Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume1 Chapter5 - Revision history

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	===Chapter 5: Point of ~~difference~~===		===Chapter 5: Point of Difference===

	''This is my fourth letter but I still haven't received yours. I'm beginning to worry that you haven't been getting mine.''		''This is my fourth letter but I still haven't received yours. I'm beginning to worry that you haven't been getting mine.''

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	He hadn't even decided on where to go.		He hadn't even decided on where to go.

	And he came to Zuellni for that purpose. But the situation of the Academy and the Student President who knew of his past were denying him the chance to ~~discovering~~ his own interest.		And he came to Zuellni for that purpose. But the situation of the Academy and the Student President who knew of his past were denying him the chance to discover his own interest.

	Layfon grabbed another biscuit. Meishen probably knew he didn't like sweets, so she had made them with less sugar. They tasted nice.		Layfon grabbed another biscuit. Meishen probably knew he didn't like sweets, so she had made them with less sugar. They tasted nice.

Imwaski: /* Chapter 5: Point of difference */

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Chapter 5: Point of difference

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	"......So, you then decided not to train in Military Arts again?"		"......So, you then decided not to train in Military Arts again?"

	"Yes, since there was enough money. Unfortunately, it isn't enough for my school fees. That can't be helped, so I~~'ve got~~ to earn money through some other means."		"Yes, since there was enough money. Unfortunately, it isn't enough for my school fees. That can't be helped, so I had to earn money through some other means."

	"......Don't you miss it at all?"		"......Don't you miss it at all?"
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	He wanted to say he couldn't think properly because of his injured head, but on second thought, he swallowed the words. It wasn't a good enough reason; besides, he didn't want Meishen to know more about it.		He wanted to say he couldn't think properly because of his injured head, but on second thought, he swallowed the words. It wasn't a good enough reason; besides, he didn't want Meishen to know more about it.

	"......Layton, you~~'ve got~~ your own way of thinking. I don't know much......about winning or losing matches......but, if you've decided to lose, I think it's better to lose the match. It's not so good to change halfway through......About finding what I like doing, I can't properly explain why I like making sweets. I don't know how to discover an interest, so I can't give you any suggestions......"		"......Layton, you have your own way of thinking. I don't know much......about winning or losing matches......but, if you've decided to lose, I think it's better to lose the match. It's not so good to change halfway through......About finding what I like doing, I can't properly explain why I like making sweets. I don't know how to discover an interest, so I can't give you any suggestions......"

	She paused as if to take a deep breath, and then continued, "But the Lay......ton I saw at the opening ceremony was cool. I want to see the Layton from back then."		She paused as if to take a deep breath, and then continued, "But the Lay......ton I saw at the opening ceremony was cool. I want to see the Layton from back then."

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	~~It seemed that something~~ bad ~~had~~ happened if he woke up in the hospital.		Something bad must have happened if he woke up in the hospital.

	"I'm here again......"		"I'm here again......"
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	This was worrying.		This was worrying.

	Since they were young, Meishen had always hidden behind Naruki, the tallest of the three, who knew how to fight. Nobody ~~bothered~~ with Mifi. Mifi liked to use the fastest means possible to grab hold of the other person's secret and use it against them in the most diabolical way possible.		Since they were young, Meishen had always hidden behind Naruki, the tallest of the three, who knew how to fight. Nobody messed with Mifi. Mifi liked to use the fastest means possible to grab hold of the other person's secret and use it against them in the most diabolical way possible.

	Meishen grew up being protected by them.		Meishen grew up being protected by them.
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	It was easy to forget this fact while living a normal life in the city. Zuellni was moving continuously.		It was easy to forget this fact while living a normal life in the city. Zuellni was moving continuously.

	When Naruki was very young, a city-quake of greater magnitude than this had occurred in her city because Joeldem was trapped in ground with a weak crust. The city-quake had caused huge damage.		When Naruki was very young, a city-quake of a greater magnitude than this had occurred in her city because Joeldem was trapped in ground with a weak crust. The city-quake had caused huge damage.

	When the shaking gradually eased, Naruki stood up. It didn't look like there was a fire anywhere. She couldn't hear the racket from the residential district as it was a bit far from here, but things must be chaotic over there.		When the shaking gradually eased, Naruki stood up. It didn't look like there was a fire anywhere. She couldn't hear the racket from the residential district as it was a bit far from here, but things must be chaotic over there.
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	The sacred art must not be tainted by human desires.		The sacred art must not be tainted by human desires.

	But in reverse, because it was sacred, people wanted to taint it. The students gambling secretly on the platoon matches ~~are~~ immersed in the festival-like atmosphere committing their illegal act.		But in reverse, because it was sacred, people wanted to taint it. The students gambling secretly on the platoon matches were immersed in the festival-like atmosphere committing their illegal act.

	But compared to the students, there were people who wanted to do such things with clear-cut intent. Perhaps they weren't satisfied with the normal matches that began and ended ceremoniously in the spirit of sports. What they lusted after were the mad and bloody fights.		But compared to the students, there were people who wanted to do such things with clear-cut intent. Perhaps they weren't satisfied with the normal matches that began and ended ceremoniously in the spirit of sports. What they lusted after were the mad and bloody fights.

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	The sacred art must not be tainted by human desires.		The sacred art must not be tainted by human desires.

	But in reverse, because it was sacred, people wanted to taint it. The students gambling secretly on the platoon matches ~~must be~~ immersed in the festival-like atmosphere ~~and commit~~ their illegal act.		But in reverse, because it was sacred, people wanted to taint it. The students gambling secretly on the platoon matches are immersed in the festival-like atmosphere committing their illegal act.

	But compared to the students, there were people who wanted to do such things with clear-cut intent. Perhaps they weren't satisfied with the normal matches that began and ended ceremoniously in the spirit of sports. What they lusted after were the mad and bloody fights.		But compared to the students, there were people who wanted to do such things with clear-cut intent. Perhaps they weren't satisfied with the normal matches that began and ended ceremoniously in the spirit of sports. What they lusted after were the mad and bloody fights.

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	"......No."		"......No."

	He thought she'd ~~have roared~~ at him, but all she did was deny in a low voice.		He thought she'd roar at him, but all she did was deny in a low voice.

	"There's no reason to be mad, but......" she sighed, lowered her shoulders and turned around.		"There's no reason to be mad, but......" she sighed, lowered her shoulders and turned around.

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	But she wasn't just being protected.		But she wasn't just being protected.

	Both Naruki and Mifi fell under the charm of Meishen's sweets. They wouldn't dare lift their heads before her if they went over the line. Meishen wouldn't make any sweets for them. But even so, Meishen rarely left their small circle to make contact with the outside world. Her assertive action of working in the coffee shop was a great improvement. However, this wasn't enough to build a relationship with someone outside their circle.		Both Naruki and Mifi fell under the charm of Meishen's sweets. They wouldn't dare lift their heads before her. If they went over the line, Meishen wouldn't make any sweets for them. But even so, Meishen rarely left their small circle to make contact with the outside world. Her assertive action of working in the coffee shop was a great improvement. However, this wasn't enough to build a relationship with someone outside their circle.

	Naruki was really worried.		Naruki was really worried.

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	''(I must have rolled too much on the ground.)''		''(I must have rolled too much on the ground.)''

	In the arena, Layfon had difficulty thinking because of his head bumping here and there. He thought back to the scene of Nina receiving repeated attacks. Compared to ~~his~~ real strength, ~~she wouldn't have let~~ her pain ~~muddle her thoughts~~.		In the arena, Layfon had difficulty thinking because of his head bumping here and there. He thought back to the scene of Nina receiving repeated attacks. Compared to him, irrespective of the difference in their real strength, Nina was not allowing her concentration to falter from pain.

	"I wasn't planning on winning."		"I wasn't planning on winning."

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	Just when her heart was swaying in two directions, Karian continued.		Just when her heart was swaying in two directions, Karian continued.

	"He had tainted the reputation of a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~."		"He had tainted the reputation of a Heaven's Blade successor."


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	But he had dashed that hope in today's match.		But he had dashed that hope in today's match.

	There must be a student here from Grendan. Those who thought they had mistaken him for someone else would now know he was a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~.		There must be a student here from Grendan. Those who thought they had mistaken him for someone else would now know he was a Heaven's Blade successor.

	"......You're really strong. Like how you struck down those two instantly......"		"......You're really strong. Like how you struck down those two instantly......"
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	"I was told I had a gift with the katana, so I decided to make money with it. I participated in all kinds of matches and won lots of prize money......"		"I was told I had a gift with the katana, so I decided to make money with it. I participated in all kinds of matches and won lots of prize money......"

	And before he knew it, he had become a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~.		And before he knew it, he had become a Heaven's Blade successor.

	Perhaps people who dreamed of becoming a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~ would be outraged by his words. To him, though, this was his truth. This was the value the title "Heaven's Blade" held for him. It was only a step on the path to his goal.		Perhaps people who dreamed of becoming a Heaven's Blade successor would be outraged by his words. To him, though, this was his truth. This was the value the title "Heaven's Blade" held for him. It was only a step on the path to his goal.

	"The situation at the orphanage improved because of the prize money. Everyone was grateful to me."		"The situation at the orphanage improved because of the prize money. Everyone was grateful to me."
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	"No......"		"No......"

	"Was the Student President lying when he said you were a ~~receiver~~ of a Heaven's Blade?"		"Was the Student President lying when he said you were a successor of a Heaven's Blade?"

	Looking embarrassed suddenly, Nina moved her gaze further away from him.		Looking embarrassed suddenly, Nina moved her gaze further away from him.
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	But she didn't think the Student President had lied to her.		But she didn't think the Student President had lied to her.

	Wolfstein......from the moment he learned of the twelve Heaven's Blade ~~Receivers~~.		Wolfstein......from the moment he learned of the twelve Heaven's Blade successors.

	Everyone had been scolding him, saying it was wrong, yet nobody had taken care to explain just how wrong it was. All they did was scold him.		Everyone had been scolding him, saying it was wrong, yet nobody had taken care to explain just how wrong it was. All they did was scold him.
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	But the prize money from normal matches was too little.		But the prize money from normal matches was too little.

	As a result of unbroken victories, he had become a ~~receiver~~ of a Heaven's Blade to serve under the Queen of Grendan, Alsheyra. But his salary was still too small and the special scholarship he obtained was still too little.		As a result of unbroken victories, he had become a successor of a Heaven's Blade to serve under the Queen of Grendan, Alsheyra. But his salary was still too small and the special scholarship he obtained was still too little.

	"I needed a lot of money for the many children in the orphanage."		"I needed a lot of money for the many children in the orphanage."
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	And for this reason, the underground matches offered huge prize money.		And for this reason, the underground matches offered huge prize money.

	Layfon had found out about it. He contacted the people who organized such matches. Using the threat that came from the authority of a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~, he suggested that they could advertise his unbelievably strong power. It was easy to tell who would have won in a normal match, but it was another matter to watch a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~ fight without holding back.		Layfon had found out about it. He contacted the people who organized such matches. Using the threat that came from the authority of a Heaven's Blade successor, he suggested that they could advertise his unbelievably strong power. It was easy to tell who would have won in a normal match, but it was another matter to watch a Heaven's Blade successor fight without holding back.

	He used his Kei as if he was in a show, and through that, obtained money from the audience.		He used his Kei as if he was in a show, and through that, obtained money from the audience.
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	"Of course," Nina said, as if to let out all the anger and irritation inside her.		"Of course," Nina said, as if to let out all the anger and irritation inside her.

	Nina's outrage was the same as the people's at Grendan, including Layfon's Master, the other Heaven's Blade ~~Receivers~~ and even his comrades – the orphans.		Nina's outrage was the same as the people's at Grendan, including Layfon's Master, the other Heaven's Blade successors and even his comrades – the orphans.

	Even so, he still didn't understand.		Even so, he still didn't understand.
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	"That person wanted to participate in a Heaven's Blade match. He showed me proof of my fights in the underground matches and threatened to spread it around unless I lost to him purposefully and let him have the Heaven's Blade."		"That person wanted to participate in a Heaven's Blade match. He showed me proof of my fights in the underground matches and threatened to spread it around unless I lost to him purposefully and let him have the Heaven's Blade."

	There were twelve Heaven's Blade ~~Receivers~~. The only way to get that title was to either defeat a ~~Receiver~~ in a Heaven's Blade match or win the numerous matches after the death of a ~~Receiver~~.		There were twelve Heaven's Blade successors. The only way to get that title was to either defeat a successor in a Heaven's Blade match or win the numerous matches after the death of a successor.

	The blackmailer had another way than Military Arts to win a match, and he used it to threaten Layfon. But Layfon didn't accept the deal. He couldn't abandon his title as it was his key to the underground matches, to fight as a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~.		The blackmailer had another way than Military Arts to win a match, and he used it to threaten Layfon. But Layfon didn't accept the deal. He couldn't abandon his title as it was his key to the underground matches, to fight as a Heaven's Blade successor.

	So he tried to kill the other person. His secret would be safe if this person died.		So he tried to kill the other person. His secret would be safe if this person died.
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	Why was he feeling this kind of pain?		Why was he feeling this kind of pain?

	No. He had already experienced it before – the punishment that Queen Alsheyra had passed down to him. All the Heaven's Blade ~~Receivers~~ served her, so Layfon could only surrender to her judgment.		No. He had already experienced it before – the punishment that Queen Alsheyra had passed down to him. All the Heaven's Blade successors served her, so Layfon could only surrender to her judgment.

	All the Heaven's Blade ~~Receivers~~, officials and his Master watched him as his punishment was dealt out. Their gazes were cold and icy.		All the Heaven's Blade successors, officials and his Master watched him as his punishment was dealt out. Their gazes were cold and icy.

	The pain jolted him back to reality.		The pain jolted him back to reality.

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	The issue wasn't that Layfon could become stronger after more training. He didn't need training at all.		The issue wasn't that Layfon could become stronger after more training. He didn't need training at all.

	She saw Layfon's true strength in the platoon match just then. Needle Kei and Whirl Kei......He couldn't have mastered that power in a short period of time.		She saw Layfon's true strength in the platoon match just then. Needle Kei (Shin Kei) and Whirl Kei (Senkei) ......He couldn't have mastered that power in a short period of time.

	Vance nodded in agreement. He glanced at the screen that was about to broadcast the fourth match, and turned ~~her~~ gaze back to Karian.		Vance nodded in agreement. He glanced at the screen that was about to broadcast the fourth match, and turned his gaze back to Karian.

	"You seem to know who Layfon Alseif is. Did you know of his identity before this match?"		"You seem to know who Layfon Alseif is. Did you know of his identity before this match?"
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	A kid, who might not even be ten years old yet, easily wielded the long sword and defeated an adult.		A kid, who might not even be ten years old yet, easily wielded the long sword and defeated an adult.

	"It wasn't just men, everyone was overwhelmed and shocked. It was a rare and extraordinary scene. A kid could actually reach the summit of the Military Arts world. I couldn't forget that name. When I saw his name on the scholarship application, it was impossible for me to miss it. For him to settle in Zuellni, at this time, is like the birth of a savior. At the same time, I didn't understand why he left Grendan and wanted to specialize in General Studies. No, actually, I wasn't surprised at him entering General Studies. He doesn't need anyone to teach him Military Arts. Even so, I was still curious about the real reason behind his decision, so I did some investigating, and the results arrived at my desk the day before the opening ceremony."		"It wasn't just men, everyone was overwhelmed and shocked. It was a rare and extraordinary scene. A kid could actually reach the summit of the Military Arts world! I couldn't forget that name. When I saw his name on the scholarship application, it was impossible for me to miss it. For him to settle in Zuellni, at this time, is like the birth of a savior. At the same time, I didn't understand why he left Grendan and wanted to specialize in General Studies. No, actually, I wasn't surprised at him entering General Studies. He doesn't need anyone to teach him Military Arts. Even so, I was still curious about the real reason behind his decision, so I did some investigating, and the results arrived at my desk the day before the opening ceremony."

	"So......"		"So......"
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	"I am hungry."		"I am hungry."

	He hadn't eaten ~~since~~ his stomach had hurt since early this morning. Looking at the basket, now he wanted to eat.		He hadn't eaten as his stomach had hurt since early this morning. Looking at the basket, now he wanted to eat.

	He took a sandwich and bit into it. Feeling the look Meishen was giving him, he ate the sandwich in two bites and washed it down with juice.		He took a sandwich and bit into it. Feeling the look Meishen was giving him, he ate the sandwich in two bites and washed it down with juice.
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	''(I must have rolled too much on the ground.)''		''(I must have rolled too much on the ground.)''

	In the arena, Layfon ~~had~~ had difficulty thinking because of his head bumping here and there. He thought back to the scene of Nina receiving repeated attacks. Compared to his real strength, she wouldn't have let her pain muddle her thoughts.		In the arena, Layfon had difficulty thinking because of his head bumping here and there. He thought back to the scene of Nina receiving repeated attacks. Compared to his real strength, she wouldn't have let her pain muddle her thoughts.

	"I wasn't planning on winning."		"I wasn't planning on winning."