Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume8 Post Epilogue Part 3 - Revision history

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	There was not even the hazy feeling one gets after waking up. The body was claiming lack of sleep. Her body stressed that it hadn’t slept enough, but despite that, Alsheyra woke completely from her slumber.		There was not even the hazy feeling one gets after waking up. The body was claiming lack of sleep. Her body stressed that it hadn’t slept enough, but despite that, Alsheyra woke completely from her slumber.

	“Jeez, I really wish you did it more simply, y'know. Even among the Heaven’s Blades, You're the number one Sakkei user, right? Get a grip a little more, Kanaris!		“Jeez, I really wish you did it more simply, y'know. Even among the Heaven’s Blades, You're the number one Sakkei user, right? Get a grip a little more, Kanaris!"

	At those words, the people standing at the entrance of the Royal Garden trembled.		At those words, the people standing at the entrance of the Royal Garden trembled.
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	“Well, what about you? Are you satisfied?”		“Well, what about you? Are you satisfied?”

	“Well, your Majesty is simply too strong.’		“Well, your Majesty is simply too strong.”

	Suppressing his already broken left hand, Savaris replied with a smile. A glance at the sweat dripping off his forehead made it obvious that the smile was a forced one.		Suppressing his already broken left hand, Savaris replied with a smile. A glance at the sweat dripping off his forehead made it obvious that the smile was a forced one.

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	“Oh, is that so?”		“Oh, is that so?”

	Lintence was standing alone on the outskirts of the city and hearing Delbone’s words allowed him to understand the situation. Although the sense of touch from the steel wires allowed a general understanding of the situation, the information it delivered couldn’t be compared to the precision of ~~psychokinesis~~.		Lintence was standing alone on the outskirts of the city and hearing Delbone’s words allowed him to understand the situation. Although the sense of touch from the steel wires allowed a general understanding of the situation, the information it delivered couldn’t be compared to the precision of Psychokinesis.

	The Mature Phase flew towards the sky. For the moment, Lintence took care of the Larvae that were overflowing.		The Mature Phase flew towards the sky. For the moment, Lintence took care of the Larvae that were overflowing.

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	Five years later, after Layfon’s match with Gahard Baren had ended, his inappropriate behavior was exposed. The masses were astonished by his power, and in truth they were worried about the dangers of his powers going out of control. However, the ones that treated him most like a danger and spoke out against him the loudest was the Eutnohl family. This was something that a mere ten year old wouldn’t consider.		Five years later, after Layfon’s match with Gahard Baren had ended, his inappropriate behavior was exposed. The masses were astonished by his power, and in truth they were worried about the dangers of his powers going out of control. However, the ones that treated him most like a danger and spoke out against him the loudest was the Eutnohl family. This was something that a mere ten year old wouldn’t consider.

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Kuronekochi at 23:37, 3 March 2013

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	Minse was speechless, and just stood there, dumbstruck.		Minse was speechless, and just stood there, dumbstruck.

	If you want to start a rebellion, you have to use your brain properly. Frankly speaking, even if you’re stupid, there has to be a limit, whether it’s your brain, or your ability or your common sense. Suppose you were lacking all three, then you really have no hope.		“If you want to start a rebellion, you have to use your brain properly. Frankly speaking, even if you’re stupid, there has to be a limit, whether it’s your brain, or your ability or your common sense. Suppose you were lacking all three, then you really have no hope.”

	And Minse was disregarded so easily by Alsheyra, just like that.		And Minse was disregarded so easily by Alsheyra, just like that.

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	“What’s so good about that?”		“What’s so good about that?”

	As she said this, ~~Leering~~ watched what happened next, stunned.		As she said this, Leerin watched what happened next, stunned.

	The stone that was slowly rising towards the ceiling had changed directions.		The stone that was slowly rising towards the ceiling had changed directions.

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	The only setting Layfon was particular about was weight. As for the others, he entrusted them to the special Heaven’s Blade technicians.		The only setting Layfon was particular about was weight. As for the others, he entrusted them to the special Heaven’s Blade technicians.

	“You’re the first Heaven’s Blade to say such a thing. Is it because you’re young, that you underestimate the value of ~~the~~ weapon ~~was well~~?”		“You’re the first Heaven’s Blade to say such a thing. Is it because you’re young, that you underestimate the value of a weapon?”

	Looking at Layfon silently listening to his criticism, the old technician finally revealed a defeated expression, giving up attempting to persuade him, and set the sword to match Layfon’s physique.		Looking at Layfon silently listening to his criticism, the old technician finally revealed a defeated expression, giving up attempting to persuade him, and set the sword to match Layfon’s physique.
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	(Good)		(Good)

	~~As Layfon avoided~~ the ~~irregular~~ storm of ~~the Sendans~~, ~~he let out a shout of success with a clenched~~ fist ~~in his heat~~. He had always wanted to know if he could do this, and he had always trained in his mind. And the result made Layfon felt very satisfied.		Escaping from the chaos of the storm of scattered Sendan, Layfon mentally pumped his fist. He had always wanted to know if he could do this, and he had always trained in his mind. And the result made Layfon felt very satisfied.

	(Is it possible to focus the direction of the explosions onto a single point? If he can immediately get to that level next time…)		(Is it possible to focus the direction of the explosions onto a single point? If he can immediately get to that level next time…)

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	“I know that.”		“I know that.”

	~~Leering~~ muttered helplessly. Among her prepared ingredients, green wild vegetables were nowhere to be seen, instead replaced by red and yellow veggies.		Leerin muttered helplessly. Among her prepared ingredients, green wild vegetables were nowhere to be seen, instead replaced by red and yellow veggies.

	Of course, she had also prepared a lot of meat.		Of course, she had also prepared a lot of meat.

Xanga at 00:05, 27 November 2012

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	She slept so deeply that she wouldn’t even have any dreams.		She slept so deeply that she wouldn’t even have any dreams.

	Strong wind from outside couldn’t reach inside because of the air filter. A breeze stroked her cheek, hair ~~blew~~ gently. Warm sunshine bathed her whole body. The perfect conditions for basking in the sun and taking an afternoon nap had been met.		Strong wind from outside couldn’t reach inside because of the air filter. A breeze stroked her cheek, blowing her hair gently. Warm sunshine bathed her whole body. The perfect conditions for basking in the sun and taking an afternoon nap had been met.

	“......The hell?”		“......The hell?”
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	Facing the various responsibilities he had to take, Minse shuddered.		Facing the various responsibilities he had to take, Minse shuddered.

	“......~~you~~, it was because you didn’t let me participate in the competition that everything became like this!”		“......You, it was because you didn’t let me participate in the competition that everything became like this!”

	Unable to bear any more of Alsheyra’s slow scolding, Minse shouted out.		Unable to bear any more of Alsheyra’s slow scolding, Minse shouted out.
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	“Uwah~ Well, I guess you guys get a ‘pass.’ ”		“Uwah~ Well, I guess you guys get a ‘pass.’ ”

	The voice ~~range~~ out from the center.		The voice ranged hair out from the center.

	“To limit the damage around you to a minimum, you opened out two Armed Swords? Quite befitting your hardworking personality, Kalvan. But I’m quite fond of this place, so it’s great that this place hasn’t been wrecked.”		“To limit the damage around you to a minimum, you opened out two Armed Swords? Quite befitting your hardworking personality, Kalvan. But I’m quite fond of this place, so it’s great that this place hasn’t been wrecked.”
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	“............”		“............”

	Agreeing to Kalvan’s suggestion, the three silently increased their Kei pressure. That’s all they did, but it began to warp the airflow. The intense Kei flow expelled the air, created a strong gale.		Agreeing to Kalvan’s suggestion, the three silently increased their Kei pressure. That’s all they did, but it began to warp the airflow. The intense Kei flow expelled the air, and created a strong gale.

	It was as if the Midair Flower Garden was in the eye of a hurricane.		It was as if the Midair Flower Garden was in the eye of a hurricane.
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	The enemy was getting closer.		The enemy was getting closer.

	Layfon reached into a small pack on his waist and retrieved two small objects, and tossed them skyward. ~~They~~ two arced across in a parabola, and using his External Type Kei, Layfon shattered them.		Layfon reached into a small pack on his waist and retrieved two small objects, and tossed them skyward. The two arced across in a parabola, and using his External Type Kei, Layfon shattered them.

	The shattered objects turned into yellow dust and scattered about in all four directions.		The shattered objects turned into yellow dust and scattered about in all four directions.
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	All of Grendan’s filth monster researchers held doubts.		All of Grendan’s filth monster researchers held doubts.

	Because the lack of nutrition when growing up as filth monsters, they would attack cities. And when they transformed into Mature Phases, they would become extremely hungry.		Because of the lack of nutrition when growing up as filth monsters, they would attack cities. And when they transformed into Mature Phases, they would become extremely hungry.

	Then why would there be some many Mature Phases in the area that Grendan wandered?		Then why would there be some many Mature Phases in the area that Grendan wandered?
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	“The battlefield isn’t somewhere you can get careless, okay?”		“The battlefield isn’t somewhere you can get careless, okay?”

	As if reading Layfon’s mind, ~~come~~ those words of warning. Although obaa-san’s words weren’t actually severe, they were like water seeping into soil, irrefutable.		As if reading Layfon’s mind, came those words of warning. Although obaa-san’s words weren’t actually severe, they were like water seeping into soil, irrefutable.

	They no longer had any time to be having a conversation.		They no longer had any time to be having a conversation.
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	Once again hearing those words he heard two days ago, Delbone’s voice vanished, and following immediately, the Mature Phase opened its two huge mouths, and rushed towards Layfon with urgency.		Once again hearing those words he heard two days ago, Delbone’s voice vanished, and following immediately, the Mature Phase opened its two huge mouths, and rushed towards Layfon with urgency.

	Layfon jumped up, avoiding.		Layfon jumped up, avoiding it.

	The Mature Phase’s lower half smashed the hard ground apart. The upper half was chasing Layfon as he rapidly ascended. Tugging the lower half after it, the two halves eventually switched places.		The Mature Phase’s lower half smashed the hard ground apart. The upper half was chasing Layfon as he rapidly ascended. Tugging the lower half after it, the two halves eventually switched places.
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	“What’re you talking about; this is clearly two Mature Phase filth monsters.”		“What’re you talking about; this is clearly two Mature Phase filth monsters.”

	Although he was unable to kill the filth monster, Layfon was hardly depressed at all. At any rate, he should land before worrying about anything else. The enraged Mature Phase performed even more complex movements than when it was whole, in order to get closer to Layfon while preventing his escape.		Although he was unable to kill the filth monster, Layfon was hardly depressed at all. At any rate, he should land before worrying about anything else. The enraged Mature Phase filth monsters performed even more complex movements than when it was whole, in order to get closer to Layfon while preventing his escape.

	Layfon didn’t retreat or evade, and instead took a deep breath on the spot. His breath temporarily fogged up his line of sight through the helmet.		Layfon didn’t retreat or evade, and instead took a deep breath on the spot. His breath temporarily fogged up his line of sight through the helmet.
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	There were strange Transforming types.		There were strange Transforming types.

	The pair in front of his eyes were exactly that.		The pair in front of his eyes were exactly that type.

	The two in front of him looked to be a pair. They were clearly Mature Phase, but they hadn’t given up the ability to reproduce. Or rather, they had become Mature Phases that had found some abnormal way to reproduce.		The two in front of him looked to be a pair. They were clearly Mature Phase, but they hadn’t given up the ability to reproduce. Or rather, they had become Mature Phases that had found some abnormal way to reproduce.
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	From the way Delbone spoke it seemed she was extremely interested by Lintence’s reaction.		From the way Delbone spoke it seemed she was extremely interested by Lintence’s reaction.

	“I never intended to take him as my disciple. I’m only teaching him a little. Also, if he’s struggling at just this level of opponent, what is he going to do in the future?”		“I never intended to take him as my disciple. I’m only teaching him a little. Also, if he’s struggling at just this level of an opponent, what is he going to do in the future?”

	“Even if that is the case, regardless of what you say he’s still just a child. He’s like a grandchild to me. If he died in battle like this, wouldn't it be rather young?”		“Even if that is the case, regardless of what you say he’s still just a child. He’s like a grandchild to me. If he died in battle like this, wouldn't it be rather young?”
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	Alsheyra furrowed her eyebrows, glaring at Kalvan who had lowered his head, kneeling.		Alsheyra furrowed her eyebrows, glaring at Kalvan who had lowered his head, kneeling.

	~~“This~~ incident this time is definitely disloyal behavior, and it’s irreversible. But taking her Majesty’s circumstances into consideration, we did this precisely for those who, for the sake of protecting the Bloodlines, could not be born.”		“The incident this time is definitely disloyal behavior, and it’s irreversible. But taking her Majesty’s circumstances into consideration, we did this precisely for those who, for the sake of protecting the Bloodlines, could not be born.”

	“Then, are you saying that the fault lies with the system of the Three Royal Families?”		“Then, are you saying that the fault lies with the system of the Three Royal Families?”
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	Alsheyra watched Minse. The youth who had blankly watched the scenario unfold, turned ashen when he caught Alsheyra’s eyes.		Alsheyra watched Minse. The youth who had blankly watched the scenario unfold, turned ashen when he caught Alsheyra’s eyes.

	“Tig-jii. What do you think we do?”		“Tig-jii. What do you think we should do?”

	Hearing this, Minse cast a look begging for help towards Tigris. However, the elder stroked his proud beard, ignoring Minse’s glances.		Hearing this, Minse cast a look begging for help towards Tigris. However, the elder stroked his proud beard, ignoring Minse’s glances.
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	Hearing Tigris’ emotionless words, Minse’s ashen face suddenly turned a tragic white.		Hearing Tigris’ emotionless words, Minse’s ashen face suddenly turned a tragic white.

	“It looks like my family has no choice but to ~~subsidies~~ the Psyharden Dojo to smooth this event over.”		“It looks like my family has no choice but to subsidize the Psyharden Dojo to smooth this event over.”

	“The continuous Heaven’s Blade inauguration ceremonies have made the Royal Coffers a little lonely. Even though they weren’t that extravagant anyway. At any rate, making me provide funds when the treasury is tight makes things very hard.”		“The continuous Heaven’s Blade inauguration ceremonies have made the Royal Coffers a little lonely. Even though they weren’t that extravagant anyway. At any rate, making me provide funds when the treasury is tight makes things very hard.”
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	“Eh?”		“Eh?”

	Even though he wasn’t perturbed, Layfon didn’t’ understand the situation at hand. Perhaps he hadn’t given the situation around him any thought after climbing out from the ~~inside~~ of the Filth Monster.		Even though he wasn’t perturbed, Layfon didn’t’ understand the situation at hand. Perhaps he hadn’t given the situation around him any thought after climbing out from the insides of the Filth Monster.

	Alsheyra cast the surprised Layfon aside, and looked towards Minse.		Alsheyra cast the surprised Layfon aside, and looked towards Minse.