Absolute Duo:Volume 1 Chapter 4 - Revision history

Hiro Hayase at 02:22, 10 June 2015

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	“She’s late…………”		“She’s late…………”

	Even though I turned into dusk, I muttered that out because Hotaka has not reached the goal.		Even though it turned into dusk, I muttered that out because Hotaka has not reached the goal.

	(Although she finished faster yesterday……………)		(Although she finished faster yesterday……………)
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	After a twitch, Hotaka raised her face.		After a twitch, Hotaka raised her face.

	“That was my master’s favorite proverb and he was the one who ~~thought~~ me the basics of martial art. Speaking in martial arts term, it means, if you want to be stronger do not neglect the basics.”		“That was my master’s favorite proverb and he was the one who taught me the basics of martial art. Speaking in martial arts term, it means, if you want to be stronger do not neglect the basics.”

	“Kokonoe-kun………….”		“Kokonoe-kun………….”
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	After looking at Julie making nods, I somehow feel her happiness being transmitted over.		After looking at Julie making nods, I somehow feel her happiness being transmitted over.

	Even though it was a few days, thanks passing time with her close by, I could more or less know about the signs of her expression.		Even though it was a few days, thanks to passing time with her close by, I could more or less know about the signs of her expression.
	In the end, somehow or another, Tora asked me to become his <<Duo>>.		In the end, somehow or another, Tora asked me to become his <<Duo>>.

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	“Well then well then, remember to send the <<Duo>> application to the registry office before today evening 6 o’clock. If you pass that time, unless there is a very good reason, you won’t be changing until graduation so please play nice with your partner. It’s a promise with Usa-sensei okay~☆”		“Well then well then, remember to send the <<Duo>> application to the registry office before today evening 6 o’clock. If you pass that time, unless there is a very good reason, you won’t be changing until graduation so please play nice with your partner. It’s a promise with Usa-sensei okay~☆”

	Saturday-------{{Furigana\|SHR\|Short Homeroom}} after the last notification ended, and we reached to after school time, the classmates who decided on their partners, were walking out ~~off~~ the classroom together one after another.		Saturday-------{{Furigana\|SHR\|Short Homeroom}} after the last notification ended, and we reached to after school time, the classmates who decided on their partners, were walking out of the classroom together one after another.

	“Should we go too, Tora?”		“Should we go too, Tora?”
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	“Okay, the registration is done with this.”		“Okay, the registration is done with this.”

	The student cards that were given back from the clerk had both of names written on it.		The student cards that were given back from the clerk had both of our names written on it.

	From this moment onwards, Tooru and Julie are now official <<Duo>>.		From this moment onwards, Tooru and Julie are now official <<Duo>>.

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371833 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:35:00Z

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Simon: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (96)

2014-07-21T20:24:58Z

Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (96)

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Acolyte at 21:21, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:21:01Z

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	“I think it is a little too fast from now but, let’s come and see it next year and this time when it is in full bloom………..ah, it’s also possible to go to a famous nearby spot instead of here though”		“I think it is a little too fast from now but, let’s come and see it next year and this time when it is in full bloom………..ah, it’s also possible to go to a famous nearby spot instead of here though”

	~~“Ya~~--. I also feel it is a little too fast but, I look forward to it.”		“Ja--. I also feel it is a little too fast but, I look forward to it.”

	Without releasing her sights from the sakura, Julie nodded.		Without releasing her sights from the sakura, Julie nodded.
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	“Eh, ah, no……….-----------uh! I, I know! Let’s invite Tora, Tachibana and the rest when we come to see the sakura………! I,its probably more fun when everyone comes…….!”		“Eh, ah, no……….-----------uh! I, I know! Let’s invite Tora, Tachibana and the rest when we come to see the sakura………! I,its probably more fun when everyone comes…….!”

	~~“Ya~~---. Is that so, then let’s do that.”		“Ja---. Is that so, then let’s do that.”

	When I talked to her about flower viewing with everyone while dodging the question, luckily it seems Julie had forgotten about the other meaning.		When I talked to her about flower viewing with everyone while dodging the question, luckily it seems Julie had forgotten about the other meaning.
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	“Aah, it’s a promise.”		“Aah, it’s a promise.”

	~~“Ya~~---“		“Ja---“

	Julie nodded.		Julie nodded.
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	“It’ll be great if you team up with a good partner.”		“It’ll be great if you team up with a good partner.”

	~~“Ya~~---. Thank you very much.”		“Ja---. Thank you very much.”

	---after that, an ability measurement was commenced with a 3 to 4 hours’ time limit, in the females Julie and Tachibana had shown amazing results, and were bathe with the attentions from the surroundings.		---after that, an ability measurement was commenced with a 3 to 4 hours’ time limit, in the females Julie and Tachibana had shown amazing results, and were bathe with the attentions from the surroundings.
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	A penetrating cold-------but to the person herself it was most likely normal-------her voice with no high or low pitch, pulled me back to reality when my thoughts was in the middle of freezing.		A penetrating cold-------but to the person herself it was most likely normal-------her voice with no high or low pitch, pulled me back to reality when my thoughts was in the middle of freezing.

	“Go-Go-Good, morning. ~~Yuri~~,e……………….”		“Go-Go-Good, morning. Juli,e……………….”

	“Did you sleep well?”		“Did you sleep well?”
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	The instant a voice was called out from my back, I thought I bounced up 10 centimeters on the spot.		The instant a voice was called out from my back, I thought I bounced up 10 centimeters on the spot.

	~~“Yu~~,Julie, Sorry! Just now err, I wasn’t trying to peek but………..!!”		“Ju,Julie, Sorry! Just now err, I wasn’t trying to peek but………..!!”

	“I don’t mind. However, I wish you would be careful from now on.”		“I don’t mind. However, I wish you would be careful from now on.”
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	“I,is it okay to leave it unexplained………….?”		“I,is it okay to leave it unexplained………….?”

	~~“Ya~~---. But just like I said just now, please be careful from now on. …………….It’s embarrassing.”		“Ja---. But just like I said just now, please be careful from now on. …………….It’s embarrassing.”

	“I, I get it. I’ll be careful.”		“I, I get it. I’ll be careful.”
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	“Julie, can’t you find an opponent?”		“Julie, can’t you find an opponent?”

	~~“Ya~~---“		“Ja---“

	When I called out to Julie who looks like she was having trouble finding the next person to talk to, she somehow replied back powerlessly.		When I called out to Julie who looks like she was having trouble finding the next person to talk to, she somehow replied back powerlessly.
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	“Well then, let’s begin.”		“Well then, let’s begin.”

	~~“Ya~~---“		“Ja---“

	The whistle was blown, and we lightly exchange our fists.		The whistle was blown, and we lightly exchange our fists.
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	“Julie do you like animals?”		“Julie do you like animals?”

	~~“Ya~~---. Especially birds-------within them I like the parakeet the most.”		“Ja---. Especially birds-------within them I like the parakeet the most.”

	When I asked her while I was preparing the cup filled with apple tea in it, classic answers such as cats and dogs were not replied back.		When I asked her while I was preparing the cup filled with apple tea in it, classic answers such as cats and dogs were not replied back.
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	“I, I get it. I’ll choose parakeet if I plan to own a pet………….”		“I, I get it. I’ll choose parakeet if I plan to own a pet………….”

	~~“Ya~~----“		“Ja----“

	Julie who nodded in my reply, somehow looked happy.		Julie who nodded in my reply, somehow looked happy.
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	“Well then, good work until today.”		“Well then, good work until today.”

	~~“Ya~~---. Good work.”		“Ja---. Good work.”

	There were various cookies and candies on the table.		There were various cookies and candies on the table.
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	“To your roommate-------Tachibana, recommend it to her.”		“To your roommate-------Tachibana, recommend it to her.”

	~~“Ya~~----“		“Ja----“

	After looking at Julie making nods, I somehow feel her happiness being transmitted over.		After looking at Julie making nods, I somehow feel her happiness being transmitted over.
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	“Aah, this side too. Julie, you can tell me anytime, if you have any problems.”		“Aah, this side too. Julie, you can tell me anytime, if you have any problems.”

	“……………..Ya---“		“……………..Ja---“

	Julie nodded.		Julie nodded.
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	She walked out, and weighted her small hands on mine.		She walked out, and weighted her small hands on mine.

	~~“Ya~~----“		“Ja----“

	While nodding like usual------		While nodding like usual------
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	“Okay then, once again please take care of me, Julie. …………..also, definitely tell me if you have any problems from now on. That’s because we are officially partners from today onwards.”		“Okay then, once again please take care of me, Julie. …………..also, definitely tell me if you have any problems from now on. That’s because we are officially partners from today onwards.”

	~~“Ya~~----“		“Ja----“

	“Good Good.”		“Good Good.”
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	That warmth still lingered even after Tooru’s hand left.		That warmth still lingered even after Tooru’s hand left.

	When Tooru was not looking, ~~Yuire~~ touched the part she was patted on------and made a quiet smile.		When Tooru was not looking, Julie touched the part she was patted on------and made a quiet smile.

	“Well then, let’s go back. To our room.”		“Well then, let’s go back. To our room.”

	~~“Ya~~----. That’s true. And-------“		“Ja----. That’s true. And-------“

	Julie nodded to Tooru’s words, and said out the suggestion that she was conscious about when she thought the daily life until now will start once again.		Julie nodded to Tooru’s words, and said out the suggestion that she was conscious about when she thought the daily life until now will start once again.

Mashiro: /* Chapter 4 『Again,Apple Tea』 */

2014-07-20T16:43:24Z

Chapter 4 『Again,Apple Tea』

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	“It’s okay, just get on. It’s not like you can start walking again after resting a bit.”		“It’s okay, just get on. It’s not like you can start walking again after resting a bit.”

	“Bu,but my regenerative powers were also enhanced by the <<~~Luciful~~>> too…………”		“Bu,but my regenerative powers were also enhanced by the <<Lucifer>> too…………”

	“It’s true that might be the case but, if you wait and recover until you can move again, it will turn completely dark and it will be dangerous.”		“It’s true that might be the case but, if you wait and recover until you can move again, it will turn completely dark and it will be dangerous.”
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	Even though I was trembling and my voice turned shrill and nervous, it would seem I wasn’t noticed by Hotaka.		Even though I was trembling and my voice turned shrill and nervous, it would seem I wasn’t noticed by Hotaka.

	“I, wonder if I can go on like this…………? Although my stamina was supposed to be enhanced by the <<~~Luciful~~>> I couldn’t run until finish………..from now on, I wonder if I can keep up…………”		“I, wonder if I can go on like this…………? Although my stamina was supposed to be enhanced by the <<Lucifer>> I couldn’t run until finish………..from now on, I wonder if I can keep up…………”

	“Hotaka.”		“Hotaka.”
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	That, I myself was advancing in the total opposite of those words…….		That, I myself was advancing in the total opposite of those words…….

	Even if I have <<Adapt>>, the moment I started seeking the outer <<Power>> from <<~~Luciful~~>>, I have lost the rights to put these words into my mouth.		Even if I have <<Adapt>>, the moment I started seeking the outer <<Power>> from <<Lucifer>>, I have lost the rights to put these words into my mouth.

	But even so, when I thought I wanted to cheer Hotaka up, the first thing that popped out were those words.		But even so, when I thought I wanted to cheer Hotaka up, the first thing that popped out were those words.

Mashiro: /* Chapter 4 『Again,Apple Tea』 */

2014-07-20T15:39:23Z

Chapter 4 『Again,Apple Tea』

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Acolyte at 20:12, 5 December 2013

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	But even so, Hotaka was still hesitant.		But even so, Hotaka was still hesitant.

	To Hotaka who is bad with the opposite sex, she might need quite some courage to be piggy-~~bagged~~.		To Hotaka who is bad with the opposite sex, she might need quite some courage to be piggy-backed.

	“…………..I don’t really mind going on like this. But, if we are too late, then Tachibana will worry.”		“…………..I don’t really mind going on like this. But, if we are too late, then Tachibana will worry.”

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 4 『Again,Apple Tea』 */

2013-11-29T04:00:45Z

Chapter 4 『Again,Apple Tea』

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	“[……………..]”		“[……………..]”

	It seems the previous customer has the same aim as mine, and it looks like that person just took of the shirt that they were wearing.		It seems the previous customer has the same aim as mine, and it looks like that person just took off the shirt that they were wearing.

	I am very sure on how stiff my face became.		I am very sure on how stiff my face became.
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	Even though it was tough trainings ever since early enrollment, seeing the number of classmates decreasing as days passes, make me feel lonely.		Even though it was tough trainings ever since early enrollment, seeing the number of classmates decreasing as days passes, make me feel lonely.

	Right now, even the girl Tachibana was looking after was also [I can go on anymore………] complaining, that figure was similar to Hotaka.		Right now, even the girl Tachibana was looking after was also [I can't go on anymore………] complaining, that figure was similar to Hotaka.

	When I imagined Hotaka was maybe thinking like that too.		When I imagined Hotaka was maybe thinking like that too.
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	Even though I was trembling and my voice turned shrill and nervous, it would seem I wasn’t noticed by Hotaka.		Even though I was trembling and my voice turned shrill and nervous, it would seem I wasn’t noticed by Hotaka.

	“I, wonder if I can go on like this…………? Although my stamina was supposed to be enhanced by the <<Luciful>> I couldn’t run finish………..from now on, I wonder if I can keep up…………”		“I, wonder if I can go on like this…………? Although my stamina was supposed to be enhanced by the <<Luciful>> I couldn’t run until finish………..from now on, I wonder if I can keep up…………”

	“Hotaka.”		“Hotaka.”
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	“Looks like its Tachibana.”		“Looks like its Tachibana.”

	“Fumu. Tachibana huh…………….that’s a <<Duo>>I want to have a match with.”		“Fumu. Tachibana huh…………….that’s a <<Duo>> I want to have a match with.”

	“Seriously, that’s so Tora-''like''.”		“Seriously, that’s so Tora-''like''.”
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	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

	==Translation Notes and References==		==Translation Notes and References==
	<references group="1d" />		<references group="1d" />

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2013-11-24T19:50:27Z

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	“Ya---. Is that so, then let’s do that.”		“Ya---. Is that so, then let’s do that.”

	When I talked to her about flower viewing with everyone while dodging the question, luckily it seems Yurie forgotten about the other meaning.		When I talked to her about flower viewing with everyone while dodging the question, luckily it seems Yurie had forgotten about the other meaning.

	<nowiki></nowiki>Hou the moment I made a breath, a gust of wind passed by.		<nowiki></nowiki>Hou the moment I made a breath, a gust of wind passed by.
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	“Tooru’s is Tora?”		“Tooru’s is Tora?”

	“Aah. Saying this or another, as expected it looks like I don’t have to be hesitant with him thanks to the time we gone through………….more or less, his personality is difficult though”		“Aah. Saying this or another, as expected it looks like I don’t have to be hesitant with him thanks to the time we have gone through………….more or less, his personality is difficult though”

	While making a wry smile, I placed the cup in front of Yurie.		While making a wry smile, I placed the cup in front of Yurie.
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	(U,uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!?)		(U,uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!?)

	From the softness I found out the first time, my reasoning was in the verge of collapsing.		From the softness I found out the first time, my reasoning was on the verge of collapsing.

	Enough for me to shout out right now, my brain fell into panic.		Enough for me to shout out right now, my brain fell into panic.
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	(It’s true that, not everyone won the fight and managed to stay)		(It’s true that, not everyone won the fight and managed to stay)

	If there are people like me and Tachibana who has martial arts experience inside the successful applicants, there are also people who ~~doesn’t~~ even have sports experience………. And Hotaka was one of the latters.		If there are people like me and Tachibana who has martial arts experience inside the successful applicants, there are also people who don’t even have sports experience………. And Hotaka was one of the latters.

	“Ah………..so,sorry. Towards someone who I just knew recently, even if I tell you something like this, it will only trouble you.”		“Ah………..so,sorry. Towards someone who I just knew recently, even if I tell you something like this, it will only trouble you.”
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	In a soft voice. Together with those words, Hotaka buried her face into my back.		In a soft voice. Together with those words, Hotaka buried her face into my back.

	Just like that, after walking silently for a while--------------not long ~~later~~, I said something with quite a strong voice.		Just like that, after walking silently for a while--------------not long after, I said something with quite a strong voice.

	“Those who want long trees would definitely strengthen its roots.”		“Those who want long trees would definitely strengthen its roots.”
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	Even if I have <<Adapt>>, the moment I started seeking the outer <<Power>> from <<Luciful>>, I have lost the rights to put these words into my mouth.		Even if I have <<Adapt>>, the moment I started seeking the outer <<Power>> from <<Luciful>>, I have lost the rights to put these words into my mouth.

	But even so, when I thought I wanted to cheer Hotaka up, the first thing that popped out ~~was~~ those words.		But even so, when I thought I wanted to cheer Hotaka up, the first thing that popped out were those words.

	“I know of the feeling of being worthless. But, <<Power>> is not something that attaches to body overnight. That’s why, it might be tough now, I think you should continue running and running. Stamina is something that is obtained the more you run. Something like talent doesn’t matter”		“I know of the feeling of being worthless. But, <<Power>> is not something that attaches to body overnight. That’s why, it might be tough now, I think you should continue running and running. Stamina is something that is obtained the more you run. Something like talent doesn’t matter”
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	And at the same time, I got a confidence everything was okay.		And at the same time, I got a confidence everything was okay.

	After walking for a while, not long after, we found Yurie and Tachibana coming to greet us from far away, and Hotaka made big swings her hands.		After walking for a while, not long after, we found Yurie and Tachibana coming to greet us from far away, and Hotaka made big swings with her hands.


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	When I ~~starting~~ thinking about that the conversation stopped, and the room turned quiet.		When I started thinking about that the conversation stopped, and the room turned quiet.

	Inside the silence, after a while passed like that---------not long later, the first one to open her mouth was Yurie.		Inside the silence, after a while passed like that---------not long later, the first one to open her mouth was Yurie.
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	Looking at those tears, what did I ~~thought~~?		Looking at those tears, what did I think?

	(I thought I wanted to be Yurie’s strength!!)		(I thought I wanted to be Yurie’s strength!!)

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	On the morning of the 4th day of enrollment. I happened to wake up ~~as the~~ first.		On the morning of the 4th day of enrollment. I happened to wake up first.

	The subdued sunlight coming in from the gap of the curtain made me wake up from my sleep.		The subdued sunlight coming in from the gap of the curtain made me wake up from my sleep.