Ghost Hunt:Volume1 Chapter2 - Revision history

Yumemi.sayaka: /* Chapter 2 - Storm Approaching */

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Chapter 2 - Storm Approaching

Pao: /* Chapter 2 - Storm Approaching */

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Chapter 2 - Storm Approaching

Pao: /* 3 */

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	"Your brain and mine are different."		"Your brain and mine are different."

	...Really now, can't you even be a little modest? This jerk...he really is too confident of himself.		...Really now, can't you even be a little modest? This jerk...he really is too confident in himself.

	"Retrieve the microphone before you start moving the equipment. Come here."		"Retrieve the microphone before you start moving the equipment. Come here."
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	Ah, I'll just call you Naru-chan from now on.		Ah, I'll just call you Naru-chan from now on.


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	He does have a point there.		He does have a point there.

	"How much of Michiru's story do you think is true?" If it's all true, then I don't want to go to that old school building again."		"How much of Michiru's story do you think is true?" If it's all true, then I don't want to go to that old school building again.

	Shibuya sat down again and pulled out a file. "Many people died in the old school building."		Shibuya sat down again and pulled out a file. "Many people died in the old school building."

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	"If I don’t listen, I won’t be able to do my job." My voice was sullen. What a thing to be caught up in.		"If I don’t listen, I won’t be able to do my job." My voice was sullen. What a thing to be caught up in.

	"The principal heard that the old school building is haunted so a week ago, he asked me to come investigate. Apparently, he wants to rebuild the gymnasium. For that he wants the old school building demolished."		"The principal heard that the old school building is haunted, so a week ago he asked me to come investigate. Apparently, he wants to rebuild the gymnasium. For that he wants the old school building demolished."

	Ah, come to think of it, that was written in the pamphlet I got at the time of my admission into the school. Soon, a big gymnasium will be built.		Ah, come to think of it, that was written in the pamphlet I got at the time of my admission into the school. Soon, a big gymnasium will be built.

	"However, it seems that the many times in the past they had tried to demolish the old school building, they had to stop the demolition because of the accidents that happened."		"However, it seems that the many times in the past that they had tried to demolish the old school building, they had to stop the demolition because of the accidents that happened."

	"Ah, and they wanted an investigation so they asked you?"		"Ah, and they wanted an investigation so they asked you?"

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	He does have a point there.		He does have a point there.

	"How much of Michiru's story do you think is true?" If it's all true, then I don't want to go to that old school building again.		"How much of Michiru's story do you think is true?" If it's all true, then I don't want to go to that old school building again."

	Shibuya sat down again and pulled out a file. "Many people died in the old school building."		Shibuya sat down again and pulled out a file. "Many people died in the old school building."
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	He turned to a page completely filled with writing.		He turned to a page completely filled with writing.

	~~Even though~~ I stared at it intently, it was just like a medical record written by a doctor. It was all in English, and I couldn't understand a word of it.		I stared at it intently, but it was just like a medical record written by a doctor. It was all in English, and I couldn't understand a word of it.

	"During the three years that the old building was being used...that is, eighteen years ago, one or two people died every year."		"During the three years that the old building was being used...that is, eighteen years ago, one or two people died every year."
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	"After the new building was built, they made plans to demolish the old one. The roof fell during the demolition of the west wing. They say it was an operating accident."		"After the new building was built, they made plans to demolish the old one. The roof fell during the demolition of the west wing. They say it was an operating accident."

	"Is that true..."		"Is that true...?"

	"Half of it is."		"Half of it is."
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	"The story you heard was that construction workers died, but that's not the truth. Five people were injured, but no one died."		"The story you heard was that construction workers died, but that's not the truth. Five people were injured, but no one died."

	"Really?" ~~...~~So then what.		"Really?" So then what?

	"The demolition was completed as planned; they stopped after tearing ~~town~~ a third of the building."		"The demolition was completed as planned; they stopped after tearing down a third of the building."

	"Oh? They didn't stop because of the stories?"		"Oh? They didn't stop because of the stories?"
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	"The child is..."		"The child is..."

	"The corpse of a seven-year old girl who lived nearby was found in the old school building. The police caught the murderer a month later. He originally wanted to kidnap her. Furthermore, a teacher really did commit suicide there, but he left a suicide note. Apparently he suffered from ~~Neurosis~~."		"The corpse of a seven-year old girl who lived nearby was found in the old school building. The police caught the murderer a month later. He originally wanted to kidnap her. Furthermore, a teacher really did commit suicide there, but he left a suicide note. Apparently he suffered from neurosis."

	"Wow, you're amazing. That was really good research," I ~~sincerely~~ praised him.		"Wow, you're amazing. That was really good research," I praised him sincerely.

	"Of course. Don't underestimate my research ability."		"Of course. Don't underestimate my research ability."
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	"The driver lost control of the rubble-filled truck near school grounds, causing it to skid though the volleyball court, leaving seven injured and two dead."		"The driver lost control of the rubble-filled truck near school grounds, causing it to skid though the volleyball court, leaving seven injured and two dead."

	Below the news report were photos of the two deceased students. Poor ~~them~~.. I couldn't help but feel sorry for them.		Below the news report were photos of the two deceased students. Poor kids... I couldn't help but feel sorry for them.

	Shibuya continued indifferently, "There's a plausible reason for it: The driver was drunk."		Shibuya continued indifferently, "There's a plausible reason for it: The driver was drunk."
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	So I followed him.		So I followed him.


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	"If you’re interested in listening, I can briefly explain the circumstances?"		"If you’re interested in listening, I can briefly explain the circumstances?" Mr. Shibuya says as he sits on the bench near the shrubs of the old school building.

	Mr. ~~Shibuya says as he sits on the bench near the shrubs of the old school building~~.		"If I don’t listen, I won’t be able to do my job." My voice was sullen. What a thing to be caught up in.

	~~"If I don’t listen, I won’t be able to do my job."~~		"The principal heard that the old school building is haunted so a week ago, he asked me to come investigate. Apparently, he wants to rebuild the gymnasium. For that he wants the old school building demolished."

	~~My voice was sullen. What a thing to be caught up in.~~

	"The principal heard that the old school building is haunted so a week ago he asked me to come investigate.

	~~Now apparently~~ he wants to rebuild the gymnasium. For that he wants the old school building demolished."

	Ah, come to think of it, that was written in the pamphlet I got at the time of my admission into the school. Soon, a big gymnasium will be built.		Ah, come to think of it, that was written in the pamphlet I got at the time of my admission into the school. Soon, a big gymnasium will be built.
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	"That is what I said."		"That is what I said."

	"Liar."		"Liar." I said in a small voice.

	I said in a small voice.

	Mr. Shibuya gave me a frosty look.		Mr. Shibuya gave me a frosty look.
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	"I see. When we were telling ghost stories you might have brought up the old school building story, right? Then if you did that, it would be collecting information."		"I see. When we were telling ghost stories you might have brought up the old school building story, right? Then if you did that, it would be collecting information."

	"Oh, so you have more wisdom than a monkey?"		"Oh, so you have more wisdom than a monkey?" Mr. Shibuya said, impressed.

	Mr. Shibuya said impressed.

	You jerk. Don’t compare a person with their ancestors and ancestry.		You jerk. Don’t compare a person with their ancestors and ancestry.

	"I was collecting the rumors between the students.		"I was collecting the rumors between the students. Yesterday when you were telling ghost stories, did a story about the old school building come up?"

	~~Yesterday when you were telling ghost stories, did a story about the old school building come up?"~~
	"Yeah, but Michiru told it."		"Yeah, but Michiru told it."

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	'Did you not forget it?' his tone seems to say.		'Did you not forget it?' his tone seems to say.

	"I still remember it, I’m not so out of it that I can forget what happened yesterday."		"I still remember it. I’m not so out of it that I can forget what happened yesterday!"

	Hmph. Rude jerk.		Hmph. Rude jerk.
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	Mr. Shibuya inserted a hand into the inside pocket of his black jacket. He pulled out a small tape recorder.		Mr. Shibuya inserted a hand into the inside pocket of his black jacket. He pulled out a small tape recorder.

	Begin,"		Begin," He said as he pushed the record button.

	He said as he pushed the record button.

	Hmm. Well isn’t that interesting.		Hmm. Well isn’t that interesting.

	Despite what I was really thinking, I began talking about what Michiru had told me concerning the old school building.		Despite what I was really thinking, I began talking about what Michiru had told me concerning the old school building.


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Vaelis at 10:55, 14 February 2009

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Chapter 2 - Storm Warning

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	"If you’re interested in listening, I can briefly explain the circumstances?"		"If you’re interested in listening, I can briefly explain the circumstances?"

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	The building was old and worn, and the entrance hall was pitch black. I reached my hand out to open the door.		The building was old and worn, and the entrance hall was pitch black. I reached my hand out to open the door.

	Inside the building, a little orange tint of light could be seen from the afterglow of the sunset. The fallen shoe cabinet ~~lied~~ in the same place since the accident from this morning.		Inside the building, a little orange tint of light could be seen from the afterglow of the sunset. The fallen shoe cabinet lay in the same place since the accident from this morning.

	Black water ~~drops~~ dotted the floor. Those must be the assistant's bloodstains.		Black water droplets dotted the floor. Those must be the assistant's bloodstains.

	"Wait...wait for me."		"Wait...wait for me."
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	Deep in the entrance hall was a curved staircase. To the left and right of the staircase were hallways. There were two classrooms on the left, and three on the right.		Deep in the entrance hall was a curved staircase. To the left and right of the staircase were hallways. There were two classrooms on the left, and three on the right.

	The classrooms' ~~nameplate~~ hung down from the wall, unreadable and covered with dust.		The classrooms' nameplates hung down from the wall, unreadable and covered with dust.

	"Use this room," Naru-chan said, glancing at a classroom near the entrance hall. It was the former lab room; big lab tables lined up in rows and columns.		"Use this room," Naru-chan said, glancing at a classroom near the entrance hall. It was the former lab room; big lab tables lined up in rows and columns.
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	It's okay.. It's okay...		It's okay.. It's okay...

	While comforting myself, I looked ~~around~~ my surroundings. Naru-chan had stealthily entered the room.		While comforting myself, I looked at my surroundings. Naru-chan had stealthily entered the room.

	His sharp voice dazed me a little, "You'd better work faster than that."		His sharp voice dazed me a little, "You'd better work faster than that."
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	While I was building the shelf, Naru-chan continuously bought in more equipment. Not long ~~afterwards~~, the classroom was completely filled with equipment.		While I was building the shelf, Naru-chan continuously bought in more equipment. Not long afterward, the classroom was completely filled with equipment.

	After I finished setting up the shelves, I moved the rest of the equipment onto the tables.		After I finished setting up the shelves, I moved the rest of the equipment onto the tables.
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	I didn't want to go because it was scary, but I summoned up my courage so Naru wouldn't mock me again. I had no choice but to set up the thermometers.		I didn't want to go because it was scary, but I summoned up my courage so Naru wouldn't mock me again. I had no choice but to set up the thermometers.

	Immediately ~~after wards~~, I was given orders to record the temperatures in each room. None of these tasks would've been done without light. I exhibited exceptional bravery and fought tough battles—all this happened while I sat and recorded temperatures.		Immediately afterward, I was given orders to record the temperatures in each room. None of these tasks would've been done without light. I exhibited exceptional bravery and fought tough battles—all this happened while I sat and recorded temperatures.

	Naru-chan looked at my results. "Nothing out of the ordinary... None of the rooms are exceptionally cold. Well, the temperature of the room on the first floor is a little low, but not significantly so."		Naru-chan looked at my results. "Nothing out of the ordinary... None of the rooms are exceptionally cold. Well, the temperature of the room on the first floor is a little low, but not significantly so."
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	What does that mean? Isn't that just a type of psychic?		What does that mean? Isn't that just a type of psychic?

	I decided not to push the matter. Besides, arguing with Naru was really tiring. "I'm going then," I called out, waving ~~good-bye~~.		I decided not to push the matter. Besides, arguing with Naru was really tiring. "I'm going then," I called out, waving goodbye.

	Ah—my ~~hand~~ and waist is all sore—		Ah—my hands and waist are all sore—

	Naru-chan's voice shot through the air, "Meet me by the van after school tomorrow."		Naru-chan's voice shot through the air, "Meet me by the van after school tomorrow."