Ginban Kaleidoscope:Volume1 Chapter1 - Revision history

Otakumadness at 19:09, 25 August 2018

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	"It seems you really hate tomatoes. Hohohoho!"		"It seems you really hate tomatoes. Hohohoho!"

	<i>Ss... ah...<i>		<i>Ss... ah...</i>

	As if trying to leave nothing but the stem, I gobble greedily.		As if trying to leave nothing but the stem, I gobble greedily.

Otakumadness at 19:08, 25 August 2018

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	<i>Stop!</i>		<i>Stop!</i>

	"...Ee, gyaaaaa!~~</i>~~		"...Ee, gyaaaaa!"

	I lose awareness, but even with the unimaginable spicyness, I am not allowed the mercy of passing out.		I lose awareness, but even with the unimaginable spicyness, I am not allowed the mercy of passing out.

Otakumadness at 19:07, 25 August 2018

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	The voice is coming from inside my head.		The voice is coming from inside my head.

	#		---

	The floor is covered with a complicated, interweaving pattern of white and gray. This school's sacred...		The floor is covered with a complicated, interweaving pattern of white and gray. This school's sacred...
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	<i>Sixteen. Same as you. I told you, our wavelengths match.</i>		<i>Sixteen. Same as you. I told you, our wavelengths match.</i>

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	Ending my conversation with Pete for the time being, I open the door of the bathroom and...		Ending my conversation with Pete for the time being, I open the door of the bathroom and...
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	But really, I don't care anymore.		But really, I don't care anymore.

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	The place is [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/K%C5%8Dt%C5%8D,_Tokyo Koutou Ku]. Next to a certain forested park along Tokyo Bay, stands a white-painted, high-class residence.		The place is [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/K%C5%8Dt%C5%8D,_Tokyo Koutou Ku]. Next to a certain forested park along Tokyo Bay, stands a white-painted, high-class residence.
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	Showing me a smile at the end, Coach returns to the rink.		Showing me a smile at the end, Coach returns to the rink.

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	Enclosed by light blue walls, this is my room.		Enclosed by light blue walls, this is my room.
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	To an observer, I probably seem one hundred percent like a deviant. I want to cry just thinking about it.		To an observer, I probably seem one hundred percent like a deviant. I want to cry just thinking about it.

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	Tokyo Crystal Garden Ice Rink		Tokyo Crystal Garden Ice Rink
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	It seems even as a ghost, he is bothered by someone bad-mouthing his mother country. At least, I've added to my ways of relieving stress.		It seems even as a ghost, he is bothered by someone bad-mouthing his mother country. At least, I've added to my ways of relieving stress.

	#		---

	Finished with practice, now I'll have a slightly late dinner.		Finished with practice, now I'll have a slightly late dinner.
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	I have no choice but to dash into the bathroom.		I have no choice but to dash into the bathroom.

	#		---

	Undoubtedly, it was the biggest shock of my life.		Undoubtedly, it was the biggest shock of my life.

Otakumadness at 19:06, 25 August 2018

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	The voice is coming from inside my head.		The voice is coming from inside my head.

	~~***~~		#

	The floor is covered with a complicated, interweaving pattern of white and gray. This school's sacred...		The floor is covered with a complicated, interweaving pattern of white and gray. This school's sacred...
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	<i>Sixteen. Same as you. I told you, our wavelengths match.</i>		<i>Sixteen. Same as you. I told you, our wavelengths match.</i>

	~~***~~		#

	Ending my conversation with Pete for the time being, I open the door of the bathroom and...		Ending my conversation with Pete for the time being, I open the door of the bathroom and...
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	But really, I don't care anymore.		But really, I don't care anymore.

	~~***~~		#

	The place is [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/K%C5%8Dt%C5%8D,_Tokyo Koutou Ku]. Next to a certain forested park along Tokyo Bay, stands a white-painted, high-class residence.		The place is [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/K%C5%8Dt%C5%8D,_Tokyo Koutou Ku]. Next to a certain forested park along Tokyo Bay, stands a white-painted, high-class residence.
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	Showing me a smile at the end, Coach returns to the rink.		Showing me a smile at the end, Coach returns to the rink.

	~~***~~		#

	Enclosed by light blue walls, this is my room.		Enclosed by light blue walls, this is my room.
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	To an observer, I probably seem one hundred percent like a deviant. I want to cry just thinking about it.		To an observer, I probably seem one hundred percent like a deviant. I want to cry just thinking about it.

	~~***~~		#

	Tokyo Crystal Garden Ice Rink		Tokyo Crystal Garden Ice Rink
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	It seems even as a ghost, he is bothered by someone bad-mouthing his mother country. At least, I've added to my ways of relieving stress.		It seems even as a ghost, he is bothered by someone bad-mouthing his mother country. At least, I've added to my ways of relieving stress.

	~~***~~		#

	Finished with practice, now I'll have a slightly late dinner.		Finished with practice, now I'll have a slightly late dinner.
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	I have no choice but to dash into the bathroom.		I have no choice but to dash into the bathroom.

	~~***~~		#

	Undoubtedly, it was the biggest shock of my life.		Undoubtedly, it was the biggest shock of my life.

Otakumadness at 19:05, 25 August 2018

2018-08-25T19:05:21Z

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	The voice is coming from inside my head.		The voice is coming from inside my head.

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	The floor is covered with a complicated, interweaving pattern of white and gray. This school's sacred...		The floor is covered with a complicated, interweaving pattern of white and gray. This school's sacred...
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	<i>Sixteen. Same as you. I told you, our wavelengths match.</i>		<i>Sixteen. Same as you. I told you, our wavelengths match.</i>
	* * *
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	Ending my conversation with Pete for the time being, I open the door of the bathroom and...		Ending my conversation with Pete for the time being, I open the door of the bathroom and...
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	Showing me a smile at the end, Coach returns to the rink.		Showing me a smile at the end, Coach returns to the rink.

	* * *		***

	Enclosed by light blue walls, this is my room.		Enclosed by light blue walls, this is my room.
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	To an observer, I probably seem one hundred percent like a deviant. I want to cry just thinking about it.		To an observer, I probably seem one hundred percent like a deviant. I want to cry just thinking about it.

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	Tokyo Crystal Garden Ice Rink		Tokyo Crystal Garden Ice Rink
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	It seems even as a ghost, he is bothered by someone bad-mouthing his mother country. At least, I've added to my ways of relieving stress.		It seems even as a ghost, he is bothered by someone bad-mouthing his mother country. At least, I've added to my ways of relieving stress.

	* * *		***

	Finished with practice, now I'll have a slightly late dinner.		Finished with practice, now I'll have a slightly late dinner.
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	I have no choice but to dash into the bathroom.		I have no choice but to dash into the bathroom.

	* * *		***

	Undoubtedly, it was the biggest shock of my life.		Undoubtedly, it was the biggest shock of my life.

Otakumadness at 19:04, 25 August 2018

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	But really, I don't care anymore.		But really, I don't care anymore.

	* * *		***

	The place is [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/K%C5%8Dt%C5%8D,_Tokyo Koutou Ku]. Next to a certain forested park along Tokyo Bay, stands a white-painted, high-class residence.		The place is [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/K%C5%8Dt%C5%8D,_Tokyo Koutou Ku]. Next to a certain forested park along Tokyo Bay, stands a white-painted, high-class residence.

Otakumadness at 19:03, 25 August 2018

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	"How. Long?"		"How. Long?"

	~~<~~[[Ginban_Kaleidoscope:Volume1_Translator's_Notes#Hya..._one_hundred...\|Hya... one hundred...]]~~>~~		<i>[[Ginban_Kaleidoscope:Volume1_Translator's_Notes#Hya..._one_hundred...\|Hya... one hundred...]]</i>

	"100 days...?"		"100 days...?"

Otakumadness: Hopefully fixing the italics nonsense

2018-08-25T19:02:22Z

Hopefully fixing the italics nonsense

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Otakumadness at 18:54, 25 August 2018

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	"P... perverted Canadian?"		"P... perverted Canadian?"

	<I thought I was going to die!>		< I thought I was going to die!>

	"Yes, well! Even though you should have died, I failed to kill you. Shall I try again?"		"Yes, well! Even though you should have died, I failed to kill you. Shall I try again?"

Otakumadness at 18:53, 25 August 2018

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	"You piece of trash! Get out! Disappear!"		"You piece of trash! Get out! Disappear!"

	<I already told you, it's impossible.>		<As I already told you, it's impossible.>

	"I don't want to hear excuses! Now, whatever it takes, get out!"		"I don't want to hear excuses! Now, whatever it takes, get out!"