Golden Time:Volume5 Chapter1 - Revision history

Hp2 at 22:05, 9 February 2017

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	As for Linda, rather than being in the line of dancers like Banri and Kaga Kouko, she was always out front, right behind the paper lantern that marked the start of their team. Right in the middle of all the noise and clamor, she was especially dazzling.		As for Linda, rather than being in the line of dancers like Banri and Kaga Kouko, she was always out front, right behind the paper lantern that marked the start of their team. Right in the middle of all the noise and clamor, she was especially dazzling.

	I wonder, where the heck Linda ~~did~~ learn how to dance? Though she certainly has had amazingly developed reflexes from the start, as far as I know, she probably hasn't received any special training in dance.		I wonder, where the heck did Linda learn how to dance? Though she certainly has had amazingly developed reflexes from the start, as far as I know, she probably hasn't received any special training in dance.

	But even so, Linda's dancing was really terrific.		But even so, Linda's dancing was really terrific.

Hp2 at 21:54, 9 February 2017

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	Banri belonged to Omaken, but this time a few other local college clubs had asked to join with them to form a dance team, and it had turned out they would all participate in the Awa Odori sponsored by this shopping district.		Banri belonged to Omaken, but this time a few other local college clubs had asked to join with them to form a dance team, and it had turned out they would all participate in the Awa Odori sponsored by this shopping district.

	~~There~~ were in identical yukatas and brand new snow white rubber-soled tabi socks. On the light green cuffs there was a blue design as of running water. Diagonally across the back "Alliance of Tokyo Region Private University Awa Odori Clubs" was written in large letters. They boldly wore those with the hems tucked up, showing white, even bleached tight pants, and they all had the identical blue fans they'd been given. All that was left was to tie hand-towels around their heads and their preparations would be complete.		They were in identical yukatas and brand new snow white rubber-soled tabi socks. On the light green cuffs there was a blue design as of running water. Diagonally across the back "Alliance of Tokyo Region Private University Awa Odori Clubs" was written in large letters. They boldly wore those with the hems tucked up, showing white, even bleached tight pants, and they all had the identical blue fans they'd been given. All that was left was to tie hand-towels around their heads and their preparations would be complete.

	Incidentally, alone among the Okamen guys, Kosshii-senpai had a black and silver checked hem on one side, making him stand out even more in the colorful group.		Incidentally, alone among the Okamen guys, Kosshii-senpai had a black and silver checked hem on one side, making him stand out even more in the colorful group.

Rpapo at 18:28, 13 July 2016

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	\| Back to [[Golden Time:Volume5 Prologue\|Prologue]]		\| Back to [[Golden Time:Volume5 Prologue\|Prologue]]
	\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 5: The Ghost of Summer, Japanese Summer\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Golden Time#Volume 5: The Ghost of Summer, Japanese Summer\|Main Page]]
			\| Forward to [[Golden Time:Volume5 Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
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 Banri had cast Linda... one whom held only great regrets for the me that had to be placed into this world, away entirely.  She had superficial human contact with him, but she was shut out from the depths of his heart.  Even though I had always been at her side, seeing her there, making sure she was happy, and if something happened, I would come running at once.  ...No matter what, Linda cannot see me, neither can she hear me, even though I want her to.
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 Banri, Kaga Kouko, Linda, all the gang, everybody was smiling.  Under the blue and cloudless mid-summer sky, bathed in a sunlight akin to violence while surrendering themselves to the excitement of the festival, the cares of the present world entirely forgotten from their expressions, the dance group continued along, making their steady, noisy progress.
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+Nobody can see me, nobody can touch me.  Not even the burning summer sun can show even a faint silhouette of my paralyzed body.
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+Tada Banri was dancing.
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 What's more, from their faces, from their heads, in case from their whole bodies, dozens of hands were separately striking out at them with a motion like that of casting a net.  Clapping like crazy in time with the rhythm.  And every now and then, somebody would get out of rhythm and be rapping out a back-beat.
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+Moving together, they started to make strange faces.  Each of them, not just the guys but the girls too, shouted excitedly "Hmm～hey!"  "Hehey!"  "Hmm～Hehhe～y!"  Even Linda.  Linda's movements were especially wild.  As she shook her hips back and forth, she looked up to the sky and shouted "Hehehehehe-y!"  Instead of trying to hide her swelling shape, she threw back her chin freely.
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 Taking a breath and stopping for her was Linda.
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+"Ah, 'that' eh?  Yes, I guess you're right.  It may be so, it's come to this... do we have any other choice?"
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 Sitting down next to her and kindly pulling some lipstick from her own bag, Linda handed it over to Kouko.  Another of the seniors opened up a mirror and held it in both her hands so that Kouko could see her own face easily.
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+So doing, getting closer to the mirror held by her senpais, stiffly moving the deep red lipstick to her lips,
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 At length pulling Kouko under the tent, Linda looked over at Banri's face, saying "here you go now."
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+"Oh my..."
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