Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume1 Chapter4 - Revision history

Rxls at 18:00, 9 August 2017

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	===Chapter 4: Platoon ~~match~~===		===Chapter 4: Platoon Match===

	''It's been a while since I wrote my last letter. A lot's happened over here, so I'm a bit tired. It's because of the cleaning duties in the Central Mechanism Chamber and school life.''		''It's been a while since I wrote my last letter. A lot's happened over here, so I'm a bit tired. It's because of the cleaning duties in the Central Mechanism Chamber and school life.''

Bakapervert: /* Chapter 4: Platoon match */

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Chapter 4: Platoon match

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	"Perhaps, but we didn't ask him to come out. Just forget it," Mifi said, pretending not to have heard the pause between "Lay" and "ton".		"Perhaps, but we didn't ask him to come out. Just forget it," Mifi said, pretending not to have heard the pause between "Lay" and "ton".

	(Layfon? Layfon-kun? Just which one is it? Hmm, with Meishen's personality, it probably is Layfon-kun......I don't think she'd want to call him just"Lay.")		(Layfon? Layfon-kun? Just which one is it? Hmm, with Meishen's personality, it probably is Layfon-kun......I don't think she'd want to call him just "Lay.")

	Mifi thought so.		Mifi thought so.
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	How troublesome.		How troublesome.

	He finally looked around him. He hadn't been counting, so he wasn't sure how times he had been falling and climbing back to his feet. The dead end of his thoughts forced him back into the present.		He finally looked around him. He hadn't been counting, so he wasn't sure how many times he had been falling and climbing back to his feet. The dead end of his thoughts forced him back into the present.

	"......Senpai?" he muttered, toppling onto the ground from another attack.		"......Senpai?" he muttered, toppling onto the ground from another attack.

Royaloyalz at 14:19, 2 September 2013

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	"Damn."		"Damn."

	"What's wrong? You don't look well." A voice floated over as ~~when~~ he was about to splash his face again. He didn't turn to address the owner of the voice, but he saw the other person's face in the mirror.		"What's wrong? You don't look well." A voice floated over just as he was about to splash his face again. He didn't turn to address the owner of the voice, but he saw the other person's face in the mirror.

	Felli would never have thought such a gentle smile could adorn Karian's face.		Felli would never have thought such a gentle smile could adorn Karian's face.
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	"Only if this city survives," Karian waved away the vibrating air. "Can you guarantee we'll win in the next competition?"		"Only if this city survives," Karian waved away the vibrating air. "Can you guarantee we'll win in the next competition?"

	The gentle smiled disappeared. Karian challenged Vance with a gaze sharp as the blade of a knife. The Commander lifted his thick eyebrows and accepted the challenge.		The gentle smiled disappeared. Karian challenged Vance with a gaze as sharp as the blade of a knife. The Commander lifted his thick eyebrows and accepted the challenge.

	"There are no absolutes in war," Vance said.		"There are no absolutes in war," Vance said.

Lygophile at 01:06, 17 August 2013

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	''I'm finding it very difficult to look for my future goal.''		''I'm finding it very difficult to look for my future goal.''

	''In Grendan, I was fortunate to have ability and it didn't take me long to choose the path of the Katana. But now I feel that I need huge courage to determine my own future.''		''In Grendan, I was fortunate enough to have ability and it didn't take me long to choose the path of the Katana. But now I feel that I need huge courage to determine my own future.''

	''Every time I look at these people who strive forward for their goals, I think they have lots of courage, yet I feel stupid and ridiculous for thinking that. I know there's no need to admire them. It's enough to look at my own goal.''		''Every time I look at these people who strive forward for their goals, I think they have lots of courage, yet I feel stupid and ridiculous for thinking that. I know there's no need to admire them. It's enough to look for my own goal.''

	''Haha, how weak I am. Uh, I know that too. I've come to Zuellni, but I still haven't found my goal.''		''Haha, how weak I am. Uh, I know that too. I've come to Zuellni, but I still haven't found my goal.''
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	(Is there a chance? Layton seems pretty slow with this kind of thing.)		(Is there a chance? Layton seems pretty slow with this kind of thing.)

	She looked at Meishen. Meishen was delicate and small. She was about the same height as Felli. Her face? It would be Felli's overwhelming win in that area. The two girls were of different types, but the girl in the 17th platoon was ~~exactly~~ like an exquisite doll. She gave off an illusive and dangerous allure from head to toe. ~~Compared to her,~~ Meishen definitely wasn't not cute, but she always had this about-to-cry look in between her eyebrows.		She looked at Meishen. Meishen was delicate and small. She was about the same height as Felli. Her face? It would be Felli's overwhelming win in that area. The two girls were of different types, but the girl in the 17th platoon was like an exquisite doll. She gave off an illusive and dangerous allure from head to toe. Meishen definitely wasn't not cute, but she always had this about-to-cry look in between her eyebrows.

	What about body build? Meishen had the advantage in this area. She was the most physically matured out of the three of them. Although her small stature didn't quite match, her body was so grown up that even Mifi herself felt inferior.		What about body build? Meishen had the advantage in this area. She was the most physically matured out of the three of them. Although her small stature didn't quite match, her body was so grown up that even Mifi herself felt inferior.
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	His stomach had stopped hurting, but now his ~~brain~~ felt dull and listless. Layfon wasn't keen on the match at all.		His stomach had stopped hurting, but now his mind felt dull and listless. Layfon wasn't keen on the match at all.

	The team walked into the corridor, leaving the locker room for the match. Sunlight replaced the artificial light. The fervent atmosphere surrounded them.		The team walked into the corridor, leaving the locker room for the match. Sunlight replaced the artificial light. The fervent atmosphere surrounded them.
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	Three dust whirls.		Three dust whirls.

	He slashed out with the sword, the pressure extending to his wrists. There were two pressures, canceling each other. One pressure flowed through Layfon's body, ~~causing~~ him to ~~kneel on the ground~~.		He slashed out with the sword, the pressure extending to his wrists. There were two pressures, canceling each other. One pressure flowed through Layfon's body, forcing him to his knees.

	Nina kept silent.		Nina kept silent.

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	(But what can I do for Leerin?)		(But what can I do for Leerin?)

	Nothing. He wanted her to see him finding his purpose in this city – A Layfon who had succeeded in something other than the katana. But this felt different from what he wanted to do for Leerin. A gap forever separated people in different mobile cities, ~~then~~ perhaps, in his heart, he failed to look at Leerin as someone other than his childhood friend.		Nothing. He wanted her to see him finding his purpose in this city – A Layfon who had succeeded in something other than the katana. But this felt different from what he wanted to do for Leerin. A gap forever separated people in different mobile cities, so perhaps, in his heart, he failed to look at Leerin as someone other than his childhood friend.

	The touch of her lips made him realize she was female, but he still failed to look at her as someone of the opposite sex.		The touch of her lips made him realize she was female, but he still failed to look at her as someone of the opposite sex.
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	And he remembered three other students. One of them was in Military Arts, but they were all striving for what they wanted to do. He was jealous of that bright form.		And he remembered three other students. One of them was in Military Arts, but they were all striving for what they wanted to do. He was jealous of that bright form.

	Felli's experience was similar to his. A girl who believed she had no other choice but to follow the footsteps of her inborn ability. Although the road she had gone through to arrive here was different from his, he could understand her ~~feeling on~~ Naruki and her friends. They were too dazzling.		Felli's experience was similar to his. A girl who believed she had no other choice but to follow the footsteps of her inborn ability. Although the road she had gone through to arrive here was different from his, he could understand her feelings towards Naruki and her friends. They were too dazzling.

	(Ahah, what a mess.)		(Ahah, what a mess.)
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	The sight he then saw in that one single moment was vividly carved into his mind.		The sight he then saw in that one single moment was vividly carved into his mind.

	She was ~~kneeling~~ on one knee.		She was on one knee.

	No matter how good she was at defense, there had to be a limit. The accumulated injuries had taken away the strength in her legs.		No matter how good she was at defense, there had to be a limit. The accumulated injuries had taken away the strength in her legs.

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	She was directing her attack at another whirl.		She was directing her attack at another whirl.

	"Whirl Kei......" he murmured, then rolled away from his current position to confirm the situation.		"Whirl Kei (Senkei)......" he murmured, then rolled away from his current position to confirm the situation.

	Three figures separated Layfon and Nina.		Three figures separated Layfon and Nina.
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	It wasn't the same as shooting out Kei. He focused his Kei on one point only.		It wasn't the same as shooting out Kei. He focused his Kei on one point only.

	This was one of the moves of the External-type Burst Kei – Needle Kei.		This was one of the moves of the External-type Burst Kei – Needle Kei (Shin Kei).

	Kei sharp as needles struck one of the members of the 16th platoon and sent him sailing through the air.		Kei sharp as needles struck one of the members of the 16th platoon and sent him sailing through the air.

Veritatis cupitor at 10:15, 13 December 2012

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	Layfon couldn't get up because of the numbness in his knees. The pressure of the high speed attack remained in his body, preventing him from using his strength.		Layfon couldn't get up because of the numbness in his knees. The pressure of the high speed attack remained in his body, preventing him from using his strength.

	As ~~when~~ he was trying to get up, one of the opponents rushed him again with a high-speed Whirl Kei attack. Dust filled the air. A presence that Layfon couldn't see with his eyes was closing in. He blocked the attack with his sword. The instability of his legs caused him to fly through the air ~~then to fall~~, rolling on the ground.		As he was trying to get up, one of the opponents rushed to him again with a high-speed Whirl Kei attack. Dust filled the air. A presence that Layfon couldn't see with his eyes was closing in. He blocked the attack with his sword. The instability of his legs caused him to fly through the air and he fell, rolling on the ground.

	The pressure of the attack ran through his body. Sparks exploded in his vision. He had almost hit his head on the ground. Even so, he still had to get back up. He saw Nina defending from a Whirl Kei attack with her iron whips.		The pressure of the attack ran through his body. Sparks exploded in his vision. He had almost hit his head on the ground. Even so, he still had to get back up. He saw Nina defending from a Whirl Kei attack with her iron whips.
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	Senpai will fall.		Senpai will fall.

	The platoon will ~~have failed~~.		The platoon will fail.

	~~Failed~~.		Fail.

	The team will be disbanded.		The team will be disbanded.

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	But he couldn't do it.		But he couldn't do it.

	He thought he had let it all out, but the ~~irritated~~ feeling rushed back into his chest. He felt his stomach, the pressure refusing to go away.		He thought he had let it all out, but the irritating feeling rushed back into his chest. He felt his stomach, the pressure refusing to go away.

	"Wuwu......"		"Wuwu......"
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	"Yes, yes......" Karian suddenly halted his steps.		"Yes, yes......" Karian suddenly halted his steps.

	"I hope you can stop your naive thinking that playing around in the match can get you back into General Studies. I've said so already. I'll do anything for the survival of the city. As long something is useful to me, I'll use it."		"I hope you can stop your naive thinking that playing around in the match can get you back into General Studies. I've said so already. I'll do anything for the survival of the city. As long as something is useful to me, I'll use it."

	"Even if it's your sister?"		"Even if it's your sister?"

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	Mifi snatched up her own juice and snack, and lifted her gaze to watch the arena.		Mifi snatched up her own juice and snack, and lifted her gaze to watch the arena.

	The uneven ground of the war field, dotted here and there with trees, was fenced in. Above was the camera of the Alchemy course, controlled by a ~~psychokinesist~~. It was currently being tested; The big screens facing the audience seats cycled through different areas of the field.		The uneven ground of the war field, dotted here and there with trees, was fenced in. Above was the camera of the Alchemy course, controlled by a Psychokinesist. It was currently being tested; The big screens facing the audience seats cycled through different areas of the field.

	"Isn't it about time? When is Layton's match?"		"Isn't it about time? When is Layton's match?"
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	He moved his gaze back to the screen.		He moved his gaze back to the screen.

	The camera controlled by ~~psychokinesis~~ was filming a certain area of the war field.		The camera controlled by Psychokinesis was filming a certain area of the war field.

	Layfon's desperate expression, his face stuck with sweat and dust, appeared on the screen.		Layfon's desperate expression, his face stuck with sweat and dust, appeared on the screen.
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	"Me and Layfon will act as bait. During that time, Sharnid is to snipe the flag. It's an old-fashioned but realistic plan."		"Me and Layfon will act as bait. During that time, Sharnid is to snipe the flag. It's an old-fashioned but realistic plan."

	"Layfon, the first problem we'll face is getting through the traps as fast as we can. The 16th platoon can't easily detect Sharnid's Kei, but we'll have to attract the ~~psychokinesist~~'s attention with our speed. Our mission is to confuse the other team."		"Layfon, the first problem we'll face is getting through the traps as fast as we can. The 16th platoon can't easily detect Sharnid's Kei, but we'll have to attract the Psychokinesist's attention with our speed. Our mission is to confuse the other team."

	That was why the two of them were running on the uneven ground and heading straight for the front line of the opposing team. They moved at their highest speed while running through bushes and staying alert for traps.		That was why the two of them were running on the uneven ground and heading straight for the front line of the opposing team. They moved at their highest speed while running through bushes and staying alert for traps.
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	There weren't any traps.		There weren't any traps.

	On the ground could be simple traps like pits, nets, conductive wires......and bundles of grass to trip one's feet......They didn't find any mines controlled by ~~psychokinesis~~. Except for the changes made to the terrain for the match, nothing else looked different.		On the ground could be simple traps like pits, nets, conductive wires......and bundles of grass to trip one's feet......They didn't find any mines controlled by Psychokinesis. Except for the changes made to the terrain for the match, nothing else looked different.

	On Nina's gesture, Layfon stopped running and hid inside the shadow of the bush.		On Nina's gesture, Layfon stopped running and hid inside the shadow of the bush.
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	Another voice came through the transmitter. "This is Sharnid. I'm in position. There's something blocking my target, but this is the best position I could find. If there's a better opening, I guarantee my shot will hit."		Another voice came through the transmitter. "This is Sharnid. I'm in position. There's something blocking my target, but this is the best position I could find. If there's a better opening, I guarantee my shot will hit."

	So he planned to hit the obstacle before sniping the flag. But with that much time wasted, both the ~~psychokinesist~~ and people who could use External-type Burst Kei might discover Sharnid's position. He'd become the target of the enemy's sniper.		So he planned to hit the obstacle before sniping the flag. But with that much time wasted, both the Psychokinesist and people who could use External-type Burst Kei might discover Sharnid's position. He'd become the target of the enemy's sniper.

	"Wait a minute. Just stay there and wait for your order."		"Wait a minute. Just stay there and wait for your order."

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	''I'm finding it very difficult to look for my future goal.''		''I'm finding it very difficult to look for my future goal.''

	''In Grendan, I was fortunate ~~enough~~ to have ability and it didn't take me long to choose the path of the Katana. But now I feel that I need huge courage to determine my own future.''		''In Grendan, I was fortunate to have ability and it didn't take me long to choose the path of the Katana. But now I feel that I need huge courage to determine my own future.''

	''Every time I look at these people who strive forward for their goals, I think they have lots of courage, yet I feel stupid and ridiculous for thinking that. I know there's no need to admire them. It's enough to look ~~for~~ my own goal.''		''Every time I look at these people who strive forward for their goals, I think they have lots of courage, yet I feel stupid and ridiculous for thinking that. I know there's no need to admire them. It's enough to look at my own goal.''

	''Haha, how weak I am. Uh, I know that too. I've come to Zuellni, but I still haven't found my goal.''		''Haha, how weak I am. Uh, I know that too. I've come to Zuellni, but I still haven't found my goal.''
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	(Is there a chance? Layton seems pretty slow with this kind of thing.)		(Is there a chance? Layton seems pretty slow with this kind of thing.)

	She looked at Meishen. Meishen was delicate and small. She was about the same height as Felli. Her face? It would be Felli's overwhelming win in that area. The two girls were of different types, but the girl in the 17th platoon was like an exquisite doll. She gave off an illusive and dangerous allure from head to toe. Meishen definitely wasn't not cute, but she always had this about-to-cry look in between her eyebrows.		She looked at Meishen. Meishen was delicate and small. She was about the same height as Felli. Her face? It would be Felli's overwhelming win in that area. The two girls were of different types, but the girl in the 17th platoon was exactly like an exquisite doll. She gave off an illusive and dangerous allure from head to toe. Compared to her, Meishen definitely wasn't not cute, but she always had this about-to-cry look in between her eyebrows.

	What about body build? Meishen had the advantage in this area. She was the most physically matured out of the three of them. Although her small stature didn't quite match, her body was so grown up that even Mifi herself felt inferior.		What about body build? Meishen had the advantage in this area. She was the most physically matured out of the three of them. Although her small stature didn't quite match, her body was so grown up that even Mifi herself felt inferior.
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	Mifi snatched up her own juice and snack, and lifted her gaze to watch the arena.		Mifi snatched up her own juice and snack, and lifted her gaze to watch the arena.

	The uneven ground of the war field, dotted here and there with trees, was fenced in. Above was the camera of the Alchemy course, controlled by a ~~Psychokinesist~~. It was currently being tested; The big screens facing the audience seats cycled through different areas of the field.		The uneven ground of the war field, dotted here and there with trees, was fenced in. Above was the camera of the Alchemy course, controlled by a psychokinesist. It was currently being tested; The big screens facing the audience seats cycled through different areas of the field.

	"Isn't it about time? When is Layton's match?"		"Isn't it about time? When is Layton's match?"
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	His stomach had stopped hurting, but now his ~~mind~~ felt dull and listless. Layfon wasn't keen on the match at all.		His stomach had stopped hurting, but now his brain felt dull and listless. Layfon wasn't keen on the match at all.

	The team walked into the corridor, leaving the locker room for the match. Sunlight replaced the artificial light. The fervent atmosphere surrounded them.		The team walked into the corridor, leaving the locker room for the match. Sunlight replaced the artificial light. The fervent atmosphere surrounded them.
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	"Ha?"		"Ha?"

	Vance Hardy, Commander of Military Arts ? the representative of the Military Arts course leaned on the office desk, watching the screen with incomprehension.		Vance Hardy, Commander of Military Arts – the representative of the Military Arts course leaned on the office desk, watching the screen with incomprehension.

	"Well then, he lacks enthusiasm. What a useless guy. This includes the one who transferred him into Military Arts."		"Well then, he lacks enthusiasm. What a useless guy. This includes the one who transferred him into Military Arts."
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	"Yes, but I still want an absolute guarantee. We must win to guarantee the survival of this city. Humans can't live without the city. This cold world rejects us. I think you should know the meaning of losing a city?"		"Yes, but I still want an absolute guarantee. We must win to guarantee the survival of this city. Humans can't live without the city. This cold world rejects us. I think you should know the meaning of losing a city?"

	What was outside the city ? The few plants that managed to survive on this polluted earth were poisonous. The only survivors were the filth monsters that had overcome the poison.		What was outside the city – The few plants that managed to survive on this polluted earth were poisonous. The only survivors were the filth monsters that had overcome the poison.

	Unable to survive in this harsh world, humans could only live in an artificial world ? in a mobile city.		Unable to survive in this harsh world, humans could only live in an artificial world – in a mobile city.

	"Of course I understand that. But this is an Academy. It's a place of learning. I won't abandon good students!"		"Of course I understand that. But this is an Academy. It's a place of learning. I won't abandon good students!"
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	He moved his gaze back to the screen.		He moved his gaze back to the screen.

	The camera controlled by ~~Psychokinesis~~ was filming a certain area of the war field.		The camera controlled by psychokinesis was filming a certain area of the war field.

	Layfon's desperate expression, his face stuck with sweat and dust, appeared on the screen.		Layfon's desperate expression, his face stuck with sweat and dust, appeared on the screen.
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	"Me and Layfon will act as bait. During that time, Sharnid is to snipe the flag. It's an old-fashioned but realistic plan."		"Me and Layfon will act as bait. During that time, Sharnid is to snipe the flag. It's an old-fashioned but realistic plan."

	"Layfon, the first problem we'll face is getting through the traps as fast as we can. The 16th platoon can't easily detect Sharnid's Kei, but we'll have to attract the ~~Psychokinesist~~'s attention with our speed. Our mission is to confuse the other team."		"Layfon, the first problem we'll face is getting through the traps as fast as we can. The 16th platoon can't easily detect Sharnid's Kei, but we'll have to attract the psychokinesist's attention with our speed. Our mission is to confuse the other team."

	That was why the two of them were running on the uneven ground and heading straight for the front line of the opposing team. They moved at their highest speed while running through bushes and staying alert for traps.		That was why the two of them were running on the uneven ground and heading straight for the front line of the opposing team. They moved at their highest speed while running through bushes and staying alert for traps.
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	There weren't any traps.		There weren't any traps.

	On the ground could be simple traps like pits, nets, conductive wires......and bundles of grass to trip one's feet......They didn't find any mines controlled by ~~Psychokinesis~~. Except for the changes made to the terrain for the match, nothing else looked different.		On the ground could be simple traps like pits, nets, conductive wires......and bundles of grass to trip one's feet......They didn't find any mines controlled by psychokinesis. Except for the changes made to the terrain for the match, nothing else looked different.

	On Nina's gesture, Layfon stopped running and hid inside the shadow of the bush.		On Nina's gesture, Layfon stopped running and hid inside the shadow of the bush.
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	Another voice came through the transmitter. "This is Sharnid. I'm in position. There's something blocking my target, but this is the best position I could find. If there's a better opening, I guarantee my shot will hit."		Another voice came through the transmitter. "This is Sharnid. I'm in position. There's something blocking my target, but this is the best position I could find. If there's a better opening, I guarantee my shot will hit."

	So he planned to hit the obstacle before sniping the flag. But with that much time wasted, both the ~~Psychokinesist~~ and people who could use External-type Burst Kei might discover Sharnid's position. He'd become the target of the enemy's sniper.		So he planned to hit the obstacle before sniping the flag. But with that much time wasted, both the psychokinesist and people who could use External-type Burst Kei might discover Sharnid's position. He'd become the target of the enemy's sniper.

	"Wait a minute. Just stay there and wait for your order."		"Wait a minute. Just stay there and wait for your order."
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	Three dust whirls.		Three dust whirls.

	He slashed out with the sword, the pressure extending to his wrists. There were two pressures, canceling each other. One pressure flowed through Layfon's body, ~~forcing~~ him to ~~his knees~~.		He slashed out with the sword, the pressure extending to his wrists. There were two pressures, canceling each other. One pressure flowed through Layfon's body, causing him to kneel on the ground.

	Nina kept silent.		Nina kept silent.

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	(But what can I do for Leerin?)		(But what can I do for Leerin?)

	Nothing. He wanted her to see him finding his purpose in this city ? A Layfon who had succeeded in something other than the katana. But this felt different from what he wanted to do for Leerin. A gap forever separated people in different mobile cities, so perhaps, in his heart, he failed to look at Leerin as someone other than his childhood friend.		Nothing. He wanted her to see him finding his purpose in this city – A Layfon who had succeeded in something other than the katana. But this felt different from what he wanted to do for Leerin. A gap forever separated people in different mobile cities, then perhaps, in his heart, he failed to look at Leerin as someone other than his childhood friend.

	The touch of her lips made him realize she was female, but he still failed to look at her as someone of the opposite sex.		The touch of her lips made him realize she was female, but he still failed to look at her as someone of the opposite sex.
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	And he remembered three other students. One of them was in Military Arts, but they were all striving for what they wanted to do. He was jealous of that bright form.		And he remembered three other students. One of them was in Military Arts, but they were all striving for what they wanted to do. He was jealous of that bright form.

	Felli's experience was similar to his. A girl who believed she had no other choice but to follow the footsteps of her inborn ability. Although the road she had gone through to arrive here was different from his, he could understand her ~~feelings towards~~ Naruki and her friends. They were too dazzling.		Felli's experience was similar to his. A girl who believed she had no other choice but to follow the footsteps of her inborn ability. Although the road she had gone through to arrive here was different from his, he could understand her feeling on Naruki and her friends. They were too dazzling.

	(Ahah, what a mess.)		(Ahah, what a mess.)
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	The sight he then saw in that one single moment was vividly carved into his mind.		The sight he then saw in that one single moment was vividly carved into his mind.

	She was on one knee.		She was kneeling on one knee.

	No matter how good she was at defense, there had to be a limit. The accumulated injuries had taken away the strength in her legs.		No matter how good she was at defense, there had to be a limit. The accumulated injuries had taken away the strength in her legs.
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	It wasn't the same as shooting out Kei. He focused his Kei on one point only.		It wasn't the same as shooting out Kei. He focused his Kei on one point only.

	This was one of the moves of the External-type Burst Kei ? Needle Kei (Shin Kei).		This was one of the moves of the External-type Burst Kei – Needle Kei (Shin Kei).

	Kei sharp as needles struck one of the members of the 16th platoon and sent him sailing through the air.		Kei sharp as needles struck one of the members of the 16th platoon and sent him sailing through the air.

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	Mifi snatched up her own juice and snack, and lifted her gaze to watch the arena.		Mifi snatched up her own juice and snack, and lifted her gaze to watch the arena.

	The uneven ground of the war field, dotted here and there with trees, was fenced in. Above was the camera of the Alchemy course, controlled by a ~~psychokinesist~~. It was currently being tested; The big screens facing the audience seats cycled through different areas of the field.		The uneven ground of the war field, dotted here and there with trees, was fenced in. Above was the camera of the Alchemy course, controlled by a Psychokinesist. It was currently being tested; The big screens facing the audience seats cycled through different areas of the field.

	"Isn't it about time? When is Layton's match?"		"Isn't it about time? When is Layton's match?"
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	"Ha?"		"Ha?"

	Vance Hardy, Commander of Military Arts – the representative of the Military Arts course leaned on the office desk, watching the screen with incomprehension.		Vance Hardy, Commander of Military Arts ? the representative of the Military Arts course leaned on the office desk, watching the screen with incomprehension.

	"Well then, he lacks enthusiasm. What a useless guy. This includes the one who transferred him into Military Arts."		"Well then, he lacks enthusiasm. What a useless guy. This includes the one who transferred him into Military Arts."
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	"Yes, but I still want an absolute guarantee. We must win to guarantee the survival of this city. Humans can't live without the city. This cold world rejects us. I think you should know the meaning of losing a city?"		"Yes, but I still want an absolute guarantee. We must win to guarantee the survival of this city. Humans can't live without the city. This cold world rejects us. I think you should know the meaning of losing a city?"

	What was outside the city – The few plants that managed to survive on this polluted earth were poisonous. The only survivors were the filth monsters that had overcome the poison.		What was outside the city ? The few plants that managed to survive on this polluted earth were poisonous. The only survivors were the filth monsters that had overcome the poison.

	Unable to survive in this harsh world, humans could only live in an artificial world – in a mobile city.		Unable to survive in this harsh world, humans could only live in an artificial world ? in a mobile city.

	"Of course I understand that. But this is an Academy. It's a place of learning. I won't abandon good students!"		"Of course I understand that. But this is an Academy. It's a place of learning. I won't abandon good students!"
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	He moved his gaze back to the screen.		He moved his gaze back to the screen.

	The camera controlled by ~~psychokinesis~~ was filming a certain area of the war field.		The camera controlled by Psychokinesis was filming a certain area of the war field.

	Layfon's desperate expression, his face stuck with sweat and dust, appeared on the screen.		Layfon's desperate expression, his face stuck with sweat and dust, appeared on the screen.
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	"Me and Layfon will act as bait. During that time, Sharnid is to snipe the flag. It's an old-fashioned but realistic plan."		"Me and Layfon will act as bait. During that time, Sharnid is to snipe the flag. It's an old-fashioned but realistic plan."

	"Layfon, the first problem we'll face is getting through the traps as fast as we can. The 16th platoon can't easily detect Sharnid's Kei, but we'll have to attract the ~~psychokinesist~~'s attention with our speed. Our mission is to confuse the other team."		"Layfon, the first problem we'll face is getting through the traps as fast as we can. The 16th platoon can't easily detect Sharnid's Kei, but we'll have to attract the Psychokinesist's attention with our speed. Our mission is to confuse the other team."

	That was why the two of them were running on the uneven ground and heading straight for the front line of the opposing team. They moved at their highest speed while running through bushes and staying alert for traps.		That was why the two of them were running on the uneven ground and heading straight for the front line of the opposing team. They moved at their highest speed while running through bushes and staying alert for traps.
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	There weren't any traps.		There weren't any traps.

	On the ground could be simple traps like pits, nets, conductive wires......and bundles of grass to trip one's feet......They didn't find any mines controlled by ~~psychokinesis~~. Except for the changes made to the terrain for the match, nothing else looked different.		On the ground could be simple traps like pits, nets, conductive wires......and bundles of grass to trip one's feet......They didn't find any mines controlled by Psychokinesis. Except for the changes made to the terrain for the match, nothing else looked different.

	On Nina's gesture, Layfon stopped running and hid inside the shadow of the bush.		On Nina's gesture, Layfon stopped running and hid inside the shadow of the bush.
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	Another voice came through the transmitter. "This is Sharnid. I'm in position. There's something blocking my target, but this is the best position I could find. If there's a better opening, I guarantee my shot will hit."		Another voice came through the transmitter. "This is Sharnid. I'm in position. There's something blocking my target, but this is the best position I could find. If there's a better opening, I guarantee my shot will hit."

	So he planned to hit the obstacle before sniping the flag. But with that much time wasted, both the ~~psychokinesist~~ and people who could use External-type Burst Kei might discover Sharnid's position. He'd become the target of the enemy's sniper.		So he planned to hit the obstacle before sniping the flag. But with that much time wasted, both the Psychokinesist and people who could use External-type Burst Kei might discover Sharnid's position. He'd become the target of the enemy's sniper.

	"Wait a minute. Just stay there and wait for your order."		"Wait a minute. Just stay there and wait for your order."
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	(But what can I do for Leerin?)		(But what can I do for Leerin?)

	Nothing. He wanted her to see him finding his purpose in this city – A Layfon who had succeeded in something other than the katana. But this felt different from what he wanted to do for Leerin. A gap forever separated people in different mobile cities, so perhaps, in his heart, he failed to look at Leerin as someone other than his childhood friend.		Nothing. He wanted her to see him finding his purpose in this city ? A Layfon who had succeeded in something other than the katana. But this felt different from what he wanted to do for Leerin. A gap forever separated people in different mobile cities, so perhaps, in his heart, he failed to look at Leerin as someone other than his childhood friend.

	The touch of her lips made him realize she was female, but he still failed to look at her as someone of the opposite sex.		The touch of her lips made him realize she was female, but he still failed to look at her as someone of the opposite sex.
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	It wasn't the same as shooting out Kei. He focused his Kei on one point only.		It wasn't the same as shooting out Kei. He focused his Kei on one point only.

	This was one of the moves of the External-type Burst Kei – Needle Kei (Shin Kei).		This was one of the moves of the External-type Burst Kei ? Needle Kei (Shin Kei).

	Kei sharp as needles struck one of the members of the 16th platoon and sent him sailing through the air.		Kei sharp as needles struck one of the members of the 16th platoon and sent him sailing through the air.