HEAVY OBJECT:EX Chapter 6 - Revision history

Hp2 at 18:54, 13 November 2016

2016-11-13T18:54:04Z

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	The more than 100 Legitimacy Kingdom soldiers had split into a few different teams.		The more than 100 Legitimacy Kingdom soldiers had split into a few different teams.

	The power source team ~~had~~ had a simple job.		The power source team had a simple job.

	Gas and electricity were not a guarantee in the middle of a wasteland, so large gas turbine generators and largescale transformers had been set up outside. That was their target. They had stuffed thin plastic bags with iron sand and used a makeshift slingshot made of rubber tubing and standing taller than they were. That threw the bags 200-300 meters to the exposed electrodes and cooling radiators.		Gas and electricity were not a guarantee in the middle of a wasteland, so large gas turbine generators and largescale transformers had been set up outside. That was their target. They had stuffed thin plastic bags with iron sand and used a makeshift slingshot made of rubber tubing and standing taller than they were. That threw the bags 200-300 meters to the exposed electrodes and cooling radiators.

Hp2: Alternatively, 'he was not interested' also works.

2016-11-13T18:50:53Z

Alternatively, 'he was not interested' also works.

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	The delinquent soldier held an assault rifle.		The delinquent soldier held an assault rifle.

	But he had no ~~interested~~ in the lead bullets. What mattered now was the makeshift optional weapon attached near the muzzle.		But he had no interest in the lead bullets. What mattered now was the makeshift optional weapon attached near the muzzle.

	“This is Heivia. The emotional weapon is working. I repeat, the emotional weapon is working. Focus on targeting the drunk ones. You can tell who’s drunk using thermo.”		“This is Heivia. The emotional weapon is working. I repeat, the emotional weapon is working. Focus on targeting the drunk ones. You can tell who’s drunk using thermo.”

Entei08 at 04:53, 24 October 2016

2016-10-24T04:53:05Z

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	“Ver…dandi…?” muttered Quenser.		“Ver…dandi…?” muttered Quenser.

	After looking back and forth between her sister and her prey, Skuld tried to press her weight down on Quenser’s neck once more. She did bother begging for her life. She silently focused all of her efforts on killing before her own life could be taken.		After looking back and forth between her sister and her prey, Skuld tried to press her weight down on Quenser’s neck once more. She did not bother begging for her life. She silently focused all of her efforts on killing before her own life could be taken.

	Another high-voltage current surged through her.		Another high-voltage current surged through her.

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2016-10-23T23:43:00Z

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