Dantega:Volume 2 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Deck of cards at 21:58, 23 March 2021

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74.87.29.101 at 22:19, 10 June 2013

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	Lelaine's gaze shifts away as she replies, "I can't do that."		Lelaine's gaze shifts away as she replies, "I can't do that."

	Trojia's eyes instantly lose its shine, she pauses for a moment and her face turns cold. "Very well then... Since I am no longer your daughter~~...~~ I can honestly say that for this... I hate you."		Trojia's eyes instantly lose its shine, she pauses for a moment and her face turns cold. "Very well then... Since I am no longer your daughter, I can honestly say that for doing this to me... I hate you."

	Her words pierce Lelaine's heart, she jolts in shock at this feeling, she watches her only child enter the carriage followed by her body guard and five nuns. T		Her words pierce Lelaine's heart, she jolts in shock at this feeling, she watches her only child enter the carriage followed by her body guard and five nuns.

	he carriage drives off into the distance while she still stands frozen in the same position. She never thought she would hear those words come from Trojia, but even more so, she never thought that if she were to hear it, it would affect her so much that her soul would feel like it has been sucked out of her body.		The carriage drives off into the distance while she still stands frozen in the same position. She never thought she would hear those words come from Trojia, but even more so, she never thought that if she were to hear it, it would affect her so much that her soul would feel like it has been sucked out of her body.

	The current Lelaine is once again laying on the bed zoning out on the picture that depicts them in such a happy and loving state.		The current Lelaine is once again laying on the bed zoning out on the picture that depicts them in such a happy and loving state.

Deck of cards at 01:55, 27 April 2013

2013-04-27T01:55:50Z

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	He grabs the helmet that looks three sizes too big off of Ash's head and points to the inside of it, a large tag with the name of the dead Eiyalazonian soldier is written in bold.		He grabs the helmet that looks three sizes too big off of Ash's head and points to the inside of it, a large tag with the name of the dead Eiyalazonian soldier is written in bold.

	'''Applic Stellson'''.		'''Applic Stellson'''.

	Ash hides her face in her forearm from embarrassment and softly says, "Oh..."		Ash hides her face in her forearm from embarrassment and softly says, "Oh..."

Deck of cards at 01:53, 27 April 2013

2013-04-27T01:53:46Z

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	Zurvick turns, puts on a stupid smile and says, "Your welcome!"		Zurvick turns, puts on a stupid smile and says, "Your welcome!"



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	Sturgess sits on a gondola on the mote that surrounds the castle of Troy; he is accompanied by two men, one in a blue robe, and the other is rowing the boat in a suit of armor.		Sturgess sits on a gondola on the mote that surrounds the castle of Troy; he is accompanied by two men, one in a blue robe, and the other is rowing the boat in a suit of armor.
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	He laughs for a moment and stops abruptly, he puts his hand back in the cold water and with a grinning frown says, "It looks like I have just made a deal with the Devil."		He laughs for a moment and stops abruptly, he puts his hand back in the cold water and with a grinning frown says, "It looks like I have just made a deal with the Devil."



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	"Quite the hansom young man you make Ash." Says Zurvick with a contempt smile on his face.		"Quite the hansom young man you make Ash." Says Zurvick with a contempt smile on his face.
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	He grabs the helmet that looks three sizes too big off of Ash's head and points to the inside of it, a large tag with the name of the dead Eiyalazonian soldier is written in bold.		He grabs the helmet that looks three sizes too big off of Ash's head and points to the inside of it, a large tag with the name of the dead Eiyalazonian soldier is written in bold.

	'''' Applic Stellson''''.		'''Applic Stellson'''.

	Ash hides her face in her forearm from embarrassment and softly says, "Oh..."		Ash hides her face in her forearm from embarrassment and softly says, "Oh..."
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	Zurvick smiles and says, "Not a chance."		Zurvick smiles and says, "Not a chance."



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	Lelaine walks through the innards of the Trojan castle, the hallways are lined with the portraits of past Kings, Queens, Princes, princesses and other royals. She is in an entranced state as she slides her hand on the wall as she walks.		Lelaine walks through the innards of the Trojan castle, the hallways are lined with the portraits of past Kings, Queens, Princes, princesses and other royals. She is in an entranced state as she slides her hand on the wall as she walks.
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	To her surprise, she finds that the photo is of both her and Trojia embracing in a fun looking pose while they are both smiling, this causes her to reveal a strained smile. She thinks back to the reaction that Trojia had when she first informed her of the triple marriage between the tree super powers of the world.		To her surprise, she finds that the photo is of both her and Trojia embracing in a fun looking pose while they are both smiling, this causes her to reveal a strained smile. She thinks back to the reaction that Trojia had when she first informed her of the triple marriage between the tree super powers of the world.

	"What!? You're sending me away!?" ~~Shouts~~ Trojia.		"What!? You're sending me away!?" shouts Trojia.

	The two are sitting on a dinner table that lies in a massive dinning room. Lelaine shakes her head and replies, "It's not like that, this is for the greater good."		The two are sitting on a dinner table that lies in a massive dinning room. Lelaine shakes her head and replies, "It's not like that, this is for the greater good."
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	Lelaine thinks about this for few moments and asks, "What's the catch? What is it that you want in return?"		Lelaine thinks about this for few moments and asks, "What's the catch? What is it that you want in return?"

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	The snake sticks out it's tongue and smoothly says, "None whatsoever. I merely am a humble being that is compassionate toward loving parents who have been separated from their children. So what say you fair Queen? Will you allow me to bring your daughter home?"		The snake sticks out it's tongue and smoothly says, "None whatsoever. I merely am a humble being that is compassionate toward loving parents who have been separated from their children. So what say you fair Queen? Will you allow me to bring your daughter home?"
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	She tenderly smiles, lays back down on her daughter's bed and gently falls asleep.		She tenderly smiles, lays back down on her daughter's bed and gently falls asleep.



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	"It's been a while Ditreig." Says Zurvick as he runs his hands through his hair.		"It's been a while Ditreig." Says Zurvick as he runs his hands through his hair.
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	Her and the King (END)		Her and the King: (END)

Deck of cards at 05:36, 26 April 2013

2013-04-26T05:36:10Z

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