Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume2 Chapter3 - Revision history

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	===Chapter 3: Cry for ~~what~~?===		===Chapter 3: Cry for What?===

	That night, she was cleaning the floor by herself with a cloth.		That night, she was cleaning the floor by herself with a cloth.

Lygophile at 23:56, 22 November 2013

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	''(That power......)''		''(That power......)''

	In Grendan, a place with more experience fighting in Military Arts matches and against filth monsters than any other city, Layfon had become one of the Twelve Heaven's Blade ~~Receivers~~.		In Grendan, a place with more experience fighting in Military Arts matches and against filth monsters than any other city, Layfon had become one of the Twelve Heaven's Blade successors.

	''(Is scary......)''		''(Is scary......)''
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	He got this injury when practicing with the steel threads.		He got this injury when practicing with the steel threads.

	When he had become a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~, he learned ways to fight filth monsters from the other Heaven's Blade ~~Receivers~~.		When he had become a Heaven's Blade successor, he learned ways to fight filth monsters from the other Heaven's Blade successors.

	The Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~ who used steel threads was Lintence Savoleid Harden.		The Heaven's Blade successor who used steel threads was Lintence Savoleid Harden.

	At first, Layfon trained with just one thread. At that time, he already knew how to extend his Kei into his weapon and feel the weapon as part of his nervous system.		At first, Layfon trained with just one thread. At that time, he already knew how to extend his Kei into his weapon and feel the weapon as part of his nervous system.
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	Rather than anger, a strange feeling rose in him as he thought about the past. Gazing at the scar, he laughed dryly.		Rather than anger, a strange feeling rose in him as he thought about the past. Gazing at the scar, he laughed dryly.

	Nothing had changed from then. The only condition to become a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~ was to keep on becoming stronger, so he didn't have time to be scared of the weapon. He had then continued to practice with the steel threads alone. Lintence had also fallen silent, interrupting only when needed.		Nothing had changed from then. The only condition to become a Heaven's Blade successor was to keep on becoming stronger, so he didn't have time to be scared of the weapon. He had then continued to practice with the steel threads alone. Lintence had also fallen silent, interrupting only when needed.

	Every Heaven's Blade successor knew it was a lonely journey to reach the top by competing with each other. Young Layfon also had to satisfy that condition. He didn't have to be asked to satisfy it, because he was already fulfilling it.		Every Heaven's Blade successor knew it was a lonely journey to reach the top by competing with each other. Young Layfon also had to satisfy that condition. He didn't have to be asked to satisfy it, because he was already fulfilling it.
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	He knew an uncontrollable power could harm its user, so before he managed to fully control that power, he decided to seal it inside himself.		He knew an uncontrollable power could harm its user, so before he managed to fully control that power, he decided to seal it inside himself.

	Lintence hadn't taught Layfon anything beyond the basics of the steel threads. The duty of a Heaven's Blade ~~Receiver~~ was to become strong himself, not to help another become strong. Lintence had already broken that mutual rule by teaching Layfon the steel threads technique, so Layfon continued to practice without any complaints.		Lintence hadn't taught Layfon anything beyond the basics of the steel threads. The duty of a Heaven's Blade successor was to become strong himself, not to help another become strong. Lintence had already broken that mutual rule by teaching Layfon the steel threads technique, so Layfon continued to practice without any complaints.

	He hadn't sustained an injury as deep and severe as that one since then, but he still got many other injuries. Those injuries had all healed, disappeared, leaving many scars.		He hadn't sustained an injury as deep and severe as that one since then, but he still got many other injuries. Those injuries had all healed, disappeared, leaving many scars.

Royaloyalz at 02:49, 3 September 2013

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	A girl's name.		A girl's name.

	Felli couldn't hand the letter over like this. She'd feel guilty for giving it back with signs the letter had been opened.		Felli couldn't hand the letter over like this. She'd feel guilty for giving it back with signs that the letter had been opened.

	''(As if I had peeked at the letter.)''		''(As if I had peeked at the letter.)''
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	"You should have told us earlier."		"You should have told us earlier."

	"Uhhh, it was my mistake. Sorry. Right, you must be hungry after all that exercise, Layfon. Because of me the schedule was pushed back so late. Felli, take him to a good restaurant and have something to eat," Karian said, took out some bills from his wallet and handed them to Felli. Before Layfon and Felli could say anything, the Student President had already left them.		"Uhhh, it was my mistake. Sorry. Right, you must be hungry after all that exercise, Layfon. Because of me the schedule was pushed back so late. Felli, take him to a good restaurant and have something to eat," Karian said, and took out some bills from his wallet and handed them to Felli. Before Layfon and Felli could say anything, the Student President had already left them.

	"Got it," Felli murmured to the speechless Layfon.		"Got it," Felli murmured to the speechless Layfon.
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	They were traces left from his contact with pollutant. When Layfon was being treated in the hospital, the doctor said the scars would fade given enough time. Yet even now, he could still find traces of their existence.		They were traces left from his contact with pollutant. When Layfon was being treated in the hospital, the doctor said the scars would fade given enough time. Yet even now, he could still find traces of their existence.

	He thought his injuries were nothing, but he started doubting that when he saw the reaction of Nina and others.		He thought his injuries were nothing, but he started doubting that when he saw the reaction of Nina and the others.

	It would be good if people looked at his scar and didn't think they were responsible.		It would be good if people looked at his scar and didn't think they were responsible.

Lygophile at 01:05, 17 August 2013

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	But she didn't wish for a perfect team at that time. It was just that her way of thinking had changed since then.		But she didn't wish for a perfect team at that time. It was just that her way of thinking had changed since then.

	Nobody was better as a sniper than Sharnid. She hadn't seen the true worth of Felli's ~~psychokinesis~~, but the girl's ability must be extremely high for the Student President to recommend her. Harley's knowledge and skill in Dites hadn't failed her.		Nobody was better as a sniper than Sharnid. She hadn't seen the true worth of Felli's Psychokinesis, but the girl's ability must be extremely high for the Student President to recommend her. Harley's knowledge and skill in Dites hadn't failed her.

	Nina thought all she needed was for herself to become stronger.		Nina thought all she needed was for herself to become stronger.

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	But she didn't wish for a perfect team at that time. It was just that her way of thinking had changed since then.		But she didn't wish for a perfect team at that time. It was just that her way of thinking had changed since then.

	Nobody was better as a sniper than Sharnid. She hadn't seen the true worth of Felli's ~~Psychokinesis~~, but the girl's ability must be extremely high for the Student President to recommend her. Harley's knowledge and skill in Dites hadn't failed her.		Nobody was better as a sniper than Sharnid. She hadn't seen the true worth of Felli's psychokinesis, but the girl's ability must be extremely high for the Student President to recommend her. Harley's knowledge and skill in Dites hadn't failed her.

	Nina thought all she needed was for herself to become stronger.		Nina thought all she needed was for herself to become stronger.
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	Layfon had pushed back that wave. He wiped out all the larvae and killed the mother all by himself.		Layfon had pushed back that wave. He wiped out all the larvae and killed the mother all by himself.

	She was truly scared when she saw him appearing on the other side of the air shield ? in a place where the air was polluted, filled with harmful substances.		She was truly scared when she saw him appearing on the other side of the air shield – in a place where the air was polluted, filled with harmful substances.

	Was he human?		Was he human?
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	This was the entrance to the Military Arts training complex.		This was the entrance to the Military Arts training complex.

	The girl that Felli saw stood up from the steps. She was Layfon's classmate ? Meishen Trinden.		The girl that Felli saw stood up from the steps. She was Layfon's classmate – Meishen Trinden.

	"Ex-excuse......me."		"Ex-excuse......me."
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	The letter.		The letter.

	Besides the letter that Meishen had dropped when she fled, she ? It wasn't possible for her to come and find Felli, especially all by herself.		Besides the letter that Meishen had dropped when she fled, she – It wasn't possible for her to come and find Felli, especially all by herself.

	The letter was for Layfon.		The letter was for Layfon.
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	''(Why did this letter come to my hand?)''		''(Why did this letter come to my hand?)''

	She resented this unfair coincidence, but not the cause of it ? Meishen. The girl must have received the letter under some circumstance......Like a letter being delivered to the wrong place.		She resented this unfair coincidence, but not the cause of it – Meishen. The girl must have received the letter under some circumstance......Like a letter being delivered to the wrong place.

	''(Damn......)''		''(Damn......)''
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	The sword penetrated the ground, and Layfon stopped moving. As numerous soil particles rained down on him, Internal Kei gathered in his feet.		The sword penetrated the ground, and Layfon stopped moving. As numerous soil particles rained down on him, Internal Kei gathered in his feet.

	Internal-type Kei ? Whirl Kei.		Internal-type Kei – Whirl Kei.

	[[Image:CSR vol02 135.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:CSR vol02 135.jpg\|thumb]]
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	The fact that filth monsters were near Zuellni was top secret, but it wouldn't make sense to hide that from the alchemists, so Karian had divulged it to Harley and his camp of inventors.		The fact that filth monsters were near Zuellni was top secret, but it wouldn't make sense to hide that from the alchemists, so Karian had divulged it to Harley and his camp of inventors.

	But not everyone in the 17th platoon knew ? not Nina and Sharnid. Layfon had also asked Harley to keep it a secret from them.		But not everyone in the 17th platoon knew – not Nina and Sharnid. Layfon had also asked Harley to keep it a secret from them.

	"We can only give up if that's the fate of the city."		"We can only give up if that's the fate of the city."
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	Layfon couldn't help but imitate him, thinking he could also manage that technique. The Lintence watching him practice, as if putting him under surveillance, gradually faded from his vision.		Layfon couldn't help but imitate him, thinking he could also manage that technique. The Lintence watching him practice, as if putting him under surveillance, gradually faded from his vision.

	He tried the technique when he was alone......Cut by his own steel thread, he had fainted ~~from~~ intense pain and blood loss.		He tried the technique when he was alone......Cut by his own steel thread, he had fainted through intense pain and blood loss.

	When he came to, he was lying on a hospital bed.		When he came to, he was lying on a hospital bed.
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	"Are you a moron?" was what he heard from Lintence when he opened his eyes.		"Are you a moron?" was what he heard from Lintence when he opened his eyes.

	"Would spiders ~~get stuck on~~ their webs? Then do those spiders that do have a right to live? A spider that's not a spider wants to become a spider. You need a thousand times, a million times, a billion times more practice than a true spider to become one. Moron! You're worse than a newly born tiny spider. It's too soon to want to weave a spider web when you don't even know how to emit silk. Go and start practicing from the very beginning!"		"Would spiders stick to their webs? Then do those spiders that do have a right to live? A spider that's not a spider wants to become a spider. You need a thousand times, a million times, a billion times more practice than a true spider to become one. Moron! You're worse than a newly born tiny spider. It's too soon to want to weave a spider web when you don't even know how to emit silk. Go and start practicing from the very beginning!"

	Layfon got quite an earful.		Layfon got quite an earful.

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	But she didn't wish for a perfect team at that time. It was just that her way of thinking had changed since then.		But she didn't wish for a perfect team at that time. It was just that her way of thinking had changed since then.

	Nobody was better as a sniper than Sharnid. She hadn't seen the true worth of Felli's ~~psychokinesis~~, but the girl's ability must be extremely high for the Student President to recommend her. Harley's knowledge and skill in Dites hadn't failed her.		Nobody was better as a sniper than Sharnid. She hadn't seen the true worth of Felli's Psychokinesis, but the girl's ability must be extremely high for the Student President to recommend her. Harley's knowledge and skill in Dites hadn't failed her.

	Nina thought all she needed was for herself to become stronger.		Nina thought all she needed was for herself to become stronger.
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	Layfon had pushed back that wave. He wiped out all the larvae and killed the mother all by himself.		Layfon had pushed back that wave. He wiped out all the larvae and killed the mother all by himself.

	She was truly scared when she saw him appearing on the other side of the air shield – in a place where the air was polluted, filled with harmful substances.		She was truly scared when she saw him appearing on the other side of the air shield ? in a place where the air was polluted, filled with harmful substances.

	Was he human?		Was he human?
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	This was the entrance to the Military Arts training complex.		This was the entrance to the Military Arts training complex.

	The girl that Felli saw stood up from the steps. She was Layfon's classmate – Meishen Trinden.		The girl that Felli saw stood up from the steps. She was Layfon's classmate ? Meishen Trinden.

	"Ex-excuse......me."		"Ex-excuse......me."
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	The letter.		The letter.

	Besides the letter that Meishen had dropped when she fled, she – It wasn't possible for her to come and find Felli, especially all by herself.		Besides the letter that Meishen had dropped when she fled, she ? It wasn't possible for her to come and find Felli, especially all by herself.

	The letter was for Layfon.		The letter was for Layfon.
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	''(Why did this letter come to my hand?)''		''(Why did this letter come to my hand?)''

	She resented this unfair coincidence, but not the cause of it – Meishen. The girl must have received the letter under some circumstance......Like a letter being delivered to the wrong place.		She resented this unfair coincidence, but not the cause of it ? Meishen. The girl must have received the letter under some circumstance......Like a letter being delivered to the wrong place.

	''(Damn......)''		''(Damn......)''
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	The sword penetrated the ground, and Layfon stopped moving. As numerous soil particles rained down on him, Internal Kei gathered in his feet.		The sword penetrated the ground, and Layfon stopped moving. As numerous soil particles rained down on him, Internal Kei gathered in his feet.

	Internal-type Kei – Whirl Kei.		Internal-type Kei ? Whirl Kei.

	[[Image:CSR vol02 135.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:CSR vol02 135.jpg\|thumb]]
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	The fact that filth monsters were near Zuellni was top secret, but it wouldn't make sense to hide that from the alchemists, so Karian had divulged it to Harley and his camp of inventors.		The fact that filth monsters were near Zuellni was top secret, but it wouldn't make sense to hide that from the alchemists, so Karian had divulged it to Harley and his camp of inventors.

	But not everyone in the 17th platoon knew – not Nina and Sharnid. Layfon had also asked Harley to keep it a secret from them.		But not everyone in the 17th platoon knew ? not Nina and Sharnid. Layfon had also asked Harley to keep it a secret from them.

	"We can only give up if that's the fate of the city."		"We can only give up if that's the fate of the city."

Lygophile at 03:04, 27 June 2013

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	Layfon couldn't help but imitate him, thinking he could also manage that technique. The Lintence watching him practice, as if putting him under surveillance, gradually faded from his vision.		Layfon couldn't help but imitate him, thinking he could also manage that technique. The Lintence watching him practice, as if putting him under surveillance, gradually faded from his vision.

	He tried the technique when he was alone......Cut by his own steel thread, he had fainted ~~through~~ intense pain and blood loss.		He tried the technique when he was alone......Cut by his own steel thread, he had fainted from intense pain and blood loss.

	When he came to, he was lying on a hospital bed.		When he came to, he was lying on a hospital bed.
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	"Are you a moron?" was what he heard from Lintence when he opened his eyes.		"Are you a moron?" was what he heard from Lintence when he opened his eyes.

	"Would spiders ~~stick to~~ their webs? Then do those spiders that do have a right to live? A spider that's not a spider wants to become a spider. You need a thousand times, a million times, a billion times more practice than a true spider to become one. Moron! You're worse than a newly born tiny spider. It's too soon to want to weave a spider web when you don't even know how to emit silk. Go and start practicing from the very beginning!"		"Would spiders get stuck on their webs? Then do those spiders that do have a right to live? A spider that's not a spider wants to become a spider. You need a thousand times, a million times, a billion times more practice than a true spider to become one. Moron! You're worse than a newly born tiny spider. It's too soon to want to weave a spider web when you don't even know how to emit silk. Go and start practicing from the very beginning!"

	Layfon got quite an earful.		Layfon got quite an earful.

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	"No, please don't say that as if everything's been decided. Besides, we aren't old enough to drink alcohol."		"No, please don't say that as if everything's been decided. Besides, we aren't old enough to drink alcohol."

	Moreover, ~~both Layfon and Felli~~ wouldn't suit ~~that kind of atmosphere~~.		Moreover, that kind of atmosphere wouldn't suit Layfon and Felli.

	Layfon wasn't solemn enough to have to go to a bar, and Felli's crisp and beautiful face gave off a feeling different from an adult's.		Layfon wasn't solemn enough to have to go to a bar, and Felli's crisp and beautiful face gave off a feeling different from an adult's.

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	"You didn't say not to wait for you. Besides, you're pretty frail. It's dangerous for you to head back alone."		"You didn't say not to wait for you. Besides, you're pretty frail. It's dangerous for you to head back alone."

	"Hahaha, ~~how~~ extreme a way of putting it. Sorry for making you guys wait, but I've got something else I must do, so I'll be heading off to the Student Council room. You can go back first."		"Hahaha, what an extreme way of putting it. Sorry for making you guys wait, but I've got something else I must do, so I'll be heading off to the Student Council room. You can go back first."

	"You should have told us earlier."		"You should have told us earlier."

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	Training ended without incident. Layfon thought the cooperation of the team as a whole was better than when he first joined. He could feel Sharnid's eyes when he was providing support from the rear, and Felli's speed at conveying intelligence, though not as fast as the time when the filth monsters attacked Zuellni, wasn't as slow as before.		Training ended without incident. Layfon thought the cooperation of the team as a whole was better than when he first joined. He could feel Sharnid's eyes when he was providing support from the rear, and Felli's speed at conveying intelligence, though not as fast as the time when the filth monsters attacked Zuellni, it wasn't as slow as before either.

	They had three rounds of mock training against the drones. They won all three matches, and there was nothing they could comment on about their timing. Even so, Nina's distant expression remained.		They had three rounds of mock training against the drones. They won all three matches, and there was nothing they could comment on about their timing. Even so, Nina's distant expression remained.