Golden Time:Spinoff Chapter1 - Revision history

L.kostas: "a aged form"-->"an aged form"

2012-06-12T16:07:53Z

"a aged form"-->"an aged form"

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	---Such was the conversation in his imagination. Naturally.		---Such was the conversation in his imagination. Naturally.

	He snickered, but at that very moment, he quickly stiffened his slackened jaw: he realized there was a aged form standing before him. Dazedly excusing himself, he offered up his seat and stood by the door, holding a handrail.		He snickered, but at that very moment, he quickly stiffened his slackened jaw: he realized there was an aged form standing before him. Dazedly excusing himself, he offered up his seat and stood by the door, holding a handrail.

	In the opposite window of the train, the all too familiar everyday scenery flowed past. Old-looking houses were lined up along the tracks. Profusely blooming potted flowers were arranged as if they were in a competition to touch the trains. A little further along, groups of condominiums. Huge pachinko parlors with bright red smiling signs. A brand new shopping mall. Pachinko parlors again. There was a lot of noise from some high-school girls standing off to the side. Their eyes meeting casually, he was greeted by "Why don't you take a break?", and the old man gave up his seat. He couldn't breathe: it smelled of sweat from the members of a baseball club returning home. They had been talking about <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aki_Hoshino Hoshino Aki]. Since waaayy back.		In the opposite window of the train, the all too familiar everyday scenery flowed past. Old-looking houses were lined up along the tracks. Profusely blooming potted flowers were arranged as if they were in a competition to touch the trains. A little further along, groups of condominiums. Huge pachinko parlors with bright red smiling signs. A brand new shopping mall. Pachinko parlors again. There was a lot of noise from some high-school girls standing off to the side. Their eyes meeting casually, he was greeted by "Why don't you take a break?", and the old man gave up his seat. He couldn't breathe: it smelled of sweat from the members of a baseball club returning home. They had been talking about <span class="plainlinks">[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aki_Hoshino Hoshino Aki]. Since waaayy back.

Rpapo: Corrected link back to main page.

2012-06-12T00:04:23Z

Corrected link back to main page.

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Rpapo: Changed VJ's surname to match what is given in the Golden Time Spinoff illustrations.

2012-06-12T00:02:38Z

Changed VJ's surname to match what is given in the Golden Time Spinoff illustrations.

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	Looking at the two of them, friends as they were, seated across the table from Satou Takaya (aka Mr. Two Dimensions), he hesitantly continued.		Looking at the two of them, friends as they were, seated across the table from Satou Takaya (aka Mr. Two Dimensions), he hesitantly continued.

	"VJ's real name is Brigitte ~~Jeomiria~~. She's a natural born soldier. However, she's actually the daughter of a legitimate royal family."		"VJ's real name is Brigitte Jeomillia. She's a natural born soldier. However, she's actually the daughter of a legitimate royal family."

	The name of his heart's bride resounded around the student cafeteria, which was already closing down for the afternoon. Nevertheless, there was much more to the story.		The name of his heart's bride resounded around the student cafeteria, which was already closing down for the afternoon. Nevertheless, there was much more to the story.
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	"Though that's OK."		"Though that's OK."

	"You called VJ 'Brigitte ~~Jeomiria~~', didn't you?"		"You called VJ 'Brigitte Jeomillia', didn't you?"

	"That's what I said."		"That's what I said."
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	Bah! Her rumpled T-shirt's bottom edge pulled down, the embarrassed looking, blushing VJ had sat down.		Bah! Her rumpled T-shirt's bottom edge pulled down, the embarrassed looking, blushing VJ had sat down.

	His beloved, Brigitte ~~Jeomiria~~.		His beloved, Brigitte Jeomillia.

	Having moved on from three dimensions, this spring Takaya had declared his love of nothing but two-dimensional girls.		Having moved on from three dimensions, this spring Takaya had declared his love of nothing but two-dimensional girls.
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	"B, ...how's that?"		"B, ...how's that?"

	"That's Brigitte ~~Jeomiria~~!"		"That's Brigitte Jeomillia!"

	"...Ah, is that an anime character?"		"...Ah, is that an anime character?"

Rpapo: moved Golden Time:Volume1 Spinoff to Golden Time:Spinoff Chapter1: Move from Volume 1 to it's own book.

2012-06-11T22:39:49Z

moved Golden Time:Volume1 Spinoff to Golden Time:Spinoff Chapter1: Move from Volume 1 to it's own book.

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Rpapo at 22:26, 11 June 2012

2012-06-11T22:26:53Z

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Rpapo at 22:25, 11 June 2012

2012-06-11T22:25:41Z

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	That was not a matter for today.		That was not a matter for today.


	~~:The End~~

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Rpapo: Added illustrations.

2012-06-11T22:21:31Z

Added illustrations.

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	== Mr. Two Dimensions Special ==		== Mr. Two Dimensions Special ==
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	Standing in the middle of the fire-storm there was a dignified figure.		Standing in the middle of the fire-storm there was a dignified figure.

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	"Eh? How so? I'm not like that."		"Eh? How so? I'm not like that."
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	"But am I smart enough? Even if I were to study super seriously from now on, I don't think there's any way I can go to the same university as you."		"But am I smart enough? Even if I were to study super seriously from now on, I don't think there's any way I can go to the same university as you."

Rpapo: Page 77 done, spinoff story done. Not satisfied with my work: it came out awkward.

2012-04-14T23:47:24Z

Page 77 done, spinoff story done. Not satisfied with my work: it came out awkward.

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 He flew out the door.  Having missed breakfast, he thought he would buy something to drink at a convenience store along the way, and something easy to eat.  Something sweet.
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+'Can I pick!?'
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Rpapo: Page 76 done.

2012-04-10T18:07:09Z

Page 76 done.

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 "I can wait."
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+Shortly, apologetically, seating himself behind King, whose large body was imprisoned in their small living room, Takaya took some toast for himself too.
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Rpapo: Second third of page 76.

2012-04-10T14:27:39Z

Second third of page 76.

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	When morning came and Takaya awoke once more, a light snore was rising from Mai, who was still ~~deep~~ asleep.		When morning came and Takaya awoke once more, a light snore was rising from Mai, who was still deeply asleep. Dressed in pajama shorts and with her towel-blanket in a flying scissors kick, her real hair rather than the lion hair spread across her pillow, with an expectedly child-like face she slept.

			That said, was it good she was sleeping? Did she have the day off work? He thought perhaps he should call her, but as he approached her sleeping face he saw a deep wrinkle on her forehead and stopped at once. His instincts as younger brother told him to not wake her.

	<nowiki><~~91% Completed~~></nowiki>		Taking care to walk quietly, he dressed and went out into the living room,

			"Mom, it is OK if I don't wake Mai-chan? Huh?"

			He realized there was a person at the table. Welcome, excuse me, moving his head forward and back as if making his entrance to the room, was King. Unlike the Jirou-kun of the old days, a delinquent kid you couldn't deal with, now he had the thoroughly stoic appearance of a blue-collar worker, his hair cut short, the torn-appearing sleeves of his T-shirt moving over his thick arms, at the Satou house table eating toast.

			"Could Mai-chan, perhaps, come out and say hello?"

			"Yes, she could. But she's still sleeping... I should go wake her up... Mai-chan getting up can be scary..."

			"I can wait."


			<nowiki><~~93% Completed~~></nowiki>

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