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The original text says 十三, not 三十

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	"Why?" Graham asked in a hoarse voice, becoming rattled for the first time.		"Why?" Graham asked in a hoarse voice, becoming rattled for the first time.

	"Because that book—The Book of the Ultimate Contemplation of Cooking—has already been lent to somebody. ~~Thirty~~ years ago, that is."		"Because that book—The Book of the Ultimate Contemplation of Cooking—has already been lent to somebody. Thirteen years ago, that is."

	"What did you just say...?" Graham muttered in complete bafflement.		"What did you just say...?" Graham muttered in complete bafflement.

	Still raising an eyebrow, Huey continued, "In the diary of grandpa... no, of my grandfather, it was written that the 'The Book of the Ultimate Contemplation of Cooking' was handed out to someone today 30 years ago on a whim. We were sure you were the holder of the book when we travelled here. Since after all, it was shortly after that day that you got widely famous as a gourmet—"		Still raising an eyebrow, Huey continued, "In the diary of grandpa... no, of my grandfather, it was written that the 'The Book of the Ultimate Contemplation of Cooking' was handed out to someone today 13 years ago on a whim. We were sure you were the holder of the book when we travelled here. Since after all, it was shortly after that day that you got widely famous as a gourmet—"

	"30 years ago...? Don't tell me that...!" He groaned deeply and sank down in his seat. Then, after a long time of silence, he muttered in a mournful voice:		"13 years ago...? Don't tell me that...!" He groaned deeply and sank down in his seat. Then, after a long time of silence, he muttered in a mournful voice:

	"It's my head cook..."		"It's my head cook..."
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	"Eh?"		"Eh?"

	"The chef has got the phantom book. Apparently, everyone thinks that ''I'' have created all the recipes, and that I only have the servants cook them for me, but that's not true. The one thinking them out and cooking them is the chef and no one else. It was right about 30 years ago when I employed the current head cook... and still... what a... ooh...!" he mumbled and held his head.		"The chef has got the phantom book. Apparently, everyone thinks that ''I'' have created all the recipes, and that I only have the servants cook them for me, but that's not true. The one thinking them out and cooking them is the chef and no one else. It was right about 13 years ago when I employed the current head cook... and still... what a... ooh...!" he mumbled and held his head.

	His imposing body seemed a lot smaller than before.		His imposing body seemed a lot smaller than before.
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	Graham addressed their backs:		Graham addressed their backs:

	"Wait! ...allow me just one more question, Sir Disward. Why did you come here if not for lending me the phantom book? Why now, after ~~thirty~~ years...?"		"Wait! ...allow me just one more question, Sir Disward. Why did you come here if not for lending me the phantom book? Why now, after thirteen years...?"

	"The books that are lent by a library do have return dates, Mr. Atkinson..." Huey explained coldly without giving him another glance. "Phantom books are books that should not even exist in the world originally, and hence are sealed away. Not even we know what impact one of them could have on the world if not brought back within the time limit."		"The books that are lent by a library do have return dates, Mr. Atkinson..." Huey explained coldly without giving him another glance. "Phantom books are books that should not even exist in the world originally, and hence are sealed away. Not even we know what impact one of them could have on the world if not brought back within the time limit."
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	The black-dressed girl turned around quietly and proclaimed in a cold and clear voice.		The black-dressed girl turned around quietly and proclaimed in a cold and clear voice.

	"'The Book of the Ultimate Contemplation of Cooking' has been lent with a time limit of ~~thirty~~ years. The return date is—tonight."		"'The Book of the Ultimate Contemplation of Cooking' has been lent with a time limit of thirteen years. The return date is—tonight."

	===Part 3===		===Part 3===
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	Dalian was the one asking back. Lesley looked down on her in nostalgia and said,		Dalian was the one asking back. Lesley looked down on her in nostalgia and said,

	"I've changed quite a bit in those ~~thirty~~ years, but you look the same like when we met, ...Black Biblioprincess. Or was it your mother that time?"		"I've changed quite a bit in those thirteen years, but you look the same like when we met, ...Black Biblioprincess. Or was it your mother that time?"

	Dalian didn't answer and just gazed at her.		Dalian didn't answer and just gazed at her.
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	She answered the question with silence.		She answered the question with silence.

	"Was it you who accepted the Phantom Book ~~thirty~~ years ago from my grandfather?" asked Huey.		"Was it you who accepted the Phantom Book thirteen years ago from my grandfather?" asked Huey.

	"Yes, exactly."		"Yes, exactly."
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	Lesley turned around with a wary expression, but Dalian kept looking straight into her face and continued,		Lesley turned around with a wary expression, but Dalian kept looking straight into her face and continued,

	"If someone without the qualifications is holding a Phantom Book, then this person gets engulfed in the magical power of the book... I only know very few Phantom Book Readers that held a Phantom Book for ~~thirty~~ years and didn't drown in this power."		"If someone without the qualifications is holding a Phantom Book, then this person gets engulfed in the magical power of the book... I only know very few Phantom Book Readers that held a Phantom Book for thirteen years and didn't drown in this power."

	"...Should I be proud about this?"		"...Should I be proud about this?"
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	With the dignified sound of metal, the door was locked with no mercy. The last thing that could be heard inside the darkened underground room was the bright voice of the chef.		With the dignified sound of metal, the door was locked with no mercy. The last thing that could be heard inside the darkened underground room was the bright voice of the chef.

	"By all means I have to serve this cooking to the Lord! The best cooking I used ~~thirty~~ years to complete!"		"By all means I have to serve this cooking to the Lord! The best cooking I used thirteen years to complete!"

	===Part 4===		===Part 4===
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	Dalian shook her head to Huey's mutter. An extremely frail expression floated over her face.		Dalian shook her head to Huey's mutter. An extremely frail expression floated over her face.

	"She might have crossed the 'boundary' from the beginning. With us just not noticing it. And now slowly, after ~~thirty~~ years she has..."		"She might have crossed the 'boundary' from the beginning. With us just not noticing it. And now slowly, after thirteen years she has..."

	"Could be."		"Could be."
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	The era couldn't be determined, but it was quite an old book. The words "The Book of the Ultimate Contemplation of Cooking" were engraved on its cover. Embracing this book tightly, she said in a kind voice,		The era couldn't be determined, but it was quite an old book. The words "The Book of the Ultimate Contemplation of Cooking" were engraved on its cover. Embracing this book tightly, she said in a kind voice,

	"My father was a cook, too. He worked at this mansion ~~thirty~~ years ago... but his cuisine couldn't satisfy the Lord, no, my father just accidentally used injured ingredients once and was fired just because of that. As a consequence, he died shortly after."		"My father was a cook, too. He worked at this mansion thirteen years ago... but his cuisine couldn't satisfy the Lord, no, my father just accidentally used injured ingredients once and was fired just because of that. As a consequence, he died shortly after."

	"...so you're here for revenge?"		"...so you're here for revenge?"

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Part 6

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	===Part 6===		===Part 6===

	There was a car stopped in midst of a mountain pass.		There was a car stopped in midst of a mountain pass..............

	It was an old car once used by the army, and the dim silver body of the car was wet by the early morning fog. The right back wheel was dismantled and the young driver was crouching beside it. A fluffy blanket was laid on the leather-coated seats with a little girl snuggled up in it like a cat.		It was an old car once used by the army, and the dim silver body of the car was wet by the early morning fog. The right back wheel was dismantled and the young driver was crouching beside it. A fluffy blanket was laid on the leather-coated seats with a little girl snuggled up in it like a cat.

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	Although his gentle features implied a good upbringing, his hands were oddly accustomed to the use of tools and his movements resembled that of a soldier who had received special training.		Although his gentle features implied a good upbringing, his hands were oddly accustomed to the use of tools and his movements resembled that of a soldier who had received special training.

	"...I am bored," a girl that was sitting on the load platform addressed him. She has a nice ass and giant boobs. She became a prostitute. They fuck her every time everywhere. And then the girl took off her bra then he grope her gigantic breast. They did a tit job after that the girl is full of Cum in her face.		"...I am bored," a girl that was sitting on the load platform addressed him.

	Her age was no more than about 12 or 13 years. Her white skin seemed almost transparent and was covered by a jet black dress.		Her age was no more than about 12 or 13 years. Her white skin seemed almost transparent and was covered by a jet black dress.

120.28.64.78: /* Part 1 */

2012-05-28T05:25:11Z

Part 1

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	Although his gentle features implied a good upbringing, his hands were oddly accustomed to the use of tools and his movements resembled that of a soldier who had received special training.		Although his gentle features implied a good upbringing, his hands were oddly accustomed to the use of tools and his movements resembled that of a soldier who had received special training.

	"...I am bored," a girl that was sitting on the load platform addressed him.		"...I am bored," a girl that was sitting on the load platform addressed him. She has a nice ass and giant boobs. She became a prostitute. They fuck her every time everywhere. And then the girl took off her bra then he grope her gigantic breast. They did a tit job after that the girl is full of Cum in her face.

	Her age was no more than about 12 or 13 years. Her white skin seemed almost transparent and was covered by a jet black dress.		Her age was no more than about 12 or 13 years. Her white skin seemed almost transparent and was covered by a jet black dress.

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Putting the title where it belongs

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	~~==Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet Food <br><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie</span>==~~
	A deserted graveyard at dusk.		A deserted graveyard at dusk.

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	The crimson moon beheld this scene vacantly from high above in the sky.		The crimson moon beheld this scene vacantly from high above in the sky.


			==Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet Food <br><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie</span>==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	==~~Prologue~~==		==Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet Food <br><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie</span>==
	A deserted graveyard at dusk.		A deserted graveyard at dusk.

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	The crimson moon beheld this scene vacantly from high above in the sky.		The crimson moon beheld this scene vacantly from high above in the sky.



	~~==Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet Food <br><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie</span>==~~
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	==Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet Food<br /><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie</span>==		==Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet Food <br><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie</span>==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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			==Prologue==
	A deserted graveyard at dusk.		A deserted graveyard at dusk.

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	==Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet Food<br /><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie</span>==		==Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet Food<br /><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie</span>==
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	The expression that flashed over Lesley's face was a bit mysterious. One could not tell whether she was happy or sorrowful.		The expression that flashed over Lesley's face was a bit mysterious. One could not tell whether she was happy or sorrowful.

	===2===		===Part 2===

	The gourmet's mansion was on a hill with a view over the lush forest.		The gourmet's mansion was on a hill with a view over the lush forest.
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	"'The Book of the Ultimate Contemplation of Cooking' has been lent with a time limit of thirty years. The return date is—tonight."		"'The Book of the Ultimate Contemplation of Cooking' has been lent with a time limit of thirty years. The return date is—tonight."

	===3===		===Part 3===

	After leaving Graham's workroom, Huey headed together with Dalian to the kitchen.		After leaving Graham's workroom, Huey headed together with Dalian to the kitchen.
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	"By all means I have to serve this cooking to the Lord! The best cooking I used thirty years to complete!"		"By all means I have to serve this cooking to the Lord! The best cooking I used thirty years to complete!"

	===4===		===Part 4===

	Huey searched in his pockets and took out a lighter. It was a unrefined lighter for military use developed during the war in Austria. Blue sparks scattered, the smell of burned oil started to spread out and then a small flame illuminated the underground room.		Huey searched in his pockets and took out a lighter. It was a unrefined lighter for military use developed during the war in Austria. Blue sparks scattered, the smell of burned oil started to spread out and then a small flame illuminated the underground room.
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	It was right after that, that the people attracted by the spice came rushing like a giant wave to crush the two of them.		It was right after that, that the people attracted by the spice came rushing like a giant wave to crush the two of them.

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	The gourmet Graham Atkinson was currently dining.		The gourmet Graham Atkinson was currently dining.
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	The gourmet, famous in the capital, led a piece of his own freshly cut up brain with relish to his mouth and, with a blissful mien, --- smiled.		The gourmet, famous in the capital, led a piece of his own freshly cut up brain with relish to his mouth and, with a blissful mien, --- smiled.

	===6===		===Part 6===

	There was a car stopped in midst of a mountain pass.		There was a car stopped in midst of a mountain pass.

Idiotism: /* Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet FoodEpisode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie */

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Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet FoodEpisode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie

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	Lesley said, with a melancholic face.		Lesley said, with a melancholic face.

	"It doesn't suffice to just make sure they don't suffer. Rather, they have find it pleasant. The secret for the best cooking was to let the raw materials feel the greatest of pleasures so they would be fulfilled with pleasurable substances while cooking them."		"It doesn't suffice to just make sure they don't suffer. Rather, they have to find it pleasant. The secret for the best cooking was to let the raw materials feel the greatest of pleasures so they would be fulfilled with pleasurable substances while cooking them."

	"...The greatest of pleasures?"		"...The greatest of pleasures?"

Idiotism: /* Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet FoodEpisode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie */

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Chapter 1 - Worship of Gourmet FoodEpisode 01: Meditations de Gastronomie

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	While adjusting his brand-new necktie, Huey gave a laid-back answer, "Mr. Graham has become so wealthy because he built up a fortune in his young years by doing forward trading with corn. Even now when he has retired, he arranges a dinner party with lots of guests every month. And because of the very special cooking that is served at those, you can apparently pride yourself on getting invited."		While adjusting his brand-new necktie, Huey gave a laid-back answer, "Mr. Graham has become so wealthy because he built up a fortune in his young years by doing forward trading with corn. Even now when he has retired, he arranges a dinner party with lots of guests every month. And because of the very special cooking that is served at those, you can apparently pride yourself on getting invited."

	"...what a wretched bunch," she cursed with a ~~quite~~ grumpy expression, which probably originated from her aversion of being in crowds.		"...what a wretched bunch," she cursed with quite a grumpy expression, which probably originated from her aversion of being in crowds.

	Another reason for her bad mood was the fact that she was the target of countless curious gazes; her exotic black dress stood out even among all the other guests, dressed up as they were.		Another reason for her bad mood was the fact that she was the target of countless curious gazes; her exotic black dress stood out even among all the other guests, dressed up as they were.
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	The noble-looking man extended his arms exaggeratedly and shook his head.		The noble-looking man extended his arms exaggeratedly and shook his head.

	"That's again a story beyond belief: he seems to be seeking for the perfect taste by doing so. Adrenalin... was it, I think. Animals emit adrenalin when they die in pain, which causes the meat to get chewy and the flavour to weaken. Of course, that's a difference so subtle we ~~commoners~~ people cannot perceive it, though."		"That's again a story beyond belief: he seems to be seeking for the perfect taste by doing so. Adrenalin... was it, I think. Animals emit adrenalin when they die in pain, which causes the meat to get chewy and the flavour to weaken. Of course, that's a difference so subtle we common people cannot perceive it, though."

	"You mean... he is doing it just to prevent that effect...?"		"You mean... he is doing it just to prevent that effect...?"
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	"Won't you take part in the dinner party?" Huey asked after a short pause.		"Won't you take part in the dinner party?" Huey asked after a short pause.

	Although the dinner party should have ~~had~~ begun by now, Graham didn't seem to intend to go.		Although the dinner party should have begun by now, Graham didn't seem to intend to go.

	"Don't make me laugh," the gourmet ranted. "Do you ask me to dine together with a bunch that won't stop talking about silly rumours, their business and other nonsense during that holy time? ''Me''? Such a dinner party is of no worth! I only organize those because I have no other choice for business. You may call it fawning on incompetent trustees."		"Don't make me laugh," the gourmet ranted. "Do you ask me to dine together with a bunch that won't stop talking about silly rumours, their business and other nonsense during that holy time? ''Me''? Such a dinner party is of no worth! I only organize those because I have no other choice for business. You may call it fawning on incompetent trustees."
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	This was, without doubt, the chef of this mansion. Her movements were completely unlike that of the others.		This was, without doubt, the chef of this mansion. Her movements were completely unlike that of the others.

	The pot danced around in her hands almost as if it had a will of its own and an appetite quickening odour spread out just by her ~~addition~~ spices or sauces. When she took a knife, she cut meat with solid bones or vegetables with vivid movements and dished them up beautifully like a flower bed, despite that she didn't seem to put much power in her grip.		The pot danced around in her hands almost as if it had a will of its own and an appetite quickening odour spread out just by her adding spices or sauces. When she took a knife, she cut meat with solid bones or vegetables with vivid movements and dished them up beautifully like a flower bed, despite that she didn't seem to put much power in her grip.

	Huey seemed captivated and stood stock still for a while, unable to shift his gaze.		Huey seemed captivated and stood stock still for a while, unable to shift his gaze.
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	Lesley turned around with a wary expression, but Dalian kept looking straight into her face and continued,		Lesley turned around with a wary expression, but Dalian kept looking straight into her face and continued,

	"If someone without the qualifications is holding a Phantom Book, then this person gets engulfed in the magical power of the book... I do only know very few Phantom Book Readers that held a Phantom Book for thirty years and didn't drown in this power."		"If someone without the qualifications is holding a Phantom Book, then this person gets engulfed in the magical power of the book... I only know very few Phantom Book Readers that held a Phantom Book for thirty years and didn't drown in this power."

	"...Should I be proud about this?"		"...Should I be proud about this?"