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	p54 : jet coaster : grand huit ou montagne russe, mais peut-être aurait-il mieux valu laisse le mot anglais ?		p54 : jet coaster : grand huit ou montagne russe, mais peut-être aurait-il mieux valu laisse le mot anglais ?

			p62 : le "très bien" n'est pas prononcé, je crois.

	P74 : elle dit "goto-kun", je crois ???		P74 : elle dit "goto-kun", je crois ???

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	Pour la classe 2-C, l'étude commence une minute après la sonnerie. Au moment où nous entendons...		Pour la classe 2-C, l'étude commence une minute après la sonnerie. Au moment où nous entendons...
	"Je suis en retard, je suis en retard, je suis en retard...!"		"Je suis en retard, je suis en retard, je suis en retard...!"
	Et Fuji-nee entre précipitamment dans la salle.		Et Fuji-nee entre précipitamment dans la salle.
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	"Right. As a result, members of the other clubs are in trouble.		"Right. As a result, members of the other clubs are in trouble.
	I'm working hard to make the budget go to them, but I'm having trouble because it's not clear where the money's going.		I'm working hard to make the budget go to them, but I'm having trouble because it's not clear where the money's going.
	In particular, there's no solution for the shortages of heaters during winter."		In particular, there's no solution for the shortages of heaters during winter."[l]
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	"I see. Oh, can you hand me the torque screwdriver? The biggest one. And the conductive wire too.		"I see. Oh, can you hand me the torque screwdriver? The biggest one. And the conductive wire too.
	...Yeah, I should be able to fix this."		...Yeah, I should be able to fix this."
	"Conductive wire? ...Uh, is this it? Sorry, I don't know exactly.		"Conductive wire? ...Uh, is this it? Sorry, I don't know exactly.[l]
	Tell me if I'm wrong."		Tell me if I'm wrong."
	"You're right. So, what was that about the shortage of heaters? Are there other broken ones?"		"You're right. So, what was that about the shortage of heaters? Are there other broken ones?"
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	"...Hm. You think it can be fixed, Emiya?"		"...Hm. You think it can be fixed, Emiya?"
	"Yup. In cases like this, old things are nice because they're easy to understand.		"Yup. In cases like this, old things are nice because they're easy to understand.[l]
	It's just a shorted connection, so it should last the whole year if we replace that."		It's just a shorted connection, so it should last the whole year if we replace that."
	"I see! Good job, Emiya. I'm always so pleased when you're reliable."		"I see! Good job, Emiya. I'm always so pleased when you're reliable."
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	I block off my vision and look inside the heater with my sense of touch.		I block off my vision and look inside the heater with my sense of touch.
	In that moment...		[line3]In that moment...
	An image appears in my head.		An image appears in my head.
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	That is the "magic" Emiya Shirou learned from Kiritsugu.		That is the "magic" Emiya Shirou learned from Kiritsugu.
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	"All right, let's begin."		"[line4]All right, let's begin."
	I take the cover off and start to work.		I take the cover off and start to work.
	I already know where it's broken, so the rest is easy.		I already know where it's broken, so the rest is easy.
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	Though, that's only the case for simple things that can be fixed with "amateur knowledge".		Though, that's only the case for simple things that can be fixed with "amateur knowledge".
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	"Done. On to the next one..."		"[line3]Done. On to the next one..."
	I pack away the conducting wire that I used and go out into the hallway with screwdriver and wrench in hand.		I pack away the conducting wire that I used and go out into the hallway with screwdriver and wrench in hand.
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	"Issei, the repairs are done."		"Issei, the repairs are done."
	But.		[line4]But.
	In the hallway is someone else apart from Issei, a girl.		In the hallway is someone else apart from Issei, a girl.
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	""		"[line4]"
	I'm a bit surprised.		I'm a bit surprised.
	The person talking to Issei is Tohsaka Rin, from class 2-A.		The person talking to Issei is Tohsaka Rin, from class 2-A.
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	The first homeroom bell has rung, so Fuji-Nee should be here in about five minutes.		The first homeroom bell has rung, so Fuji-Nee should be here in about five minutes.
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	"Phew."		"[line3]Phew."
	I'm a bit out of breath since we ran here from the AV room.		I'm a bit out of breath since we ran here from the AV room.
	Taking a deep breath, I head to my seat.		Taking a deep breath, I head to my seat.
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	And Fuji-Nee runs into the classroom.		And Fuji-Nee runs into the classroom.
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	"All right, I made it! Good morning, everyo"		"All right, I made it! Good morning, everyo[line3]"
	Wham!		Wham!
	Fuji-Nee falls over with a terrible sound.		Fuji-Nee falls over with a terrible sound.
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	""		"[line8]"
	The classroom is filled with silence, in contrast to the clamor from a second ago.		The classroom is filled with silence, in contrast to the clamor from a second ago.
	A sudden change of atmosphere.		A sudden change of atmosphere.
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	She chats in between the announcements, so we don't get through it very fast.		She chats in between the announcements, so we don't get through it very fast.
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	"So everyone, please note the curfew.		"So everyone, please note the curfew.[l]
	It's at six o'clock, so people with club activities shouldn't stay too late either."		It's at six o'clock, so people with club activities shouldn't stay too late either."
	"What? Six o'clock is too early, Taiga-Sensei. Can't the athletic clubs be exempted?"		"What? Six o'clock is too early, Taiga-Sensei. Can't the athletic clubs be exempted?"
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	But it's certainly not something I have to go to. They're probably just having people come in because they want to party after work.		But it's certainly not something I have to go to. They're probably just having people come in because they want to party after work.
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	""		"[line4]"
	There are two options.		There are two options.
	I		I[line3]

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"Issei, you there?"
"I am. You're a bit late today, Emiya."
He must have been studying, as Issei looks up from the paper he's reading.
*page1|
"Just you, Issei? Where are the others? Shouldn't they be here now as well?"
"No. Unfortunately, our members are very businesslike.
They have their set work hours, and they don't want to come in early or stay late."
"That's why the student council president is doing the routine duties himself, huh? I guess this place has its own problems."
*page2|
"No, it's the kind of trouble I like. You don't need to pity me."
"Huh? Uh, no, I wasn't pitying you or anything."
"Hm. I'm not happy about that either, but I'll pretend I didn't hear it. It still means that you care."
*page3|
Issei, who is organizing the papers he was reading, is the big boss of this student council room.
He's the guy trying his best to reform this lax student council, and he's been a friend of mine since first year.
His full name is Ryudou Issei.
Despite his old-fashioned name, he has elegant features and he's really popular with the girls.
And he's also the student council president, so you'd think he'd take to it like a duck to water, but...
*page4|
"Hm. Hot tea is certainly a good way to start a morning."
He's just sipping tea like this, so he's not that firm.
*page5|
As you can see, Issei has a plain personality.
It's easily misunderstood, but he doesn't involve himself in love affairs nor engage in normal student recreations.
It's because he's the successor of the Ryudou Temple, up in the mountains.
He's fine with that idea, so there's a good chance he'll shave his head when he graduates.
*page6|
"So, what am I doing today?"
"Hm? Well, I'd like to let you sit down and take a rest first... but I guess we don't have time. I'll explain as we go, so bring your usual tools and follow me."
*page7|
"Frankly, our school's budget is completely unbalanced."
"I know. The athletic clubs are favored, so other clubs don't get much, right?"
"Right. As a result, members of the other clubs are in trouble.
I'm working hard to make the budget go to them, but I'm having trouble because it's not clear where the money's going.
In particular, there's no solution for the shortages of heaters during winter."
*page8|
"I see. Oh, can you hand me the torque screwdriver? The biggest one. And the conductive wire too.
...Yeah, I should be able to fix this."
"Conductive wire? ...Uh, is this it? Sorry, I don't know exactly.
Tell me if I'm wrong."
"You're right. So, what was that about the shortage of heaters? Are there other broken ones?"
*page9|
"Yes. In the 2nd AV room and the art club. The petitions requesting new stoves are multiplying."
"But there's not enough budget to meet the demand, huh? As I thought, it's just getting old. Good thing it's not broken on the inside."
*page10|
"...Hm. You think it can be fixed, Emiya?"
"Yup. In cases like this, old things are nice because they're easy to understand.
It's just a shorted connection, so it should last the whole year if we replace that."
"I see! Good job, Emiya. I'm always so pleased when you're reliable."
*page11|
"You're wording it weirdly, Issei...
Oh, I'll be finished soon, so could you wait outside for a bit?"
"All right, I'll be out of your way."
*page12|
Issei leaves the room quietly.
...It seems he assumes that I'm going to do something delicate.
*page13|
"...Well, it is delicate, but..."
I place my hand on the old electric heater.
Usually, even if you're used to fixing things, it's hard to figure out what's wrong with it just by looking at it.
So the fact that I figured it out means what I'm doing is not ordinary.
*page14|
I block off my vision and look inside the heater with my sense of touch.
In that moment...
An image appears in my head.
*page15|
"...There are two places where the wire's about to break... The pipe should last a bit longer... Insulation tape should be enough for the power cord..."
...Good, I can fix this with the tools I have with me.
*page16|
If the pipe were broken, it couldn't be fixed by an amateur.
If that had been the case, I would have had to "strengthen" it in a very unamatuerish way. But in this case, just looking at it will suffice.
That is the "magic" Emiya Shirou learned from Kiritsugu.
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"All right, let's begin."
I take the cover off and start to work.
I already know where it's broken, so the rest is easy.
"...Man. This is the only thing I'm any good at."
*page18|
That's right. Emiya Shirou has no talent for magic.
Though it doesn't make up for it, I think I'm quite skilled at visualizing structures like I did just now.
In fact, when I first figured out a structure and reproduced it, my father looked surprised and said "what a useless ability".
*page19|
I guess my strong point isn't a useful ability.
According to my father, it's already a waste of effort to perceive the structure with my eyes.
For a real magus, there's no need to understand every corner of a structure like I just did.
*page20|
They say that the battle of the magus comes in reading the center, the core of things instantaneously, and changing it faster than anything else.
That's why reading the structure is a wasted effort, as even if you do understand the structure, all you can do is determine where magical energy could be more easily transmitted.
*page21|
So all in all, it turns out that my strong point is just in fixing things like this.
I don't have to open them up to look for damage.
If I can quickly search for broken parts and have the skills to repair them, most things can be fixed.
Though, that's only the case for simple things that can be fixed with "amateur knowledge".
*page22|
"Done. On to the next one..."
I pack away the conducting wire that I used and go out into the hallway with screwdriver and wrench in hand.
*page23|
"Issei, the repairs are done."
But.
In the hallway is someone else apart from Issei, a girl.
*page24|
""
I'm a bit surprised.
The person talking to Issei is Tohsaka Rin, from class 2-A.
She's a lady who lives in a big mansion on top of the hill, a perfect honor student.
Good looking, smart, athletic, and faultless.
She's intelligent, well mannered, and modest about her looks. People say she's the ideal woman.
*page25|
So it hardly needs to be said that the guys at my school treat her like an idol.
Though in Tohsaka's case, she's so perfect that she's considered unreachable.
It's commonly believed that only teachers and guys like Issei can even talk to her.
*page26|
...Well, to be honest, I'm a guy too.
So I'm one of Tohsaka Rin's admirers.
*page27|
"......"
Tohsaka looks at us as if she's in a bad mood.
It seems to be true that she and Issei don't get along.
*page28|
"Ah, sorry Emiya. I'm the one who asked for help, but it seems like you're doing all the work. Forgive me."
Wow.
Issei's an amazing man, talking like that and ignoring Tohsaka.
*page29|
"Don't worry about it. So, where next? There's not much time left."
"Yeah, the AV room is next. It seems it's been working badly for a while, but now it finally died."
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"It can't be fixed if it's dead. It would be quicker to just buy a new one."
"...True, but it'd help if you could take a look at it. It might be dead to my eyes, but only faking it to yours."
*page31|
"I see. Well, let's take a look."
There's only about 30 minutes left until homeroom.
I'll have to hurry if I'm going to fix it.
*page32|
I start for the AV room with Issei.
But it's impolite to ignore her completely when we've met like this.
*page33|
I turn back to Tohsaka, who's standing in a daze.
"You're up early, Tohsaka."
I make an honest comment, then follow Issei.
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"We barely made it. Thank you, Emiya. I caused you trouble again. I would be a failure as a friend if I made you late doing things for me."
"Don't worry about it. It's no big deal for me to be late. Though I guess it would be for you to be..."
"Indeed. Well, I'm glad we made it."
Issei heads to his seat, relieved.
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It's exactly eight o'clock.
The first homeroom bell has rung, so Fuji-Nee should be here in about five minutes.
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"Phew."
I'm a bit out of breath since we ran here from the AV room.
Taking a deep breath, I head to my seat.
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"You're so noisy in the mornings, Emiya. I was wondering what you'd been doing since quitting the club, but all you've been doing is helping out Ryudou? It's not my concern, but don't do anything to bring the club into disrepute, okay? You're pretty uncommitted after all."
*page38|
Matou Shinji, a friend of mine from middle school, is standing in front of my seat.
As you can tell from his last name, he's Sakura's brother who's one year older than her.
*page39|
"Yo. Is the archery club doing well, Shinji?"
"O-Of course...! There's no point in telling an outsider, but it's been peaceful since a certain attention-hog left. We'll do well in the next competition!"
*page40|
"I see. Mitsuzuri must be working hard."
"Huh? You're talking rubbish. The archery club is doing well because of me. You're just an outsider, Emiya, so you'll just embarrass yourself if you talk like you know about it."
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"I see, I'll be careful. But I won't have any concerns with the archery club since I don't have any business there."
I put my bag on the desk and pull out the chair.
*page42|
"What's that about? You're saying you're not interested in my archery club?"
"I said business, not interest. It'd be weird to go there when I'm an outsider, right?
But tell me if something comes up. I'll help if there's anything I can help with. You weren't good at fixing the bows and bowstrings, right?"
*page43|
"Oh, thanks. I'll call you if there's any work to be done.
Though I don't think that'll happen."
*page44|
"Yeah, that's good. You're not captain material if you leave work that needs to be done. Don't give Fujimura-Sensei too much trouble. She's scary when you piss her off."
"...! Huh, mind your own business. You're an outsider, so keep away from the dojo!"
*page45|
Shinji returns to his seat in his usual manner.
...Hm, he seemed even more irritated than usual today.
*page46|
"What a guy. How can he talk like that when he's the one who drove you out?"
"Oh, you were here, Issei?"
"What do you mean!? You're so cold, saying that to a friend who was listening in out of concern!"
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"Hm? Why would you do that? I'm not doing anything that should make you worry about me."
"Idiot. Of course I'll worry about you. You're the sort to lose your temper easily. Some people would cheer if you beat Shinji up, but all the girls would condemn you. It's not good to let a friend get into a situation like that."
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"I see. You're right now that you mention it. Thanks, Issei. I don't think it'll be a problem, but I'm grateful for your concern."
"Yes, well, as long as you understand... but it's strange. You lose your temper easily, but you're tolerant of Matou."
"Yeah, that's just his style. You get used to it if you hang around him for a long time."
*page49|
"Hm, I see."
"Yeah. If you understand, go back to your seat. Fujimura-Sensei will fly in here any second now."
"Haha. It's more like her to come floating in than flying in."
*page50|
The homeroom bell rings.
A homeroom teacher usually would come five minutes early, but our homeroom teacher isn't like that.
*page51|
For class 2-C, homeroom starts one minute after the bell rings. Right when we hear...
"I'm late, I'm late, I'm late...!"
And Fuji-Nee runs into the classroom.
*page52|
"All right, I made it! Good morning, everyo"
Wham!
Fuji-Nee falls over with a terrible sound.
*page53|
""
The classroom is filled with silence, in contrast to the clamor from a second ago.
A sudden change of atmosphere.
Just as you'd expect from Fuji-Nee. Her nickname of "human jet coaster" isn't just for show.
*page54|
...But that really was a bad hit.
Fuji-Nee is still on the ground, having hit her head on the platform.
You can't see her expression with her head facing the ground, so it gives you a bad mental image.
*page55|
"...Hey. Front row. Wake her up."
"...What? I don't want to. I'm scared she'll bite me if I go near her..."
"...She's not a Mimic or anything. She won't go that far."
"Hey, if you're saying that, why don't you do it?"
"Uh, I'll pass. I'm not used to this."
"Me neither! And why would you make a girl do it? A guy should do it!"
*page56|
The front row is getting noisy.
As we're in the middle rows, we can't tell what sort of state Fuji-Nee is in.
We can't tell, so we all stand up to look.
*page57|
"Hey, she's not moving. Has she passed out?"
Someone asks.
If so, the problem would be how to get her to the nurse's office.
*page58|
Everyone here is a warrior who has been with Fuji-Nee for the past year.
They probably want to get out of the habit of taking their teacher to the nurse's office.
*page59|
"Fujimura-Sensei...? Um, are you all right?"
A brave female student calls out to her.
Fuji-Nee doesn't even twitch.
A sense of worry runs through the room.
*page60|
"...That was a bad fall. She hit her head right on the platform. She'd have to be invincible to come out of that without a scratch."
"Hm. How about getting her for our baseball club?"
"D-Don't even joke about that! The day she's in charge of us, we'd get into the regionals!"
"Fujimura-Sensei, Fujimura-Sensei...! It's no good, there's no response...!"
*page61|
"Hey, why don't you wake her up since you're in front of her?"
"What!? No way! If she's really dead, I'll be killed!"
"But things could get bad later if we leave her like that."
"But no one wants to go near her."
"...I guess it can't be helped. We'll have to do... that."
"Yeah, that."
"All right."
*page62|
All our hearts become one.
...Well, not Shinji and I, because we're too scared.
*page63|
"One, two... wake up, Tiger!"
Even though everyone said it at the same time, it's only as loud as a whisper.
The "Tiger" part is especially quiet.
But still...
...A twitch.
The silent Fuji-Nee reacts.
*page64|
"Whoa, she moved!? It's working, everyone!"
"All right! Continue the punishment!"
Everyone must be stressed from the impending exams.
Even though they shouldn't, they repeat Fuji-Nee's nickname while waving their arms.
*page65|
"Wake up Tiger, it's morning!"
"Sensei, you're a tiger if you don't wake up!"
"Don't give up, Tiger! Stand up, Tiger!"
"Yeah, wake up, Sensei! Then you'll be a true Tiger!"
"T-i-g-e-r! T-i-g-e-r!"
*page66|
"Gahhh!!
Don't call me Tiger...!"
*page67|
A roar of lightning.
She stands bravely as if the fall has done nothing at all.
*page68|
"...Huh? What are you all doing? You can't stand up in middle of homeroom. Come on, sit down and I'll get started."
Fuji-Nee stands before everyone in her usual manner.
...It seems all memories from the moment she entered the classroom have fled her head.
*page69|
"...Hey, it seems Tiger doesn't remember what happened."
"...Lucky. We're really fortunate this morning."
"...Well, I don't know if we can call it 'lucky'..."
Everyone returns to their seats, chatting.
*page70|
"Huh? Did someone just make fun of me?"
"No, we didn't. Maybe you imagined it?"
"All right, good. Then I'll start homeroom, so listen up."
*page71|
Fuji-Nee starts homeroom slowly.
She chats in between the announcements, so we don't get through it very fast.
*page72|
"So everyone, please note the curfew.
It's at six o'clock, so people with club activities shouldn't stay too late either."
"What? Six o'clock is too early, Taiga-Sensei. Can't the athletic clubs be exempted?"
*page73|
"Nope. And please address your teacher as 'Fujimura-Sensei'. I'll get mad if you call me that again."
"All right, I'll be careful."
He sits down again, not showing any signs of listening to her.
*page74|
...How stupid of him.
Fuji-Nee gets mad when she says she will. It makes no difference that he's a student and she's a teacher.
He doesn't realize that she just gave him a final warning.
*page75|
"Well, that's it for today's homeroom. Let's meet again in English class in third period, everyone!"
Fuji-Nee leaves, waving her hand.
*page76|
She's the teacher responsible for class 2-C, Fujimura Taiga.
Her nickname is Tiger.
You might doubt it, but it really is her nickname.
*page77|
People like calling her so since she has a name like "Taiga" even though she's a woman. But Fuji-Nee herself hates the nickname.
According to her, it's unfeminine.
But she's that kind of person, so I think it's her own fault she has an unfeminine nickname.
*page78|
"We're starting class. Day monitor, the bows."
The teacher for the first period enters as Fuji-Nee exits.
It's like this every morning, as Fuji-Nee continues homeroom until the very last minute.
*page79|
And the classes end like every other day.
There are many kinds of students: ones that go to clubs, ones that hurry home, and ones that stay in the classroom for no reason.
It looks like I won't be in any of those categories.
*page80|
"Sorry, Emiya, about the rest of the repairs... do you have time today?"
"Well, I do have plans, but..."
It's not like I'm just playing around.
After all, the main reason I quit the archery club is because I wanted to prioritize work.
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It's already been five years since Father died, and I decided to start working to pay my living expenses.
If you work a lot, there are some jobs you just can't refuse.
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Today's an example.
They're restocking inventory at work, and they asked me to come if I can as any help is appreciated.
But it's certainly not something I have to go to. They're probably just having people come in because they want to party after work.
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