File:UtsuroNoHako 004.jpg - Revision history

Grrarr: this chng doesn't need to be added to the image; just fixing it in case we ever decide we have to redo the image for some other reaason...

2013-04-14T19:26:13Z

this chng doesn't need to be added to the image; just fixing it in case we ever decide we have to redo the image for some other reaason...

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	<!--NTS: much of this, I assume, should be synced to the presumably identical 10,876th time text -grrarr--><!--EEE: TL q: part of Daiya's description seems off - "An unrestrained and high-pressure student" - probably since it's from January 2010 -grrarr--><!-- You edited it to "volatile" in the 2nd volume - should we go with that? The adjective refers to his oppressive/rude/insolent attitude. -EEE --><!--Volatile works for me. But maybe a better libedit would change both words to read "An insolent and volatile student" ? Also, to be honest, part of the reason I chose volatile over other equally valid potential fixes was a bit random. I mildly suspected "high-pressure" might have been an overly literal translation, and using another gas-chemistry related term (that also had a non-chemistry meaning) seemed somewhat apt. --grrrarr-->March 2<sup>nd</sup>~~, morning~~.<!--EEE: TL Q: The printers should have used March 2nd, right? Even the lower right hand corner date (to say nothing of the storyline) has march 2nd-grrarr--><!-- It's a human error. Sunmasenshita. (ﾉω・)ﾃﾍ -EEE --><!--ah, no orz ing needed- my only issue is that you unfortunately punctured another piece of evidence in favor of my "cover info is always so darn messed up" school of thought :)-grrarr--><!--EEE: Also, if this were in the body of the volume, I'd change it (as I did in some instances) to "It's the morning of March 2<sup>nd</sup>" ; doing so for captions, where telegraphic language is more natural, seems less necessary.-grrarr-->		<!--NTS: much of this, I assume, should be synced to the presumably identical 10,876th time text -grrarr--><!--EEE: TL q: part of Daiya's description seems off - "An unrestrained and high-pressure student" - probably since it's from January 2010 -grrarr--><!-- You edited it to "volatile" in the 2nd volume - should we go with that? The adjective refers to his oppressive/rude/insolent attitude. -EEE --><!--Volatile works for me. But maybe a better libedit would change both words to read "An insolent and volatile student" ? Also, to be honest, part of the reason I chose volatile over other equally valid potential fixes was a bit random. I mildly suspected "high-pressure" might have been an overly literal translation, and using another gas-chemistry related term (that also had a non-chemistry meaning) seemed somewhat apt. --grrrarr-->It's the morning of March 2<sup>nd</sup>.<!--EEE: TL Q: The printers should have used March 2nd, right? Even the lower right hand corner date (to say nothing of the storyline) has march 2nd-grrarr--><!-- It's a human error. Sunmasenshita. (ﾉω・)ﾃﾍ -EEE --><!--ah, no orz ing needed- my only issue is that you unfortunately punctured another piece of evidence in favor of my "cover info is always so darn messed up" school of thought :)-grrarr--><!--EEE: Also, if this were in the body of the volume, I'd change it (as I did in some instances) to "It's the morning of March 2<sup>nd</sup>" ; doing so for captions, where telegraphic language is more natural, seems less necessary.-grrarr-->

	Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her makeup with the help of her blue hand mirror. She’s also making use of a tool that I, as a guy, don't know very well.		Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her makeup with the help of her blue hand mirror. She’s also making use of a tool that I, as a guy, don't know very well.

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2013-04-14T17:39:07Z

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Grrarr: of volatility, gas chemistry, telegraphic language, and other stuff

2013-04-14T16:50:40Z

of volatility, gas chemistry, telegraphic language, and other stuff

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	<!--NTS: much of this, I assume, should be synced to the presumably identical 10,876th time text -grrarr--><!--EEE: TL q: part of Daiya's description seems off - "An unrestrained and high-pressure student" - probably since it's from January 2010 -grrarr--><!-- You edited it to "volatile" in the 2nd volume - should we go with that? The adjective refers to his oppressive/rude/insolent attitude. -EEE -->March 2<sup>nd</sup>, morning.<!--EEE: TL Q: The printers should have used March 2nd, right? Even the lower right hand corner date (to say nothing of the storyline) has march 2nd-grrarr--><!-- It's a human error. Sunmasenshita. (ﾉω・)ﾃﾍ -EEE -->		<!--NTS: much of this, I assume, should be synced to the presumably identical 10,876th time text -grrarr--><!--EEE: TL q: part of Daiya's description seems off - "An unrestrained and high-pressure student" - probably since it's from January 2010 -grrarr--><!-- You edited it to "volatile" in the 2nd volume - should we go with that? The adjective refers to his oppressive/rude/insolent attitude. -EEE --><!--Volatile works for me. But maybe a better libedit would change both words to read "An insolent and volatile student" ? Also, to be honest, part of the reason I chose volatile over other equally valid potential fixes was a bit random. I mildly suspected "high-pressure" might have been an overly literal translation, and using another gas-chemistry related term (that also had a non-chemistry meaning) seemed somewhat apt. --grrrarr-->March 2<sup>nd</sup>, morning.<!--EEE: TL Q: The printers should have used March 2nd, right? Even the lower right hand corner date (to say nothing of the storyline) has march 2nd-grrarr--><!-- It's a human error. Sunmasenshita. (ﾉω・)ﾃﾍ -EEE --><!--ah, no orz ing needed- my only issue is that you unfortunately punctured another piece of evidence in favor of my "cover info is always so darn messed up" school of thought :)-grrarr--><!--EEE: Also, if this were in the body of the volume, I'd change it (as I did in some instances) to "It's the morning of March 2<sup>nd</sup>" ; doing so for captions, where telegraphic language is more natural, seems less necessary.-grrarr-->

	Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her makeup with the help of her blue hand mirror. She’s also making use of a tool that I, as a guy, don't know very well.		Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her makeup with the help of her blue hand mirror. She’s also making use of a tool that I, as a guy, don't know very well.

EusthEnoptEron at 08:29, 14 April 2013

2013-04-14T08:29:43Z

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	<!--NTS: much of this, I assume, should be synced to the presumably identical 10,876th time text -grrarr--><!--EEE: TL q: part of Daiya's description seems off - "An unrestrained and high-pressure student" - probably since it's from January 2010 -grrarr-->March 3<sup>rd</sup>, morning.<!--EEE: TL Q: The printers should have used March 2nd, right? Even the lower right hand corner date (to say nothing of the storyline) has march 2nd-grrarr-->		<!--NTS: much of this, I assume, should be synced to the presumably identical 10,876th time text -grrarr--><!--EEE: TL q: part of Daiya's description seems off - "An unrestrained and high-pressure student" - probably since it's from January 2010 -grrarr--><!-- You edited it to "volatile" in the 2nd volume - should we go with that? The adjective refers to his oppressive/rude/insolent attitude. -EEE -->March 2<sup>nd</sup>, morning.<!--EEE: TL Q: The printers should have used March 2nd, right? Even the lower right hand corner date (to say nothing of the storyline) has march 2nd-grrarr--><!-- It's a human error. Sunmasenshita. (ﾉω・)ﾃﾍ -EEE -->

	Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her makeup with the help of her blue hand mirror. She’s also making use of a tool that I, as a guy, don't know very well.		Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her makeup with the help of her blue hand mirror. She’s also making use of a tool that I, as a guy, don't know very well.

Grrarr at 07:49, 14 April 2013

2013-04-14T07:49:48Z

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	<!--NTS: much of this, I assume, should be synced to the presumably identical 10,876th time text -grrarr--><!--EEE: TL q: part of Daiya's description seems off - "An unrestrained and high-pressure student" - probably since it's from January 2010 -grrarr-->March 3<sup>rd</sup>, morning.<!--EEE: TL Q: The printers should have used March 2nd, right?-grrarr-->		<!--NTS: much of this, I assume, should be synced to the presumably identical 10,876th time text -grrarr--><!--EEE: TL q: part of Daiya's description seems off - "An unrestrained and high-pressure student" - probably since it's from January 2010 -grrarr-->March 3<sup>rd</sup>, morning.<!--EEE: TL Q: The printers should have used March 2nd, right? Even the lower right hand corner date (to say nothing of the storyline) has march 2nd-grrarr-->

	Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her makeup with the help of her blue hand mirror. She’s also making use of a tool that I, as a guy, don't know very well.		Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her makeup with the help of her blue hand mirror. She’s also making use of a tool that I, as a guy, don't know very well.

Grrarr: EEE: part of Daiya's description seems off - "An unrestrained and high-pressure student" - probably since it's from January 2010?

2013-04-14T07:48:17Z

EEE: part of Daiya's description seems off - "An unrestrained and high-pressure student" - probably since it's from January 2010?

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	<!--NTS: much of this, I assume, should be synced to the presumably identical 10,876th time text -grrarr-->March 3<sup>rd</sup>, morning.<!--EEE: TL Q: The printers should have used March 2nd, right?-grrarr-->		<!--NTS: much of this, I assume, should be synced to the presumably identical 10,876th time text -grrarr--><!--EEE: TL q: part of Daiya's description seems off - "An unrestrained and high-pressure student" - probably since it's from January 2010 -grrarr-->March 3<sup>rd</sup>, morning.<!--EEE: TL Q: The printers should have used March 2nd, right?-grrarr-->

	Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her makeup with the help of her blue hand mirror. She’s also making use of a tool that I, as a guy, don't know very well.		Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her makeup with the help of her blue hand mirror. She’s also making use of a tool that I, as a guy, don't know very well.

Grrarr: small edits; EEE: the march 3rd vs 2nd thing is a cover / printing / etc error, right?; syncing with Volume1 10876th time text

2013-04-14T07:42:21Z

small edits; EEE: the march 3rd vs 2nd thing is a cover / printing / etc error, right?; syncing with Volume1 10876th time text

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	March 03, morning.		<!--NTS: much of this, I assume, should be synced to the presumably identical 10,876th time text -grrarr-->March 3<sup>rd</sup>, morning.<!--EEE: TL Q: The printers should have used March 2nd, right?-grrarr-->

	Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her ~~make-up by using~~ her blue hand mirror~~, as well as~~ a tool that I, as a ~~man~~, don't know very well.		Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her makeup with the help of her blue hand mirror. She’s also making use of a tool that I, as a guy, don't know very well.

	“Isn't there something different about me today? Isn't there?”		“Isn't there something different about me today? Isn't there?”
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	“Kiri. Don't go butting in from over there.”		“Kiri. Don't come butting in from over there.”

	“You never change, huh?”		“You never change, huh?”

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2013-02-08T01:02:52Z

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Grrarr: making consistent w/V1 dialogue

2012-07-31T19:05:53Z

making consistent w/V1 dialogue

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	March 03, morning.		March 03, morning.

	Kokone ~~arbitrarily~~ grabs the seat beside me ~~and~~ starts doing her make-up, ~~using~~ a tool that I, as man, ~~do not~~ know very well.		Kokone casually grabs the seat beside me. She starts doing her make-up by using her blue hand mirror, as well as a tool that I, as a man, don't know very well.

	“Isn't there something different about me today? Isn't there?”		“Isn't there something different about me today? Isn't there?”

	…I don’t ~~notice anything~~. ~~There’s no way~~ I ~~could see a difference to~~ yesterday.		I don’t see any difference. I can’t distinguish between how she looked yesterday and how she looks today.

EusthEnoptEron at 15:42, 10 August 2011

2011-08-10T15:42:29Z

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	March 03, morning.		March 03, morning.

	Kokone arbitrarily grabs the seat beside me and starts doing her make-up, using a tool that I do not know very well.		Kokone arbitrarily grabs the seat beside me and starts doing her make-up, using a tool that I, as man, do not know very well.

	~~“Isn’t~~ there something different about me today? ~~Isn’t~~ there?”		“Isn't there something different about me today? Isn't there?”

	…I don’t ~~see any change~~. There’s no way I could see a difference to yesterday.		…I don’t notice anything. There’s no way I could see a difference to yesterday.


	“Kiri. ~~Don’t~~ go butting in from over there.”		“Kiri. Don't go butting in from over there.”

			“You never change, huh?”

	~~“You’re as always, huh?”~~

			And then their usual quarrel begins once again. The two of them really are foulmouthed…
	And then their ~~everyday’s~~ quarrel begins once again. ~~Both~~ of them really are ~~foul-mouthed…~~