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2015-06-17T13:41:48Z

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	Together with the melody, the whole ground started moving and we are now able to control the cup.		Together with the melody, the whole ground started moving and we are now able to control the cup.

	“You can spin it, Julie”		“You can spin it, Julie”

	“Ja---“		“Ja---“
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	The good in her hand was a chick with a blue crest.		The good in her hand was a chick with a blue crest.

	~~“”………………~~.””		““……………….””

	“What is it?”		“What is it?”

RikiNutcase at 11:43, 17 June 2015

2015-06-17T11:43:01Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 11:43, 17 June 2015
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	When we were talking like this; the night gotten deeper and-----		When we were talking like this; the night gotten deeper and-----

	Peek……….Peek…………..		<nowiki></nowiki>Peek……….Peek…………..

	It was getting closer to light off and Julie started to look kind of restless.		It was getting closer to light off and Julie started to look kind of restless.
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	After I nodded powerlessly--------		After I nodded powerlessly--------

	Tokotokotoko…..Poof		<nowiki></nowiki>Tokotokotoko…..Poof

	Julie climbed up to my bed and sat down without any hesitation.		Julie climbed up to my bed and sat down without any hesitation.
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	(So-soft objects are taking turns to touch both of elbows here!?)		(So-soft objects are taking turns to touch both of elbows here!?)

	Yuyuun when I get pulled to one side.		<nowiki></nowiki>Yuyuun when I get pulled to one side.

	Boyoyon when I get pulled to the other side.		<nowiki></nowiki>Boyoyon when I get pulled to the other side.

	Both of sides were soft and springy and the pulling was getting stronger as time passed------		Both of sides were soft and springy and the pulling was getting stronger as time passed------
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	[Spin Spin-----! The scarlet cyclone of Fugaku means me!] [Sensei, my eyes are spinning] [Tsu-tsukimi-sensei, aren’t you spinning a little too hard!? And, what the heck is Fugaku!?] [A game center on a bridge made of boats! Kuaaahahahaaaaaaaaaa!! Spin Spin, this is the big revolution of a flower petal-----!!]		[Spin Spin-----! The scarlet cyclone of Fugaku means me!] [Sensei, my eyes are spinning] [Tsu-tsukimi-sensei, aren’t you spinning a little too hard!? And, what the heck is Fugaku!?] [A game center on a bridge made of boats! Kuaaahahahaaaaaaaaaa!! Spin Spin, this is the big revolution of a flower petal-----!!]

	Spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin--------------!!		<nowiki></nowiki>Spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin--------------!!

	“You are spinning too much; you’re spinning too much hey!! Listen to what other have to says, you stupid rabbit------!!”		“You are spinning too much; you’re spinning too much hey!! Listen to what other have to says, you stupid rabbit------!!”
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	“We will go in full power too”		“We will go in full power too”

	Spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin--------------!!		<nowiki></nowiki>Spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin spin--------------!!

	“Opposite------!!”		“Opposite------!!”
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	We ended up falling down together.		We ended up falling down together.

	Gon……..! a dull sound appeared and pain started flowing at the back of my head.		<nowiki></nowiki>Gon……..! a dull sound appeared and pain started flowing at the back of my head.

	“Ouch…………”		“Ouch…………”
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	“”--------!!””		“”--------!!””

	Pyon		<nowiki></nowiki>Pyon

	“S-s-sorry, for dragging you in too…….!”		“S-s-sorry, for dragging you in too…….!”
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	“Ja—“		“Ja—“

	nodnod Julie nodded before opening her mouth.		<nowiki></nowiki>nodnod Julie nodded before opening her mouth.

	“In Gimle’s amusement park, there are only attractions consist of logs and ropes in the forest so, the whole thing here feels really new to me”		“In Gimle’s amusement park, there are only attractions consist of logs and ropes in the forest so, the whole thing here feels really new to me”
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	As a result, Tsukimi was sitting at my right side while Tachibana is in front-------(We just have to stop her before she does something)------the rubber boat we were riding on suddenly start flowing.		As a result, Tsukimi was sitting at my right side while Tachibana is in front-------(We just have to stop her before she does something)------the rubber boat we were riding on suddenly start flowing.

	~~“ Fufu~~, this slow rotation is enough to have fun with”		“Fufu, this slow rotation is enough to have fun with”

	Tachibana said this when the boat was rotating around irregularly.		Tachibana said this when the boat was rotating around irregularly.
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	With her senses back, Tachibana quickly hid her underwear with both her hands.		With her senses back, Tachibana quickly hid her underwear with both her hands.

	Boing		<nowiki></nowiki>Boing

	The boat bounced immediately after.		The boat bounced immediately after.
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	Because her butt was facing me, I ended hugging her from behind with one hand.		Because her butt was facing me, I ended hugging her from behind with one hand.

	Funyon		<nowiki></nowiki>Funyon

	“Hyafuu!?”		“Hyafuu!?”
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	I was just running away from reality-----but, the world just doesn’t work that way.		I was just running away from reality-----but, the world just doesn’t work that way.

	Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon		<nowiki></nowiki>Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon

	The shaking from the irregular boat movement moved my hands in opposition to my will.		The shaking from the irregular boat movement moved my hands in opposition to my will.

	wahwahwah it really is soft; it’s changing its shape in my hand.		<nowiki></nowiki>wahwahwah it really is soft; it’s changing its shape in my hand.

	“Hya, nkuu, Ko-kokonoe N-no…………let go that’s my, ah, nnn, breast………….fuuaaan, ah, ah,ah, fu, afuuunn………..!”		“Hya, nkuu, Ko-kokonoe N-no…………let go that’s my, ah, nnn, breast………….fuuaaan, ah, ah,ah, fu, afuuunn………..!”
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	While Tsukimi was laughing loudly, I quickly let go of her and this happened immediately right after.		While Tsukimi was laughing loudly, I quickly let go of her and this happened immediately right after.

	Boing		<nowiki></nowiki>Boing

	The boat bounced again, and Tachibana’s body floated.		The boat bounced again, and Tachibana’s body floated.
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	………again with Tachibana’s breast.		………again with Tachibana’s breast.

	Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon, Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon		<nowiki></nowiki>Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon, Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon Funyon

	“Fuwaaa, Hnn, ann, Kokono-e, Eh, sto, aaafuu, my weird voice is coming, out……ah, fu……….Nyooo, let go, Kokonoe, Kokono-e, aaah, ah………..Fuaaaaaah!!”		“Fuwaaa, Hnn, ann, Kokono-e, Eh, sto, aaafuu, my weird voice is coming, out……ah, fu……….Nyooo, let go, Kokonoe, Kokono-e, aaah, ah………..Fuaaaaaah!!”
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	With that said, I extended my hand to the knee she raised.		With that said, I extended my hand to the knee she raised.

	Chonafter poking her knee down, I made it straight back.		<nowiki></nowiki>Chonafter poking her knee down, I made it straight back again.

	(----okay. Success. Now to put her skirt back…………..)		(----okay. Success. Now to put her skirt back…………..)
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	“Remember the question I asked during the birthday party? Why didn’t you use your <<Blaze>>’s real <<Power>> when you fought-----“		“Remember the question I asked during the birthday party? Why didn’t you use your <<Blaze>>’s real <<Power>> when you fought-----“

	Bam		<nowiki></nowiki>Bam

	“Gofuu”		“Gofuu”
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	“””……………..”””		“””……………..”””

	Peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek		<nowiki></nowiki>Peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek peek

	Both of the girls look at each other face and hands for a while before-----		Both of the girls look at each other face and hands for a while before-----

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