Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 2 - Revision history

121.121.121.220 at 01:47, 3 September 2014

2014-09-03T01:47:59Z

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	I hurried and stopped the girl when she was going to start her one-sided business talk.		I hurried and stopped the girl when she was going to start her one-sided business talk.

	“Now that I think about it, I haven’t named myself yet. I am Lilith=Bristol. A student from a ~~British~~ school.”		“Now that I think about it, I haven’t named myself yet. I am Lilith=Bristol. A student from a UK school.”

	~~British~~ school------		UK school------

	The official name is St. Foren academy. I was told it was a sibling school founded by the Dawn organization similar to Kouryou academy.		The official name is St. Foren academy. I was told it was a sibling school founded by the Dawn organization similar to Kouryou academy.

	It is the only school outside of Japan that can nurture <<Exceed>>’s, and just like Kouryou, graduated students will be affiliated to the vigilante forces of the organization. Since they would be dispatched overseas, after affiliation to the force, we would be meeting up with people from the ~~British~~ school eventually………..		It is the only school outside of Japan that can nurture <<Exceed>>’s, and just like Kouryou, graduated students will be affiliated to the vigilante forces of the organization. Since they would be dispatched overseas, after affiliation to the force, we would be meeting up with people from the UK school eventually………..


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	“I see, a ~~British~~ school’s………”		“I see, a UK school’s………”

	“Yes…………..though I said that, I will be a student in Kouryou from today onwards.”		“Yes…………..though I said that, I will be a student in Kouryou from today onwards.”
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	And for the reason------		And for the reason------

	“I heard of rumors of the <<Irregular>> in the ~~British~~ school. I had them '''''specially''''' get the student documents and got your face and a name once I got here.”		“I heard of rumors of the <<Irregular>> in the UK school. I had them '''''specially''''' get the student documents and got your face and a name once I got here.”

	“I see………….”		“I see………….”
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	Towards the threatening chairman, Lilith replied by pointing her fingers at me.		Towards the threatening chairman, Lilith replied by pointing her fingers at me.

	“I don’t care about the classes since I flew all over from ~~Britain~~ '''just to meet him''' in the first place. More importantly, how about you join us chairman?”		“I don’t care about the classes since I flew all over from UK '''just to meet him''' in the first place. More importantly, how about you join us chairman?”

	“………..I’ll accept that.”		“………..I’ll accept that.”

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371839 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:36:00Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371839 by Simon (talk)

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Simon: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (47)

2014-07-21T20:25:52Z

Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (47)

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Acolyte at 21:27, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:27:51Z

Acolyte: /* Chapter 2 『If I Borrow Your Words』 */

2014-07-20T21:10:09Z

Chapter 2 『If I Borrow Your Words』

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	The <<{{Furigana\|II\|Level 2}}>> sublimation, is a little different from the one we went through during the enrollment ceremony.		The <<{{Furigana\|II\|Level 2}}>> sublimation, is a little different from the one we went through during the enrollment ceremony.

	We had new <<~~Luciful~~>> administered into our body using a jet injector on the nape of our neck-------until there was still the same but, the difference occurred after that.		We had new <<Lucifer>> administered into our body using a jet injector on the nape of our neck-------until there was still the same but, the difference occurred after that.

	Right after administration during the enrollment ceremony, the <<Astar>> floated up and a heat that I thought was going to burn me to death attacked my whole body but, none of that happened this time. It’s true that my body felt a little hot but, it was just in the level of a little hot.		Right after administration during the enrollment ceremony, the <<Astar>> floated up and a heat that I thought was going to burn me to death attacked my whole body but, none of that happened this time. It’s true that my body felt a little hot but, it was just in the level of a little hot.

Mashiro: /* Chapter 2 『If I Borrow Your Words』 */

2014-07-20T16:07:37Z

Chapter 2 『If I Borrow Your Words』

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RikiNutcase at 01:27, 11 April 2014

2014-04-11T01:27:23Z

Drowzycow: /* Chapter 2 『If I Borrow Your Words』 */

2014-04-10T21:12:38Z

Chapter 2 『If I Borrow Your Words』

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	“Aah actually, I want to go buy clothes, so I came to ask whether or not there is a good shop nearby.”		“Aah actually, I want to go buy clothes, so I came to ask whether or not there is a good shop nearby.”

	“If that is the case, then I recommend the ~~a la mode~~ shopping mall. Its nearby, and it’s very big I think.”		“If that is the case, then I recommend the A La Mode shopping mall. Its nearby, and it’s very big I think.”

	Together with the direction towards that shopping mall, Miyabi also recommended a gelato shop too.		Together with the direction towards that shopping mall, Miyabi also recommended a gelato shop too.
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	“You have a place in mind?”		“You have a place in mind?”

	“Errrr, somewhere like A ~~la mode…………~~..”		“Errrr, somewhere like A La Mode…………..”

	“A ~~la mode~~? Didn’t we go there just last week? Is there something you forgot to buy?”		“A La Mode? Didn’t we go there just last week? Is there something you forgot to buy?”

	“Eh? E,errr, I heard To-Tooru-kun and Yurie-chan were going together so, err……………I-I was curious……..”		“Eh? E,errr, I heard To-Tooru-kun and Yurie-chan were going together so, err……………I-I was curious……..”

RikiNutcase: sorry leave it at gold and silver

2014-04-10T18:53:40Z

sorry leave it at gold and silver

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	I heard the same thing just one month ago but, the speech this time had a soft tone of command to it.		I heard the same thing just one month ago but, the speech this time had a soft tone of command to it.

	The ~~golden-haired~~ girl acted as if it is only natural for her will to be followed, and turned her heels around without hearing my answer and started walking.		The gold girl acted as if it is only natural for her will to be followed, and turned her heels around without hearing my answer and started walking.

	“O-oi. Even if you tell me to come along, right now it’s-------.”		“O-oi. Even if you tell me to come along, right now it’s-------.”
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	Tentatively, as long as Tsukimi the home-room teacher has given her permission, there was no reason to refuse unreasonably.		Tentatively, as long as Tsukimi the home-room teacher has given her permission, there was no reason to refuse unreasonably.

	I exited the classroom together with the ~~golden-haired~~ girl.		I exited the classroom together with the gold girl.


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	Further up ahead, there was a gazebo there and a female butler standing-by inside it.		Further up ahead, there was a gazebo there and a female butler standing-by inside it.

	The butler respectfully lowered her head to us--------rather than saying that, it was for the ~~golden-haired~~ girl.		The butler respectfully lowered her head to us--------rather than saying that, it was for the gold girl.

	In the middle of the gazebo, there was a table with a white cloth with beautiful embroidery and a tea set was placed on top of it.		In the middle of the gazebo, there was a table with a white cloth with beautiful embroidery and a tea set was placed on top of it.
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	(Why is that……….?)		(Why is that……….?)

	Although I was feeling perplexed inside my mind, the ~~golden-haired~~ girl sitting on the opposite side did not bother about the butler’s manners and took a sip of the milk tea before making a satisfied smile.		Although I was feeling perplexed inside my mind, the gold girl sitting on the opposite side did not bother about the butler’s manners and took a sip of the milk tea before making a satisfied smile.

	“Well then, my business is-----”		“Well then, my business is-----”
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	“………………Much obliged, Ojou-sama.”		“………………Much obliged, Ojou-sama.”

	The ~~golden-haired~~ girl-----Lealith placed down with composed movements and the butler that has been silent until now opened her mouth for the first time.		The gold girl-----Lealith placed down with composed movements and the butler that has been silent until now opened her mouth for the first time.

	(Ojou-sama, huh……………)		(Ojou-sama, huh……………)
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	“Good work, Tooru.”		“Good work, Tooru.”

	When I slightly opened my eyes, the silver~~-haired~~ girl making the shade was there making a small smile.		When I slightly opened my eyes, the silver girl making the shade was there making a small smile.

	“Please take this.”		“Please take this.”
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	Much less, Miyabi normally thought Yurie, who was the same sex as her, had a very cute appearance together with her personality.		Much less, Miyabi normally thought Yurie, who was the same sex as her, had a very cute appearance together with her personality.

	That was why; there was no reason to be found for Tooru not to be attracted to the silver~~-haired~~ girl.		That was why; there was no reason to be found for Tooru not to be attracted to the silver girl.

	(I-it's Tooru-kun’s freedom to go out with whoever he wants………….)		(I-it's Tooru-kun’s freedom to go out with whoever he wants………….)

Drowzycow: gold girl > golden-haired girl; silver girl > silver-haired girl and other suggestions

2014-04-10T09:43:53Z

gold girl > golden-haired girl; silver girl > silver-haired girl and other suggestions

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	“<<{{Furigana\|II\|Level 2}}>> huh……………it somehow does not feel real at all huh, Julie-chan.”		“<<{{Furigana\|II\|Level 2}}>> huh……………it somehow does not feel real at all huh, Julie-chan.”

	~~“Ya~~----. That’s true. If our appearance changed then it would be easier though…………..”		“Ja----. That’s true. If our appearance changed then it would be easier though…………..”

	(It somehow does not feel real at all, huh………………….)		(It somehow does not feel real at all, huh………………….)
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	“I don’t mind, is there something going on?”		“I don’t mind, is there something going on?”

	~~“Ya~~---. It’s Sunday too so I want to go and buy outside clothing. It has been hot recently and I only have thick clothes……….”		“Ja---. It’s Sunday too so I want to go and buy outside clothing. It has been hot recently and I only have thick clothes……….”

	It is still May so I don’t think it’s that hot but, it seems the heat can already be said to be summer to Julie who was brought up in a cold country.		It is still May so I don’t think it’s that hot but, it seems the heat can already be said to be summer to Julie who was brought up in a cold country.
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	“I see. Well, we can probably find clothes if we search in a station building.”		“I see. Well, we can probably find clothes if we search in a station building.”

	~~“Ya~~----. But, I think walking without a plan is a problem so, I’ll go ask Miyabi and the rest.”		“Ja----. But, I think walking without a plan is a problem so, I’ll go ask Miyabi and the rest.”

	“Aah, that’s true-------and, wait! Are you planning to go like that……….!?”		“Aah, that’s true-------and, wait! Are you planning to go like that……….!?”
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	“I-I will ask. Julie………you prepare the apple tea.”		“I-I will ask. Julie………you prepare the apple tea.”

	~~“Ya~~---. I understand.”		“Ja---. I understand.”

	I stood up and left the room before hearing a reply.		I stood up and left the room before hearing a reply.

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	I hurried and stopped the girl when she was going to start her one-sided business talk.		I hurried and stopped the girl when she was going to start her one-sided business talk.

	“Now that I think about it, I haven’t named myself yet. I am Lealith Bristol. A student from a British school.”		“Now that I think about it, I haven’t named myself yet. I am Lealith=Bristol. A student from a British school.”

	British school------		British school------
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	I pondered the word I was not familiar with.		I pondered the word I was not familiar with.

	“………………But even so, I am troubled that you didn’t attend classes on the first day itself, Lealith Bristol.”		“………………But even so, I am troubled that you didn’t attend classes on the first day itself, Lealith=Bristol.”

	When I turned over to the voice that suddenly mixed into our conversation, a girl wearing a gothic dress was standing in front of a background with white roses.		When I turned over to the voice that suddenly mixed into our conversation, a girl wearing a gothic dress was standing in front of a background with white roses.
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	Our shoes were covered with sand and the facility closely resembled a coliseum with all the mortar seats surrounding the area.		Our shoes were covered with sand and the facility closely resembled a coliseum with all the mortar seats surrounding the area.

	We were led to a place that had yet to be used in classes and was off-limits during the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>~~, it was the same facility that we have only stepped into since the facility tour right after enrolling into the school. <!--~~,it was a facility that we had only stepped into once during the facility tour right after enrolling into the school.~~-->~~		We were led to a place that had yet to be used in classes and was off-limits during the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>, it was a facility that we had only stepped into once during the facility tour right after enrolling into the school.

	“………..So, what do you want us to confirm here?”		“………..So, what do you want us to confirm here?”
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	Although slightly, even Yurie opened her eyes wider as she said her thoughts.		Although slightly, even Yurie opened her eyes wider as she said her thoughts.

	The factor that should be shocking wasn’t ~~<!--only-->~~her speed.		The factor that should be shocking wasn’t her speed.

	The power that brought Tatsu from the middle of the training room to the wall was also observed.		The power that brought Tatsu from the middle of the training room to the wall was also observed.
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	“Bring it on.”		“Bring it on.”

	Yurie and Tora. I didn’t need to say this but, Yurie was the fastest amongst the first year. However, Yurie’s opponent Tora also has good speed coming after her ~~<!--in the ranks-->~~.		Yurie and Tora. I didn’t need to say this but, Yurie was the fastest amongst the first year. However, Yurie’s opponent Tora also has good speed coming after her.

	Both of them have speed as their weapon. However, Yurie attacks furiously even though her self-taught skills have refined parts, and because Tora has learned martial arts for many years so, his attacks have a distinctive characteristic of attacking in a pointed and accurate manner.		Both of them have speed as their weapon. However, Yurie attacks furiously even though her self-taught skills have refined parts, and because Tora has learned martial arts for many years so, his attacks have a distinctive characteristic of attacking in a pointed and accurate manner.

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	“So you are the <<Irregular>>----Kokonoe Tooru.”		“So you are the <<Irregular>>----Kokonoe Tooru.”

	The first words the ''transfer student'' put in her mouth was that.		The first words the ''transfer student'' put in her mouth was that.


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	Tentatively, as long as Tsukimi the home-room teacher has given her permission, there was no reason to refuse unreasonably.		Tentatively, as long as Tsukimi the home-room teacher has given her permission, there was no reason to refuse unreasonably.

	I exited the classroom together with the ~~gold~~ girl.		I exited the classroom together with the golden-haired girl.


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	Further up ahead, there was a gazebo there and a female butler standing-by inside it.		Further up ahead, there was a gazebo there and a female butler standing-by inside it.

	The butler respectfully lowered her head to us--------rather than saying that, it was for the ~~gold~~ girl.		The butler respectfully lowered her head to us--------rather than saying that, it was for the golden-haired girl.

	In the middle of the gazebo, there was a table with a white cloth with beautiful embroidery and a tea set was placed on top of it.		In the middle of the gazebo, there was a table with a white cloth with beautiful embroidery and a tea set was placed on top of it.
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	(Why is that……….?)		(Why is that……….?)

	Although I was feeling perplexed inside my mind, the ~~gold~~ girl sitting on the opposite side did not bother about the butler’s manners and took a sip of the milk tea before making a satisfied smile.		Although I was feeling perplexed inside my mind, the golden-haired girl sitting on the opposite side did not bother about the butler’s manners and took a sip of the milk tea before making a satisfied smile.

	“Well then, my business is-----”		“Well then, my business is-----”
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	“………………Much obliged, Ojou-sama.”		“………………Much obliged, Ojou-sama.”

	The ~~gold~~ girl-----Lealith placed down with composed movements and the butler that has been silent until now opened her mouth for the first time.		The golden-haired girl-----Lealith placed down with composed movements and the butler that has been silent until now opened her mouth for the first time.

	(Ojou-sama, huh……………)		(Ojou-sama, huh……………)
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	“Good work, Tooru.”		“Good work, Tooru.”

	When I slightly opened my eyes, the silver girl making the shade was there making a small smile.		When I slightly opened my eyes, the silver-haired girl making the shade was there making a small smile.

	“Please take this.”		“Please take this.”
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	Our shoes were covered with sand and the facility closely resembled a coliseum with all the mortar seats surrounding the area.		Our shoes were covered with sand and the facility closely resembled a coliseum with all the mortar seats surrounding the area.

	We were led to a place that had yet to be used in classes and was off-limits during the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>, it was the same facility that we have only stepped into since the facility tour right after enrolling into the school.		We were led to a place that had yet to be used in classes and was off-limits during the <<{{Furigana\|New blade battle\|Newcomer battle}}>>, it was the same facility that we have only stepped into since the facility tour right after enrolling into the school. <!--,it was a facility that we had only stepped into once during the facility tour right after enrolling into the school.-->

	“………..So, what do you want us to confirm here?”		“………..So, what do you want us to confirm here?”
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	<nowiki></nowiki>Dozuu!! The strong impact shook the training room.		<nowiki></nowiki>Dozuu!! The strong impact shook the training room.

	His stomach was pierced through and was skewered to the wall just like that.		His stomach was pierced through and he was skewered to the wall just like that.

	If we had not known the specialty of the <<Blaze>>, it would be a shocking scenery where we would avert our eyes from………..		If we had not known the specialty of the <<Blaze>>, it would be a shocking scenery where we would avert our eyes from………..
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	Although slightly, even Yurie opened her eyes wider as she said her thoughts.		Although slightly, even Yurie opened her eyes wider as she said her thoughts.

	The factor that should be shocking wasn’t her speed.		The factor that should be shocking wasn’t <!--only-->her speed.

	The power that brought Tatsu from the middle of the training room to the wall was also observed.		The power that brought Tatsu from the middle of the training room to the wall was also observed.
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	“Bring it on.”		“Bring it on.”

	Yurie and Tora. I ~~don’t~~ need to say this but, Yurie is the fastest in the first year. However, Yurie’s opponent Tora also has good speed coming after her.		Yurie and Tora. I didn’t need to say this but, Yurie was the fastest amongst the first year. However, Yurie’s opponent Tora also has good speed coming after her <!--in the ranks-->.

	Both of them have speed as their weapon. However, Yurie attacks furiously even though her self-taught skills have refined parts, and because Tora has learned martial arts for many years so, his attacks have a distinctive characteristic of attacking in a pointed and accurate manner.		Both of them have speed as their weapon. However, Yurie attacks furiously even though her self-taught skills have refined parts, and because Tora has learned martial arts for many years so, his attacks have a distinctive characteristic of attacking in a pointed and accurate manner.
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	However, the results will be unknown if I use {{Furigana\|Thunder god’s strike\|Mjolnir}}.		However, the results will be unknown if I use {{Furigana\|Thunder god’s strike\|Mjolnir}}.

	Since it is impossible for me to direct it towards Yurie, the assumption is out of question.		Since it was impossible for me to direct it towards Yurie, the assumption is out of question.

	“I see. I have the same opinion as you since I fought Yurie with her <<{{Furigana\|Twin blades\|Double}}>>------Oh, they moved!!”		“I see. I have the same opinion as you since I fought Yurie with her <<{{Furigana\|Twin blades\|Double}}>>------Oh, they moved!!”
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	Much less, Miyabi normally thought Yurie, who was the same sex as her, had a very cute appearance together with her personality.		Much less, Miyabi normally thought Yurie, who was the same sex as her, had a very cute appearance together with her personality.

	That was why; there was no reason to be found for Tooru not to be attracted to the silver girl.		That was why; there was no reason to be found for Tooru not to be attracted to the silver-haired girl.

	(I-it's Tooru-kun’s freedom to go out with whoever he wants………….)		(I-it's Tooru-kun’s freedom to go out with whoever he wants………….)