Chronicle Legion:Volume 1 Chapter 1 - Revision history

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Part 4

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	"Now that imprudence is a done deal, I have no objections to Your Highness taking part in battle personally."		"Now that imprudence is a done deal, I have no objections to Your Highness taking part in battle personally."

	"~~Personally~~, I would like to do that too, but there are many lords back home who love to engage in petty criticism. Making such a disobedient move before officially assuming my position would have them making allegations of me being 'outdated' or 'medieval'."		"In my own opinion, I would like to do that too, but there are many lords back home who love to engage in petty criticism. Making such a disobedient move before officially assuming my position would have them making allegations of me being 'outdated' or 'medieval'."

	Sir Black Knight smiled wryly.		Sir Black Knight smiled wryly.
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	From the database, she pulled out visual images of Japan and projected them into the air using noetic waves. A two-dimensional map of the islands of Japan appeared before Sir Black Knight.		From the database, she pulled out visual images of Japan and projected them into the air using noetic waves. A two-dimensional map of the islands of Japan appeared before Sir Black Knight.

	"In order for ''the Gifu Fiefdom partnering with us'' to march on the imperial capital of Tokyo, there is one route that must be secured—Hence, Tōkaidō is our target this time. There are five tutelary forts ~~from~~ between Shizuoka and Hakone Checkpoint... Hamamatsu, Kakegawa, Suruga, Fuji, and Nagahama, which we will conquer all at once."		"In order for ''the Gifu Fiefdom partnering with us'' to march on the imperial capital of Tokyo, there is one route that must be secured—Hence, Tōkaidō is our target this time. There are five tutelary forts between Shizuoka and Hakone Checkpoint... Hamamatsu, Kakegawa, Suruga, Fuji, and Nagahama, which we will conquer all at once."

	Pointing at five locations on the map, Sir Black Knight issued combat orders.		Pointing at five locations on the map, Sir Black Knight issued combat orders.

	"Due to ''the trouble at Suruga'', we were forced to hasten our operation by two weeks, though there are no issues apart from that. If everything proceeds according to plan, the operation will ~~end smoothly~~."		"Due to ''the trouble at Suruga'', we were forced to hasten our operation by two weeks, though there are no issues apart from that. If everything proceeds according to plan, the operation will be completed without issue."

	Soon, they were about to make a landing in Japan in a battle to subjugate Tōkaidō.		Soon, they were about to make a landing in Japan in a battle to subjugate Tōkaidō.

Zzhk: /* Part 1 */

2016-08-08T04:23:46Z

Part 1

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	"Yeah. Actually, I've been wondering a lot lately. Like whether a girl would suddenly fall from the sky and confess to me or a childhood fiancee might suddenly show up," said Masatsugu in a halting manner.		"Yeah. Actually, I've been wondering a lot lately. Like whether a girl would suddenly fall from the sky and confess to me or a childhood fiancee might suddenly show up," said Masatsugu in a halting manner.

	Hatsune clapped her hands together in front of him and replied, "I've read ~~that~~ stories of that type too. Like in ''Weekly Shounen Junk''<!--no typo there: ジャンク is in the text-->" or ''Shoujo Margarita''."		Hatsune clapped her hands together in front of him and replied, "I've read stories of that type too. Like in ''Weekly Shounen Junk''<!--no typo there: ジャンク is in the text-->" or ''Shoujo Margarita''."

	"You can find similar tropes in many light novels and love simulation games aimed at teenagers."		"You can find similar tropes in many light novels and love simulation games aimed at teenagers."

Hp2 at 08:19, 23 July 2016

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	Lightly touching the breast pocket of their respective jackets, they then opened their palms. A cross-shaped medal, shining brilliantly, appeared over their pockets out of thin air where nothing had been there a moment ago.		Lightly touching the breast pocket of their respective jackets, they then opened their palms. A cross-shaped medal, shining brilliantly, appeared over their pockets out of thin air where nothing had been there a moment ago.

	This ~~weas~~ the Knight's Medal of the Great Cross.		This was the Knight's Medal of the Great Cross.

	A holy emblem for summoning the British Empire's mainstay Legion, the "Crusade."		A holy emblem for summoning the British Empire's mainstay Legion, the "Crusade."

Hp2 at 08:12, 23 July 2016

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	This was the newly built military ship that had come under ''her'' management two months ago.		This was the newly built military ship that had come under ''her'' management two months ago.

	The ship had a total length of 183m and a loaded displacement of 15 thousand tons. Its streamlined body resulted from the application of stealth designs. The anti-air weapon control system, the Evil Eye, was linked to ''her'' through noetic waves and control. The installed fluid reactor that used artificial ectoplasmic fluid not only served as a power source but also enabled ~~the~~ the use of mystic powers essential to deploying the giant winged soldiers that were the Legions.		The ship had a total length of 183m and a loaded displacement of 15 thousand tons. Its streamlined body resulted from the application of stealth designs. The anti-air weapon control system, the Evil Eye, was linked to ''her'' through noetic waves and control. The installed fluid reactor that used artificial ectoplasmic fluid not only served as a power source but also enabled the use of mystic powers essential to deploying the giant winged soldiers that were the Legions.

	In other words, the functionality of this ship would make it a carrier for the mainstay weapon of the modern era, the Legions.		In other words, the functionality of this ship would make it a carrier for the mainstay weapon of the modern era, the Legions.

Hp2: Missing verb. Took a guess; verify with source.

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Missing verb. Took a guess; verify with source.

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	Furthermore, it was no ordinary base. Serving as "castellan" (the name of a position in charge of managing a castle and its surrounding territory on behalf of a daimyo in the past) to hold a tutelary fort was a Chevalier's job.		Furthermore, it was no ordinary base. Serving as "castellan" (the name of a position in charge of managing a castle and its surrounding territory on behalf of a daimyo in the past) to hold a tutelary fort was a Chevalier's job.

	A so-called Chevalier was a person with the special ability to ''summon'' powerful Legions, winged giant soldiers. They were also commanders who would their troops to fight on the front lines.		A so-called Chevalier was a person with the special ability to ''summon'' powerful Legions, winged giant soldiers. They were also commanders who would lead their troops to fight on the front lines.

	Fighting on the behalf of their military and the nation, they took on incalculable risk and responsibility.		Fighting on the behalf of their military and the nation, they took on incalculable risk and responsibility.

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Part 4

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	From the database, she pulled out visual images of Japan and projected them into the air using noetic waves. A two-dimensional map of the islands of Japan appeared before Sir Black Knight.		From the database, she pulled out visual images of Japan and projected them into the air using noetic waves. A two-dimensional map of the islands of Japan appeared before Sir Black Knight.

	"In order for ''the Gifu Fiefdom partnering with us'' to march on the imperial capital of Tokyo, there is one route that must be secured—Hence, Tōkaidō is our target this time. There are five tutelary forts from between Shizuoka and Hakone ~~Pass~~... Hamamatsu, Kakegawa, Suruga, Fuji, and Nagahama, which we will conquer all at once."		"In order for ''the Gifu Fiefdom partnering with us'' to march on the imperial capital of Tokyo, there is one route that must be secured—Hence, Tōkaidō is our target this time. There are five tutelary forts from between Shizuoka and Hakone Checkpoint... Hamamatsu, Kakegawa, Suruga, Fuji, and Nagahama, which we will conquer all at once."

	Pointing at five locations on the map, Sir Black Knight issued combat orders.		Pointing at five locations on the map, Sir Black Knight issued combat orders.

Zzhk at 03:49, 14 July 2016

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Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

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Part 4

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	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

	On board the ''Tintagel'', an A~~-class~~ Type 27 destroyer...		On board the ''Tintagel'', a Class A Type 27 destroyer...

	This was the newly built military ship that had come under ''her'' management two months ago.		This was the newly built military ship that had come under ''her'' management two months ago.

Zzhk: /* Part 2 */

2016-06-30T15:45:26Z

Part 2

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	Hatsune rushed over to the princess' side before he could find an answer. The mistress and her personal lady-in-waiting engaged in whispers.		Hatsune rushed over to the princess' side before he could find an answer. The mistress and her personal lady-in-waiting engaged in whispers.

	"I'm sorry, Onii-sama, but something came up and I have to go now!" Hatsune ~~bidded~~ Masatsugu goodbye energetically.		"I'm sorry, Onii-sama, but something came up and I have to go now!" Hatsune bade Masatsugu goodbye energetically.

	The platinum blonde beauty beside her nodded elegantly to Masatsugu before making her departure. Naturally, Hatsune followed her.		The platinum blonde beauty beside her nodded elegantly to Masatsugu before making her departure. Naturally, Hatsune followed her.

Zzhk: /* Chapter 1 - Invading Legion (1) */

2016-06-30T08:03:04Z

Chapter 1 - Invading Legion (1)

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	==Chapter 1 - Invading ~~Legion~~ (1)==		==Chapter 1 - Invading Legions (1)==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	"According to rumors, a princess of the imperial family—Shiori-sama, a highborn daughter of House Fujinomiya—has recently left the capital to come to her late father's hometown of Suruga."		"According to rumors, a princess of the imperial family—Shiori-sama, a highborn daughter of House Fujinomiya—has recently left the capital to come to her late father's hometown of Suruga."

	"A princess of House Fujinomiya...?" asked Masatsugu, tilting his head in puzzlement at the unfamiliar name. "Right, apart from the current ~~empress~~—Her Majesty Teruhime—I've never heard the name of anyone else in the imperial family."		"A princess of House Fujinomiya...?" asked Masatsugu, tilting his head in puzzlement at the unfamiliar name. "Right, apart from the current Empress—Her Majesty Teruhime—I've never heard the name of anyone else in the imperial family."

	"Members of royalty in certain countries would take part in public events or diplomatic occasions, but it seems to be different in Japan."		"Members of royalty in certain countries would take part in public events or diplomatic occasions, but it seems to be different in Japan."
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	The original Japan was transformed into Imperial Japan, a country worshiping the godlike sacred beast Lord Tenryuu as their guardian deity.		The original Japan was transformed into Imperial Japan, a country worshiping the godlike sacred beast Lord Tenryuu as their guardian deity.

	Nowadays, it was the ~~empress~~—the priestess whose destiny was intertwined with Lord Tenryuu—who ruled the nation of Japan.		Nowadays, it was the Empress—the priestess whose destiny was intertwined with Lord Tenryuu—who ruled the nation of Japan.

	"Shiori-sama had been studying abroad in Rome until recently, so that's probably one of the reasons. In addition, this so-called studying abroad is actually closer to being a hostage."		"Shiori-sama had been studying abroad in Rome until recently, so that's probably one of the reasons. In addition, this so-called studying abroad is actually closer to being a hostage."
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	However, everyone still did not know anything detailed about Shiori's past.		However, everyone still did not know anything detailed about Shiori's past.

	There was a dearth of released information... Just the bare facts at most, that she was a young princess, currently sixteen years of age, while her mother was the younger sister of the second ~~empress~~.		There was a dearth of released information... Just the bare facts at most, that she was a young princess, currently sixteen years of age, while her mother was the younger sister of the second Empress.

	"Hatsune, what is the princess like as a person?"		"Hatsune, what is the princess like as a person?"
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	This was the public statement that Princess Fujinomiya Shiori issued during an interview with the local television station.		This was the public statement that Princess Fujinomiya Shiori issued during an interview with the local television station.

	It was customary for members of the imperial family to eschew appearing in public so as to avoid unnecessary risk—The sole exception being the incumbent ~~empress~~ who stood as the mother figure of the nation.		It was customary for members of the imperial family to eschew appearing in public so as to avoid unnecessary risk—The sole exception being the incumbent Empress who stood as the mother figure of the nation.

	But this time, Shiori had appeared before the media intentionally.		But this time, Shiori had appeared before the media intentionally.
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	Princess Shiori had a head of brilliant platinum blonde hair. There was a mysterious beauty to her hair color, one that did not belong to someone of pure Japanese descent.		Princess Shiori had a head of brilliant platinum blonde hair. There was a mysterious beauty to her hair color, one that did not belong to someone of pure Japanese descent.

	"As most people already know... The first ~~empress~~, Her Majesty Himiko, called upon the sacred spirit of Lord Tenryuu to possess her. While in a state of divine union, she gave birth to twin princesses, who were respectively the second ~~empress~~, Toyo-sama, and my mother, Her Highness Fujinomiya—"		"As most people already know... The first Empress, Her Majesty Himiko, called upon the sacred spirit of Lord Tenryuu to possess her. While in a state of divine union, she gave birth to twin princesses, who were respectively the second Empress, Toyo-sama, and my mother, Her Highness Fujinomiya—"

	This anecdote was identical to the virgin birth of the messiah, Jesus Christ, from Mary, Mother of God.		This anecdote was identical to the virgin birth of the messiah, Jesus Christ, from Mary, Mother of God.