Akiha haruhi v9 ch2 - Revision history

Akiha: /* listings of spotted bugs */

2007-06-07T13:06:35Z

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	*;Japanese:その比率に反比例して希少価値も跳《は》ね上がる。		*;Japanese:その比率に反比例して希少価値も跳《は》ね上がる。
	**the mathematical interpretation of the Japanese sentence		**the mathematical interpretation of the Japanese sentence
	**# the ratio "w:f" (where w=the number of people in the world, f=the number of member of one's family, and w >> x)<br>(note: the order of ~~operand~~ corresponds to the order of clauses in the preceding sentence.)		**# the ratio "w:f" (where w=the number of people in the world, f=the number of member of one's family, and w >> x)<br>(note: the order of operands corresponds to the order of clauses in the preceding sentence.)
	**# the expression "f/w" becomes almost equal to 0, in other words, people in one's family is by far more rare(close to 0%) compared to all of people in the world.		**# the expression "f/w" becomes almost equal to 0, in other words, people in one's family is by far more rare(close to 0%) compared to all of people in the world.
	**# thus, the value of members of her/his family skyrockets with an inverse proportion.		**# thus, the value of members of her/his family skyrockets with an inverse proportion.

Akiha: /* listings of spotted bugs */

2007-06-07T13:02:17Z

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	**# thus, the value of members of her/his family skyrockets with an inverse proportion.		**# thus, the value of members of her/his family skyrockets with an inverse proportion.
	**why am I so much particular to such a small thing? :roll:		**why am I so much particular to such a small thing? :roll:
			*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion\|lowest]]
			*;Original:listen to Tachibana-san directly
			*;Correct:listen to Tachibana-san and the others directly

Akiha: /* listings of spotted bugs */

2007-06-06T05:07:37Z

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	*;Original:While there are billions of people who don’t know each other at all, those whom one is related to in blood are only the few members in the family.		*;Original:While there are billions of people who don’t know each other at all, those whom one is related to in blood are only the few members in the family.
	*;Correct:While there are billions of people who don’t know each other at all, those whom one is related to in blood, in other words, family are only the few members in the world.		*;Correct:While there are billions of people who don’t know each other at all, those whom one is related to in blood, in other words, family are only the few members in the world.
			*to myself. I don't understand the meaing of the English.....
			*;Original:This causes the ratio on the difference on both sides to increase.
			*;Japanese:その比率に反比例して希少価値も跳《は》ね上がる。
			**the mathematical interpretation of the Japanese sentence
			**# the ratio "w:f" (where w=the number of people in the world, f=the number of member of one's family, and w >> x)<br>(note: the order of operand corresponds to the order of clauses in the preceding sentence.)
			**# the expression "f/w" becomes almost equal to 0, in other words, people in one's family is by far more rare(close to 0%) compared to all of people in the world.
			**# thus, the value of members of her/his family skyrockets with an inverse proportion.
			**why am I so much particular to such a small thing? :roll:

Akiha at 03:56, 6 June 2007

2007-06-06T03:56:35Z

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	*;Original:Suzumiya-san arrived a bit too early.		*;Original:Suzumiya-san arrived a bit too early.
	*;Correct:Suzumiya-san and others arrived a bit too early.		*;Correct:Suzumiya-san and others arrived a bit too early.
			*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion\|low]]
			*;Original:While there are billions of people who don’t know each other at all, those whom one is related to in blood are only the few members in the family.
			*;Correct:While there are billions of people who don’t know each other at all, those whom one is related to in blood, in other words, family are only the few members in the world.

Akiha: /* listings of spotted bugs */

2007-06-06T03:46:44Z

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	*I could ignore whatever that happens.		*I could ignore whatever that happens.
	*my younger sister’s room.		*my younger sister’s room.
			*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion\|lowest]]
			*;Original:Suzumiya-san arrived a bit too early.
			*;Correct:Suzumiya-san and others arrived a bit too early.

Akiha at 10:00, 31 May 2007

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			This is only a personal memo. So, it has't a formal writing style and has incomprehensible parts, because I don't have enough enthusiasm to improve the problems :p But I think it is useful to someone who is eager to raise of the quality of translation. If you have free time, please decipher this Engrish and post it on Talk page or Forum, or tell me on official IRC Channel!

	; Current Status : the version [n/a] is QCed		; Current Status : the version [n/a] is QCed

Akiha: /* listings of spotted bugs */

2007-05-31T09:39:42Z

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	**"senior" means "senpai". And "senpai" is the abbreviation of "kyon-sanpai" in this case.		**"senior" means "senpai". And "senpai" is the abbreviation of "kyon-sanpai" in this case.
	***you know, "<name>-senpai" is a customary way of calling in Japan.		***you know, "<name>-senpai" is a customary way of calling in Japan.
			*to me, google "private number"
			*I could ignore whatever that happens.
			*my younger sister’s room.

Akiha: /* listings of spotted bugs */

2007-05-31T09:27:58Z

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	**In the Japanese, "senior" refers to Kyon, not anyone else. Although I'm not sure with the exact meaning of the Original, I felt that "senior" in it refers to someone who can be a senior of the girl, in this case, Kyon.		**In the Japanese, "senior" refers to Kyon, not anyone else. Although I'm not sure with the exact meaning of the Original, I felt that "senior" in it refers to someone who can be a senior of the girl, in this case, Kyon.
	**And from the Japanese, I can feel her significant affection to Kyon....		**And from the Japanese, I can feel her significant affection to Kyon....
			**"senior" means "senpai". And "senpai" is the abbreviation of "kyon-sanpai" in this case.
			***you know, "<name>-senpai" is a customary way of calling in Japan.

Akiha: /* listings of spotted bugs */

2007-05-31T09:18:14Z

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	***but her tone and style of speaking seems very similar to someone else’s.		***but her tone and style of speaking seems very similar to someone else’s.
	***But no matter how hard I search in the recording stores of my brain,		***But no matter how hard I search in the recording stores of my brain,
			*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion\|lowest]] "senior" refer to Kyon.
			*; Original : “I only wanted to hear the voice of senior.”
			*; Japanese : 先輩の声が聞きたかったんです
			*; Correct : "I only wanted to hear the voice of you, the voice of senior"
			**In the Japanese, "senior" refers to Kyon, not anyone else. Although I'm not sure with the exact meaning of the Original, I felt that "senior" in it refers to someone who can be a senior of the girl, in this case, Kyon.
			**And from the Japanese, I can feel her significant affection to Kyon....

Akiha at 09:06, 31 May 2007

2007-05-31T09:06:03Z

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	***chapter 2 : the very first part in alpha 1		***chapter 2 : the very first part in alpha 1
	***chapter 2 : the very first part in beta 1		***chapter 2 : the very first part in beta 1
			*[[User:Akiha#Type of suggestion\|normal]] maybe this is a clue, but is missing.
			*;japanese:普段は絶対こんな声を出さないであろう人間が、この声を演じているような感覚だ。
			**between
			***but her tone and style of speaking seems very similar to someone else’s.
			***But no matter how hard I search in the recording stores of my brain,