Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 5 - Revision history

SNovah: Basic punctuation fixes, typos, tried to get sentences a little clearer; Part 2 is really still quite confusing though

2021-03-30T21:04:58Z

Basic punctuation fixes, typos, tried to get sentences a little clearer; Part 2 is really still quite confusing though

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SNovah: General changes for readability, punctuation; some changes to sentences, left ambiguous things in; halfway pass

2021-03-30T04:14:08Z

General changes for readability, punctuation; some changes to sentences, left ambiguous things in; halfway pass

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Darklor: assumed sentence meaning - change it back if I am wrong.

2014-11-21T08:11:44Z

assumed sentence meaning - change it back if I am wrong.

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	After we finished playing beach volleyball, everyone enjoyed themselves with the Bento which Miyabi woke up early ~~and prepared~~. The taste was delicious without any complaints, and Miyabi became shy when we told her our comments. Imari said Not bad and kept poking Miyabi’s elbow while laughing.		After we finished playing beach volleyball, everyone enjoyed themselves with the Bento for which Miyabi woke up early to prepare it. The taste was delicious without any complaints, and Miyabi became shy when we told her our comments. Imari said Not bad and kept poking Miyabi’s elbow while laughing.

	Everyone commenced the standard watermelon splitting in the afternoon and after that, around the time we started passing the time happily like the whole morning----		Everyone commenced the standard watermelon splitting in the afternoon and after that, around the time we started passing the time happily like the whole morning----

NONcOMPOSmENTIS: /* Part 1 */ Fixed spelling of the word "would"

2014-10-01T18:20:59Z

Part 1: Fixed spelling of the word "would"

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	[Julie-chan, you are so slim and fair-skinned, just like I thought. How nice…………] [Neeh--. She’s also small and very cute♪] [Thank you very much. but, I hope I grow a little taller] [You’re wrong, Julie-chan! It’s better when you're small!] [Is that so…….but my reach is too short, so I want to become taller] [I think your reason for growing is weird, Julie…….] [------?]		[Julie-chan, you are so slim and fair-skinned, just like I thought. How nice…………] [Neeh--. She’s also small and very cute♪] [Thank you very much. but, I hope I grow a little taller] [You’re wrong, Julie-chan! It’s better when you're small!] [Is that so…….but my reach is too short, so I want to become taller] [I think your reason for growing is weird, Julie…….] [------?]

	[Hey, save the talking until after we're done changing] [Ahaha, that’s true………..wait, Tomoe you look stylish. Places that are meant to come out are out and you're still slim] [Just how many guys have you seduced before now!?] [I-I haven’t seduced anyone] [Then how about seducing Kokonoe-kun♪ He ~~woild~~ definitely fall just like that] [Seduce…….Ko-Kokonoe……..Huh!? Wh-what are you saying, Sensei!!]		[Hey, save the talking until after we're done changing] [Ahaha, that’s true………..wait, Tomoe you look stylish. Places that are meant to come out are out and you're still slim] [Just how many guys have you seduced before now!?] [I-I haven’t seduced anyone] [Then how about seducing Kokonoe-kun♪ He would definitely fall just like that] [Seduce…….Ko-Kokonoe……..Huh!? Wh-what are you saying, Sensei!!]

	<nowiki></nowiki>kyaikyai I could hear the happy commotion coming from the cave behind me.		<nowiki></nowiki>kyaikyai I could hear the happy commotion coming from the cave behind me.

JFerg: /* Part 2 */

2014-08-27T18:41:27Z

Part 2

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JFerg: /* Part 1 */

2014-08-27T16:44:48Z

Part 1

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JFerg: /* Part 1 */

2014-08-27T07:26:25Z

Part 1

Redak: How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371850 by Simon (talk)

2014-07-21T20:37:24Z

How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371850 by Simon (talk)

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Simon: /* Part 1 */Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (32)

2014-07-21T20:27:34Z

Part 1: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (32)

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Acolyte at 21:38, 20 July 2014

2014-07-20T21:38:27Z

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	The words that I could say normally without any discomposure usually, just felt embarrassing somehow now.		The words that I could say normally without any discomposure usually, just felt embarrassing somehow now.

	~~“Ja—♪“~~		“Ya—♪“

	<nowiki></nowiki>Chirin the bell echoed when Julie nodded happily.		<nowiki></nowiki>Chirin the bell echoed when Julie nodded happily.
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	It looks like she did not drown in the shallow waters but, I called out to her just in case.		It looks like she did not drown in the shallow waters but, I called out to her just in case.

	~~“Ja~~---. I was very surprised….”		“Ya---. I was very surprised….”

	Julie turned back after appearing, and her upper body was naked.		Julie turned back after appearing, and her upper body was naked.
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	Lucky or unlucky------------(I’ll leave it as lucky)-----since her silver hair was sticking onto her nipples and successfully act as a guard, I could not see everything.		Lucky or unlucky------------(I’ll leave it as lucky)-----since her silver hair was sticking onto her nipples and successfully act as a guard, I could not see everything.

	~~“Yu~~-Julie! Up, uppp!!”		“Ju-Julie! Up, uppp!!”

	I turned my back at her and shouted while bringing her attention to the problem.		I turned my back at her and shouted while bringing her attention to the problem.
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	(Σ@♀π-------!!)		(Σ@♀π-------!!)

	~~“Yu~~-Yu-Juliee!?”		“Ju-Ju-Juliee!?”

	“No, Tooru. You must not look here”		“No, Tooru. You must not look here”
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	“-----!! O-oh yeah! Hahaha, oh silly me……..”		“-----!! O-oh yeah! Hahaha, oh silly me……..”

	~~“Yu~~-Julie too right”		“Ju-Julie too right”

	“Nai. You’re wrong------“		“Nai. You’re wrong------“
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	I could hear several relieved sighs when Julie replied for some reason.		I could hear several relieved sighs when Julie replied for some reason.

	~~“………….everyone~~ is so kind☆”		“…………Everyone is so kind☆”

	Ignoring Tsukimi’s weird sentence, I headed back to the rocky area where the cave was located together with Miyabi.		Ignoring Tsukimi’s weird sentence, I headed back to the rocky area where the cave was located together with Miyabi.

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	[Julie-chan, you are so slim and white like I thought. How nice…………] [Neeh--. She’s also small and very cute♪] [Thank you very much. but, I wish to grow a little taller] [You’re wrong, Julie-chan! It’s only good when you are small!] [Is that so…….my reach is short so, I want to become taller] [I feel your reason for growing up is weird, Julie…….] [------?]		[Julie-chan, you are so slim and white like I thought. How nice…………] [Neeh--. She’s also small and very cute♪] [Thank you very much. but, I wish to grow a little taller] [You’re wrong, Julie-chan! It’s only good when you are small!] [Is that so…….but my reach is short, so I want to become taller] [I feel your reason for growing is weird, Julie…….] [------?]

	[Hey, save the talking after we are done changing] [Ahaha, that’s true………..wait, Tomoe you have good style. Places meant to come out are out and you are slim] [Just how many guys have you seduced until now!?] [I-I ~~didn’t~~ seduce anyone] [Then how about seducing Kokonoe-kun♪ He will definitely fall just like that] [Seduce…….Ko-Kokonoe……..Huh!? Wh-what are you saying, Sensei!!]		[Hey, save the talking until after we are done changing] [Ahaha, that’s true………..wait, Tomoe you have good style. Places meant to come out are out and you are still slim] [Just how many guys have you seduced until now!?] [I-I haven’t seduce anyone] [Then how about seducing Kokonoe-kun♪ He will definitely fall just like that] [Seduce…….Ko-Kokonoe……..Huh!? Wh-what are you saying, Sensei!!]

	<nowiki></nowiki>kyaikyai I could hear the happy commotion coming from the cave behind me.		<nowiki></nowiki>kyaikyai I could hear the happy commotion coming from the cave behind me.
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	(Did they forget that I am here……….?)		(Did they forget that I am here……….?)

	I felt my name ~~got~~ called several times but, it seems my existence has completely ~~flown~~ off their memories~~, and~~ it looks like they will not be done changing any time soon.		I felt my name had been called several times, but it seems my existence has completely blown off of their memories; it also looks like they will not be done changing any time soon.

	I made a sigh, under the scorching sunlight.		I made a sigh under the scorching sunlight.

	(Why does this have to happen………..)		(Why does this always have to happen………..)

	Regarding ~~about~~ what I am doing right ~~now~~-----I was standing guard at the cave entrance to prevent anyone from coming close and peeping on the girls changing. Unlike me who changed in the tent before heading out, it ~~seems~~ the girls ~~are~~ in the middle of changing inside the cave------which was a dead end with a 10 meter space.		Regarding what I was doing right then-----I was standing guard at the cave entrance to prevent anyone from coming close and peeping on the girls changing. Unlike myself, who had changed in the tent before heading out, it seemed that the girls were in the middle of changing inside the cave------which was a dead end with a 10 meter space.

	Because of that, I ~~was~~ made to stand guard and was forced to go through this awkward situation.		Because of that, I had been made to stand guard and was forced to go through this awkward situation.

	Of course, the girl talk was still on-going during that time----		Of course, the girl talk was still on-going during that time----
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	[I thought this during bath time too but, Hotaka-san has some amazing ones huh. How big is your cup size?] [Tha-that’s a little………..] [Kuhah, if you won’t answer…..this will happen☆]		[I thought this during bath time too but, Hotaka-san has some amazing ones huh. How big is your cup size?] [Tha-that’s a little………..] [Kuhah, if you won’t answer…..this will happen☆]

	[Hyaau……….sto-stop, ~~Sense~~, Fuaa…………ah, nuu, st-stop, don’t ~~fondling~~, fuann………….] [Amazing♪ my fingers are sinking in☆] [Ah, I’ll touch it too. Uwah, it’s true!! Kuh, I am so jealous!! I’ll do this to these tyrants!!] [Kuhahah, do this too while you’re at it☆ Soryah, pinchy pinch♪] [ Hyaa, Hyaaaaaaa…….do-don’t pinch…….Hyuuu……………..] [ It’s going to be ~~worst~~ if you don’t answer you know?] [i-I’ll tell you, I’ll tell you so err, its F…………….HnKuuuun!! Haa, haa……..Hafuu…………]		[Hyaau……….sto-stop, Sensei, Fuaa…………ah, nuu, st-stop, don’t fondle me, fuann………….] [Amazing♪ my fingers are sinking in☆] [Ah, I’ll touch them too. Uwah, it’s true!! Kuh, I am so jealous!! I’ll do this to these tyrants!!] [Kuhahah, do this too while you’re at it☆ Soryah, pinchy pinch♪] [ Hyaa, Hyaaaaaaa…….do-don’t pinch…….Hyuuu……………..] [ It’s going to be worse if you don’t answer you know?] [I-I’ll tell you, I’ll tell you so err, its F…………….HnKuuuun!! Haa, haa……..Hafuu…………]

	I could hear rough and seductive breathing, and my imagination was unnecessarily going wild because I ~~could not~~ see; I then gulped in the end.		I could hear rough and seductive breathing, and my imagination was unnecessarily going wild because I couldn't see; I then gulped in the end.

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	(Concentrate! Concentrate on guarding……….! I am monitoring the surroundings……..!!)		(Concentrate! Concentrate on guarding……….! I am monitoring the surroundings……..!!)

	I covered my ears and ~~try~~ my best to decrease my worldly desires by chanting tongue-twisters in my head.		I covered my ears and tried my best to decrease my worldly desires by chanting tongue-twisters in my head.

	I then wished they would get done changing soon.		I then wished they would get done changing soon.

	…………..if this keeps up, something dreadful would happen in my ethical standards.		…………..if this keeps up, something dreadful would happen to my ethical standards.

	“Err so, the biggest breast goes to Miyabi, Imari is 3 ranks below and another 2 ranks below will go to Julie-chan. Usa-sensei is 3rd and Tachibana is 1 rank above her. I would be-----“		“Err so, the biggest breast goes to Miyabi, Imari is 3 ranks below and another 2 ranks below will go to Julie-chan. Usa-sensei is 3rd and Tachibana is 1 rank above her. I would be-----“

	The ~~results~~ of covering my ears ~~were~~ excellent. Even though I could somewhat hear their ~~voice~~, I ~~can’t~~ hear the ~~contents~~ of it.		The result of covering my ears was excellent. Even though I could still somewhat hear their voices, I couldn’t hear the content of it.

	While making a relieved sigh, I continued my tongue-twister.		While making a relieved sigh, I continued my tongue-twister.

	Not long ~~later~~----		Not long after----

	My shoulders got poked and I turned around.		My shoulders got poked and I turned around.
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	A fairy in a white bikini appeared in front of me.		A fairy in a white bikini appeared in front of me.

	There was more exposure compared to her normal T-shirt appearance and that ~~made~~ my heart pumping. Also, since the white swimsuit emphasized her white skin, it made my heartbeat pump even faster. On top of that, she ~~has~~ a slender body ~~made by~~ modest breasts and slim legs. In addition, the colorful float ring she was holding behind brought out the girlish charms in her.		There was more exposure compared to her normal T-shirt appearance and that sent my heart pumping. Also, since the white swimsuit emphasized her white skin, it made my heartbeat pump even faster. On top of that, she had a slender body with modest breasts and slim legs. In addition, the colorful float ring she was holding behind brought out the girlish charms in her.

	Her appearance was the combination of slight egotism and loveliness, and it was enough to make me wonder if it was okay to look straight at her.		Her appearance was the combination of slight egotism and loveliness, and it was enough to make me wonder if it was okay to look straight at her.
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	Imari clapped at my answer.		Imari clapped at my answer.

	“Correct. You will tell us your thoughts on each of us as the male representative♪ Praise if you can too”		“Correct. You will tell us your thoughts on each of us as the male representative♪ Praise us if you can too”

	“What do you mean by male representative, I am the only guy here……….”		“What do you mean by male representative, I am the only guy here……….”
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	I am undoubtedly the only guy here.		I am undoubtedly the only guy here.

	It’s not like I wanted to be in this situation. I invited Tora, Tatsu and 2 other close guy friends but------since Tora chose to sleep on rest ~~days~~ like usual, Tatsu was muscle training with a staff he got along with, the other 2 wanted to have a good rest and go out on a date with a branch school girl respectively; each of them did not join because of their own reasons and that has caused this overwhelming unbalanced ratio of male and female.		It’s not like I wanted to be in this situation. I invited Tora, Tatsu and 2 other close guy friends but------since Tora chose to sleep on rest day like usual, Tatsu was muscle training with a staff he got along with, the other 2 wanted to have a good rest and go out on a date with a branch school girl respectively; each of them did not join because of their own reasons and that has caused this overwhelming unbalanced ratio of male and female.

	“Okay okay, we will be losing time to play if don’t hurry up and tell us your thoughts, Tooru”		“Okay okay, we will be losing time to play if don’t hurry up and tell us your thoughts, Tooru”