Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 2 - Revision history

121.121.121.220 at 01:44, 3 September 2014

2014-09-03T01:44:41Z

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	In the door of the helicopter hovering about 30 meters above us, a girl leaned forward and waved her hands.		In the door of the helicopter hovering about 30 meters above us, a girl leaned forward and waved her hands.

	Lilith=Bristol. With her {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} swaying, the girl looking at me with those {{Furigana\|blue gemstone eyes\|Sapphire blue}} that makes one think of a deep sea, was an Ojou-sama that transferred to Kouryou academy 2 months ago from ~~Britain~~. She is a little selfish but has a lively personality; she is also the owner of a <<Unrivaled blaze>> like me and because of that, she is an existence called <<Exception>> but…………..actually, she was someone I am bad with.		Lilith=Bristol. With her {{Furigana\|blonde hair\|Yellow Topaz}} swaying, the girl looking at me with those {{Furigana\|blue gemstone eyes\|Sapphire blue}} that makes one think of a deep sea, was an Ojou-sama that transferred to Kouryou academy 2 months ago from UK. She is a little selfish but has a lively personality; she is also the owner of a <<Unrivaled blaze>> like me and because of that, she is an existence called <<Exception>> but…………..actually, she was someone I am bad with.

	“Sorry. For. The. Wait-------Chuu♥”		“Sorry. For. The. Wait-------Chuu♥”

JFerg at 01:25, 26 August 2014

2014-08-26T01:25:00Z

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	The enemy did not allow that and continued attacking from a distance. Since the attacks were mostly flying objects, Julie could only remain defensive because she could not close the gap.		The enemy did not allow that and continued attacking from a distance. Since the attacks were mostly flying objects, Julie could only remain defensive because she could not close the gap.

	Of course, the situation would change if she could close the gap, but she was ~~hesitatant~~ in attacking when she thought of the possibility that '''''she might be seen.'''''		Of course, the situation would change if she could close the gap, but she was hesitant in attacking when she thought of the possibility that '''''she might be seen.'''''

	(What should I do………….)		(What should I do………….)
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	Especially the way she moves her body; she had already experienced that first hand during the previous <<Survive>>. At that time Julie was impatient and she was able to deal with the straight forward and simple attacks without any difficulty. However, if she had attacked in a calmer manner then, the battle would probably have been more complicated.		Especially the way she moves her body; she had already experienced that first hand during the previous <<Survive>>. At that time Julie was impatient and she was able to deal with the straight forward and simple attacks without any difficulty. However, if she had attacked in a calmer manner then, the battle would probably have been more complicated.

	Of course, Lilith thought that her victory ~~would~~ still would not have changed.		Of course, Lilith thought that her victory still would not have changed.

	Anyhow, there was a great difference with the movements of the girl holding the <<Double>> standing beside her and the enemy attacking them right now.		Anyhow, there was a great difference with the movements of the girl holding the <<Double>> standing beside her and the enemy attacking them right now.

JFerg: /* Part 2 */

2014-08-26T01:17:11Z

Part 2

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	Yes, normally.		Yes, normally.

	However, Julie’s concentration ~~has~~ remained in disarray even after the moment the attack came.		However, Julie’s concentration had remained in disarray even after the moment the attack came.

	The first attack was aimed at Tooru. Julie was also targeted immediately after Lilith shouted, and this event occurred right after she jumped away. The moment she landed her skirt flipped up.		The first attack was aimed at Tooru. Julie was also targeted immediately after Lilith shouted, and this event occurred right after she jumped away. The moment she landed her skirt flipped up.

JFerg: /* Part 2 */

2014-08-26T01:16:17Z

Part 2

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	However, Julie’s concentration has remained in disarray even after the moment the attack came.		However, Julie’s concentration has remained in disarray even after the moment the attack came.

	The first attack was aimed at Tooru. Julie was also ~~aimed~~ immediately after Lilith shouted, and this event occurred right after she jumped away. The moment she landed her skirt flipped up.		The first attack was aimed at Tooru. Julie was also targeted immediately after Lilith shouted, and this event occurred right after she jumped away. The moment she landed her skirt flipped up.

	“------!!”		“------!!”

	She pushed down her skirt in panic and looked towards her <<Duo>>-----Tooru.		She pushed down her skirt in a panic and looked towards her <<Duo>>-----Tooru.

	The boy was making a stern expression towards the darkness----the direction the attack ~~came~~ from----and was not concerned about Julie.		The boy was making a stern expression towards the darkness----the direction the attack had come from----and was not concerned about Julie.

	(It is safe, right…….?)		(It is safe, right…….?)
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	It was only for an instant and what’s more the surroundings were dark------but since the lights were still on, she could not determine whether he saw her or not.		It was only for an instant and what’s more the surroundings were dark------but since the lights were still on, she could not determine whether he saw her or not.

	But, she had no time to indirectly confirm this with Tooru.		But she had no time to indirectly confirm this with Tooru.

	“Julie, turn off the light!! It will be targeted!!”		“Julie, turn off the light!! It will be targeted!!”

JFerg: /* Part 2 */

2014-08-26T01:11:59Z

Part 2

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JFerg: /* Part 1 */

2014-08-25T18:34:09Z

Part 1

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Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371847 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:36:59Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371847 by Simon (talk)

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Simon: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (61)

2014-07-21T20:27:06Z

Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (61)

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Acolyte at 21:35, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:35:13Z

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	“Okay, let’s go.”		“Okay, let’s go.”

	~~“Ya~~---”		“Ja---”

	<nowiki></nowiki>Doboon a flashy landing sound was produced and I entered the sea from the tip of my toe to my head.		<nowiki></nowiki>Doboon a flashy landing sound was produced and I entered the sea from the tip of my toe to my head.
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	“Are you okay, Julie.”		“Are you okay, Julie.”

	~~“Ya~~-Ya---………..Thanks to you I somehow managed………..Thank you very much, Tooru………”		“Ja-Ja---………..Thanks to you I somehow managed………..Thank you very much, Tooru………”

	“But even so, it is kind of unexpected that Julie can’t swim.”		“But even so, it is kind of unexpected that Julie can’t swim.”
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	“Alright, we have to head to the island soon. We will lose to Tora and the rest if we take our time. Julie, I will carry you on my back from this point on.”		“Alright, we have to head to the island soon. We will lose to Tora and the rest if we take our time. Julie, I will carry you on my back from this point on.”

	~~“Ya~~--- Thank you very much. By the way Tooru.”		“Ja--- Thank you very much. By the way Tooru.”

	“Hn?”		“Hn?”
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	“Don’t worry about it. It’s not like the island got further away and lets head there while watching out not to counter the current. Julie don’t let go of me okay?”		“Don’t worry about it. It’s not like the island got further away and lets head there while watching out not to counter the current. Julie don’t let go of me okay?”

	~~“Ya~~---”		“Ja---”

	Before I started swimming, Julie made a hand gesture to Tora and the rest that we would be heading to the island like this.		Before I started swimming, Julie made a hand gesture to Tora and the rest that we would be heading to the island like this.
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	“Let’s see………..losing is annoying so, let’s chase her. Hold on tight.”		“Let’s see………..losing is annoying so, let’s chase her. Hold on tight.”

	~~“Ya~~----♪ I will not let go.”		“Ja----♪ I will not let go.”


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	“If that is the case then, I guess I will rest until Julie’s clothes dries off.”		“If that is the case then, I guess I will rest until Julie’s clothes dries off.”

	~~“Ya~~---. Thank you very much.”		“Ja---. Thank you very much.”

	The silver girl nodded------and put her hands inside her skirt.		The silver girl nodded------and put her hands inside her skirt.
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	“Julie, turn off the lights!! It will be targeted!!”		“Julie, turn off the lights!! It will be targeted!!”

	“-----! Ya,Ya----!!”		“-----! Ja,Ja----!!”

	A light coming from a further distance disappeared, after she shouted while turning off the lights.		A light coming from a further distance disappeared, after she shouted while turning off the lights.
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	“Julie, turn off the lights!! It will be targeted!!”		“Julie, turn off the lights!! It will be targeted!!”

	“----! Ya,Ya---!!”		“----! Ja,Ja---!!”

	Although she quickly turned off the lights, she still received attacks since her position was completely exposed to the attacker a few moments ago.		Although she quickly turned off the lights, she still received attacks since her position was completely exposed to the attacker a few moments ago.
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	“…………..I never asked for your help.”		“…………..I never asked for your help.”

	~~“Ya~~---. I did it on a whim.”		“Ja---. I did it on a whim.”

	Lilith did not say anymore to that un-honest reply and returned her consciousness back to the enemy.		Lilith did not say anymore to that un-honest reply and returned her consciousness back to the enemy.
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	“So, let’s do it in the next timing.”		“So, let’s do it in the next timing.”

	~~“Ya~~---”		“Ja---”

	After Julie nodded, she looked at her feet again.		After Julie nodded, she looked at her feet again.

Mashiro: /* Chapter 2 『The Time For Disaster, huh』 */

2014-07-20T16:23:15Z

Chapter 2 『The Time For Disaster, huh』

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