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	It was the beginning of autumn, the time when cold winds blow through the city and streetgoers are cloaked in warm colors. Even though it was his first visit in months to the Café Victoria, that personification of "frivolity" bent over and caused a loud "atchoo!" to resound through the crimson-lit shop as soon as he came in, with nary a word of apology. After he made his grand entrance, he said "Ya, long time no see," while wiping his nose with a red scarf wrapped around his neck.		It was the beginning of autumn, the time when cold winds blow through the city and streetgoers are cloaked in warm colors. Even though it was his first visit in months to the Café Victoria, that personification of "frivolity" bent over and caused a loud "atchoo!" to resound through the crimson-lit shop as soon as he came in, with nary a word of apology. After he made his grand entrance, he said "Ya, long time no see," while wiping his nose with a red scarf wrapped around his neck.

Simon: Was needed for epub, sorry.

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Was needed for epub, sorry.

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	It was the beginning of autumn, the time when cold winds blow through the city and streetgoers are cloaked in warm colors. Even though it was his first visit in months to the Café Victoria, that personification of "frivolity" bent over and caused a loud "atchoo!" to resound through the crimson-lit shop as soon as he came in, with nary a word of apology. After he made his grand entrance, he said "Ya, long time no see," while wiping his nose with a red scarf wrapped around his neck.		It was the beginning of autumn, the time when cold winds blow through the city and streetgoers are cloaked in warm colors. Even though it was his first visit in months to the Café Victoria, that personification of "frivolity" bent over and caused a loud "atchoo!" to resound through the crimson-lit shop as soon as he came in, with nary a word of apology. After he made his grand entrance, he said "Ya, long time no see," while wiping his nose with a red scarf wrapped around his neck.

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	This happened back when I passed Tsukimori on my way to the staff room. At a volume that could only be heard by the two of us, she whispered into my ear, "I'm sorry, Nonomiya-kun..."		This happened back when I passed Tsukimori on my way to the staff room. At a volume that could only be heard by the two of us, she whispered into my ear, "I'm sorry, Nonomiya-kun..."


	"...That ''sneeze'' last night…I was really trying to hold it in."		"...That ''sneeze'' last night…I was really trying to hold it in."


	…leaving me all giddy inside.		…leaving me all giddy inside.

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	I placed a freshly poured cup of blended coffee on his table without even bothering to take his order.		I placed a freshly poured cup of blended coffee on his table without even bothering to take his order.

	"You haven't changed a bit, have you?" he said with raised eyebrows<!--single eyebrow isn’t incorrect either-grrarr--> and a smile. "But ''if'' the reason for my sneezes were rumors, they would be good ones for sure. I bet all the beautiful ladies are talking about me, the Casanova of the town," he countered, after sipping his coffee with great relish.		"You haven't changed a bit, have you?" he said with raised eyebrows<!--single eyebrow isn’t incorrect either-grrarr--><!--If I'm reading it correctly "said with an raised eyebrow is more appropriate for the mood.--> and a smile. "But ''if'' the reason for my sneezes were rumors, they would be good ones for sure. I bet all the beautiful ladies are talking about me, the Casanova of the town," he countered, after sipping his coffee with great relish.

	"''You'' haven't changed a bit," I said as I shook my head. Konan laughed, and replied - "I guess that's true for both of us!"		"''You'' haven't changed a bit," I said as I shook my head. Konan laughed, and replied - "I guess that's true for both of us!"
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	My fears had been on the mark. I was left wondering, who came up with the questionable rule that the worse your premonition is, the more likely it is to come true.		My fears had been on the mark. I was left wondering, who came up with the questionable rule that the worse your premonition is, the more likely it is to come true.

	"Oh wow, I wanted so badly to see that troubled face of yours! Coming here sure paid off! I feel like my cold will get blown away! It's definitely more effective than going to a doctor or popping pills!"		"Oh wow, I wanted so badly to see that troubled face of yours! Coming here sure paid off! I feel like my cold will get blown away! It's definitely more effective than going to a doctor or popping <!-- taking might be better depending on style/formality --> pills!"

	"...Could you please go home now?" I’d erred grievously in feeling even a second of sympathy for him.		"...Could you please go home now?" I’d erred grievously in feeling even a second of sympathy for him.
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	She was standing behind me with a smile so perfect that no illness would possibly dare approach her.		She was standing behind me with a smile so perfect that no illness would possibly dare approach her.

	There was nary a tangle in her well-kept silky black hair, her soft skin was as white as snow, and her slightly moist, almond-shaped eyes glittered bewitchingly like moonlit gems.		There was nary a tangle in her well-kept silky black hair, her soft skin was as white as snow, and her slightly moist, almond-shaped <!-- Don't know about the original test but she doesn't look like she has almond-shaped eyes; almonded-colored might be more appropriated based on illustrations. --> eyes glittered bewitchingly like moonlit gems.

	In other words, it was just a normal day in the life of Youko Tsukimori.		In other words, it was just a normal day in the life of Youko Tsukimori.
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	In the current situation, however, that act was as thoughtless as jumping into the cage of a hungry tiger with fresh meat in your arms.		In the current situation, however, that act was as thoughtless as jumping into the cage of a hungry tiger with fresh meat in your arms.

	"You! You just laughed at me!" she roared like a lion, and scowled straight at Saruwatari-san with a gaze as murderous as that of an apex predator<!--a bit fanciful, I know, but I need to somehow make it more than or ~= a lion…and I’m lazy-grr--> baring its teeth. The color in his face was bleached away bit by bit, leaving him as white as chalk.		"You! You just laughed at me!" she roared like a lion, and scowled straight at Saruwatari-san with a gaze as murderous as that of an apex predator<!--a bit fanciful, I know, but I need to somehow make it more than or ~= a lion…and I’m lazy-grr--><!-- furious beast perhaps? --> baring its teeth. The color in his face was bleached away bit by bit, leaving him as white as chalk.

	"...Ah, eh, um, t-the thing is... UWAAA! Mirai-san please put down the kitchen knife! That's dangerous! Seriously!"		"...Ah, eh, um, t-the thing is... UWAAA! Mirai-san please put down the kitchen knife! That's dangerous! Seriously!"
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	"Ah, mnorning, Nyomnomiphya."		"Ah, mnorning, Nyomnomiphya."

	While pressing a handful of white tissues against her red nose, the pygmy marmoset-like girl next to me spoke to me in an unfamiliar language. It must have been Marmosetish.		While pressing a handful of white tissues against her red nose, the pygmy marmoset-like girl next to me spoke to me in an unfamiliar language. It must have been Marmosetish<!-- Marmoese perhaps? -->.

	Kamogawa and Usami weren't the only victims. After taking a look around, I noticed that there were quite a lot of empty seats and that all the classmates who were present seemed to be sickly.		Kamogawa and Usami weren't the only victims. After taking a look around, I noticed that there were quite a lot of empty seats and that all the classmates who were present seemed to be sickly.
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	I finished work and headed to the station. On the way, however, Tsukimori suddenly broke her silence.		I finished work and headed to the station. On the way, however, Tsukimori suddenly broke her silence.

	"—Nonomiya-kun. Isn't there something you should say to me?" she asked me with an awfully serious expression after coming to an abrupt stop. She turned her body and her large, almond-shaped eyes toward me, producing an elegant donut-like circle with her skirt.		"—Nonomiya-kun. Isn't there something you should say to me?" she asked me with an awfully serious expression after coming to an abrupt stop. She turned her body and her large, almond-shaped<!--As mentioned before almonded-colored seems better.--> eyes toward me, producing an elegant donut-like circle with her skirt.

	I countered with a suspicious look, for I had no clue what she was referring to.		I countered with a suspicious look, for I had no clue what she was referring to.
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	In the first place, it was a private matter. I was in no way obliged to report it to her, as we weren't in a special relationship. Therefore, there was no reason for me to feel guilty either—		In the first place, it was a private matter. I was in no way obliged to report it to her, as we weren't in a special relationship. Therefore, there was no reason for me to feel guilty either—

	"...I, I just did not find an opportunity to update you. That's all."		"...I, I just did not find an opportunity to update<!--tell perhaps?--> you. That's all."

	—and yet, I found myself getting extremely flustered. My speech had become rather stilted, and I was afraid to meet her eyes.		—and yet, I found myself getting extremely flustered. My speech had become rather stilted, and I was afraid to meet her eyes.