Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume6 Chapter1 - Revision history

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	===Chapter 1: In a ~~broken house~~===		===Chapter 1: In a Broken House===

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Chapter 1: In a broken house

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	"Grendan, as for residence......" she gave it too but she felt strange about it. They were in Myath. What was the point of giving them her address in Grendan?		"Grendan, as for residence......" she gave it too but she felt strange about it. They were in Myath. What was the point of giving them her address in Grendan?

	"OK," Roy nodded at the document in his hand. Leerin felt ~~relived~~.		"OK," Roy nodded at the document in his hand. Leerin felt relieved.

	(Ah, I see. He's confirming whether it's me.)		(Ah, I see. He's confirming whether it's me.)

Royaloyalz at 09:26, 10 September 2013

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	"Seems so," she replied.		"Seems so," she replied.

	The driver was the talkative type. Perhaps he was always driving outside cities, in places without protection, his attitude was a bit annoying, but he was a nice person. He had said, "Listen up, Mr, Mrs, and Ms.........All passengers. In case, just in case this is your first time leaving a city, then there're some principles you must abide. Even if you find it unreasonable, you must not resist the government of other cities. Isn't that normal? Yes. You must obey the government. Still, you can expect to see habits and laws in other cities that will surprise you. That isn't a problem of being strange. Perhaps they might find your city strange. You ask why, don't all cities function the same? It's the truth. Understand? It's the feeling of unfamiliarity."		The driver was the talkative type. Perhaps he was always driving outside cities, in places without protection, because his attitude was a bit annoying, but he was a nice person. He had said, "Listen up, Mr, Mrs, and Ms.........All passengers. In case, just in case this is your first time leaving a city, then there're some principles you must abide. Even if you find it unreasonable, you must not resist the government of other cities. Isn't that normal? Yes. You must obey the government. Still, you can expect to see habits and laws in other cities that will surprise you. That isn't a problem of being strange. Perhaps they might find your city strange. You may ask why, don't all cities function the same? It's the truth. Understand? It's the feeling of unfamiliarity."

	.........Anyway, that driver really talked a lot.		.........Anyway, that driver really talked a lot.
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	(How can I die here.) Leerin shivered.		(How can I die here.) Leerin shivered.

	They left the corridor and walked down the stairs rather than ~~taking~~ the lift. They were taken to the reception hall. No one lived here. There were a lot of people that Leerin didn't know. They probably came here on other roaming buses. They came here to change roaming buses to get to other cities. They were travelers who couldn't even get to cities that they had once visited.		They left the corridor and walked down the stairs rather than take the lift. They were taken to the reception hall. No one lived here. There were a lot of people that Leerin didn't know. They probably came here on other roaming buses. They came here to change roaming buses to get to other cities. They were travelers who couldn't even get to cities that they had once visited.

	(Yes.........)		(Yes.........)
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	"Well, we couldn't do anything even if we knew," he said in a relaxed manner.		"Well, we couldn't do anything even if we knew," he said in a relaxed manner.

	Feeling as if a cold bucket of water had been upended on her curiosity, she waited for the check with displeasure. She waited for a long time. This wasn't the only facility with living quarters. If other places were undergoing the same process, Myath probably didn't have enough people for the job. She waited while thinking of other irrelevant things, and finally, it was her turn. The tea room in the reception hall was taken to ~~use~~ as part of the checking process. The tables were taken away and only five were left. Leerin was led to the table on the left hand side to face the same young man.		Feeling as if a cold bucket of water had been upended on her curiosity, she waited for the check with displeasure. She waited for a long time. This wasn't the only facility with living quarters. If other places were undergoing the same process, Myath probably didn't have enough people for the job. She waited while thinking of other irrelevant things, and finally, it was her turn. The tea room in the reception hall was taken to be used as part of the checking process. The tables were taken away and only five were left. Leerin was led to the table on the left hand side to face the same young man.

	"Nice to meet you. I'm captain of the 1st platoon, Roy Antorio."		"Nice to meet you. I'm captain of the 1st platoon, Roy Antorio."
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	"Then, to the next question."		"Then, to the next question."

	Roy looked tired. He had asked the same questions of different ~~passenger~~. His questions were casual, but sometimes he'd ask some serious questions. Leerin felt tired too.		Roy looked tired. He had asked the same questions of different passengers. His questions were casual, but sometimes he'd ask some serious questions. Leerin felt tired too.

	"Thanks," Roy said, and Leerin sighed.		"Thanks," Roy said, and Leerin sighed.

Editstuff12: /* Chapter 1: In a broken house */

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	"But a sword that he can't use to its fullest potential is the same as a rusty katana. It's the fate of giving up."		"But a sword that he can't use to its fullest potential is the same as a rusty katana. It's the fate of giving up."

	Myunfa heard loneliness in Fermaus' voice. When Layfon arrived at the destination on his bike, the ground had already cracked apart, spilling out the larvae. The larvae crawled out of the hard ground like water shooting forth from a broken pipe. They spilled out and spread across the earth.		Myunfa heard loneliness in Fermaus' voice.




			When Layfon arrived at the destination on his bike, the ground had already cracked apart, spilling out the larvae. The larvae crawled out of the hard ground like water shooting forth from a broken pipe. They spilled out and spread across the earth.

	"I've confirmed it through my eyes."		"I've confirmed it through my eyes."

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	This wasn't the first time she had been in an Academy City, Myunfa Rufa thought as she stood beside the leader.		This wasn't the first time she had been in an Academy City, Myunfa Rufa thought as she stood beside the leader.

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	Fermaus was the one who had picked up Myunfa. He had looked after her for seven years now, but she had only recently managed to understand how he thought.		Fermaus was the one who had picked up Myunfa. He had looked after her for seven years now, but she had only recently managed to understand how he thought.

	Fermaus sighed at the strength of the genius ~~psychokinesist~~ – Felli Loss.		Fermaus sighed at the strength of the genius Psychokinesist – Felli Loss.

	"If you two fought, who would win~?"		"If you two fought, who would win~?"
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	"Any other reaction?"		"Any other reaction?"

	[Straight in your path. The information came from the flake on the drone so the ~~psychokinetic~~ power is lacking. I doubt the accuracy of the intelligence. I can get more detailed information if we get three days closer.]		[Straight in your path. The information came from the flake on the drone so the Psychokinetic power is lacking. I doubt the accuracy of the intelligence. I can get more detailed information if we get three days closer.]

	"I got it. Please return for resupplying."		"I got it. Please return for resupplying."

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	This wasn't the first time she had been in an Academy City, Myunfa Rufa thought as she stood beside the leader.		This wasn't the first time she had been in an Academy City, Myunfa Rufa thought as she stood beside the leader.

	No Academy City would be very wealthy. Most of its income would have been spent sustaining the livelihood of students and maintenance of facilities. As such, the Salinvan Guidance Mercenary Gang that Myunfa was in usually wouldn't be given VIP treatment. Though she didn't have a map, she knew around an Academy City ~~existed~~ strong Military Artists or another city, which explained the low probability of filth monsters attacking Academy Cities. One probably wouldn't know this truth if one only spent his entire life in one city, but someone had planned the locations of different Regios.		No Academy City would be very wealthy. Most of its income would have been spent sustaining the livelihood of students and maintenance of facilities. As such, the Salinvan Guidance Mercenary Gang that Myunfa was in usually wouldn't be given VIP treatment. Though she didn't have a map, she knew around an Academy City would be strong Military Artists or another city, which explained the low probability of filth monsters attacking Academy Cities. One probably wouldn't know this truth if one only spent his entire life in one city, but someone had planned the locations of different Regios.

	(I never thought of that before I entered the Mercenary Gang.)		(I never thought of that before I entered the Mercenary Gang.)
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	Layfon was now fighting the larvae in a place Myunfa couldn't see.		Layfon was now fighting the larvae in a place Myunfa couldn't see.

	"But ~~the~~ sword that he can't use to its fullest potential is the same as a rusty katana. It's the fate of giving up."		"But a sword that he can't use to its fullest potential is the same as a rusty katana. It's the fate of giving up."

	Myunfa heard loneliness in Fermaus' voice. When Layfon arrived at the destination on his bike, the ground had already cracked apart, spilling out the larvae. The larvae crawled out of the hard ground like water shooting forth from a broken pipe. They spilled out and spread across the earth.		Myunfa heard loneliness in Fermaus' voice. When Layfon arrived at the destination on his bike, the ground had already cracked apart, spilling out the larvae. The larvae crawled out of the hard ground like water shooting forth from a broken pipe. They spilled out and spread across the earth.
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	(That's true arrogance.)		(That's true arrogance.)

	He tossed away ~~the thinking to solve~~ this problem on his own. After looking at the fight of the Mercenary Gang........ Layfon thought himself too arrogant.		He tossed away his thoughts of solving this problem on his own. After looking at the fight of the Mercenary Gang........ Layfon thought himself too arrogant.

	"Did you......find senpai?"		"Did you......find senpai?"
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	"Seems so," she replied.		"Seems so," she replied.

	The driver was the talkative type. Perhaps he was always driving outside cities, in places without protection, his attitude was a bit annoying, but he was a nice person. He had said, "Listen up, Mr, Mrs, and Ms.........All passengers. In case, just in case this is your first time leaving a city, then there're some principles you must abide. Even if you find it unreasonable, you must not resist the government of other cities. Isn't that normal? Yes. You must obey the government. Still, you can expect to see habits and laws in other cities that will surprise you. That isn't a problem of being strange. Perhaps they might find your city strange. You ask why, ~~isn~~'t ~~a city functioning normally~~? ~~That~~'s the truth. Understand? It's the feeling of unfamiliarity."		The driver was the talkative type. Perhaps he was always driving outside cities, in places without protection, his attitude was a bit annoying, but he was a nice person. He had said, "Listen up, Mr, Mrs, and Ms.........All passengers. In case, just in case this is your first time leaving a city, then there're some principles you must abide. Even if you find it unreasonable, you must not resist the government of other cities. Isn't that normal? Yes. You must obey the government. Still, you can expect to see habits and laws in other cities that will surprise you. That isn't a problem of being strange. Perhaps they might find your city strange. You ask why, don't all cities function the same? It's the truth. Understand? It's the feeling of unfamiliarity."

	.........Anyway, that driver really talked a lot.		.........Anyway, that driver really talked a lot.

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	[Right. Take your time resting.] Weariness filled Felli's voice.		[Right. Take your time resting.] Weariness filled Felli's voice.

	Next......Running desperately in weariness. The city should be avoiding filth monsters, not attacking them. Did other cities have the same confidence to overcome this crisis?		Next......Running desperately in weariness. The city should be avoiding filth monsters, not attacking them. Did other cities have the same level of confidence to overcome this crisis?

	(Because I said so.) Layfon thought as he rode the bike to Zuellni. If he said it out loud, Felli probably would say "that's not true", so he kept it inside him. When he first heard from Karian of the city going on a rampage, he immediately thought of Nina. She had a good relationship with the Electronic Fairy. Layfon had never seen anyone who had a relationship with an Electronic Fairy so good that the Electronic Fairy would fly over for a hug. He had never seen an Electronic Fairy in Grendan. He had wondered whether Zuellni was special because it liked to hug other people, but that probably wasn't the case. Zuellni didn't like hugging just anyone. He only knew Zuellni because Nina introduced him to it. Was it because of Nina's personality or some special ability of hers? He couldn't think of anyone else who could directly touch an Electronic Fairy. That was why he thought she could do something about it.		(Because I said so.) Layfon thought as he rode the bike to Zuellni. If he said it out loud, Felli probably would say "that's not true", so he kept it inside him. When he first heard from Karian of the city going on a rampage, he immediately thought of Nina. She had a good relationship with the Electronic Fairy. Layfon had never seen anyone who had a relationship with an Electronic Fairy so good that the Electronic Fairy would fly over for a hug. He had never seen an Electronic Fairy in Grendan. He had wondered whether Zuellni was special because it liked to hug other people, but that probably wasn't the case. Zuellni didn't like hugging just anyone. He only knew Zuellni because Nina introduced him to it. Was it because of Nina's personality or some special ability of hers? He couldn't think of anyone else who could directly touch an Electronic Fairy. That was why he thought she could do something about it.

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	But Fermaus, the man with the electronic voice, saw something different.		But Fermaus, the man with the electronic voice, saw something different.

	"Anything~?" the person sitting on Myunfa's left asked. He was Haia ~~Lyra~~, the leader of the Salinvan Guidance Mercenary Gang.		"Anything~?" the person sitting on Myunfa's left asked. He was Haia Salinvan Laia, the leader of the Salinvan Guidance Mercenary Gang.

	"I got them. I think the location of my flake is good but I still can't beat the abilities of a genius. She discovered them faster than I did."		"I got them. I think the location of my flake is good but I still can't beat the abilities of a genius. She discovered them faster than I did."
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	Myunfa heard loneliness in Fermaus' voice. When Layfon arrived at the destination on his bike, the ground had already cracked apart, spilling out the larvae. The larvae crawled out of the hard ground like water shooting forth from a broken pipe. They spilled out and spread across the earth.		Myunfa heard loneliness in Fermaus' voice. When Layfon arrived at the destination on his bike, the ground had already cracked apart, spilling out the larvae. The larvae crawled out of the hard ground like water shooting forth from a broken pipe. They spilled out and spread across the earth.

	"I've confirmed through my eyes."		"I've confirmed it through my eyes."

	(150 larvae. The mother and the other larvae beneath the ground show no life signals.)		(150 larvae. The mother and the other larvae beneath the ground show no life signals.)
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	Not too much time was needed to defeat 500 filth monsters. The larvae were nothing to Layfon. Although his skill in using the steel threads was only a thousandth of Lintence's...... Lintence liked to describe with numbers and exaggerated them. In truth, with Layfon's level of Kei, he could defeat these many larvae in one moment. Yes, even though his skill wasn't on Lintence's level. The filth monsters rushing ~~for the~~ Zuellni from behind him were ~~stepping~~ straight into a trap. If Layfon was in Grendan, other Military Artists would have taken care of this crisis, but not in Zuellni.		Not too much time was needed to defeat 500 filth monsters. The larvae were nothing to Layfon. Although his skill in using the steel threads was only a thousandth of Lintence's...... Lintence liked to describe with numbers and exaggerated them. In truth, with Layfon's level of Kei, he could defeat these many larvae in one moment. Yes, even though his skill wasn't on Lintence's level. The filth monsters rushing towards Zuellni from behind him were heading straight into a trap. If Layfon was in Grendan, other Military Artists would have taken care of this crisis, but not in Zuellni.

	People of high talent were so labeled by others, so they could be used equally by other people. That was the cruel reality. All sorts of policies were created to protect these elites so they could be used for a long time and for maximum potential. Military Artists were people who could die easily, and as such, cities gave them the best protection possible. Many families that gave birth to Military Artists were given wealth and the best living conditions. But that didn't change the fate where they were used as commodities.		People of high talent were so labeled by others, so they could be used equally by other people. That was the cruel reality. All sorts of policies were created to protect these elites so they could be used for a long time and for maximum potential. Military Artists were people who could die easily, and as such, cities gave them the best protection possible. Many families that gave birth to Military Artists were given wealth and the best living conditions. But that didn't change the fate where they were used as commodities.
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	"I got it. Please return for resupplying."		"I got it. Please return for resupplying."

	[Right. Take your time resting.] ~~Tiredness~~ filled Felli's voice.		[Right. Take your time resting.] Weariness filled Felli's voice.

	Next......Running desperately in ~~tiredness~~. The city should be avoiding filth monsters, not attacking them. Did other cities have the same confidence to ~~defeat~~ this crisis?		Next......Running desperately in weariness. The city should be avoiding filth monsters, not attacking them. Did other cities have the same confidence to overcome this crisis?

	(Because I said so.) Layfon thought as he rode the bike to Zuellni. If he said it out loud, Felli probably would say "that's not true", so he kept it inside him. When he first heard from Karian of the city going on a rampage, he immediately thought of Nina. She had a good relationship with the Electronic Fairy. Layfon had never seen anyone who had a relationship with an Electronic Fairy so good that the Electronic Fairy would fly over for a hug. He had never seen an Electronic Fairy in Grendan. He had wondered whether Zuellni was special because it liked to hug other people, but that probably wasn't the case. Zuellni didn't like hugging just anyone. He only knew Zuellni because Nina introduced him to it. Was it because of Nina's personality or some special ability of hers? He couldn't think of anyone else who could directly touch an Electronic Fairy. That was why he thought she could do something about it.		(Because I said so.) Layfon thought as he rode the bike to Zuellni. If he said it out loud, Felli probably would say "that's not true", so he kept it inside him. When he first heard from Karian of the city going on a rampage, he immediately thought of Nina. She had a good relationship with the Electronic Fairy. Layfon had never seen anyone who had a relationship with an Electronic Fairy so good that the Electronic Fairy would fly over for a hug. He had never seen an Electronic Fairy in Grendan. He had wondered whether Zuellni was special because it liked to hug other people, but that probably wasn't the case. Zuellni didn't like hugging just anyone. He only knew Zuellni because Nina introduced him to it. Was it because of Nina's personality or some special ability of hers? He couldn't think of anyone else who could directly touch an Electronic Fairy. That was why he thought she could do something about it.
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	(All I can do is fight filth monsters......)		(All I can do is fight filth monsters......)

	Other people would call him arrogant, but Layfon was good at Military Arts. Till now, most of his time was spent on increasing his strength as a Military Artist. No one in Zuellni had as much strength and experience as him in fighting filth monsters. But being a Military Artist had nothing to do with solving the problem of a city going on a rampage. He couldn't do anything without having first experienced it. However, he had pushed that problem to Nina, pushed it to her without listening to anyone else's opinions.		Other people would call him arrogant, but Layfon was good at Military Arts. Till now, most of his time was spent on increasing his strength as a Military Artist. No one in Zuellni had as much strength and experience as him in fighting filth monsters. But being a Military Artist had nothing to do with solving the problem of a city going on a rampage. He couldn't do anything without having first experienced it. However, he had pushed that problem onto Nina, pushed it to her without listening to anyone else's opinions.

	(That's true arrogance.)		(That's true arrogance.)

Hiro Hayase: /* Chapter 1: In a broken house */

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	"Important information? Speaking aside......" Leerin looked at the young man. She understood the importance of information from school, so it was reasonable for the city to make precautionary measures.		"Important information? Speaking aside......" Leerin looked at the young man. She understood the importance of information from school, so it was reasonable for the city to make precautionary measures.

	"What's it?"		"What is it?"

	"These people look tense."		"These people look tense."
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	(Wu.........)		(Wu.........)

	"What's it?"		"What is it?"

	".........Nothing."		".........Nothing."

Zero2001 at 14:25, 8 August 2011

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