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JFerg: /* Part 2 */

2014-08-25T11:04:05Z

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	“………..Did you call me?”		“………..Did you call me?”

	The teenager with arrow-like eyes spoke when he anticipated the old man would finish moving his hands.		The teenager with arrow-like eyes spoke when he anticipated that the old man would finish moving his hands.

	“Fuhaha, sorry to call you at a busy time like this.”		“Fuhaha, sorry to call you at a busy time like this.”
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	“So your business?”		“So your business?”

	“Umu. Just ~~like~~ you know, the <<unit>> has finished its adjustments and has been spread to a few teams. The last thing would be to advance to the ~~last~~ stage but-----before that, there is ~~one material~~ I want. So with that said I want to borrow your power to obtain ~~that~~.”		“Umu. Just as you know, the <<unit>> has finished its adjustments and has been spread to a few teams. The last thing would be to advance to the final stage but-----before that, there is something I want. So with that said I want to borrow your power to obtain it.”

	“What kind of material do you wish for?”		“What kind of material do you wish for?”

JFerg: /* Part 1 */

2014-08-25T10:45:14Z

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JFerg: /* Part 1 */

2014-08-25T01:46:18Z

Part 1

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	At the same time, a breeze with a strong smell of salt tickled my nose.		At the same time, a breeze with a strong smell of salt tickled my nose.

	A lot of the breeze got sucked into my chest and when I looked to the outside scenery again-----it was blue.		A lot of the breeze got sucked into my chest and when I looked to the outside scenery again-----it was all blue.

	Both the sky and earth was blue.		Both the sky and the earth was blue.

	It was normal for the sky but for the earth------it was strange.		It was normal for the sky but for the earth------it was strange.
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	Speaking specifically, it's not the earth but instead it was the ocean. The endless ocean spread out as far as I could see.		Speaking specifically, it's not the earth but instead it was the ocean. The endless ocean spread out as far as I could see.

	Yes, right now I----Kokonoe Tooru am riding on a boat. Starting today, the first years of the Kouryou academy are heading out to the southern islands on a boat for a 1 week seaside school.		Yes, right now I----Kokonoe Tooru, am riding on a boat. Starting today, the first years of the Kouryou academy are heading out to the southern islands on a boat for a 1 week seaside school.

	“The smell of salt water is amazing.”		“The smell of salt water is amazing.”
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	“J-ja----………..I am okay……….”		“J-ja----………..I am okay……….”

	While the wind was swaying the hair reaching to her hips, the small girl nodded.		While the wind was swaying the hair, reaching to her hips, the small girl nodded.

	She is my <<Duo>>-----Julie.		She is my <<Duo>>-----Julie.

JFerg: /* Chapter 1 『Is It Okay To Wish For It』 */

2014-08-25T01:42:33Z

Chapter 1 『Is It Okay To Wish For It』

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Yoyoyo5678: /* Part 1 */ Julie's Ya -- > Ja

2014-08-08T11:32:39Z

Part 1: Julie's Ya -- > Ja

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	“Are you okay, Julie?”		“Are you okay, Julie?”

	“Y-ya----………..I am okay……….”		“J-ja----………..I am okay……….”

	While the wind was swaying the hair reaching until her hips, the small girl nodded.		While the wind was swaying the hair reaching until her hips, the small girl nodded.
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	“………Are you okay?”		“………Are you okay?”

	~~“Ya~~--. It feels nice outside………”		“Ja--. It feels nice outside………”

	(Julie being like this is kind of rare………..)		(Julie being like this is kind of rare………..)
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	“Had a nice sleep?”		“Had a nice sleep?”

	~~“Ya~~----, thanks to you. Thank you very much, Tooru.”		“Ja----, thanks to you. Thank you very much, Tooru.”

	“It’s nothing much. How about you Miyabi?”		“It’s nothing much. How about you Miyabi?”

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371846 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:36:53Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371846 by Simon (talk)

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Simon: /* Part 1 */Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (23)

2014-07-21T20:26:55Z

Part 1: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (23)

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Acolyte at 21:37, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:37:55Z

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	“It’ll become a bit better if it's windy, so let’s rest here for a while.”		“It’ll become a bit better if it's windy, so let’s rest here for a while.”

	~~“Ja~~---…………….”		“Ya---…………….”

	After Julie nodded, she leaned against the wall and dragged her hips down before Petan sitting down.		After Julie nodded, she leaned against the wall and dragged her hips down before Petan sitting down.
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	“………Are you okay?”		“………Are you okay?”

	~~“Ja~~--. It feels nice outside………”		“Ya--. It feels nice outside………”

	(Julie being like this is kind of rare………..)		(Julie being like this is kind of rare………..)
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	Just when I was wondering what the answer would be-----Miyabi moved her head vertically with a clear red face.		Just when I was wondering what the answer would be-----Miyabi moved her head vertically with a clear red face.

	“It feels comfortable here so, I got a little sleepy and that’s why, I won’t ask as much like what Yu-Julie-chan is doing so, I thought I could ask you to borrow your shoulder for a while…………….”		“It feels comfortable here so, I got a little sleepy and that’s why, I won’t ask as much like what Ju-Julie-chan is doing so, I thought I could ask you to borrow your shoulder for a while…………….”

	It was probably very embarrassing because, Miyabi lowered her sights and fiddled with her finger tips while saying the reason.		It was probably very embarrassing because, Miyabi lowered her sights and fiddled with her finger tips while saying the reason.
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	“Had a nice sleep?”		“Had a nice sleep?”

	~~“Ja~~----, thanks to you. Thank you very much, Tooru.”		“Ya----, thanks to you. Thank you very much, Tooru.”

	“It’s nothing much. How about you Miyabi?”		“It’s nothing much. How about you Miyabi?”

Acolyte at 21:36, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:36:38Z

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	“It’ll become a bit better if it's windy, so let’s rest here for a while.”		“It’ll become a bit better if it's windy, so let’s rest here for a while.”

	~~“Ya~~---…………….”		“Ja---…………….”

	After Julie nodded, she leaned against the wall and dragged her hips down before Petan sitting down.		After Julie nodded, she leaned against the wall and dragged her hips down before Petan sitting down.
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	“………Are you okay?”		“………Are you okay?”

	~~“Ya~~--. It feels nice outside………”		“Ja--. It feels nice outside………”

	(Julie being like this is kind of rare………..)		(Julie being like this is kind of rare………..)
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	“Had a nice sleep?”		“Had a nice sleep?”

	~~“Ya~~----, thanks to you. Thank you very much, Tooru.”		“Ja----, thanks to you. Thank you very much, Tooru.”

	“It’s nothing much. How about you Miyabi?”		“It’s nothing much. How about you Miyabi?”

Mashiro: /* Chapter 1 『Is It Okay To Wish For It』 */

2014-07-20T16:21:59Z

Chapter 1 『Is It Okay To Wish For It』

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