Golden Time:Volume5 Prologue - Revision history

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2016-01-08T20:27:16Z

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 Could the friend about which she was speaking be none other than Tada Banri?  Pulling back, he looked at her face anew.
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 "...If, you meet...?"
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+He wondered if she wanted to convey her feelings in person.  ...You could say probably that.  Rather than entrust her message to somebody else, doubtless she wanted to see him for herself.  Those feelings not even Banri understood, however.
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 Without even realizing it, his mouth was open and he was moaning "Wow..."
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+He thought, "Once it's morning, I want to go to Tokyo."  He wanted to tell his doctor, his mother, even his father that he wanted to make that his goal.  Such were his thoughts.  It was perhaps the first time in his life he had this experience: Looking forward to the next morning, even saying things like that.
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 His body's wounds, such as they were, being parted from his memories... what in the world would happen to him, nobody knew.  He might be like this his whole life.  He might even live his whole life in a hospital.  His whole life, perhaps, unable to hope for a normal existence.
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+"...Can't you leave the hospital?"
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 This wasn't an answer either... no, what was it?  Oh yeah, the outside world had plunged into the series of consecutive holidays three days ago.  Banri recalled that his schedule of checkups and rehabilitation had gotten all messed up.
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+Banri looked up and tried to get a glimpse of the standing girl's expression.  He figured that if he found even a little displeasure in her expression, he would try and keep it short.  And then he would say "It's already late, so let's get back."  So he thought.
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 Simply understanding, but unable to do anything about it, she seemed to be concerned about Banri.  She herself, despite being unable to move from her M-legged, seated state, did not take her eyes off of Banri for an instant.  Neither did she try to escape from here.  Her hand, still floating in the air, was white.
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+Rather than saying "I'm okay, really," Banri made his voice bright and cheerful.
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 Moist, clear, perfectly round, as if entirely fascinated... for sure, for sure.  All at once embarrassed, his laughter suddenly subsided.
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+"...That, the glittering, really, I've seen it a lot... ah, it hurts, I laughed too much.  ...So, I've been seeing it a lot.  From my room, that flashing, it looked like a star.  'What, what might it be?' I thought, wondering."
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 Suddenly coming back to his senses, he remembered his situation.  Hospital in-patients didn't usually go out in the middle of the night like this, so there wouldn't be anybody worrying about him.
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+The girl, her voice still quivering, was unable to get up, her legs spread indecently.  She was probably trying to say, "Are, are are, are you okay?  I'm okay so don't get close to me, kyaa!"
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Pages 32 & 33 done.

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 And worse, all in muddy pajamas.  An ordinary, living, flesh and blood guy, somehow looking like a ghost, however unlikely that may be.  Even more than a psychic phenomenon, it was a very real sign of danger.  Shouting aloud, running and escaping, not even calling the police.
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+"...The, the way things are... could you please wait a little bit...!?"
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