Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter5 - Revision history

Cthaeh at 02:20, 24 July 2013

2013-07-24T02:20:40Z

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	In the later Han dynasty, a man from Rǔnán found his way into the vase of a [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xian_%28Taoism%29 Xian]. And what he saw there was a giant, solemn palace in a separate world. The world of the vase, in other words, the vase world---		In the later Han dynasty, a man from Rǔnán found his way into the vase of a [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xian_%28Taoism%29 Xian]. And what he saw there was a giant, solemn palace in a separate world. The world of the vase, in other words, the vase world---

	"Oh, you are better ~~then~~ I thought. Well done," said Dalian with a disinterested voice.		"Oh, you are better than I thought. Well done," said Dalian with a disinterested voice.

	Huey sullenly showed a crooked smile. "Oh thank you... but how is that related to grandpa's library?"		Huey sullenly showed a crooked smile. "Oh thank you... but how is that related to grandpa's library?"

DarkeKyuubi at 02:03, 24 July 2013

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	In the later Han dynasty, a man from Rǔnán found his way into the vase of a [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xian_%28Taoism%29 Xian]. And what he saw there was a giant, solemn palace in a separate world. The world of the vase, in other words, the vase world---		In the later Han dynasty, a man from Rǔnán found his way into the vase of a [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xian_%28Taoism%29 Xian]. And what he saw there was a giant, solemn palace in a separate world. The world of the vase, in other words, the vase world---

	"Oh, you are better ~~that~~ I thought. Well done," said Dalian with a disinterested voice.		"Oh, you are better then I thought. Well done," said Dalian with a disinterested voice.

	Huey sullenly showed a crooked smile. "Oh thank you... but how is that related to grandpa's library?"		Huey sullenly showed a crooked smile. "Oh thank you... but how is that related to grandpa's library?"

EusthEnoptEron: Putting the title where it belongs to

2012-01-28T16:46:32Z

Putting the title where it belongs to

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	~~==Chapter 4 - The Pop-up Book <br /><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 00: The Harlequinade</span>==~~
	The awful silence was broken by someone asking, "Where am I?"		The awful silence was broken by someone asking, "Where am I?"

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	The girl didn't answer his question. One could only hear the sound of paper. The frail sound of turning pages.		The girl didn't answer his question. One could only hear the sound of paper. The frail sound of turning pages.


			==Chapter 4 - The Pop-up Book <br /><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 00: The Harlequinade</span>==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

Ssj6piccolo: Intro after Chapter Header, 'Part' prefix for parts & re-activated TOC

2012-01-23T12:02:44Z

Intro after Chapter Header, 'Part' prefix for parts & re-activated TOC

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			==Chapter 4 - The Pop-up Book <br /><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 00: The Harlequinade</span>==
	The awful silence was broken by someone asking, "Where am I?"		The awful silence was broken by someone asking, "Where am I?"

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	The girl didn't answer his question. One could only hear the sound of paper. The frail sound of turning pages.		The girl didn't answer his question. One could only hear the sound of paper. The frail sound of turning pages.

			===Part 1===

	~~==Chapter 4 - The Pop-up Book<br /><span style="font-style: italic; font-size: .8em">Episode 00: The Harlequinade</span>==~~

	===1===

	This stone-built residence was half a day away from the capital, going by car and train.		This stone-built residence was half a day away from the capital, going by car and train.
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	A big, old lock hung in front of the girl's chest.		A big, old lock hung in front of the girl's chest.

	===2===		===Part 2===


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	The moment she pushed the book in her arms against her chest, the bell at the entrance rung.		The moment she pushed the book in her arms against her chest, the bell at the entrance rung.

	===3===		===Part 3===


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	Her voice was awfully cold and even resembled that of the grim reaper when he took someone with him.		Her voice was awfully cold and even resembled that of the grim reaper when he took someone with him.

	===4===		===Part 4===

	On the way to the northern tower, they happened upon even more corpses.		On the way to the northern tower, they happened upon even more corpses.
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	Then he finally smiled wryly and nodded.		Then he finally smiled wryly and nodded.

	===5===		===Part 5===

	Conrad's corpse was in his office.		Conrad's corpse was in his office.
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	{{Dantalian no Shoka Nav\|prev=Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter4\|next=Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter6}}		{{Dantalian no Shoka Nav\|prev=Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter4\|next=Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter6}}
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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	"Tell me... why does ~~Wez~~' grandson come here after such a long time?"		"Tell me... why does Wes' grandson come here after such a long time?"

	The young man stood surprised for a moment, but then he got a grip and slightly shook his head. "I am looking for the library."		The young man stood surprised for a moment, but then he got a grip and slightly shook his head. "I am looking for the library."

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2011-08-20T10:00:47Z

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	Or rather, she was afraid of him. Like a timid, shy child.		Or rather, she was afraid of him. Like a timid, shy child.

	"You are... ~~Wez~~' grandchild?"		"You are... Wes' grandchild?"

	She asked sceptically, upon which the young man, Huey, raised an eyebrow.		She asked sceptically, upon which the young man, Huey, raised an eyebrow.

Unkani: Tiny mistake in my last edit

2011-08-13T23:59:55Z

Tiny mistake in my last edit

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	The boy nodded. Indeed, this place was like a labyrinth and at the same time, like a library.		The boy nodded. Indeed, this place was like a labyrinth and at the same time, like a library.

	But he was convinced there was be a more appropriate name. Therefore, he asked again.		But he was convinced there was a more appropriate name. Therefore, he asked again.

	"What else?"		"What else?"

Unkani: Grammatical and awkwardness fixes

2011-08-13T23:50:20Z

Grammatical and awkwardness fixes

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Starkiller4299 at 19:45, 3 August 2011

2011-08-03T19:45:58Z

Zero2001: A gift

2011-07-28T21:55:07Z

A gift

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	What remained in the blood-soaked study was only a large number of books, which had lost their owner.		What remained in the blood-soaked study was only a large number of books, which had lost their owner.



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	~~\| Back to [[Dantalian_no_Shoka~~:~~Volume1_Chapter4\|Special Chapter 1]]~~
	~~\| Return to [[Dantalian_no_Shoka\|Main Page]]~~
	~~\| Forward to [[Dantalian_no_Shoka:Volume1_Chapter6\|Special Chapter 2]]~~
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	Dalian hesitatingly accepted the presented teacup.		Dalian hesitatingly accepted the presented teacup.

	"In a way, yes. Right now it isn't ~~worth it~~ to return to the university anyway, so I thought I'd laze around a bit and live off grandpa's inheritance... my uncle and cousins won't come close to this manor anyway, will or not."		"In a way, yes. Right now it isn't worthwhile to return to the university anyway, so I thought I'd laze around a bit and live off grandpa's inheritance... my uncle and cousins won't come close to this manor anyway, will or not."

	Huey smiled weakly while dropping a sugar cube into his cup and stirring it.		Huey smiled weakly while dropping a sugar cube into his cup and stirring it.
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	"As I thought... so it was Conrad who has taken ''that book''," the girl whispered quietly while touching the lock in front of her chest.		"As I thought... so it was Conrad who has taken ''that book''," the girl whispered quietly while touching the lock in front of her chest.

	Her voice was awfully cold and even resembled ~~the one~~ of the grim reaper when he takes someone with him.		Her voice was awfully cold and even resembled that of the grim reaper when he takes someone with him.

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	No, one would have to say it was the picture itself that had been drawn with it.		No, one would have to say it was the picture itself that had been drawn with it.

	The giant beast, which had brutally brutally ~~guzzled~~ the employees of the mansion and attacked the two of them, was actually a painting of someone.		The giant beast, which had brutally brutally devoured the employees of the mansion and attacked the two of them, was actually a painting of someone.

	"In the world there are illusory books that originally should not exist. The phantom books, created through the knowledge of the demon world or secret ceremonies of the devils..."		"In the world there are illusory books that originally should not exist. The phantom books, created through the knowledge of the demon world or secret ceremonies of the devils..."
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	~~《No~~. We art the Realm -- the Endless Realm within thine Vase》		《Nay. We art the Realm -- the Endless Realm within thine Vase》