Golden Time:Volume6 Chapter2 - Revision history

Rpapo at 21:54, 6 March 2023

2023-03-06T21:54:36Z

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2023-01-27T23:58:10Z

Pages 96 & 97 done. Chapter two done.

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 At some point, the living room had fallen silent.  Kouko was stretched out, sprawled face down on the sofa, and the cat was sitting on her back with its paws tucked underneath itself.  Her father was just standing by her side, staring back at Banri's face as if he didn't know what to do.
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2023-01-06T22:59:19Z

Pages 94 & 95 done.

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 He had long since transcended the time and space where he had realized that he liked her because she was pretty, or that he wanted to look at her because she was beautiful, or that he cared about her because she was lonely.  He simply wanted to be by Kouko's side.  He wanted her at his side.  Even if she showed up with a bloated, squished face saying, "I'm sorry, Banri, but I've turned out somewhat of a mess..." he would probably just accept it with "Eh!?  I guess I'll just have to take you as you are."  He didn't think it would matter if she became poor, or suddenly turned into a violent idiot, so long as Kouko was Kouko.  He accepted her into the deepest part of himself.  That much was certain, and there wasn't any doubt about it.
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+...He could only think that no matter what happened, it couldn't be helped.  Gradually becoming more and more afraid of himself, Banri stopped imagining further.
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2022-12-27T18:00:51Z

Pages 92 & 93 done.

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 What was going to happen between himself and Kouko.  What were they heading towards?  He no longer had any idea.  Rather, he didn't understand her.  She was such a difficult person.  He had thought he knew everything about her, but now he could only think that he didn't know anything.
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+All the faces of all the girls he had known so far came to mind.  It was only in his imagination, but it seemed that Kouko was by far the most incomprehensible of them all.
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2022-11-16T00:10:46Z

Pages 90 & 91 done.

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 The Kaga family kitchen was like a small room of its own, with a large window facing the grove of trees in the garden.  Arranged along the wall in a 'U' shape with plenty of extra space were sinks, stoves and ovens, and in the center there was a wide marble worktable.  Around the lower part was a line of cooking utensils stored so as to be easy to use, and what appeared to be foodstuffs hung on hangers, one by one.  And there, a familiar indigo-dyed apron.  The shocking scene of "air yakisoba" came back to his mind.
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+Unsure whether to ask or not, he tried to take a quick peek into the living room, but the angle of the wall prevented him from seeing the other side of the dining room.  Banri thought better of it and went back into the kitchen.  For the time being, he would make was he was told to.  Let's make ramen.  Hadn't <span class="plainlinks">[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Antonio_Inoki  Inoki]</span> said it?  Don't be afraid of food poisoning.  Make it without hesitation; it'll be fine so long as they're cooked.
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2022-10-23T22:37:08Z

Pages 88 & 89.

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 "Make this!"
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+"...Are you... upset!?"
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2022-09-22T22:04:31Z

Pages 86 & 87 done.

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 "You can't stay cooped up like this in a dark room for the rest of your life!"
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+While observing his daughter being dragged around in a miserable bent-forward position, her father opened the glass double-doors for them to pass.
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2022-09-01T22:30:36Z

Pages 84 & 85 done.

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 "......By chance, just by chance.  ......By any chance... is my father over there?"
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+"He's not there...?"
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2022-07-21T22:50:38Z

Pages 81 & 82 done.

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 "......Banri, I'm sorry about earlier.  I'm sorry about everything......"  Kouko, unaware of any of this, began to speak in a quiet, nasal voice.
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+With her face buried in Banri's torso and clinging tightly to him, there was no way her father could be in her field of vision.
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2022-07-19T21:33:35Z

Pages 80 & 81 done.

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 He was speechless, as if the words had been sucked out of him.
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+Her father was peeking through the doorway he had opened and then forgotten about.
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