Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume2 Chapter1 - Revision history

Lygophile at 23:54, 22 November 2013

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	''Oh yes, just to say, I'm happy that you haven't given up the Military Arts! But I don't want you to become the Layfon you were in Grendan. I envy the Layfon training with all his concentration on the Military Arts. You looked cool. But I didn't like the Layfon who became a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~. Do you understand the difference?''		''Oh yes, just to say, I'm happy that you haven't given up the Military Arts! But I don't want you to become the Layfon you were in Grendan. I envy the Layfon training with all his concentration on the Military Arts. You looked cool. But I didn't like the Layfon who became a Heaven's Blade successor. Do you understand the difference?''


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	But these three had nothing to do with his transfer. The Student President, Karian Loss, knew from the beginning who Layfon was.		But these three had nothing to do with his transfer. The Student President, Karian Loss, knew from the beginning who Layfon was.

	A Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~ in Grendan.		A Heaven's Blade successor in Grendan.

	"No......I'm getting used to cleaning there already," he said as he smiled at Meishen.		"No......I'm getting used to cleaning there already," he said as he smiled at Meishen.
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	Leerin Marfes.		Leerin Marfes.

	A name she hadn't heard of before. She checked the name of the ~~receiver~~, and held her breath.		A name she hadn't heard of before. She checked the name of the successor, and held her breath.

	It was Layfon.		It was Layfon.
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	"I know."		"I know."

	"Very few people know you were a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~ in Grendan. My brother doesn't plan to spread it around, so you can just ignore his request."		"Very few people know you were a Heaven's Blade successor in Grendan. My brother doesn't plan to spread it around, so you can just ignore his request."

	Almost no one knew it was Layfon who had defeated the attacking filth monsters.		Almost no one knew it was Layfon who had defeated the attacking filth monsters.
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	The few who knew were Karian, Vance, and the members of the 17th platoon.		The few who knew were Karian, Vance, and the members of the 17th platoon.

	Not many people outside of Grendan knew about the Heaven's Blade ~~Receivers~~. But even now, matches for the Heaven's Blade title were being fought fiercely in Grendan. People fought filth monsters and each other for the title of the strongest twelve.		Not many people outside of Grendan knew about the Heaven's Blade successors. But even now, matches for the Heaven's Blade title were being fought fiercely in Grendan. People fought filth monsters and each other for the title of the strongest twelve.

	"That can't be announced casually."		"That can't be announced casually."

	The Queen of Grendan took away Layfon's title as a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~ because he had tainted its name.		The Queen of Grendan took away Layfon's title as a Heaven's Blade successor because he had tainted its name.

	If everyone knew about his title, then they'd all know of his shameful past.		If everyone knew about his title, then they'd all know of his shameful past.

Royaloyalz at 00:48, 3 September 2013

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	"Oh~~Morning!"		"Oh~~Morning!"

	"*cough!"		"cough!"

	The other person gave his back a heavy hit.		The other person gave his back a heavy hit.
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	"......But it was there earlier."		"......But it was there earlier."

	She wanted to cry, her eyes feeling hot and her body weak. She sat down on the ground, hugging her schoolbag and ~~searched~~ in her memories for a hint.		She wanted to cry, her eyes feeling hot and her body weak. She sat down on the ground, hugging her schoolbag and searching in her memories for a hint.

	"......Oh!"		"......Oh!"

Lygophile at 01:05, 17 August 2013

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	"......Nothing. Senpai's worried about the captain, so......" He smiled. Felli glared at him, her pale face turning pink.		"......Nothing. Senpai's worried about the captain, so......" He smiled. Felli glared at him, her pale face turning pink.

	Felli's level of ~~psychokinesis~~ was of the level of a genius, but she hated to use it. She was in the 17th platoon because her brother Karian Loss, the Student President, forced her into it.		Felli's level of Psychokinesis was of the level of a genius, but she hated to use it. She was in the 17th platoon because her brother Karian Loss, the Student President, forced her into it.

	"As if I'd worry about her," she said.		"As if I'd worry about her," she said.
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	A bad quality image. Everything was blurred.		A bad quality image. Everything was blurred.

	This was due to the pollutants in the air, affecting any long range wireless communication. Somehow, only ~~psychokinesis~~ worked well for long-range transmitting, but it was still not possible to establish contact between cities.		This was due to the pollutants in the air, affecting any long range wireless communication. Somehow, only Psychokinesis worked well for long-range transmitting, but it was still not possible to establish contact between cities.

	This image had nothing to do with ~~psychokinesis~~.		This image had nothing to do with Psychokinesis.

	"It's hard to make out, but the location of this image is a mountain about 500 Kimel ahead of Zuellni's current position."		"It's hard to make out, but the location of this image is a mountain about 500 Kimel ahead of Zuellni's current position."

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	In here, where no adults set foot, children were learners and also teachers.		In here, where no adults set foot, children were learners and also teachers.

	This was an Academy City.		This was the Academy City.

	And Zuellni was one of the Academy Cities.		And Zuellni was one of the Academy Cities.
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	"No......I'm getting used to cleaning there already," he said as he smiled at Meishen.		"No......I'm getting used to cleaning there already," he said as he smiled at Meishen.

	The cleaning job in the Central Mechanism ? cleaning the heart of the Regios ? Layfon really had gotten used to it. The repetitive body work was way more relaxing than using his brain.		The cleaning job in the Central Mechanism – cleaning the heart of the Regios – Layfon really had gotten used to it. The repetitive body work was way more relaxing than using his brain.

	"Then what is it?" Mifi asked.		"Then what is it?" Mifi asked.
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	Sharnid's job was to support the team with long range fire.		Sharnid's job was to support the team with long range fire.

	"It won't do to ~~only~~ snipe when we have so few fighters on our team. Just think of it as insurance," Sharnid said. He used his Kei to restore the Dites.		"It won't do to snipe when we have so few fighters on our team. Just think of it as insurance," Sharnid said. He used his Kei to restore the Dites.

	"What a crude appearance!"		"What a crude appearance!"
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	And warred.		And warred.

	The reason behind the fight was the fuel source for the Regios ? selenium mines.		The reason behind the fight was the fuel source for the Regios – selenium mines.

	For some reason, a city would only fight against the same kind of city. To reduce the number of casualties, Academy Cities had introduced the Military Arts competition. But even so, this couldn't change the reality that the losing city might die.		For some reason, a city would only fight against the same kind of city. To reduce the number of casualties, Academy Cities had introduced the Military Arts competition. But even so, this couldn't change the reality that the losing city might die.
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	One of the key people who changed his way of thinking, Nina, was not happy.		One of the key people who changed his way of thinking, Nina, was not happy.

	Against her parents' wishes, Nina ran away from home and came to Zuellni ? Without money, she had to work in the Core Mechanism.		Against her parents' wishes, Nina ran away from home and came to Zuellni – Without money, she had to work in the Core Mechanism.

	Layfon was also half-studying and half-working.		Layfon was also half-studying and half-working.
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	While checking to be sure that the letter really wasn't on her, she couldn't help but think what would happen next.		While checking to be sure that the letter really wasn't on her, she couldn't help but think what would happen next.

	That letter had been stuffed into the crack between the door and the wall with other letters at the dormitory. Besides the letter from her parents, she also found letters from close relatives and friends ? and when Meishen was happily checking the names on the letters, she found this name.		That letter had been stuffed into the crack between the door and the wall with other letters at the dormitory. Besides the letter from her parents, she also found letters from close relatives and friends – and when Meishen was happily checking the names on the letters, she found this name.

	Leerin Marfes.		Leerin Marfes.
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	"Uuuu......"		"Uuuu......"

	She could do nothing without Naruki and Mifi. She hated herself for getting nervous before unfamiliar people. Once again, she returned to the training complex, searching for the letter on the ground ? and failed to find it.		She could do nothing without Naruki and Mifi. She hated herself for getting nervous before unfamiliar people. Once again, she returned to the training complex, searching for the letter on the ground – and failed to find it.


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	"......Nothing. Senpai's worried about the captain, so......" He smiled. Felli glared at him, her pale face turning pink.		"......Nothing. Senpai's worried about the captain, so......" He smiled. Felli glared at him, her pale face turning pink.

	Felli's level of ~~Psychokinesis~~ was of the level of a genius, but she hated to use it. She was in the 17th platoon because her brother Karian Loss, the Student President, forced her into it.		Felli's level of psychokinesis was of the level of a genius, but she hated to use it. She was in the 17th platoon because her brother Karian Loss, the Student President, forced her into it.

	"As if I'd worry about her," she said.		"As if I'd worry about her," she said.
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	In the end, Layfon made the dinner.		In the end, Layfon made the dinner.

	Because there was too much potato in the salad bowl, he used the potato to make another dish ? one with mushrooms, chicken fillets and cream. They had plenty of ingredients to choose from. Next came the bread.		Because there was too much potato in the salad bowl, he used the potato to make another dish – one with mushrooms, chicken fillets and cream. They had plenty of ingredients to choose from. Next came the bread.

	And that was their dinner.		And that was their dinner.
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	A bad quality image. Everything was blurred.		A bad quality image. Everything was blurred.

	This was due to the pollutants in the air, affecting any long range wireless communication. Somehow, only ~~Psychokinesis~~ worked well for long-range transmitting, but it was still not possible to establish contact between cities.		This was due to the pollutants in the air, affecting any long range wireless communication. Somehow, only psychokinesis worked well for long-range transmitting, but it was still not possible to establish contact between cities.

	This image had nothing to do with ~~Psychokinesis~~.		This image had nothing to do with psychokinesis.

	"It's hard to make out, but the location of this image is a mountain about 500 Kimel ahead of Zuellni's current position."		"It's hard to make out, but the location of this image is a mountain about 500 Kimel ahead of Zuellni's current position."
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	"It's probably a male. Compared to the size of this mountain, the filth monster's either in its first or second phase."		"It's probably a male. Compared to the size of this mountain, the filth monster's either in its first or second phase."

	Newly born filth monsters were asexual ? not male nor female. After a larva molted, it was a male. It absorbed pollutants from the air and went about searching for prey......Humans. Molting was measured in phases. The more it molted, the stronger it became. And as it approached the mating season, the male molted one more time to become female. A gravid (pregnant) female. It then buried itself beneath the ground and hibernated until the eggs hatched.		Newly born filth monsters were asexual – not male nor female. After a larva molted, it was a male. It absorbed pollutants from the air and went about searching for prey......Humans. Molting was measured in phases. The more it molted, the stronger it became. And as it approached the mating season, the male molted one more time to become female. A gravid (pregnant) female. It then buried itself beneath the ground and hibernated until the eggs hatched.

	"The city I was born in hadn't come across any filth monsters for a long time, so I can't really tell how strong this is. You?"		"The city I was born in hadn't come across any filth monsters for a long time, so I can't really tell how strong this is. You?"

Lygophile at 00:58, 17 August 2013

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	"No......I'm getting used to cleaning there already," he said as he smiled at Meishen.		"No......I'm getting used to cleaning there already," he said as he smiled at Meishen.

	The cleaning job in the Central Mechanism – cleaning the heart of the Regios – Layfon really had gotten used to it. The repetitive body work was way more relaxing than using his brain.		The cleaning job in the Central Mechanism ? cleaning the heart of the Regios ? Layfon really had gotten used to it. The repetitive body work was way more relaxing than using his brain.

	"Then what is it?" Mifi asked.		"Then what is it?" Mifi asked.
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	And warred.		And warred.

	The reason behind the fight was the fuel source for the Regios – selenium mines.		The reason behind the fight was the fuel source for the Regios ? selenium mines.

	For some reason, a city would only fight against the same kind of city. To reduce the number of casualties, Academy Cities had introduced the Military Arts competition. But even so, this couldn't change the reality that the losing city might die.		For some reason, a city would only fight against the same kind of city. To reduce the number of casualties, Academy Cities had introduced the Military Arts competition. But even so, this couldn't change the reality that the losing city might die.
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	One of the key people who changed his way of thinking, Nina, was not happy.		One of the key people who changed his way of thinking, Nina, was not happy.

	Against her parents' wishes, Nina ran away from home and came to Zuellni – Without money, she had to work in the Core Mechanism.		Against her parents' wishes, Nina ran away from home and came to Zuellni ? Without money, she had to work in the Core Mechanism.

	Layfon was also half-studying and half-working.		Layfon was also half-studying and half-working.
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	While checking to be sure that the letter really wasn't on her, she couldn't help but think what would happen next.		While checking to be sure that the letter really wasn't on her, she couldn't help but think what would happen next.

	That letter had been stuffed into the crack between the door and the wall with other letters at the dormitory. Besides the letter from her parents, she also found letters from close relatives and friends – and when Meishen was happily checking the names on the letters, she found this name.		That letter had been stuffed into the crack between the door and the wall with other letters at the dormitory. Besides the letter from her parents, she also found letters from close relatives and friends ? and when Meishen was happily checking the names on the letters, she found this name.

	Leerin Marfes.		Leerin Marfes.
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	"Uuuu......"		"Uuuu......"

	She could do nothing without Naruki and Mifi. She hated herself for getting nervous before unfamiliar people. Once again, she returned to the training complex, searching for the letter on the ground – and failed to find it.		She could do nothing without Naruki and Mifi. She hated herself for getting nervous before unfamiliar people. Once again, she returned to the training complex, searching for the letter on the ground ? and failed to find it.


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	"......Nothing. Senpai's worried about the captain, so......" He smiled. Felli glared at him, her pale face turning pink.		"......Nothing. Senpai's worried about the captain, so......" He smiled. Felli glared at him, her pale face turning pink.

	Felli's level of ~~psychokinesis~~ was of the level of a genius, but she hated to use it. She was in the 17th platoon because her brother Karian Loss, the Student President, forced her into it.		Felli's level of Psychokinesis was of the level of a genius, but she hated to use it. She was in the 17th platoon because her brother Karian Loss, the Student President, forced her into it.

	"As if I'd worry about her," she said.		"As if I'd worry about her," she said.
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	In the end, Layfon made the dinner.		In the end, Layfon made the dinner.

	Because there was too much potato in the salad bowl, he used the potato to make another dish – one with mushrooms, chicken fillets and cream. They had plenty of ingredients to choose from. Next came the bread.		Because there was too much potato in the salad bowl, he used the potato to make another dish ? one with mushrooms, chicken fillets and cream. They had plenty of ingredients to choose from. Next came the bread.

	And that was their dinner.		And that was their dinner.
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	A bad quality image. Everything was blurred.		A bad quality image. Everything was blurred.

	This was due to the pollutants in the air, affecting any long range wireless communication. Somehow, only ~~psychokinesis~~ worked well for long-range transmitting, but it was still not possible to establish contact between cities.		This was due to the pollutants in the air, affecting any long range wireless communication. Somehow, only Psychokinesis worked well for long-range transmitting, but it was still not possible to establish contact between cities.

	This image had nothing to do with ~~psychokinesis~~.		This image had nothing to do with Psychokinesis.

	"It's hard to make out, but the location of this image is a mountain about 500 Kimel ahead of Zuellni's current position."		"It's hard to make out, but the location of this image is a mountain about 500 Kimel ahead of Zuellni's current position."
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	"It's probably a male. Compared to the size of this mountain, the filth monster's either in its first or second phase."		"It's probably a male. Compared to the size of this mountain, the filth monster's either in its first or second phase."

	Newly born filth monsters were asexual – not male nor female. After a larva molted, it was a male. It absorbed pollutants from the air and went about searching for prey......Humans. Molting was measured in phases. The more it molted, the stronger it became. And as it approached the mating season, the male molted one more time to become female. A gravid (pregnant) female. It then buried itself beneath the ground and hibernated until the eggs hatched.		Newly born filth monsters were asexual ? not male nor female. After a larva molted, it was a male. It absorbed pollutants from the air and went about searching for prey......Humans. Molting was measured in phases. The more it molted, the stronger it became. And as it approached the mating season, the male molted one more time to become female. A gravid (pregnant) female. It then buried itself beneath the ground and hibernated until the eggs hatched.

	"The city I was born in hadn't come across any filth monsters for a long time, so I can't really tell how strong this is. You?"		"The city I was born in hadn't come across any filth monsters for a long time, so I can't really tell how strong this is. You?"

Lygophile at 02:36, 27 June 2013

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	In here, where no adults set foot, children were learners and also teachers.		In here, where no adults set foot, children were learners and also teachers.

	This was ~~the~~ Academy City.		This was an Academy City.

	And Zuellni was one of the Academy Cities.		And Zuellni was one of the Academy Cities.
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	Sharnid's job was to support the team with long range fire.		Sharnid's job was to support the team with long range fire.

	"It won't do to snipe when we have so few fighters on our team. Just think of it as insurance," Sharnid said. He used his Kei to restore the Dites.		"It won't do to only snipe when we have so few fighters on our team. Just think of it as insurance," Sharnid said. He used his Kei to restore the Dites.

	"What a crude appearance!"		"What a crude appearance!"

Veritatis cupitor at 11:31, 6 June 2012

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	"But I still don't get it."		"But I still don't get it."

	"Are you still thinking?" Felli said, ~~angry~~. "Please slow down."		"Are you still thinking?" Felli said, angrily. "Please slow down."

	"Oh, sorry." He had sped up his pace unconsciously.		"Oh, sorry." He had sped up his pace unconsciously.

Veritatis cupitor at 11:23, 6 June 2012

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	She realized this when she was panting heavily and had to stop. She pressed her palm against on her chest, just above her heart, and realized that feeling of coarseness was gone.		She realized this when she was panting heavily and had to stop. She pressed her palm against her chest, just above her heart, and realized that feeling of coarseness was gone.

	"Heh?"		"Heh?"

Veritatis cupitor at 10:35, 6 June 2012

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	It was a casual swing from high to low. The remaining Kei on the blade disappeared along with the scattering green light of the Dite.		It was a casual swing from high to low. The remaining Kei on the blade disappeared along with the scattering green light of the Dite.

	He confirmed his body condition by swinging the sword, and while ~~dong~~ that, he adjusted his different moves.		He confirmed his body condition by swinging the sword, and while doing that, he adjusted his different moves.

	Slowly swinging the sword again and again, focusing his attention to one single point. He no longer detected the color of Kei emitting from the blade. The feeling he had had till now, of the changes in his nerves, slowly extended to the outside, resulting in the feeling that Layfon was swinging the sword like a machine.		Slowly swinging the sword again and again, focusing his attention to one single point. He no longer detected the color of Kei emitting from the blade. The feeling he had had till now, of the changes in his nerves, slowly extended to the outside, resulting in the feeling that Layfon was swinging the sword like a machine.

Zero2001 at 15:03, 8 August 2011

2011-08-08T15:03:13Z

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