Golden Time:Volume3 Chapter1 - Revision history

Rpapo: Fixed improper quotations discovered while working on manga chapter 23.

2014-01-17T11:40:29Z

Fixed improper quotations discovered while working on manga chapter 23.

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	The person in question, as a young man himself, unaccustomed to such things, was rubbing his cheeks as if he were embarrassed, and frowning as if in explanation.		The person in question, as a young man himself, unaccustomed to such things, was rubbing his cheeks as if he were embarrassed, and frowning as if in explanation.

	"Well, in fact yesterday I thought, "Enough with this head of mine. I'll just get it shaved." But when I went to the barbershop, they told me "If you're getting it cut anyway, why don't you let my new apprentice cut it for you?" and this sort of perm... I said "well done!" out of delight, since he cut it so fast I'd wondered if it wasn't a bad job... no, or rather, eh? What? Banri and Kouko...? What's up with them?"		"Well, in fact yesterday I thought, 'Enough with this head of mine. I'll just get it shaved.' But when I went to the barbershop, they told me 'If you're getting it cut anyway, why don't you let my new apprentice cut it for you?' and this sort of perm... I said 'well done!' out of delight, since he cut it so fast I'd wondered if it wasn't a bad job... no, or rather, eh? What? Banri and Kouko...? What's up with them?"

	"They're dating! Isn't it an incredible surprise? It shook me up a bit."		"They're dating! Isn't it an incredible surprise? It shook me up a bit."

Rpapo: /* Chapter 1 */ Good catch by l.kostas.

2014-01-15T11:19:29Z

Chapter 1: Good catch by l.kostas.

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	Tada Banri ~~looked up at~~ the ~~Kagas~~.		Tada Banri bowed his head to the Kaga parents.

	And then I... backed off to get a wider view.		And then I... backed off to get a wider view.

Rpapo: Correction of translation, thanks to the sharp eyes of SomePerson007.

2013-11-17T10:13:01Z

Correction of translation, thanks to the sharp eyes of SomePerson007.

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	The other side...? Giving a big nod towards the confused Banri,		The other side...? Giving a big nod towards the confused Banri,

	"So it is. They told me not to get close to you. ~~They said that~~ if I stuck ~~with~~ you, my life was going to go amiss. They told me to pick a new target!"		"So it is. They told me not to get close to you. Because if my strangeness stuck to you, your life was going to go amiss. They told me to go pick a new target!"

	"The old target... Yana-ssan?"		"The old target... Yana-ssan?"

24.34.255.151: /* Chapter 1 */

2013-10-26T04:22:59Z

Chapter 1

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	"That you just happened to be at the station, and all that?"		"That you just happened to be at the station, and all that?"

	"No? ~~Was~~ I there to ambush Tada-kun?"		"No? I was there to ambush Tada-kun?"

	"Did you want to return some money you'd borrowed, or some such special circumstance?"		"Did you want to return some money you'd borrowed, or some such special circumstance?"

BladeUnderHeart at 07:56, 11 October 2013

2013-10-11T07:56:53Z

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	"No! I don't want to hear about it! Or rather, I'm not worried about Banri. Banri, as far as I can see, has an extraordinary capacity for waiting, and should be able to associate with you."		"No! I don't want to hear about it! Or rather, I'm not worried about Banri. Banri, as far as I can see, has an extraordinary capacity for waiting, and should be able to associate with you."

	"Ah, that was a ~~complement~~, for now," he turned and said to the flustered looking Banri.		"Ah, that was a compliment, for now," he turned and said to the flustered looking Banri.

	"And besides, as far as I'm concerned, it's a relief. Up until now, she's been a maturing evil spirit, clinging to and harassing me! It felt like that."		"And besides, as far as I'm concerned, it's a relief. Up until now, she's been a maturing evil spirit, clinging to and harassing me! It felt like that."
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	A person's woman was being called an evil spirit. But the Kouko in question simply snorted, and didn't seem to take any offense.		A person's woman was being called an evil spirit. But the Kouko in question simply snorted, and didn't seem to take any offense.

	"Surprising, isn't it? If that's all you can say, it seems like you really aren't down? Mitsuo seems to be tougher than I ever thought. Though I might seem so too, am I a little worried? Saying, "Mitsuo, is he really OK?" But that day! What ''Mitsuo'' here, did with regards to that miserable, pretentious, ~~ultrasonic~~! That, I cannot forget, you see,		"Surprising, isn't it? If that's all you can say, it seems like you really aren't down? Mitsuo seems to be tougher than I ever thought. Though I might seem so too, am I a little worried? Saying, "Mitsuo, is he really OK?" But that day! What ''Mitsuo'' here, did with regards to that miserable, pretentious, Ultrasonic! That, I cannot forget, you see,

	O! M! G! Looking up to the heavens and closing her eyes, Kouko threw her hands in the air. Banri, of course, tugged a little nervously on one of her elbows,		O! M! G! Looking up to the heavens and closing her eyes, Kouko threw her hands in the air. Banri, of course, tugged a little nervously on one of her elbows,

Rpapo at 21:09, 4 August 2013

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	\| Back to [[Golden Time:Volume3 Prologue\|Prologue]]		\| Back to [[Golden Time:Volume3 Prologue\|Prologue]]
	\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 3: Masquerade\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 3: Masquerade\|Main Page]]
			\| Forward to [[Golden Time:Volume3 Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
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Rpapo: Pages 86 & 87 done. Volume 3, chapter 1 done.

2013-07-28T22:55:11Z

Pages 86 & 87 done. Volume 3, chapter 1 done.

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 At that moment, Linda was calling the old Tada Banri.  It wasn't this self existing now.  Calling that guy, and then begging for something.  It wasn't himself.  Wasn't Linda wishing for that guy to wake up and answer her, for him to return to her and stand before her eyes, that in particular?
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L.kostas: "expression should make" - "for him to return her"

2013-07-26T14:53:47Z

"expression should make" - "for him to return her"

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	The ninth floor was professor's and graduate student's offices all lined up. He could see by the light through each office's windows, but there was nobody around. Into the deathly quiet space, Banri stepped forward unsteadily.		The ninth floor was professor's and graduate student's offices all lined up. He could see by the light through each office's windows, but there was nobody around. Into the deathly quiet space, Banri stepped forward unsteadily.

	But what should he say back to her? What kind of expression should make, what should he say? How should he face her, what should he say to her, to the now entirely forgotten Linda?		But what should he say back to her? What kind of expression should he make, what should he say? How should he face her, what should he say to her, to the now entirely forgotten Linda?

	What was Linda thinking of him?		What was Linda thinking of him?
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	He could not forget that voice. He could no longer think of the "gentle, reliable Linda-senpai."		He could not forget that voice. He could no longer think of the "gentle, reliable Linda-senpai."

	At that moment, Linda was calling the old Tada Banri. It wasn't this self existing now. Calling that guy, and then begging for something. It wasn't himself. Wasn't Linda wishing for that guy to wake up and answer her, for him to return her and stand before her eyes, that in particular?		At that moment, Linda was calling the old Tada Banri. It wasn't this self existing now. Calling that guy, and then begging for something. It wasn't himself. Wasn't Linda wishing for that guy to wake up and answer her, for him to return to her and stand before her eyes, that in particular?

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2013-07-26T11:40:12Z

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 He had even ignored all her texts.
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+The ninth floor was professor's and graduate student's offices all lined up.  He could see by the light through each office's windows, but there was nobody around.  Into the deathly quiet space, Banri stepped forward unsteadily.
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2013-07-25T18:15:11Z

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	Standing with Two Dimensions and Chinami, there was one more: Linda.		Standing with Two Dimensions and Chinami, there was one more: Linda.

			Linda's figure, it was there. She was standing in the entrance to the cafeteria. Her hair, though not very long, was forced into a single knot. She had a day-pack hung from one shoulder. She was wearing a navy blue jersey and a light blue cardigan, tight jeans and her usual Nikes. Her eyes opened wide. Her red... lips...

	<nowiki><~~93% Completed~~></nowiki><!-- 54 of 58 pages -->		Banri got up without saying anything, tossed his bag into their scattered baggage and took off running as he was. Leaving Two Dimensions, Chinami, Linda and just about everybody else behind there, without even looking back, he ran out.

			Running running, running, eyes forward he jumped into the elevator that had just arrived. He pushed '9' for the top floor to go up for now, and the door closed. Going steadily up in the elevator car, he stood frozen like a pole.

			Waah... he closed his eyes. He covered his eyelids with his hot hands. It was like that. Perhaps because he'd seen Mitsuo's mach-speed escape, he'd just done the same thing. ...No, he wouldn't deceive himself with such words. He couldn't even blame his friend.

			He'd fled. That was entirely due to his own weakness. Seeing that me, that person--- Linda, what must she have thought? Did she get mad? Was she hurt? Was she despising me? Saying "As I thought, that guy is useless, he's changed," will she turn her back on Tada Banri?

			He had even ignored all her texts.


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