Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume18 Chapter1 - Revision history

Rxls at 16:52, 9 August 2017

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	===Chapter 1 - The One Striving Forward, The One Muddling Blindly Forward, The One Giving Up===		===Chapter 1: The One Striving Forward, The One Muddling Blindly Forward, The One Giving Up===

	The current tranquil atmosphere was undisturbed.		The current tranquil atmosphere was undisturbed.

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 1 - The One Striving Forward, The One Muddling Blindly Forward, The One Giving Up */

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Chapter 1 - The One Striving Forward, The One Muddling Blindly Forward, The One Giving Up

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	"Ah... but how should I say it, this impatient feeling......"		"Ah... but how should I say it, this impatient feeling......"

	That kind of hard-to-describe feeling was truly very annoying. The situation with the Mercenary Gang suddenly appeared in his heart, so Haia felt that they were the reason ~~his~~ for his impatient mood. Because of that, Haia had asked Myunfa for news about them, but even though he asked, the situation wouldn't improve.		That kind of hard-to-describe feeling was truly very annoying. The situation with the Mercenary Gang suddenly appeared in his heart, so Haia felt that they were the reason for his impatient mood. Because of that, Haia had asked Myunfa for news about them, but even though he asked, the situation wouldn't improve.

	Haia didn't have any feeling of suddenly being enlightened, nor did he feel more impatient.		Haia didn't have any feeling of suddenly being enlightened, nor did he feel more impatient.
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	"Right."		"Right."

	"Huh?'		"Huh?"

	A thought suddenly flashed through Haia's mind.		A thought suddenly flashed through Haia's mind.

Lygophile at 15:04, 5 October 2013

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	"Nothing~"		"Nothing~"

	"In other words, at least this man possesses a charm that can't be ignored."		"In other words, at the least this man possesses a charm that can't be ignored."

	"Hearing the exchange between Stania and Haia, Karian confirmed that he had no reason to correct his thoughts toward the man in the picture.		"Hearing the exchange between Stania and Haia, Karian confirmed that he had no reason to correct his thoughts toward the man in the picture.
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	Whether out of contempt or scorn of mercenaries, the number of Military Artists or citizens who were wary of the Mercenary Gang were not few. Elsmau was the Psychokinesist in charge of gathering information, so she believed that she should avoid arousing the dislike of these people.		Whether out of contempt or scorn of mercenaries, the number of Military Artists or citizens who were wary of the Mercenary Gang were not few. Elsmau was the Psychokinesist in charge of gathering information, so she believed that she should avoid arousing the dislike of these people.

	She didn't want that no matter who it was, especially those annoying people who peered into her own ~~like~~ almost without misgivings.~~<!-- There's something wrong with this sentence. A word missing after "her own" (own what)? -->~~		She didn't want that no matter who it was, especially those annoying people who peered into her own life almost without misgivings.

	On this point, Alsheyra who had won the esteem of the city's residents was a great person.		On this point, Alsheyra who had won the esteem of the city's residents was a great person.

80.223.220.209: Misc grammar fixes, added comment to unclear sentence

2013-10-05T14:02:04Z

Misc grammar fixes, added comment to unclear sentence

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Al92: /* Chapter 1 - The One Striving Forward, The One Muddling Blindly Forward, The One Giving Up */

2013-09-23T17:51:27Z

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	At the time, Haia had felt impatience and jealousy because he didn't have those kinds of feelings. Haia felt fear and anger because those feelings had broken the Mercenary Gang that he had seen as his family, and since he couldn't share those feelings with everyone, it also made the feeling that he was an abnormal being naturally appear in his mind.		At the time, Haia had felt impatience and jealousy because he didn't have those kinds of feelings. Haia felt fear and anger because those feelings had broken the Mercenary Gang that he had seen as his family, and since he couldn't share those feelings with everyone, it also made the feeling that he was an abnormal being naturally appear in his mind.

	Haia had went out of control because of this, and had suffered defeat in his duel against ~~Layfin~~, and in the end was expelled from the Mercenary Gang. At the time the only person who followed him was Myunfa.		Haia had went out of control because of this, and had suffered defeat in his duel against Layfon, and in the end was expelled from the Mercenary Gang. At the time the only person who followed him was Myunfa.

	So, Haia had believed that her desire to settle down wasn't so strong.		So, Haia had believed that her desire to settle down wasn't so strong.

SXIII at 11:11, 8 September 2013

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	"Oh......"		"Oh......"

	Elsmau turned ~~his~~ head around, and before her was the Queen with a bulletin of the Military Arts competition in her hand. The Queen seemed to want to let her see, lightly waving the leaflet detailing the results of the competition from that day.		Elsmau turned her head around, and before her was the Queen with a bulletin of the Military Arts competition in her hand. The Queen seemed to want to let her see, lightly waving the leaflet detailing the results of the competition from that day.

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Lygophile: where'd the main character go

2013-09-07T22:06:09Z

where'd the main character go

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Xstar at 23:06, 4 September 2013

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	"What about Fermaus?"		"What about Fermaus?"

	"~~He seems not~~ to be here."		"Doesn't seem to be here."

	"Not here......?"		"Not here......?"

Xstar at 22:54, 4 September 2013

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	Haia flicked the picture with his finger, seeming to want to escape Stania's glare.		Haia flicked the picture with his finger, seeming to want to escape Stania's glare.

	"His name is...... ~~英贝德·托斯兰~~? Ah, that name is indeed suitable."		"His name is...... Inbait Touslane? Ah, that name is indeed suitable."

	"Eh?"		"Eh?"

	"Now that you know, I will explain the plan. Haia, please become ~~英贝德~~'s rival."		"Now that you know, I will explain the plan. Haia, please become Inbait's rival."

	"Ah?"		"Ah?"
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	"It really turned into this~"		"It really turned into this~"

	Haia had known that in his heart long ago. After completing the mission in Zuellni, the Mercenary Gang ~~had become~~ crumbling. Haia obviously had to supervise it, but more importantly, the Mercenary Gang might have already accomplished the expectations of its mission.		Haia had known that in his heart long ago. After completing the mission in Zuellni, the Mercenary Gang began crumbling. Haia obviously had to supervise it, but more importantly, the Mercenary Gang might have already accomplished the expectations of its mission.

	"What about Fermaus?"		"What about Fermaus?"

Imwaski: /* Chapter 1 - The One Striving Forward, The One Muddling Blindly Forward, The One Giving Up (50% Complete) */

2013-09-04T04:25:46Z

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	"You think it's a joke? You have the qualifications."		"You think it's a joke? You have the qualifications."

	Derek wasn't ~~been~~ mistaken.		Derek wasn't mistaken.

	Though he didn't even know his last name, the male standing in front of him was the disciple of his good friend Ryuhou Gadge.		Though he didn't even know his last name, the male standing in front of him was the disciple of his good friend Ryuhou Gadge.
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	"It's not in vain."		"It's not in vain."

	The other party felt that he was being courteous, huh. Karian's ~~moth~~ slightly curved upwards.		The other party felt that he was being courteous, huh. Karian's mouth slightly curved upwards.

	"How much time do you think it would take if it were just me traveling to every city in the world?"		"How much time do you think it would take if it were just me traveling to every city in the world?"
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	"The Queen can't rely only on her mood to decide on those things. I think the Queen will also assess herself whether the person is a Military Artist who is capable of using a special Dite like the Heaven's Blade, and then carry out the competition."		"The Queen can't rely only on her mood to decide on those things. I think the Queen will also assess herself whether the person is a Military Artist who is capable of using a special Dite like the Heaven's Blade, and then carry out the competition."

	"It's a very reasonable ~~though~~~"		"It's a very reasonable thought~"

	"But, considering the information that I gathered on the Queen Alsheyra Almonise's personality, things can't be like that."		"But, considering the information that I gathered on the Queen Alsheyra Almonise's personality, things can't be like that."