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[In The Café]

Maha9392: /* [In The Café] */ "Misfortunes are called that because you they make you sad, right? If you don't get sad, then you can't call it a misfortune." (The 'you' after 'because' seems like an error.)

2016-03-26T10:25:23Z

[In The Café]: "Misfortunes are called that because you they make you sad, right? If you don't get sad, then you can't call it a misfortune." (The 'you' after 'because' seems like an error.)

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	"What do you think about someone who doesn't grieve over their misfortune?"		"What do you think about someone who doesn't grieve over their misfortune?"

	"Sounds fishy to me," she answered quick as a shot. "Misfortunes are called that because ~~you~~ they make you sad, right? If you don't get sad, then you can't call it a misfortune."		"Sounds fishy to me," she answered quick as a shot. "Misfortunes are called that because they make you sad, right? If you don't get sad, then you can't call it a misfortune."

	"I see," this time I actually put my agreement into words.		"I see," this time I actually put my agreement into words.

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[In The Café]

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	I had accepted Tsukimori's request. The reason was simple: I was interested in her.		I had accepted Tsukimori's request. The reason was simple: I was interested in her.

	Apart from that, call it a ~~property　of~~ mine or just a preference: I enjoyed these thrilling conversations with her.		Apart from that, call it a property of mine or just a preference: I enjoyed these thrilling conversations with her.

DarkeKyuubi at 00:07, 31 July 2014

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	"You should talk! ...You're the one who made him say that."		"You should talk! ...You're the one who made him say that."

	It was me, naturally, who ~~spit~~ out those words in a volume no one could perceive.		It was me, naturally, who spat out those words in a volume no one could perceive.

	"Maybe I should join you..."		"Maybe I should join you..."

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	I was annoyed. As she showed no restraint I decided on saying my piece without restraint as well.		I was annoyed. As she showed no restraint I decided on saying my piece without restraint as well.

	"I admit that I ~~may be supposed to~~ be gentler to you as you've just lost your father. However, I don't feel like dancing to your tune like the others, not in the least. Not everyone is considerate towards you, keep that in mind. At least now that I know your true nature, I might still feel sympathy but I am certainly not favorable towards you," I rebuked her.		"I admit that I should be gentler to you as you've just lost your father. However, I don't feel like dancing to your tune like the others, not in the least. Not everyone is considerate towards you, keep that in mind. At least now that I know your true nature, I might still feel sympathy but I am certainly not favorable towards you," I rebuked her.

	"Mmm! That's how my Nonomiya-kun has to be," Tsukimori nodded strongly, making a somewhat contented face. "I love this unashamed attitude."		"Mmm! That's how my Nonomiya-kun has to be," Tsukimori nodded strongly, making a somewhat contented face. "I love this unashamed attitude."

BladeUnderHeart at 03:31, 14 April 2013

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	"What do you think I am, Nonomiya-kun? It is not strange at all to desire to learn more about the person in my heart, is it? This is what you call a pure girl's heart."		"What do you think I am, Nonomiya-kun? It is not strange at all to desire to learn more about the person in my heart, is it? This is what you call a pure girl's heart."

	"You claim to be pure girl? Laughable. Let me assert this for you: you are nowhere near as harmless as that."		"You claim to be a pure girl? Laughable. Let me assert this for you: you are nowhere near as harmless as that."

	I sneered.		I sneered.
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	"I have always wanted to do that at least once! Riding a bicycle à deux."<!--your use of French phrases characterizes her well. Is this from the source, or was it something like futarijiten?--><!-- Yeah, it was "jitensha no futarinori" to be exact, but I also thought that it suited her well—perhaps it's just because I'm used to French words, though. --><!-- Translators have to do something to carry mannerisms across the cultural divide during translation. The French phrases give her a certain Oxbridge (UK) or Seven Sisters (US) quality to her English, which definitely isn't plebeian. You lot have already gone with a pretty high tone for the prose in this novel, so why not?-->		"I have always wanted to do that at least once! Riding a bicycle à deux."<!--your use of French phrases characterizes her well. Is this from the source, or was it something like futarijiten?--><!-- Yeah, it was "jitensha no futarinori" to be exact, but I also thought that it suited her well—perhaps it's just because I'm used to French words, though. --><!-- Translators have to do something to carry mannerisms across the cultural divide during translation. The French phrases give her a certain Oxbridge (UK) or Seven Sisters (US) quality to her English, which definitely isn't plebeian. You lot have already gone with a pretty high tone for the prose in this novel, so why not?-->

	"When did I say I'd let you?"		"When did I say I'd let you?"

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	"...Probably," he nodded after backing off again.		"...Probably," he nodded after backing off again.

	Mirai-san could be categorized as pretty if she kept quiet. As a matter of fact, she was often approached by the other sex. However, ~~unfortunately~~ her looks were spoiled by her unyielding personality, which was also the reason why her relationships never lasted long. I knew of none, at least.		Mirai-san could be categorized as pretty if she kept quiet. As a matter of fact, she was often approached by the other sex. However unfortunate, her looks were spoiled by her unyielding personality, which was also the reason why her relationships never lasted long. I knew of none, at least.

	"Mhh!? Saruwatari!? Gotten all lovestruck or what?!"		"Mhh!? Saruwatari!? Gotten all lovestruck or what?!"
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	I was surprised that Mirai-san would allow such a farce.		I was surprised that Mirai-san would allow such a farce.

	"Because it's damn funny to see you protest so blatantly when you act so cold ~~usually~~!!"		"Because it's damn funny to see you protest so blatantly when you usually act so cold!!"

	Mirai-san cackled.		Mirai-san cackled.

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Andrewgr: Make it clear who's talking

2011-10-26T21:44:20Z

Make it clear who's talking

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	"Maybe I should join you..."		"Maybe I should join you..."

	"Don't skip your club. You have to do your best and become a regular player."		"Don't skip your club. You have to do your best and become a regular player." I was able to predict the direction this conversation would take, so I put a stop to it in advance.

	I was able to predict the direction this conversation would take, so I put a stop to it in advance.

	"Why don't you stop by this weekend, Chizuru? I may not be able to keep you company since there's still a lot I have to learn, but there's still Nonomiya-kun. Right, Nonomiya-kun?"		"Why don't you stop by this weekend, Chizuru? I may not be able to keep you company since there's still a lot I have to learn, but there's still Nonomiya-kun. Right, Nonomiya-kun?"

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	I changed into my waiter uniform in the staff room; I put on narrow black slacks, did up the buttons of my white shirt and the black vest above, slipped into a pair of wing tip leather shoes and lastly I wound a rather long apron around my hips. After checking my appearance in front of the mirror, just to be sure, I headed to the kitchen.		I changed into my waiter uniform in the staff room; I put on narrow black slacks, did up the buttons of my white shirt and the black vest above, slipped into a pair of wing tip leather shoes and lastly I wound a rather long apron around my hips. After checking my appearance in front of the mirror, just to be sure, I headed to the kitchen.

	The instant I entered the kitchen, ~~my nose was tickled by~~ the aromatic fragrance of coffee ~~beans—a~~ smell I was fond of.		The instant I entered the kitchen, the aromatic fragrance of coffee beans tickled my nose—a smell I was fond of.

	The reason why I had chosen to work in this British-style café "Victoria" was, as a matter of fact, because the best coffee in the vicinity was served here.		The reason why I had chosen to work in this British-style café "Victoria" was, as a matter of fact, because the best coffee in the vicinity was served here.
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	Upon spotting me, my colleagues greeted me.		Upon spotting me, my colleagues greeted me.

	"Mister Kujirai?" I addressed the broad back of a man who was grinding coffee with a hand mill. The sturdy bespectacled addressee turned around with a warm smile. I continued, "I would be in charge of waiting the tables today, but may I ~~change~~ to ~~the~~ kitchen ~~staff~~?"		"Mister Kujirai?" I addressed the broad back of a man who was grinding coffee with a hand mill. The sturdy, bespectacled addressee turned around with a warm smile. I continued, "I would be in charge of waiting the tables today, but may I switch to kitchen duties?"

	"What's the matter?"		"What's the matter?"
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	"Sorry to let you down, Mirai-san: it's a girl!"		"Sorry to let you down, Mirai-san: it's a girl!"

	"Hmph. Well, the fact that you brought a gal along ~~gets me interested~~ just as much."		"Hmph. Well, the fact that you brought a gal along interests just as much."

	With skillful movements Mirai-san quickly finished the parfait and, after ~~throwing~~ a piece of block chocolate into her mouth, tripped to the counter from where she had an overview of all the tables.		With skillful movements Mirai-san quickly finished the parfait and, after tossing a piece of block chocolate into her mouth, tripped to the counter from where she had an overview of all the tables.<!--"a piece of block chocolate"-a block of chocolate? Or a piece of black/dark chocolate? Or is block a brand of chocolate?-->

	"Who is it? Come on, spill it."		"Who is it? Come on, spill it."
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	"Damn! What a beauty! Way too good for you, Nonomiya, that's for sure!"		"Damn! What a beauty! Way too good for you, Nonomiya, that's for sure!"

	Mirai-san was apparently irritated with something and ~~ran~~ her iron fist into the pit of my stomach.		Mirai-san was apparently irritated with something and rammed her iron fist into the pit of my stomach.

	"...does anybody know why I deserve to be punched?"		"...does anybody know why I deserve to be punched?"
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	At times when she didn't get along with her boyfriend or when she broke up with one, her mood would take a free fall.		At times when she didn't get along with her boyfriend or when she broke up with one, her mood would take a free fall.

	And we at Victoria just ~~called~~ that ill-humored Mirai-san "the beast". Unfortunately though, there was no hero in disguise at our café. As soon as the beast went berserk, there was no solution but to weather the storm.		And we at Victoria just dubbed that ill-humored Mirai-san "the beast". Unfortunately though, there was no hero in disguise at our café. As soon as the beast went berserk, there was no solution but to weather the storm.

	"Mister Kujirai, I'm off waiting the tables."		"Mister Kujirai, I'm off waiting the tables."
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	Our café was not too big: there were eight tables and six counter seats. The staff consisted of a total of 5 people, two of which attended the customers while the others worked in the kitchen. But I very much liked that relaxed and comfortable atmosphere.		Our café was not too big: there were eight tables and six counter seats. The staff consisted of a total of five people, two of which attended the customers while the others worked in the kitchen. But I very much liked that relaxed and comfortable atmosphere.

	The mood of this British-style café was supported by appropriate antique tables and chairs. The various well-chosen decorations were apparently selected by the manager's British wife. Apropos, the name of the café was taken from his wife's first name.		The mood of this British-style café was supported by appropriate antique tables and chairs. The various well-chosen decorations were apparently selected by the manager's British wife. Apropos, the name of the café was taken from his wife's first name.
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	Since I judged it to be too much a trifle to correct, I only thanked her casually with a smile, "Thanks," and added, "and a café goes well with you."		Since I judged it to be too much a trifle to correct, I only thanked her casually with a smile, "Thanks," and added, "and a café goes well with you."

	Tsukimori smiled back at me and replied "Thank you."		Tsukimori smiled back at me and replied, "Thank you."

	I was quite honest. A beautiful girl in a café always makes for a good picture.		I was quite honest. A beautiful girl in a café always makes for a good picture.
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	"Then how about our recommended blend plus the owner's hand-made apple pie?"		"Then how about our recommended blend plus the owner's hand-made apple pie?"

	Since Tsukimori nodded, I bowed respectfully and said "Certainly."		Since Tsukimori nodded, I bowed respectfully and said, "Certainly."

	I forwarded the order to the kitchen staff.		I forwarded the order to the kitchen staff.
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	"I am so jealous of everyone—"		"I am so jealous of everyone—"

	The staff looked at her in surprise. A girl, who seemed to have ~~anything~~ one could be jealous of, was jealous of them.		The staff looked at her in surprise. A girl, who seemed to have everything one could be jealous of, was jealous of them.


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	"I am really happy about your offer, but... can you really make do with me? To tell you the truth, I have never worked anywhere before," answered Tsukimori hesitatingly after wavering for a short while.		"I am really happy about your offer, but... can you really make do with me? To tell you the truth, I have never worked anywhere before," answered Tsukimori hesitatingly after wavering for a short while.

	"No no, don't worry! Everyone has to begin somewhere. Besides, I'm positive that you, as someone with outstanding manners, are suited for this kind of business!"		"No, no, don't worry! Everyone has to begin somewhere. Besides, I'm positive that you, as someone with outstanding manners, are suited for this kind of business!"

	Sure, her acceptance among the customers would be outstanding! They can only see her superficial side after all.		Sure, her acceptance among the customers would be outstanding! They can only see her superficial side after all.
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	I knew that a bold and determined character lurked beneath her surface, which showed only a beautiful girl of excellent character who was thus loved by everyone.		I knew that a bold and determined character lurked beneath her surface, which showed only a beautiful girl of excellent character who was thus loved by everyone.

	To make things worse, bright Tsukimori was well aware of her own attractiveness. And just now I had learned that she also knew how to use it ~~correctly~~.		To make things worse, bright Tsukimori was well aware of her own attractiveness. And just now I had learned that she also knew how to use it to her advantage.

	"Why are men just so weak against pretty girls?" whispered Mirai-san into my ear after she had pulled me by the shoulder, the counter between us.		"Why are men just so weak against pretty girls?" whispered Mirai-san into my ear after she had pulled me by the shoulder, the counter between us.
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	"''You'' may think so, but what about her?"		"''You'' may think so, but what about her?"

	Mirai-san narrowed her eyes and ~~peeked~~ searchingly into my face from close up.		Mirai-san narrowed her eyes and peered searchingly into my face from close up.

	"No use punching me, for your information."		"No use punching me, for your information."

	"Yeah yeah. Looking forward to the next few days."		"Yeah, yeah. Looking forward to the next few days."

	Without caring about my strong rebuff, Mirai-san waved her hand and toddled back into the kitchen.		Without caring about my strong rebuff, Mirai-san waved her hand and toddled back into the kitchen.

	It felt like it was just a matter of time until she would ~~get~~ wind of our odd relationship—a woman's intuition?		It felt like it was just a matter of time until she would catch wind of our odd relationship—a woman's intuition?

	I told myself that I had to make sure Tsukimori wouldn't say any unnecessary things to Mirai-san.		I told myself that I had to make sure Tsukimori wouldn't say any unnecessary things to Mirai-san.