chattering away, while the smaller jaws were preparing to eat. As if I was some French dish, it started to cut the meat into pieces and place them into its mouth.

	“u..chi…gachi…guchu…” (Does this guy have a speech problem? =\ -TGM)		“u..chi…gachi…guchu…” <!--(Does this guy have a speech problem? =\ -TGM)-->

	Without even taking a break, it kept feasting off of me. I think I’m gonna go crazy. Being eaten alive… This is torture!!! I shook my blood filled thoughts away and tried to reach the Laser Blade that was lying uselessly on the ground. But, as I watched blood slowly flow down my arm, I realized it was just out of reach.		Without even taking a break, it kept feasting off of me. I think I’m gonna go crazy. Being eaten alive… This is torture!!! I shook my blood filled thoughts away and tried to reach the Laser Blade that was lying uselessly on the ground. But, as I watched blood slowly flow down my arm, I realized it was just out of reach.
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Lord jagganath at 09:38, 11 February 2009

2009-02-11T09:38:06Z

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Kumichael: yeah no kidding it hasn't edited yet... i got some questions for the translator, if he/she wants this edited anytime soon...

2009-01-12T05:46:50Z

yeah no kidding it hasn't edited yet... i got some questions for the translator, if he/she wants this edited anytime soon...

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	The monster moaned, but only for an instant. It swung its serrated scythe shaped claw towards us at full speed!		The monster moaned, but only for an instant. It swung its serrated scythe-shaped claw towards us at full speed!

	“Heh…”		“Heh…”
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	I quickly dodged the attack. The claw slashed through the air, crushing the asphalt, and creating a huge hole in the ground.		I quickly dodged the attack. The claw slashed through the air, crushing the asphalt, and creating a huge hole in the ground.

	I am tired... but I make sure not to show it. Keeping my distance from the monster and my eyes focused on the prey. Inside my hand is a metallic cylinder shaped handle, and coming out of it is a shining blade, creating rays of blue and white light.		I am tired... but I make sure not to show it. Keeping my distance from the monster and my eyes focused on the prey. Inside my hand is a metallic cylinder-shaped handle, and coming out of it is a shining blade, creating rays of blue and white light.

	“Gii… Gigigi!” (Not sure what this is? -TGM)(Think up a better noise a pray mantis would make -Bucket)		“Gii… Gigigi!” (Not sure what this is? -TGM)(Think up a better noise a pray mantis would make -Bucket)

	I point my ‘Laser Blade’ at the monster who is taking its time pulling the claw out of the caved in asphalt. Its head resembles an upside-down triangular shape, with multiple eyes on each side of its face. It glared at me. The wound I gave it must have made it angrier; As it was gritting its jaws so hard that I could hear it clearly. The ~~Monster~~ turned its disgusting body to face me, ~~with~~ 4 legs coming out of its torso allowing it to stand up.		I point my ‘Laser Blade’ at the monster who is taking its time pulling the claw out of the caved in asphalt. Its head resembles an upside-down triangular shape, with multiple eyes on each side of its face. It glared at me. The wound I gave it must have made it angrier; As it was gritting its jaws so hard that I could hear it clearly. The monster turned its disgusting body to face me, 4 legs coming out of its torso allowing it to stand up.

	Illuminated by the lights of the neon signs, this monster, if you describe it as a normal insect, is the closest to a praying mantis. Although, calling it a ‘praying mantis’ when it’s over 3 meters tall, is a bit of a stretch.		Illuminated by the lights of the neon signs, this monster, if you describe it as a normal insect, is the closest to a praying mantis. Although, calling it a ‘praying mantis’ when it’s over 3 meters tall, is a bit of a stretch.
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	“Giguiiii~!!!”		“Giguiiii~!!!”

	The monster jumped with no wasteful movements and lashed out at me with its deadly claws! I managed to avoid a direct hit, but there was a burning pain in my left shoulder. The serrated scythe like claws must have ripped into the meat. No matter! Without hesitation I kicked off the ground and launched myself straight at the monster. Gripping the Laser Blade tightly… (Does this sword have a name? -TGM)(lightsaber? -anon)		The monster jumped with no wasteful movements and lashed out at me with its deadly claws! I managed to avoid a direct hit, but there was a burning pain in my left shoulder. The serrated, scythe-like claws must have ripped into the meat. No matter! Without hesitation, I kicked off the ground and launched myself straight at the monster. Gripping the Laser Blade tightly… (Does this sword have a name? -TGM)(lightsaber? -anon)

	“Hiyaaaah!!!”		“Hiyaaaah!!!”
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	“Gi…Giyuuuuu!”		“Gi…Giyuuuuu!”

	The monster let out an ear splitting screech. I thrust the shining blade deeper into its chest cavity. The dying noises were just as bad as the smell that came from its burning insides.		The monster let out an ear-splitting screech. I thrust the shining blade deeper into its chest cavity. The dying noises were just as bad as the smell that came from its burning insides.

	“a…Haa… haa… haa…”		“a…Haa… haa… haa…”
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	“Arghh!”		“Arghh!”

	With the claw firmly embedded, it gave a strong jerk. Losing grip of the sword I ~~start~~ to plummet towards the ground. Unfortunately for me, the ~~monsters~~ other claw was waiting for me! I was suddenly impaled and lifted into the air. I already stabbed it! I stabbed its chest already with my own two hands! Why is it still moving? Why, why is it still alive?! How much vitality does this creature have? This isn’t fair!		With the claw firmly embedded, it gave a strong jerk. Losing grip of the sword I started to plummet towards the ground. Unfortunately for me, the monster's other claw was waiting for me! I was suddenly impaled and lifted into the air. I already stabbed it! I stabbed its chest already with my own two hands! Why is it still moving? Why, why is it still alive?! How much vitality does this creature have? This isn’t fair!

	“Guh… Puh…!”		“Guh… Puh…!”
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	“You…Get… Get off me!”		“You…Get… Get off me!”

	The praying mantis’s ‘feast’ had started. Its scythe like claws and sharp fangs were only used for dismembering their prey. The larger jaws were chattering away, while the smaller jaws were preparing to eat. As if I was some French dish, it started to cut the meat into pieces and place them into its mouth.		The praying mantis’s ‘feast’ had started. Its scythe-like claws and sharp fangs were only used for dismembering their prey. The larger jaws were chattering away, while the smaller jaws were preparing to eat. As if I was some French dish, it started to cut the meat into pieces and place them into its mouth.

	“u..chi…gachi…guchu…” (Does this guy have a speech problem? =\ -TGM)		“u..chi…gachi…guchu…” (Does this guy have a speech problem? =\ -TGM)

Demona at 13:50, 16 September 2008

2008-09-16T13:50:07Z

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	I quickly dodged the attack. The claw slashed through the air, crushing the asphalt, and creating a huge hole in the ground.		I quickly dodged the attack. The claw slashed through the air, crushing the asphalt, and creating a huge hole in the ground.

	I am tired... but I make sure I not to show it. Keeping my distance from the monster and my eyes focused on the prey. Inside my hand is a metallic cylinder shaped handle, and coming out of it is a shining blade, creating rays of blue and white light.		I am tired... but I make sure not to show it. Keeping my distance from the monster and my eyes focused on the prey. Inside my hand is a metallic cylinder shaped handle, and coming out of it is a shining blade, creating rays of blue and white light.

	“Gii… Gigigi!” (Not sure what this is? -TGM)(Think up a better noise a pray mantis would make -Bucket)		“Gii… Gigigi!” (Not sure what this is? -TGM)(Think up a better noise a pray mantis would make -Bucket)

	I point my ‘Laser Blade’ at the monster who is taking its time pulling the claw out of the caved in asphalt. Its head resembles an upside-down triangular shape, with multiple eyes on each side of its face. It glared at me. The wound I gave ~~him~~ must have made it angrier; As it was gritting its jaws so hard that I could hear it clearly. The Monster turned its disgusting body to face me, with 4 legs coming out of its torso allowing it to stand up.		I point my ‘Laser Blade’ at the monster who is taking its time pulling the claw out of the caved in asphalt. Its head resembles an upside-down triangular shape, with multiple eyes on each side of its face. It glared at me. The wound I gave it must have made it angrier; As it was gritting its jaws so hard that I could hear it clearly. The Monster turned its disgusting body to face me, with 4 legs coming out of its torso allowing it to stand up.

	Illuminated by the lights of the neon signs, this monster, if you describe it as a normal insect, is the closest to a praying mantis. Although, calling it a ‘praying mantis’ when it’s over 3 meters tall, is a bit of a stretch.		Illuminated by the lights of the neon signs, this monster, if you describe it as a normal insect, is the closest to a praying mantis. Although, calling it a ‘praying mantis’ when it’s over 3 meters tall, is a bit of a stretch.

88.245.87.115 at 21:39, 13 May 2008

2008-05-13T21:39:23Z

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	“Giguiiii~!!!”		“Giguiiii~!!!”

	The monster jumped with no wasteful movements and lashed out at me with its deadly claws! I managed to avoid a direct hit, but there was a burning pain in my left shoulder. The serrated scythe like claws must have ripped into the meat. No matter! Without hesitation I kicked off the ground and launched myself straight at the monster. Gripping the Laser Blade tightly… (Does this sword have a name? -TGM)		The monster jumped with no wasteful movements and lashed out at me with its deadly claws! I managed to avoid a direct hit, but there was a burning pain in my left shoulder. The serrated scythe like claws must have ripped into the meat. No matter! Without hesitation I kicked off the ground and launched myself straight at the monster. Gripping the Laser Blade tightly… (Does this sword have a name? -TGM)(lightsaber? -anon)

	“Hiyaaaah!!!”		“Hiyaaaah!!!”

Bucket at 12:10, 18 March 2008

2008-03-18T12:10:04Z

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	I am tired... but I make sure I not to show it. Keeping my distance from the monster and my eyes focused on the prey. Inside my hand is a metallic cylinder shaped handle, and coming out of it is a shining blade, creating rays of blue and white light.		I am tired... but I make sure I not to show it. Keeping my distance from the monster and my eyes focused on the prey. Inside my hand is a metallic cylinder shaped handle, and coming out of it is a shining blade, creating rays of blue and white light.

	“Gii… Gigigi!” (Not sure what this is? -TGM)		“Gii… Gigigi!” (Not sure what this is? -TGM)(Think up a better noise a pray mantis would make -Bucket)

	I point my ‘Laser Blade’ at the monster who is taking its time pulling the claw out of the caved in asphalt. Its head resembles an upside-down triangular shape, with multiple eyes on each side of its face. It glared at me. The wound I gave him must have made it angrier; As it was gritting its jaws so hard that I could hear it clearly. The Monster turned its disgusting body to face me, with 4 legs coming out of its torso allowing it to stand up.		I point my ‘Laser Blade’ at the monster who is taking its time pulling the claw out of the caved in asphalt. Its head resembles an upside-down triangular shape, with multiple eyes on each side of its face. It glared at me. The wound I gave him must have made it angrier; As it was gritting its jaws so hard that I could hear it clearly. The Monster turned its disgusting body to face me, with 4 legs coming out of its torso allowing it to stand up.

TheGiftedMonkey at 04:49, 18 March 2008

2008-03-18T04:49:08Z

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	“u..chi…gachi…guchu…” (Does this guy have a speech problem? =\ -TGM)		“u..chi…gachi…guchu…” (Does this guy have a speech problem? =\ -TGM)

	Without even taking a break, it kept feasting off of me. I think I’m gonna go crazy. Being eaten alive… This is torture!!!		Without even taking a break, it kept feasting off of me. I think I’m gonna go crazy. Being eaten alive… This is torture!!! I shook my blood filled thoughts away and tried to reach the Laser Blade that was lying uselessly on the ground. But, as I watched blood slowly flow down my arm, I realized it was just out of reach.
	I ~~shake~~ my blood filled thoughts away, and ~~I try~~ to reach ~~my right arm towards~~ the ~~toy sword which was originally my~~ Laser Blade. But, my ~~finger doesn’t reach the weapon~~, ~~all~~ it ~~does is cause droplets~~ of ~~blood to run down my finger~~.

	“Argh… Arghhhhhhhh!!!”		“Argh… Arghhhhhhhh!!!”
	~~I felt extreme~~ pain ~~run~~ across my entire body, and ~~for an instant~~ I ~~lost~~ my consciousness.
	What was that…!?		Extreme pain ran across my entire body, and I started to lose my grip on consciousness. What was that…!? I didn't want to watch a praying mantis monster happily chewing apart my body… And, I sensed that, it was about to reach my ‘vital’ parts… This is bad! Anymore and I was going to get killed! I didn't want to die like this! But, I couldn’t do anything about it… It had completely disabled my movement...
	I ~~don’t~~ want to ~~see~~ a ~~pray~~ mantis happily ~~chew~~ apart my body… And, I ~~sense~~ that, it is about to reach my ~~‘important’~~ parts…
	This is bad! Anymore ~~than this is bad! I’m~~ going to get killed! I ~~don’t~~ want to die like this! But, I ~~can’t~~ do anything about it… It ~~has~~ completely disabled my movement ~~and I can’t do anything~~.
	“Ju!... Gijigiji…”		“Ju!... Gijigiji…”
	Ouch! No! It hurts! No! It hurts it hurts it hurts!!!		Ouch! No! It hurts! No! It hurts it hurts it hurts!!!

TheGiftedMonkey at 21:07, 17 March 2008

2008-03-17T21:07:02Z

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	Illuminated by the lights of the neon signs, this monster, if you describe it as a normal insect, is the closest to a praying mantis. Although, calling it a ‘praying mantis’ when it’s over 3 meters tall, is a bit of a stretch.		Illuminated by the lights of the neon signs, this monster, if you describe it as a normal insect, is the closest to a praying mantis. Although, calling it a ‘praying mantis’ when it’s over 3 meters tall, is a bit of a stretch.

	“A small praying mantis is scary enough, but this isn’t fair!” ~~(Is he serious~~? ~~-TGM)~~		“A small praying mantis is scary enough, but this isn’t fair!”

			I remember when I was a kid watching the scene of a praying mantis feast. Just like how the grasshopper got devoured, will I have my body ripped apart piece by piece by this monster? You are kidding me! This has got to be a joke!

	I remember from the back of my head, I saw it when I was a kid, the scene of a feasting pray mantis. Just like how a grasshopper gets devoured by a pray mantis, will I also, by this monster’s claws, have my body ripped apart one by one? You’re kidding me! This has got to be a joke!
	“___Gi!!!”		“___Gi!!!”
	~~The~~ monster ~~has moved~~! The gigantic figure ~~covers our~~ distance ~~apart~~ within seconds. ~~It’s~~ fast! Even if I back away, ~~all it’s going~~ to ~~do is come even closer~~. All I can do is stay and fight~~, can~~ I do it?!
			Suddenly the monster lunged forward! The gigantic figure covering the distance within seconds. It was fast! Even if I back away, it will still catch up to me. All I can do is stay and fight... Can I do it?!

	“Giguiiii~!!!”		“Giguiiii~!!!”
	The monster ~~jumps to me~~ with no wasteful ~~movement~~ and ~~stretches~~ its claws ~~aiming straight for me~~! I ~~was able~~ to avoid a direct hit, but ~~I feel huge~~ pain in my left shoulder. The scythe ~~shaped~~ claws ~~must’ve~~ ripped ~~off some~~ meat ~~there~~.
	~~But! That’s all~~! Without ~~caring~~ I ~~kick~~ the ground and ~~jump~~ straight to the monster~~, I hold my~~ Laser Blade ~~and…~~		The monster jumped with no wasteful movements and lashed out at me with its deadly claws! I managed to avoid a direct hit, but there was a burning pain in my left shoulder. The serrated scythe like claws must have ripped into the meat. No matter! Without hesitation I kicked off the ground and launched myself straight at the monster. Gripping the Laser Blade tightly… (Does this sword have a name? -TGM)

	“Hiyaaaah!!!”		“Hiyaaaah!!!”
	I ~~gave~~ the ~~chest area~~, ~~the root of all six legs~~ a ~~huge~~ blow!
			I stabbed the monster in the torso, landing a deadly blow!

	“Gi…Giyuuuuu!”		“Gi…Giyuuuuu!”
	The monster ~~makes a huge~~ screech ~~from the top of its head~~. I ~~dig in my~~ shining blade deeper into its ~~body~~. The ~~noise it makes is~~ just as bad as the smell that ~~comes out~~ from ~~his~~ burning insides.
			The monster let out an ear splitting screech. I thrust the shining blade deeper into its chest cavity. The dying noises were just as bad as the smell that came from its burning insides.

	“a…Haa… haa… haa…”		“a…Haa… haa… haa…”
	It seems ~~it’s going to~~ be my victory. Now~~, for~~ this ~~moaning~~ to stop, I ~~dig~~ in ~~my blade even more and more~~.
			It seems this shall be my victory. Now to make this screeching to stop. I pushed the blade in up to the hilt.

	“Ga!”		“Ga!”
	~~When I had put~~ my guard ~~down~~ it quickly got its ~~claws to stab~~ the back of my leg.
			As soon as the monster noticed the drop in my guard, it quickly got its claw hooked in the back of my leg.

	“Arghh!”		“Arghh!”
	~~It scoops right into~~ the ~~back of my leg~~, ~~my body falls downwards~~. ~~But~~ the ~~thing awaiting me was not~~ the ground, ~~it was~~ the monsters other claw! ~~It stabs into my stomach,~~ and ~~my body gets~~ lifted up into the air.
	~~But I’ve~~ already stabbed it! I stabbed its chest already with my own hands! Why is it still moving? Why, why is it still alive?! How much vitality does this creature have?! This isn’t fair!		With the claw firmly embedded, it gave a strong jerk. Losing grip of the sword I start to plummet towards the ground. Unfortunately for me, the monsters other claw was waiting for me! I was suddenly impaled and lifted into the air. I already stabbed it! I stabbed its chest already with my own two hands! Why is it still moving? Why, why is it still alive?! How much vitality does this creature have? This isn’t fair!

	“Guh… Puh…!”		“Guh… Puh…!”
	I spat out some blood… The stomach acid is sour and my throat ~~is burning~~. The smell of my ~~insides coming out~~ and blood mixed together ~~makes~~ my ~~nostril~~ go numb.
			I spat out some blood… The stomach acid tasted sour and burned my throat. The smell of my escaping internal organs and blood mixed together to make my nostrils go numb.

	“You…Get… Get off me!”		“You…Get… Get off me!”
	The ~~pray~~ mantis’s ‘feast’ ~~has~~ started. Its scythe-like claws and ~~its~~ sharp fangs, were ~~made~~ only for ~~the use of killing~~ their prey. ~~Its bigger~~ jaws ~~keep~~ chattering ~~making noises like “Gichigichipichapicha”~~, while the smaller ~~jaw starts~~ to ~~feast off me~~. As if ~~I’m~~ some ~~France~~ dish, it ~~cuts my~~ meat into pieces and ~~puts some~~ into its mouth.
	“u..chi…gachi…guchu…”		The praying mantis’s ‘feast’ had started. Its scythe like claws and sharp fangs were only used for dismembering their prey. The larger jaws were chattering away, while the smaller jaws were preparing to eat. As if I was some French dish, it started to cut the meat into pieces and place them into its mouth.
	Without even taking a break, it ~~keeps~~ feasting off me. I think I’m gonna go crazy. Being eaten alive… This is torture!!!
			“u..chi…gachi…guchu…” (Does this guy have a speech problem? =\ -TGM)

			Without even taking a break, it kept feasting off of me. I think I’m gonna go crazy. Being eaten alive… This is torture!!!
	I shake my blood filled thoughts away, and I try to reach my right arm towards the toy sword which was originally my Laser Blade. But, my finger doesn’t reach the weapon, all it does is cause droplets of blood to run down my finger.		I shake my blood filled thoughts away, and I try to reach my right arm towards the toy sword which was originally my Laser Blade. But, my finger doesn’t reach the weapon, all it does is cause droplets of blood to run down my finger.

	“Argh… Arghhhhhhhh!!!”		“Argh… Arghhhhhhhh!!!”
	I felt extreme pain run across my entire body, and for an instant I lost my consciousness.		I felt extreme pain run across my entire body, and for an instant I lost my consciousness.