Gekkou:Volume 1 Confession - Revision history

Hikaru7: /* [Confession] */

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[Confession]

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	Her long-lashes brushed her cheeks softly as she blinked, and from time to time she led her hand to the edge of the page and smoothly turned to the next one. Her profile looked like the finest glass work, though definitely not created by man but a miracle brought forth by god. “I would be a rich man if I could cut out this scene and frame it,” I thought.		Her long-lashes brushed her cheeks softly as she blinked, and from time to time she led her hand to the edge of the page and smoothly turned to the next one. Her profile looked like the finest glass work, though definitely not created by man but a miracle brought forth by god. “I would be a rich man if I could cut out this scene and frame it,” I thought.

	I confirmed that nobody was there besides Tsukimori and me.		I confirmed that nobody was there besides Tsukimori and myself.

	“Once again, I’m sure the recent days have been hard for you—,” I leaned against a book shelf as I addressed her, “—losing your father in an ''accident'' and all.”		“Once again, I’m sure the recent days have been hard for you—,” I leaned against a book shelf as I addressed her, “—losing your father in an ''accident'' and all.”

Hikaru7: /* [Confession] */ changed the phrasing of some words and added punctuation

2024-04-10T21:44:59Z

[Confession]: changed the phrasing of some words and added punctuation

EusthEnoptEron: Removed unnecessary category.

2014-02-28T15:30:43Z

Removed unnecessary category.

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EusthEnoptEron: Changed Yōko back to Youko

2012-08-26T10:26:45Z

Changed Yōko back to Youko

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	Two days later, when ~~Yōko~~ Tsukimori came to school again, even students from other classes came in crowds to our classroom to catch a glimpse of her.		Two days later, when Youko Tsukimori came to school again, even students from other classes came in crowds to our classroom to catch a glimpse of her.

	One after another they expressed their condolences, showing nothing but expressions of pity.		One after another they expressed their condolences, showing nothing but expressions of pity.
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	I didn’t want to die. And I also had to admit that it was quite an absurd thought, but: I was intrigued. I was intrigued by how she would hunt me down.		I didn’t want to die. And I also had to admit that it was quite an absurd thought, but: I was intrigued. I was intrigued by how she would hunt me down.

	Where else in my environment could I find such a stimulus? Furthermore, the opponent was ~~Yōko~~ Tsukimori—I couldn’t have wished for anyone better.		Where else in my environment could I find such a stimulus? Furthermore, the opponent was Youko Tsukimori—I couldn’t have wished for anyone better.

	I was convinced: this was the best time I’d had in the seventeen years of my life so far.		I was convinced: this was the best time I’d had in the seventeen years of my life so far.
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	Her constantly playing around with me had completely cooled me down.		Her constantly playing around with me had completely cooled me down.

	Suspecting ~~Yōko~~ Tsukimori to be a “father murderer” suddenly felt terribly idiotic and embarrassing.		Suspecting Youko Tsukimori to be a “father murderer” suddenly felt terribly idiotic and embarrassing.

	Indeed, Tsukimori was a determined and bold girl, but I also knew that she was definitely not foolish. Even if she hypothetically had considered her father an eyesore, she would have found many other ways of getting rid of him without choosing the means of “murder”.		Indeed, Tsukimori was a determined and bold girl, but I also knew that she was definitely not foolish. Even if she hypothetically had considered her father an eyesore, she would have found many other ways of getting rid of him without choosing the means of “murder”.
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	While she passed me, her hair stroked my cheek and left behind a strong scent of roses.		While she passed me, her hair stroked my cheek and left behind a strong scent of roses.

	Even though I had planned to learn more about her, I now understood ~~Yōko~~ Tsukimori even less than before.		Even though I had planned to learn more about her, I now understood Youko Tsukimori even less than before.

	Then I recalled how Kamogawa had compared her to wine.		Then I recalled how Kamogawa had compared her to wine.
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	Indeed.		Indeed.

	I was intoxicated by ~~Yōko~~ Tsukimori’s fragrance.		I was intoxicated by Youko Tsukimori’s fragrance.

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Jonathanasdf: navbar

2011-12-15T02:48:25Z

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EusthEnoptEron at 20:55, 26 October 2011

2011-10-26T20:55:47Z

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	Her completely unexpected words made my mind go blank.		Her completely unexpected words made my mind go blank.

	To be sure I chose to ask, “Where to?” but Tsukimori only bewilderedly replied: “You aren’t funny,” and shook her neat chin left and right. <!-- "neat" doesn't seem to make sense for describing a chin -->		To be sure I chose to ask, “Where to?” but Tsukimori only bewilderedly replied: “You aren’t funny,” and shook her neat chin left and right. <!-- "neat" doesn't seem to make sense for describing a chin --><!-- True. It's something along the lines of "smooth" and "well-formed" (as in "well-formed features"). ~~~~ -->

	“I suppose I’m not the person to criticize you, having already asked a tactless question just earlier, but you do realize that you lost your father only some days ago?”		“I suppose I’m not the person to criticize you, having already asked a tactless question just earlier, but you do realize that you lost your father only some days ago?”

Andrewgr: question for translator

2011-10-26T20:31:10Z

question for translator

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	Her completely unexpected words made my mind go blank.		Her completely unexpected words made my mind go blank.

	To be sure I chose to ask, “Where to?” but Tsukimori only bewilderedly replied: “You aren’t funny,” and shook her neat chin left and right.		To be sure I chose to ask, “Where to?” but Tsukimori only bewilderedly replied: “You aren’t funny,” and shook her neat chin left and right. <!-- "neat" doesn't seem to make sense for describing a chin -->

	“I suppose I’m not the person to criticize you, having already asked a tactless question just earlier, but you do realize that you lost your father only some days ago?”		“I suppose I’m not the person to criticize you, having already asked a tactless question just earlier, but you do realize that you lost your father only some days ago?”

Andrewgr: flows better

2011-10-26T20:28:54Z

flows better

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	“How about you?”		“How about you?”

	“I’m sorry~~. But~~ I have not recovered enough to talk about it yet.”		“I’m sorry, but I have not recovered enough to talk about it yet.”

	Tsukimori shook her head with a troubled mien. It was a rather noncommittal answer.		Tsukimori shook her head with a troubled mien. It was a rather noncommittal answer.

Andrewgr: could also be "aspects of her plan"

2011-10-26T18:44:21Z

could also be "aspects of her plan"

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	The only two things that were in her way were the murder recipe that had gone lost and I, since I knew what was written in it.		The only two things that were in her way were the murder recipe that had gone lost and I, since I knew what was written in it.

	As soon as she got rid of these two unsafe ~~aspects~~, she would have conducted the perfect crime and obtain her own “ideal world”.		As soon as she got rid of these two unsafe elements, she would have conducted the perfect crime and obtain her own “ideal world”.

	…perhaps she was planning on killing me in due time.		…perhaps she was planning on killing me in due time.

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	A group of guys, Kamogawa among them, were trying to appear appealing, talking wildly to her. Taking advantage of a girl’s weakness might be a usual and practical strategy, but I just couldn’t endure watching their pathetic and honorless behavior.		A group of guys, Kamogawa among them, were trying to appear appealing, talking wildly to her. Taking advantage of a girl’s weakness might be a usual and practical strategy, but I just couldn’t endure watching their pathetic and honorless behavior.

	“You're quite the poet, aren’t you Kamogawa-kun? Thank you for worrying about me.”		“You're quite the poet, aren’t you, Kamogawa-kun? Thank you for worrying about me.”

	However, Tsukimori dealt with each of them with utmost politeness, ~~not showing the slightest frown—no~~, even smiling. Once again I came to understand why she was so popular.		However, Tsukimori dealt with each of them with utmost politeness, without so much as a furrow of her brow—no, even smiling. Once again, I came to understand why she was so popular.

	Most people wouldn't be able to behave as she did. At least I wouldn’t have been able to. After all, I was already annoyed and I was just watching her.		Most people wouldn't be able to behave as she did. At least I wouldn’t have been able to. After all, I was already annoyed and I was just watching her.
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	As soon as the wave of visitors broke off, Tsukimori stood up and, for some reason, headed towards me with a smile on her face.		As soon as the wave of visitors broke off, Tsukimori stood up and, for some reason, headed towards me with a smile on her face.

	“It’s quite unusual for you to approach me ~~spontaneously~~.”		“It’s quite unusual for you to approach me out of the blue.”

	“But you came to my father’s funeral, didn’t you? I wanted to say thanks.” She sat down on Usami’s empty chair and smiled cheerfully at me. “So, thanks for coming, Nonomiya-kun.”		“But you came to my father’s funeral, didn’t you? I wanted to say thanks.” She sat down on Usami’s empty chair and smiled cheerfully at me. “So, thanks for coming, Nonomiya-kun.”
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	“No, it’s nothing that would deserve your appreciation. I merely attended as a representative for the class.”		“No, it’s nothing that would deserve your appreciation. I merely attended as a representative for the class.”

	“But it is. I was somehow relieved at seeing you ~~being as~~ laid-back ~~as usual~~.”		“But it is. I was somehow relieved at seeing you be your usual laid-back self.”

	“Oh, I’m sorry for being such a cold-hearted guy. I was worried about you in my own way, though, you know? Too bad you didn’t notice,” I said and shrugged uncomfortably, whereupon Tsukimori laughed cheerfully: “I don’t think of you like that!”		“Oh, I’m sorry for being such a cold-hearted guy. I was worried about you in my own way, though, you know? Too bad you didn’t notice,” I said and shrugged uncomfortably, whereupon Tsukimori laughed cheerfully: “I don’t think of you like that!”
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	“Have things settled down at home?”		“Have things settled down at home?”

	“There are still a lot of things that need to be taken care of, but for the time being, yes.”		“There are still a lot of things that need to be taken care of, but, for the time being, yes.”

	“I see. You must have experienced some troublesome days, I guess. Well, school must have its troublesome aspects too, for someone as popular as you.”		“I see. You must have experienced some troublesome days, I guess. Well, school must have its troublesome aspects too, for someone as popular as you.”
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	Bewitched by her pure appearance that made her hard to approach, I just stood there holding my breath for a while.		Bewitched by her pure appearance that made her hard to approach, I just stood there holding my breath for a while.

	Her long-~~lashed eyes closed and opened~~ softly as she blinked, and from time to time she led her hand to the edge of the page and smoothly turned to the next one. Her profile looked like the finest glass work, though definitely not created by man but a miracle brought forth by god. “I would be a rich man if I could cut out this scene and frame it,” I thought.		Her long-lashes brushed her cheeks softly as she blinked, and from time to time she led her hand to the edge of the page and smoothly turned to the next one. Her profile looked like the finest glass work, though definitely not created by man but a miracle brought forth by god. “I would be a rich man if I could cut out this scene and frame it,” I thought.

	I confirmed that nobody was there ~~except for~~ Tsukimori and me.		I confirmed that nobody was there besides Tsukimori and me.

	“Once again, I’m sure the recent days have been hard for you—,” I leaned against a book shelf as I addressed her, “—losing your father in an ''accident'' and all.”		“Once again, I’m sure the recent days have been hard for you—,” I leaned against a book shelf as I addressed her, “—losing your father in an ''accident'' and all.”
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	Her completely unexpected words made my mind go blank.		Her completely unexpected words made my mind go blank.

	To be sure I chose to ask, “Where to?” but Tsukimori only bewilderedly replied: “You aren’t funny,” and shook her ~~neat~~ chin left and right. <!-- "neat" doesn't seem to make sense for describing a chin --><!-- True. It's something along the lines of "smooth" and "well-formed" (as in "well-formed features"). ~~~~ -->		To be sure I chose to ask, “Where to?” but Tsukimori only bewilderedly replied: “You aren’t funny,” and shook her perfect chin left and right. <!-- "neat" doesn't seem to make sense for describing a chin --><!-- True. It's something along the lines of "smooth" and "well-formed" (as in "well-formed features"). ~~~~ -->

	“I suppose I’m not the person to criticize you, having already asked a tactless question just earlier, but you do realize that you lost your father only some days ago?”		“I suppose I’m not the person to criticize you, having already asked a tactless question just earlier, but you do realize that you lost your father only some days ago?”
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	~~“Do~~ you ~~want~~ to say I am imprudent?”		“Are you trying to say I am imprudent?”

	“If you talk in extremes, yes.”		“If you talk in extremes, yes.”
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	“Then you misunderstand me! Precisely because my father has passed away, I thought that I’d need someone for support. Isn’t it romantic if you call it ‘the support of my heart’? I am not as strong as everyone believes, you know?”		“Then you misunderstand me! Precisely because my father has passed away, I thought that I’d need someone for support. Isn’t it romantic if you call it ‘the support of my heart’? I am not as strong as everyone believes, you know?”

	Indeed, this was a good reason, but there were still too many ~~points~~ that didn’t ~~match~~.		Indeed, this was a good reason, but there were still too many things that didn’t add up.

	“Then, why does it have to be me? I fail to understand why a popular girl like you would choose someone like me.”		“Then, why does it have to be me? I fail to understand why a popular girl like you would choose someone like me.”
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	I found her attitude a little irritating.		I found her attitude a little irritating.

	“But you don’t seem to understand a man’s heart at all, either. At least I’m not so simple as to have no doubts whatsoever when a beauty asks me to go out with her all of a sudden. There’s always a catch to attractive deals, isn’t there?” I sneered at her as payback.		“But you don’t seem to understand a man’s heart at all, either. At least, I’m not so simple as to have no doubts whatsoever when a beauty asks me to go out with her all of a sudden. There’s always a catch to attractive deals, isn’t there?” I sneered at her as payback.

	“Is that so? I was sure that boys never feel bad being confessed to by a girl?”		“Is that so? I was sure that boys never feel bad being confessed to by a girl?”
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	“—I hope you don’t want to make dating the condition.”		“—I hope you don’t want to make dating the condition.”

	~~“Our chemistry is right~~!”		“We're already so in-sync!”

	Tsukimori showed no sign of timidity, instead she even smiled brightly.		Tsukimori showed no sign of timidity, instead she even smiled brightly.
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	“It’s a shame that you are so stubborn, Nonomiya-kun…,” she said and fell silent.		“It’s a shame that you are so stubborn, Nonomiya-kun…,” she said and fell silent.

	We shared ~~a painful~~ silence.		We shared an excruciating silence.

	Even the shouts of the sports clubs from the grounds seemed loud inside the soundless library and I heard the rustling of her skirt all too clearly when Tsukimori crossed her slender legs the other way around.		Even the shouts of the sports clubs from the grounds seemed loud inside the soundless library and I heard the rustling of her skirt all too clearly when Tsukimori crossed her slender legs the other way around.
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	After taking a look, I noticed that Tsukimori had stood up from her chair and had stretched her smooth white fingers towards me.		After taking a look, I noticed that Tsukimori had stood up from her chair and had stretched her smooth white fingers towards me.

	“Your hair looked so beautiful that I ~~wanted~~ to touch it ~~very badly~~.”		“Your hair looked so beautiful that I couldn't suppress the urge to touch it.”

	Tsukimori gave me a bewitching smile, beautiful like the light of the moon.		Tsukimori gave me a bewitching smile, beautiful like the light of the moon.