Ancient Magic Arc Volume 1: Chapter 2 - Revision history

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	As he saw his impending danger Toma quickly searches for a someplace where he can hide before that thing that was running towards Toma can see him. He was able to find a small hole that was like a crack on a wall of rock that were about 15 meters from where he standing. Toma quickly ran towards the hole as he didn't have much time and hid himself inside the rock from the unknown thing that was running towards him.		As he saw his impending danger Toma quickly searches for a someplace where he can hide before that thing that was running towards Toma can see him. He was able to find a small hole that was like a crack on a wall of rock that were about 15 meters from where he standing. Toma quickly ran towards the hole as he didn't have much time and hid himself inside the rock from the unknown thing that was running towards him.

	The hole that he ~~hind~~ in ~~are~~ a narrow hole that ~~look~~ like a crack from the wall of a cliff.		The hole that he hid in was a narrow hole that looked like a crack from the wall of a cliff.

	As he hides inside the hole in waiting for the thing to pass by, Toma ~~have~~ a bad feeling about the thing that ~~will run toward~~ him~~, so he decided to hide in the hole~~.		As he hides inside the hole in waiting for the thing to pass by, Toma has a bad feeling about the thing that ran towards him.

	"I hope that thing would not notice ~~were I were hiding~~."		"I hope that thing would not notice my presence."

	~~As he pray~~ so the thing ~~would found~~ him an just ~~run pass~~ by~~, and~~ as he ~~watch~~ from inside the hole not that long the ~~guts~~ of dust pass by him at the place where he ~~were~~ standing not long ago~~, and~~ at that time he saw a pair of big red ~~eye~~ which ~~as if it have~~ the ~~eye that~~ thirst for blood a ~~powerfully~~ monster that he ~~have~~ never seen before, but then again he was in thought.		He prays so the thing will not find him and just runs by. And as he watches from inside the hole, not that long after the gusts of dust pass by him at the place where he was standing not long ago. And at that time he saw a pair of big red eyes which had the thirst for blood - a powerful monster that he has never seen before, but then again he was in thought.

	"Were there a monster that ~~powerfully rooming~~ inside the spirit forest?"		"Were there a monster that powerful roaming inside the spirit forest?"

	As Toma thought about it, he ~~can~~ feel that his ~~bodies~~ were tremble ~~in fear~~.		As Toma thought about it, he could feel that his body were tremble.

	"What should I do now? With that kind of monster around can I still do my training, and not only that but can I come out alive from the spirit forest ~~a live~~ with that kind of monster running around inside the forest?"		"What should I do now? With that kind of monster around can I still do my training, and not only that but can I come out alive from the spirit forest alive with that kind of monster running around inside the forest?"

	But then a sudden rush ~~start~~ to ~~run~~ through his body and make him tremble ~~but then~~ he can feel that this rush is not that of the feeling that ~~come~~ from fear.		But then a sudden rush started to running through his body and make him tremble more . But he can feel that this rush was not that of the feeling that came from fear.

	~~As it is~~ the opposite~~, it~~ was a feeling of excitement of the unknown as if he ~~want~~ to try to fight with ~~the~~ thing that just ~~run~~ pass through him just a moment ago. Then he ~~resolve~~ himself once again, as he ~~have~~ a feeling that something will change him in this training although it be a life threatening one, his heart was ~~fill~~ with the rush of excitement.		It was the opposite. It was a feeling of excitement of the unknown as if he wanted to try fight with that thing that just ran pass through him just a moment ago. Then he resolved himself once again, as he had a feeling that something will change him in this training although it be a life threatening one, his heart was filled with the rush of excitement.

	Later on as his excitement became a little calmer, he ~~than when~~ out from the hole where he were hiding ~~into~~ to avoiding the unknown monster ~~that he can feel a very dangerous feeling from it~~.		Later on as his excitement became a little calmer, he came out from the hole where he were hiding in to avoiding the unknown monster.

	"Well I think I should continue in my searching for my food."		"Well I think I should continue in my searching for my food."

	As he ~~have~~ decided, he ~~when~~ and ~~gather~~ some more ~~wile~~ vegetables, mushrooms and fruits~~, also he~~ also ~~fine~~ some other ~~thing~~ like medical herb so he can make it into medicine for him to treat his ~~wound~~ that he will ~~got~~ later on in his training.		As he has decided, he went and gathered some more wild vegetables, mushrooms and fruits. He also found some other things like medical herb so he can make it into medicine for him to treat his wounds that he will get later on in his training.

	After he ~~sees that he have gather~~ enough of food and medicine inside the forest, ~~than~~ he ~~walk~~ back to his tent and put it in a separated bag for each thing that he collected and ~~tie~~ it tightly~~, after~~ that he then put it in a hole ~~then he cover~~ it with leaf and ~~then he flush~~ some water from the river at the leaf that ~~cover~~ the hole ~~which he place his food in~~, so it can been preserve for several day later.		After he had gathered enough of food and medicine inside the forest, he walked back to his tent and put it in a separated bag for each thing that he collected and tied it tightly. After that he then put it in a hole and covered it with leaf and flushed some water from the river at the leaf that covered the hole, so it can been preserve for several day later.

	"OK" that is all for the food from the forest, now I should go and catch some fish from the river and see whether it can be ~~eat~~ or not."		"OK" that is all for the food from the forest, now I should go and catch some fish from the river and see whether it can be eaten or not."

	As he decided, he ~~go take~~ some sturdy tree trunk that ~~can~~ be held ~~by have~~ and ~~make~~ it ~~in to~~ fishing pole and some fish cage to trap the fish that was inside the river.		As he decided, he went and took some sturdy tree trunk that could be held and made it into a fishing pole and some fish cage to trap the fish that was inside the river.

	"OK, done. Let see I made 4 ~~cage~~ to be put in different ~~section~~ of the river to trap the fish, and two fishing pole one is for reserve if the one that I use later ~~broken~~."		"OK, done. Let see I made 4 cages to be put in different sections of the river to trap the fish, and two fishing pole one is for reserve if the one that I use later broke down."

	Then he went and put the cage in the position where he will put in the river to trap the fish in, after that he when at a rock that at the side o the river and to catch some fish using the rod that he have prepare before head, he put a bite at the hock on the fishing rod and throw it in the river and with for the fish to take the bite.		Then he went and put the cage in the position where he will put in the river to trap the fish in, after that he when at a rock that at the side o the river and to catch some fish using the rod that he have prepare before head, he put a bite at the hock on the fishing rod and throw it in the river and with for the fish to take the bite.

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	At the same time that night in a dark cool place there are two blades that were embedded on top of a big stone whose location was at a place where not even a single sun light can pass through, and the air was as cold as ice. At that place, the only light was the illumination of the crystal which was being reflected by a big pool of water at the back of the big stone where the two blades been embedded.		At the same time that night in a dark cool place there are two blades that were embedded on top of a big stone whose location was at a place where not even a single sun light can pass through, and the air was as cold as ice. At that place, the only light was the illumination of the crystal which was being reflected by a big pool of water at the back of the big stone where the two blades been embedded.

	The two ~~blade~~ suddenly start ~~illuminating an~~ aura as if it responding ~~with~~ something, and who ~~know~~ what it is~~, but that the aura fad away quickly~~. As one ~~illuminating~~ a white aura and the other one ~~illuminating~~ a dark purple aura, ~~which~~ both of ~~it aura fad~~ away at the same time.		The two blades suddenly start emanating aura as if they were responding to something, and who knows what it is. As one emanates a white aura and the other one emanates a dark purple aura, both of which fade away quickly at the same time.

	Not that ~~long~~ where this phenomena was happening, some other thing happened inside the spirit forest a swamp of red eye ~~appear~~ one after a other from inside the darkness.		Not that far from where this phenomena was happening, some other thing happened inside the spirit forest - a swamp of red eye appeared one after a other from inside the darkness.

	As a bad premonition soon ~~will come with the thing that~~ will happen from now on and so as what will happen is till of unknown.		As this bad premonition indicates soon things will happen from now on and so as what will happen is till of unknown.

	As time passed ~~in the night~~ soon ~~come~~ morning, as the ~~light~~ of the rising sun and ~~the~~ following the ~~sound~~ of the ~~bird, as a~~ person was sleeping inside the tent ~~waking~~ up from his sleep as he ~~open~~ the zipper of his sleeping bag and ~~get~~ out from it ~~than~~ he put the sleeping bag at the side end of the tent.		As time passed, soon came morning as the rays of the rising sun and following which the sounds of the birds. A person was sleeping inside the tent woke up from his sleep as he opened the zipper of his sleeping bag and got out from it. Then he put the sleeping bag at the side end of the tent.

	After that he ~~get~~ a towel and ~~prepare~~ some ~~clean~~ clothing where he put it beside his bag inside the tent.		After that he took a towel and prepared to clean some clothing where he put it beside his bag inside the tent.

	After ~~hat~~ he ~~bring~~ the towel with him and went to the river to wash his dirty clothing and take a morning bath ~~than he dry~~ himself with the towel and then hang the washed cloths on the tree trunk near the river~~, and~~ went inside his tent and ~~wear~~ the clean ~~cloth~~ that he ~~have prepare~~ just before he went to the river.		After that he brought the towel with him and went to the river to wash his dirty clothing and take a morning bath. He dried himself with the towel and then hang the washed cloths on the tree trunk near the river. Then he went inside his tent and wore the clean cloths that he had prepared just before he went out to the river.

	~~Finish~~ wearing his ~~cloth~~ he ~~when~~ outside and ~~eat~~ the ~~left over~~ from last night ~~and eat it for~~ breakfast.		After wearing his cloths he went outside and ate the leftovers from last night as his breakfast.

	After ~~finish~~ eating his breakfast, he then starts to plan out the ~~thing~~ that he will do today.		After eating his breakfast, he then starts to plan out the things that he will do today.

	"So from today I will need to start my training, but before that I need to store some food for every once in 3 day, so I think I should start from getting food from inside the forest, than I can get some fish at the river, and for the next 3 days I can concentrate on my training."		"So from today I will need to start my training, but before that I need to store some food for every once in 3 day, so I think I should start from getting food from inside the forest, than I can get some fish at the river, and for the next 3 days I can concentrate on my training."

	After planning out his ~~plane~~, he then ~~start to done it~~ first is collecting some food inside the forest.		After planning out his schedule, he then first starts by collecting some food inside the forest.

	As he walks inside the forest there ~~Toma find~~ some wild vegetables, mushrooms, and fruits that he ~~have~~ seen and ~~eat~~ yesterday.		As Toma walks inside the forest there he finds some wild vegetables, mushrooms, and fruits that he had seen and ate yesterday.

	But today he ~~plan~~ to walk in more deeper inside the spirit forest and see what other ~~thing~~ that he can find as food there, As he think the ~~thing~~ that he find near here should be ~~leave it~~ for ~~something urgent~~, or at a ~~where I need~~ food ~~which when a time where I~~ should not walk in too deep inside the spirit forest so the food that near here can be ~~use~~ at that that kind of time ~~so I when~~ in deep of the forest to collect the food that I will need.		But today he plans to walk in more deeper inside the spirit forest and see what other things that he can find as food there. As he think the items that he can find near here should be left for in case of urgency, or at a time when he needs food he should not walk in too deep inside the spirit forest, so the food that was near here can be used at that that kind of time. So he went in deep of the forest to collect the food that he will need today.

			As Toma walks inside the forest he did not forget to keep a signs of track on couple of trees, so he would not get lost inside the spirit forest. People who do not have big magic capacity or normal people who travel inside the deepest part of any spirit forest will surely got lost because of the fragments of magic from the spirits and monsters that live inside the forest can change the signs of foot track. So normal people who craft things on trees or use items or equipment that can help them to travel or explore inside the deep of the spirit forest and notify places where monsters and spirits live, survive.

	As Toma ~~walk inside the~~ forest he did not forget to keep a sign of track on couple of tree, so he would not get lose inside the spirit forest as people who do not have big magic capacity or normal people to went inside the deep part of any spirit forest they will surely got lose, because of the fragment of magic from the spirits and monsters that live inside the forest can trick the sign of track and sign, so normal people and people which have to craft thing on trees or use some thing that can help them to travel or explore inside the deep of the spirit forest and place which monsters and spirits live.		As Toma walks in forest for procuring items that can be eaten like wild vegetables, mushrooms, and fruits, and with some luck if he can find some animal whose meat can be eat it will be even more better. As he was collecting the things that can be eaten he found in his search he hears a sound of something running towards him.

	~~As Toma walk in searching~~ for ~~thing~~ that can be ~~eat~~ like wild vegetables, mushrooms, and fruits, and if with some luck he can ~~fine~~ some animal ~~which it~~ meat can be eat it will be even more ~~batter, as what Toma think~~. As ~~in his search~~ he ~~find a couple of thing~~ that can be ~~eat as~~ he ~~collecting it, and not that long~~ he ~~then hear~~ a sound of something running ~~through his way~~.

	"Da da da da......"		"Da da da da......"

	"What is this sound~~, look~~ like it come from in front."		"What is this sound? Look like it come from in front."

	As Toma ~~check~~ the source where the sound came from, not long after he ~~hear~~ the sound he saw a growing smoke of dirt ~~come~~ nearer and nearer to where Toma was standing.		Toma checks the source from where the sound came from. And not long after he heard the sound he saw a growing smoke of dirt coming nearer and nearer to where Toma was standing.

	As he saw ~~that~~ Toma quickly ~~find~~ someplace where he can hide before it can see him~~, as he searching he found~~ a small hole that like a crack a wall of rock that ~~are~~ about 15 meters from where he standing, as he ~~see that he do not~~ have much time ~~to thing Toma quickly run into~~ the ~~hole to hide~~ from the unknown thing that ~~run toward~~ him.		As he saw his impending danger Toma quickly searches for a someplace where he can hide before that thing that was running towards Toma can see him. He was able to find a small hole that was like a crack on a wall of rock that were about 15 meters from where he standing. Toma quickly ran towards the hole as he didn't have much time and hid himself inside the rock from the unknown thing that was running towards him.

	The hole that he hind in are a narrow hole that look like a crack from the wall of a cliff.		The hole that he hind in are a narrow hole that look like a crack from the wall of a cliff.

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	Kamito Toma walks into ~~the~~ deep of the spirit forest~~, while he walked~~ into the most dangerous part of the forest, where his training will take place.		Kamito Toma walks into deep of the spirit forest. He walks into the most dangerous part of the forest, where his training will take place.

	On his way he ~~go and find~~ a place where he can build his tent, ~~and~~ can ~~get~~ water easily ~~from where~~ the tent ~~that he build,~~ also inside ~~the~~ forest ~~there grow a~~ lot of plants that can be eaten ~~as he had seen from his way in finding the perfect place for him to build his tent~~.		On his way he searches for a perfect place where he can build his tent, can acquire water easily near the tent and also keeping in mind the place inside of forest where lot of plants grow that can be eaten.

	Not long ~~for him in~~ searching, he then ~~heard~~ the sound of water.		Not long after he began searching, he then hears the sound of water. Then he walks into the direction of the sound, there he finds a river with water falls and a quite vast enough space for building his tent at the side of the water fall.

	~~When~~ he ~~notices~~ it~~, he then walk into the direction of the sound, there~~ he ~~find a river with~~ water ~~fall~~ and a ~~quite vast enough~~ place ~~for building~~ his ~~tent at~~ the ~~side of~~ the ~~water fall~~.		As he sees it is a nice place where he can get water and food easily. Even if he builds his tent there was still some more space that was enough for him to make a fire place to cook food. He can also take a bath and wash his clothes in the river, and dry his clothes on the trees near his tent.

	~~As he see it a nice place where he can get water and food easily~~, ~~and even if~~ he build his tent ~~there still have some more space that are still enough for him~~ to make ~~a fire place for him to cook a food and water, and~~ he ~~can also take a bath and wash his clothes in~~ the river, and ~~dry his clothes~~ on the ~~tree near where~~ he ~~build~~ his ~~tent~~.		After processing his thoughts, he then gets ready to build his tent, by tying the rope on the tree and pike the rope in the ground, but then to make it more sturdy he gets some of the big rock near the side of the river and puts it on top of the pike that has been stabbed into the ground with the rope tied onto it. After building the tent he then notices that the sunset is soon to happen. So, he hurries inside the forest to pick some of the wild planet for his dinner before night comes.

	After he see and think it thought, he then get ready to build his tent, by tying the rope on the tree and pike the robe in the ground, but then to make it more stud he get some of the big rock near the side of the river and put it on top of the pick that have been stab in the ground with the robe tie on it, after finish building the tent he then see that the sun almost going down, and will soon become night, but before night come he hurried went inside the forest to pick some of the wild planet for his dinner.		Inside the forest he finds many different kind of mushrooms, wild vegetables and some fruits.

	Inside the forest he ~~can find~~ many kind of ~~mushroom~~, wild ~~vegetable~~ and some fruits~~, and after he see that he pick quite enough of the food that he need he quickly when back to his tent~~.

	"I think this should be enough for tonight and tomorrow morning, I should go back to my tent now as the sun almost going down and the nights in the spirit forest are very dangerous even for a high class magician."		"I think this should be enough for tonight and tomorrow morning, I should go back to my tent now as the sun almost going down and the nights in the spirit forest are very dangerous even for a high class magician."

	As he ~~thing~~ of it he ~~when back~~ to his tent ~~and~~ start ~~to make~~ some dinner from the ~~thing~~ that he ~~get~~ inside the forest.		After he picks quite enough of the food that he needs, he quickly returns to his tent to start making some dinner from the items that he acquired inside the forest.

	After ~~finish cook~~ his dinner he then ~~eat~~ it~~, after finish~~ eating his dinner he ~~put~~ out the fire ~~where~~ he ~~use~~ for cooking his dinner and ~~when~~ inside his tent ~~than~~ get his sleeping bag and cover himself with it and went to sleep~~, as~~ he was ~~tire~~ from the ~~thing~~ that he ~~have~~ done from this morning which have quite a lot ~~big event~~ that have been happening ~~scine~~ yesterday until now, as he ~~fall~~ asleep ~~from his tire body~~.		After cooking his dinner he then eats it. After eating his dinner he puts out the fire which he used for cooking his dinner and goes inside his tent to get his sleeping bag and cover himself with it and went to sleep. As he was tired from the things that he has done from this morning which have quite a lot of events that have been happening since yesterday until now, as he quickly falls asleep.

	At the same time that night in a dark cool place there is two ~~blade~~ that ~~was~~ embedded on top of big stone ~~which is it~~ location was a place ~~which there was~~ not even a single sun light can pass ~~thought~~, and the air was as cold as ice~~, at~~ that place ~~that~~ the only light ~~are~~ the illumination of the crystal which ~~it been~~ reflected by a big pool of water at the back of the big ~~strong~~ where the two ~~blade~~ been embedded.		At the same time that night in a dark cool place there are two blades that were embedded on top of a big stone whose location was at a place where not even a single sun light can pass through, and the air was as cold as ice. At that place, the only light was the illumination of the crystal which was being reflected by a big pool of water at the back of the big stone where the two blades been embedded.

	The two blade suddenly start illuminating an aura as if it responding with something, and who know what it is, but that the aura fad away quickly. As one illuminating a white aura and the other one illuminating a dark purple aura, which both of it aura fad away at the same time.		The two blade suddenly start illuminating an aura as if it responding with something, and who know what it is, but that the aura fad away quickly. As one illuminating a white aura and the other one illuminating a dark purple aura, which both of it aura fad away at the same time.

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	Kamito Toma ~~walk~~ into the deep of the spirit forest, while he walked into the most dangerous part of the forest, where his training will take place.		Kamito Toma walks into the deep of the spirit forest, while he walked into the most dangerous part of the forest, where his training will take place.

	On his way he go and find a place where he can build his tent, and can get water easily from where the tent that he build, also inside the forest there grow a lot of plants that can be eaten as he had seen from his way in finding the perfect place for him to build his tent.		On his way he go and find a place where he can build his tent, and can get water easily from where the tent that he build, also inside the forest there grow a lot of plants that can be eaten as he had seen from his way in finding the perfect place for him to build his tent.

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	All 4 element where form in 4 pentagon as fire stronger than wind and wind stronger than earth and so on as it form a cycle of 4 basic element of magic as people combine the basic magic and create a different kind of element than the 4 basic element, like thunder which the combine of fire and wind, sand is the combine of fire and earth, ice is combine of water and wind, and so on as the different of element that been combine can produce a different kind of magic.		All 4 element where form in 4 pentagon as fire stronger than wind and wind stronger than earth and so on as it form a cycle of 4 basic element of magic as people combine the basic magic and create a different kind of element than the 4 basic element, like thunder which the combine of fire and wind, sand is the combine of fire and earth, ice is combine of water and wind, and so on as the different of element that been combine can produce a different kind of magic.

	So by increasing the spirit, it then can help him to increase his magic capacity, and also he can increase his calmness of his mind to bring his ~~fight~~ style into a higher lever.		So by increasing the spirit, it then can help him to increase his magic capacity, and also he can increase his calmness of his mind to bring his fighting style into a higher lever.

	As his first training was to strengthening his mind and increase his magic capacity. This training he do it for around 4 hour, as he finish his first training he see that the sun will almost set he went and prepare dinner and eat it, after that he when inside the tent, and get some of his text book so he can study about the paper test at night.		As his first training was to strengthening his mind and increase his magic capacity. This training he do it for around 4 hour, as he finish his first training he see that the sun will almost set he went and prepare dinner and eat it, after that he when inside the tent, and get some of his text book so he can study about the paper test at night.
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	Although in his sleep he have doubt that the training that he do will give good enough result. Even in that in mind he still needs to do it even how it will come out later is all up to him in the end.		Although in his sleep he have doubt that the training that he do will give good enough result. Even in that in mind he still needs to do it even how it will come out later is all up to him in the end.

	With that in his mind he soon close his eye and when into a deep sleep in the second night of his training for which he done in prepare for the ~~text~~.		With that in his mind he soon close his eye and when into a deep sleep in the second night of his training for which he done in prepare for the test.

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Tasear at 10:45, 16 December 2013

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	Kamito Toma walk ~~in to~~ the deep of the spirit forest, while ~~walking to in to~~ the most dangerous part of the forest, where his training will take place.		Kamito Toma walk into the deep of the spirit forest, while he walked into the most dangerous part of the forest, where his training will take place.

	On his way he go and find a place where he can build his tent, and can get water easily from where the tent that he build, also inside the forest there grow a lot of plants that can be eaten as he had seen from his way in finding the perfect place for him to build his tent.		On his way he go and find a place where he can build his tent, and can get water easily from where the tent that he build, also inside the forest there grow a lot of plants that can be eaten as he had seen from his way in finding the perfect place for him to build his tent.
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	Than after a while he caught 3 fish, which later he made a fire than cook the fish, and see whether it can be eat or not.		Than after a while he caught 3 fish, which later he made a fire than cook the fish, and see whether it can be eat or not.

	"OK, done let's eat! Ahm. ~~Mmmh~~ its good, this fish can be eat."		"OK, done let's eat! Ahm... Mmm its good, this fish can be eat."

	After he verify that the fish can be eat he than start to preparing the training that he will do from now.		After he verify that the fish can be eat he than start to preparing the training that he will do from now.

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	After he verify that the fish can be eat he than start to preparing the training that he will do from now.		After he verify that the fish can be eat he than start to preparing the training that he will do from now.

	As there is a waterfall here he decide to do a meditation to tannin his ~~main~~ and spirit, which this connected to the flow of magic as magic are a form from the nature that it have the basic of 4 elements the first element are Fire, are a magic with the most powerful of ~~distraction~~, the second one is wind, is a magic with weak ~~distraction~~ power but in exchange it can make use of speed, the third one are earth this magic were a foundation of great defense, and the fourth one are water which this magic are use as a healing.		As there is a waterfall here he decide to do a meditation to tannin his mind and spirit, which this connected to the flow of magic as magic are a form from the nature that it have the basic of 4 elements the first element are Fire, are a magic with the most powerful of destruction, the second one is wind, is a magic with weak destruction power but in exchange it can make use of speed, the third one are earth this magic were a foundation of great defense, and the fourth one are water which this magic are use as a healing.

	All 4 element where form in 4 pentagon as fire stronger than wind and wind stronger than earth and so on as it form a cycle of 4 basic element of magic as people combine the basic magic and create a different kind of element than the 4 basic element, like thunder which the combine of fire and wind, sand is the combine of fire and earth, ice is combine of water and wind, and so on as the different of element that been combine can produce a different kind of magic.		All 4 element where form in 4 pentagon as fire stronger than wind and wind stronger than earth and so on as it form a cycle of 4 basic element of magic as people combine the basic magic and create a different kind of element than the 4 basic element, like thunder which the combine of fire and wind, sand is the combine of fire and earth, ice is combine of water and wind, and so on as the different of element that been combine can produce a different kind of magic.
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	With that in his mind he soon close his eye and when into a deep sleep in the second night of his training for which he done in prepare for the text.		With that in his mind he soon close his eye and when into a deep sleep in the second night of his training for which he done in prepare for the text.


	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

101.172.85.79 at 14:54, 23 June 2013

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	Kamito Toma walk in to the deep of the spirit forest, while walking to in to the most dangerous part of the forest, where his training will take place.		Kamito Toma walk in to the deep of the spirit forest, while walking to in to the most dangerous part of the forest, where his training will take place.

	On his way he go and find a place where he can build his tent, and can get water easily from where the tent that he build, also inside the forest there grow a lot of plants that can be ~~eat~~ as he ~~have saw~~ from his way in finding the perfect place for him to build his tent.		On his way he go and find a place where he can build his tent, and can get water easily from where the tent that he build, also inside the forest there grow a lot of plants that can be eaten as he had seen from his way in finding the perfect place for him to build his tent.

	Not long for him in searching, he ~~than hear~~ the sound of water.		Not long for him in searching, he then heard the sound of water.

	When he notices it, he then walk into the direction of the sound, there he find a river with water fall and a quite ~~vest~~ enough place for ~~build~~ his tent at the side of the water fall.		When he notices it, he then walk into the direction of the sound, there he find a river with water fall and a quite vast enough place for building his tent at the side of the water fall.

	As he see it a nice ~~palace~~ where he can get water and food easily, and even if he build his tent there still have some more space that are still enough for him to make a fire place for him to cook a food and water, and he can also take a bath and wash his ~~cloths~~ in the river, and dry his ~~cloths~~ on the tree near where he build his tent.		As he see it a nice place where he can get water and food easily, and even if he build his tent there still have some more space that are still enough for him to make a fire place for him to cook a food and water, and he can also take a bath and wash his clothes in the river, and dry his clothes on the tree near where he build his tent.

	After he see and think it thought, he then get ready to build his tent, by tying the rope on the tree and pike the robe in the ground, but then to make it more stud he get some of the big rock near the side of the river and put it on top of the pick that have been stab in the ground with the robe tie on it, after finish building the tent he then see that the sun almost going down, and will soon become night, but before night come he hurried went inside the forest to pick some of the wild planet for his dinner.		After he see and think it thought, he then get ready to build his tent, by tying the rope on the tree and pike the robe in the ground, but then to make it more stud he get some of the big rock near the side of the river and put it on top of the pick that have been stab in the ground with the robe tie on it, after finish building the tent he then see that the sun almost going down, and will soon become night, but before night come he hurried went inside the forest to pick some of the wild planet for his dinner.

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	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

	Kamito Toma walks into ~~deep of~~ the spirit forest. He ~~walks~~ into the most dangerous part of the forest, where his training ~~will take place~~.		Kamito Toma walks deep into the spirit forest. He went into the most dangerous part of the forest, where he will be doing his training.

	On his way he ~~searches~~ for a perfect place where he can build his tent, can acquire water easily near the tent and also keeping in mind the place inside of forest where lot of plants grow that can be eaten.		On his way he searched for a perfect place where he can build his tent, can acquire water easily near the tent and also keeping in mind the place inside of forest where lot of plants grow that can be eaten.

	Not long after he began searching, he then hears the sound of water. Then he walks into the direction of the sound, there he finds a river with ~~water falls~~ and a quite vast enough space for building his tent at the side of the ~~water fall~~.		Not long after he began searching, he then hears the sound of water. Then he walks into the direction of the sound, there he finds a river with waterfalls and a quite vast enough space for building his tent at the side of the waterfall.

	~~As he sees it~~ is ~~a nice~~ place ~~where he can get~~ water and food ~~easily~~. Even if he builds his tent there ~~was~~ still some more space that was enough for him to make a ~~fire place~~ to cook food. He can also take a bath and wash his clothes in the river, and dry his clothes on the trees near his tent.		It is the perfect place to stay, near water and an abundance of food nearby. Even if he builds his tent there's still some more space that was enough for him to make a fireplace to cook food. He can also take a bath and wash his clothes in the river, and dry his clothes on the trees near his tent.

	After processing his thoughts, he then gets ready to build his tent, by tying the rope on the tree and pike the rope in the ground, but then to make it more sturdy he gets some of the big rock near the side of the river and puts it on top of the pike that has been stabbed into the ground with the rope tied onto it. After building the tent he then ~~notices~~ that ~~the~~ sunset ~~is soon to happen~~. So, he hurries inside the forest to pick some of the wild ~~planet~~ for his dinner before night comes.		After processing his thoughts, he then gets ready to build his tent, by tying the rope on the tree and pike the rope in the ground, but then to make it more sturdy he gets some of the big rock near the side of the river and puts it on top of the pike that has been stabbed into the ground with the rope tied onto it. After building the tent he then noticed that it's almost sunset. So, he hurries inside the forest to pick some of the wild plants for his dinner before night comes.

	Inside the forest he finds many different ~~kind~~ of mushrooms, wild vegetables and some fruits.		Inside the forest he finds many different kinds of mushrooms, wild vegetables and some fruits.

	"I think this should be enough for tonight and tomorrow morning, I should go back to my tent now as the sun almost going down and the nights in the spirit forest are very dangerous even for a high class magician."		"I think this should be enough for tonight and tomorrow morning, I should go back to my tent now as the sun almost going down and the nights in the spirit forest are very dangerous even for a high class magician."
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	After he picks quite enough of the food that he needs, he quickly returns to his tent to start making some dinner from the items that he acquired inside the forest.		After he picks quite enough of the food that he needs, he quickly returns to his tent to start making some dinner from the items that he acquired inside the forest.

	After cooking ~~his dinner he then eats it. After~~ eating his dinner he puts out the fire ~~which he used for cooking his dinner~~ and goes inside his tent to get his sleeping bag and cover himself with it and went to sleep. ~~As he~~ was tired from the things that he ~~has done from this~~ morning ~~which have quite a lot of events that have been happening since yesterday until now~~, as he ~~quickly falls asleep~~.		After cooking and eating his dinner he puts out the fire and goes inside his tent to get his sleeping bag and cover himself with it and went to sleep. He was tired from all the things that he did all morning, setting up tent, securing his food supply and after eating his dinner, he slept soundly.

	At the same time that night in a dark cool place there are two blades that were embedded on top of a big stone whose location was at a place where not even a single ~~sun light~~ can pass through, and the air was as cold as ice. At that place, the only light was the illumination of the crystal which was being reflected by a big pool of water at the back of the big stone where the two blades been embedded.		At the same time that night in a dark cool place there are two blades that were embedded on top of a big stone whose location was at a place where not even a single sunlight can pass through, and the air was as cold as ice. At that place, the only light was the illumination of the crystal which was being reflected by a big pool of water at the back of the big stone where the two blades been embedded.

	The two blades suddenly start emanating aura as if they were responding to something, and who knows what it is. As one emanates a white aura and the other one emanates a dark purple aura, both of which fade away quickly at the same time.		The two blades suddenly start emanating aura as if they were responding to something, and who knows what it is. As one emanates a white aura and the other one emanates a dark purple aura, both of which fade away quickly at the same time.

	Not that far from where this phenomena was happening, some other thing happened inside the spirit forest - a ~~swamp~~ of red ~~eye~~ appeared one after ~~a other~~ from inside the darkness.		Not that far from where this phenomena was happening, some other thing happened inside the spirit forest - a set of red eyes appeared one after another from inside the darkness.

	As this bad premonition indicates soon things will happen from now on and so as what will happen is till of unknown.		As this bad premonition indicates soon things will happen from now on and so as what will happen is till of unknown.

	As time passed, soon came morning as the rays of the rising sun and ~~following which~~ the sounds of the birds. A person was sleeping inside the tent woke up from his sleep as he opened the zipper of his sleeping bag and got out from it. Then he put the sleeping bag at the side end of the tent.		As time passed, soon came morning as the rays of the rising sun and hearing the sounds of the birds chirping. A person was sleeping inside the tent woke up from his sleep as he opened the zipper of his sleeping bag and got out from it. Then he put the sleeping bag at the side end of the tent.

	After that he took a towel and prepared to clean some clothing where he put it beside his bag inside the tent.		After that he took a towel and prepared to clean some clothing where he put it beside his bag inside the tent.

	After that he brought the towel with him and went to the river to wash his dirty clothing and take a morning bath. He dried himself with the towel and then hang the washed ~~cloths~~ on the tree trunk near the river. Then he went inside his tent and wore the clean cloths that he had prepared just before he went out to the river.		After that he brought the towel with him and went to the river to wash his dirty clothing and take a morning bath. He dried himself with the towel and then hang the washed clothes on the tree trunk near the river. Then he went inside his tent and wore the clean cloths that he had prepared just before he went out to the river.

	After wearing his ~~cloths~~ he went outside and ate the leftovers from last night as his breakfast.		After wearing his clothes he went outside and ate the leftovers from last night as his breakfast.

	After eating his breakfast, he then starts to plan out the things that he will do today.		After eating his breakfast, he then starts to plan out the things that he will do today.
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	As Toma walks inside the forest there he finds some wild vegetables, mushrooms, and fruits that he had seen and ate yesterday.		As Toma walks inside the forest there he finds some wild vegetables, mushrooms, and fruits that he had seen and ate yesterday.

	But today he plans to ~~walk in more~~ deeper inside the spirit forest and see what other things ~~that~~ he can find as food there. As he think the items that he can find near here should be left for in case of urgency, or at a time when he needs food he should not walk in too deep inside the spirit forest, so the food that was near here can be used at that that kind of time. So he went in deep of the forest to collect the food that he will need today.		But today he plans to go deeper inside the spirit forest and see what other things he can find as food there. As he think the items that he can find near here should be left for in case of urgency, or at a time when he needs food he should not walk in too deep inside the spirit forest, so the food that was near here can be used at that that kind of time. So he went in deep of the forest to collect the food that he will need today.

	As Toma walks inside the forest he did not forget to keep a signs of track on couple of trees, so he would not get lost inside the spirit forest. People who do not have big magic capacity or normal people who travel inside the deepest part of any spirit forest will surely got lost because of the fragments of magic from the spirits and monsters that live inside the forest can change the signs of foot track. So normal people who craft things on trees or use items or equipment that can help them to travel or explore inside the deep of the spirit forest and notify places where monsters and spirits live, survive.		As Toma walks inside the forest he did not forget to keep a signs of track on couple of trees, so he would not get lost inside the spirit forest. People who do not have big magic capacity or normal people who travel inside the deepest part of any spirit forest will surely got lost because of the fragments of magic from the spirits and monsters that live inside the forest can change the signs of foot track. So normal people who craft things on trees or use items or equipment that can help them to travel or explore inside the deep of the spirit forest and notify places where monsters and spirits live, survive.
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	Later on as his excitement became a little calmer, he came out from the hole where he were hiding in to avoiding the unknown monster.		Later on as his excitement became a little calmer, he came out from the hole where he were hiding in to avoiding the unknown monster.

	"Well I think I should continue in my ~~searching~~ for my food."		"Well I think I should continue in my search for my food."

	As he has decided, he went and gathered some more wild vegetables, mushrooms and fruits. He also found some other things like medical herb so he can make it into medicine for him to treat his wounds that he will get later on in his training.		As he has decided, he went and gathered some more wild vegetables, mushrooms and fruits. He also found some other things like medical herb so he can make it into medicine for him to treat his wounds that he will get later on in his training.