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	Yes, there was a change.		Yes, there was a change.

	The people who ~~got~~ so immersed in their ridiculous killing changed as well.		The people who were so immersed in their ridiculous killing changed as well.

	It was all thanks to the giant weapons known as Objects.		It was all thanks to the giant weapons known as Objects.

	Just the main body of these new weapons measured at over 50 meters ~~and~~ the guns added even more to their size. Their appearance caused the book on war to be completely rewritten. Large groups of soldiers no longer killed each other directly on the battlefield. Instead, the most important thing was to get the strongest Object to the battlefield in perfect condition.		Just the main body of these new weapons measured at over 50 meters while the guns added even more to their size. Their appearance caused the book on war to be completely rewritten. Large groups of soldiers no longer killed each other directly on the battlefield. Instead, the most important thing was to get the strongest Object to the battlefield in perfect condition.

	Tanks, fighters, and other previous main players became weapons of a bygone era.		Tanks, fighters, and the other previous main players became weapons of a bygone era.

	Normal machine guns, shells, and missiles were treated like mere peashooters.		Normal machine guns, shells, and missiles were treated like mere peashooters.
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	That was simply how much more powerful the Objects were.		That was simply how much more powerful the Objects were.

	When a certain island nation presented the first of those weapons, the rest of the world feared it and an allied force from 14 other countries carried out a combined surprise attack on the prototype ~~Object…and the~~ Object repelled them all. At the end of the battle, a nuclear strike was carried out over the Pacific Ocean, but the scene of the Object continuing to sink the allied fleet ~~even as~~ half of it ~~melted~~ like ice under the hot sun was in every history textbook.		When a certain island nation presented the first of those weapons, the rest of the world feared it and an allied force from 14 other countries carried out a combined surprise attack on the prototype Object… The Object repelled them all. At the end of the battle, a nuclear strike was carried out over the Pacific Ocean, but the scene of the Object continuing to sink the allied fleet while half of it was melting like ice under the hot sun was in every history textbook.

	That island nation remained at the leading edge of Object development and it was clear just how powerful a presence the Objects were.		That island nation remained at the leading edge of Object development and it was clear just how powerful of a presence the Objects were.

	Unsurprisingly, Objects became synonymous with war.		Unsurprisingly, Objects became synonymous with war.

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	In the end, war did not end.		In the end, war did not end.

	Even in an age where development had reached every corner of the planet Earth, high output lasers could easily launch shuttles, and some of the most powerful people had villas on the moon, it seemed nothing had been done to fill the gaps between ~~people's~~ hearts. Well, supplement companies that sold digitalized ~~"comfort"~~ and ~~"spiritualism"~~ were not uncommon, but even so, the basic mechanism that brought conflict between people could not be removed from their mentality.		Even in an age where development had reached every corner of the planet Earth, high output lasers could easily launch shuttles, and some of the most powerful people had villas on the moon, it seemed nothing had been done to fill the gaps between people’s hearts. Well, supplement companies that sold digitalized “comfort” and “spiritualism” were not uncommon, but even so, the basic mechanism that brought conflict between people could not be removed from their mentality.

	Was the change in the rules of war by the appearance of a new kind of weapon just another type of salvation for humanity? Or did it mean humanity had fallen even lower?		Was the change in the rules of war by the appearance of a new kind of weapon just another type of salvation for humanity? Or did it mean humanity had fallen even lower?
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	That was simply how much more powerful the Objects were.		That was simply how much more powerful the Objects were.

	When a certain island nation presented the first of those weapons, the rest of the world feared it and an allied force from 14 other countries carried out a combined surprise attack on the prototype ~~Object...and~~ the Object repelled them all. At the end of the battle, a nuclear strike was carried out over the Pacific Ocean, but the scene of the Object continuing to sink the allied fleet even as half of it melted like ice under the hot sun was in every history textbook.		When a certain island nation presented the first of those weapons, the rest of the world feared it and an allied force from 14 other countries carried out a combined surprise attack on the prototype Object…and the Object repelled them all. At the end of the battle, a nuclear strike was carried out over the Pacific Ocean, but the scene of the Object continuing to sink the allied fleet even as half of it melted like ice under the hot sun was in every history textbook.

	That island nation remained at the leading edge of Object development and it was clear just how powerful a presence the Objects were.		That island nation remained at the leading edge of Object development and it was clear just how powerful a presence the Objects were.
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	So what about everyone else?		So what about everyone else?

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	In the end, war did not end.		In the end, war did not end.

	Even in an age where development had reached every corner of the planet Earth, high output lasers could easily launch shuttles, and some of the most powerful people had villas on the moon, it seemed nothing had been done to fill the gaps between ~~people’s~~ hearts. Well, supplement companies that sold digitalized ~~“comfort”~~ and ~~“spiritualism”~~ were not uncommon, but even so, the basic mechanism that brought conflict between people could not be removed from their mentality.		Even in an age where development had reached every corner of the planet Earth, high output lasers could easily launch shuttles, and some of the most powerful people had villas on the moon, it seemed nothing had been done to fill the gaps between people's hearts. Well, supplement companies that sold digitalized "comfort" and "spiritualism" were not uncommon, but even so, the basic mechanism that brought conflict between people could not be removed from their mentality.

	Was the change in the rules of war by the appearance of a new kind of weapon just another type of salvation for humanity? Or did it mean humanity had fallen even lower?		Was the change in the rules of war by the appearance of a new kind of weapon just another type of salvation for humanity? Or did it mean humanity had fallen even lower?
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	That was simply how much more powerful the Objects were.		That was simply how much more powerful the Objects were.

	When a certain island nation presented the first of those weapons, the rest of the world feared it and an allied force from 14 other countries carried out a combined surprise attack on the prototype ~~Object…and~~ the Object repelled them all. At the end of the battle, a nuclear strike was carried out over the Pacific Ocean, but the scene of the Object continuing to sink the allied fleet even as half of it melted like ice under the hot sun was in every history textbook.		When a certain island nation presented the first of those weapons, the rest of the world feared it and an allied force from 14 other countries carried out a combined surprise attack on the prototype Object...and the Object repelled them all. At the end of the battle, a nuclear strike was carried out over the Pacific Ocean, but the scene of the Object continuing to sink the allied fleet even as half of it melted like ice under the hot sun was in every history textbook.

	That island nation remained at the leading edge of Object development and it was clear just how powerful a presence the Objects were.		That island nation remained at the leading edge of Object development and it was clear just how powerful a presence the Objects were.
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	So what about everyone else?		So what about everyone else?

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	That was simply how much more powerful the Objects were.		That was simply how much more powerful the Objects were.

	When a certain island nation presented the first of those weapons, the rest of the world feared it and an allied force from 14 other ~~counties~~ carried out a combined surprise attack on the prototype Object…and the Object repelled them all. At the end of the battle, a nuclear strike was carried out over the Pacific Ocean, but the scene of the Object continuing to sink the allied fleet even as half of it melted like ice under the hot sun was in every history textbook.		When a certain island nation presented the first of those weapons, the rest of the world feared it and an allied force from 14 other countries carried out a combined surprise attack on the prototype Object…and the Object repelled them all. At the end of the battle, a nuclear strike was carried out over the Pacific Ocean, but the scene of the Object continuing to sink the allied fleet even as half of it melted like ice under the hot sun was in every history textbook.

	That island nation remained at the leading edge of Object development and it was clear just how powerful a presence the Objects were.		That island nation remained at the leading edge of Object development and it was clear just how powerful a presence the Objects were.

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Prologue

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	Just the main body of these new weapons measured at over 50 meters and the guns added even more to their size. Their appearance caused the book on war to be completely rewritten. Large groups of soldiers no longer killed each other directly on the battlefield. Instead, the most important thing was to get the strongest Object to the battlefield in perfect condition.		Just the main body of these new weapons measured at over 50 meters and the guns added even more to their size. Their appearance caused the book on war to be completely rewritten. Large groups of soldiers no longer killed each other directly on the battlefield. Instead, the most important thing was to get the strongest Object to the battlefield in perfect condition.

	Tanks, fighters, and ~~the~~ other previous main players became weapons of a bygone era.		Tanks, fighters, and other previous main players became weapons of a bygone era.

	Normal machine guns, shells, and missiles were treated like mere peashooters.		Normal machine guns, shells, and missiles were treated like mere peashooters.

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Js06 at 19:43, 10 November 2011

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	~~Ultimately, wars will never come to an end.~~		==Prologue==

	~~Even in~~ the ~~age when every inch on the planet of earth had been unearthed by development projects, when high-power laser could easy shoot shuttles into the space~~, ~~and when certain persons-in-authority could build villas on the moon, it seemed to be impossible to fill up the cracks in the hearts of people~~.		In the end, war did not end.

	No, ~~even though~~ it ~~was true that~~ companies that ~~specialized in providing~~ digitalized ~~"healing"~~ and ~~"spiritual supplements"~~ were ~~far from rare~~, ~~at the end of the day~~, ~~there was no way to remove~~ the ~~inter-competing~~ mechanism that ~~lied in~~ people~~'s minds~~.		Even in an age where development had reached every corner of the planet Earth, high output lasers could easily launch shuttles, and some of the most powerful people had villas on the moon, it seemed nothing had been done to fill the gaps between people’s hearts. Well, supplement companies that sold digitalized “comfort” and “spiritualism” were not uncommon, but even so, the basic mechanism that brought conflict between people could not be removed from their mentality.

	~~Isn't~~ the ~~fact that~~ rules of war ~~changes with~~ the ~~introduction~~ of new ~~weapons no more than a perfunctory~~ salvation ~~to mankind~~? Or even ~~worse, shouldn't it be regretted as a sign of further retrogression~~?		Was the change in the rules of war by the appearance of a new kind of weapon just another type of salvation for humanity? Or did it mean humanity had fallen even lower?

	Yes, there ~~were changes~~.		Yes, there was a change.

	~~Even to mankind, which was into worthless killings among themselves, had changes brought upon them~~.		The people who got so immersed in their ridiculous killing changed as well.

	~~The ultra-sized weapon - OBJECT~~.		It was all thanks to the giant weapons known as Objects.

	~~The hull alone had a total length~~ of 50 ~~metres. If~~ the ~~length of the gun was also counted the total size was~~ even ~~larger. This new weapon overturned all common knowledge regarding wars. It is not even a stretch to say that it had become much~~ more ~~meaningful~~ to ~~let~~ the ~~troops~~ to ~~focus~~ on ~~preparing~~ the ~~OBJECTs~~ to ~~be deployed~~ to the battlefield in perfect condition~~, instead of letting them to kill each other in battles~~.		Just the main body of these new weapons measured at over 50 meters and the guns added even more to their size. Their appearance caused the book on war to be completely rewritten. Large groups of soldiers no longer killed each other directly on the battlefield. Instead, the most important thing was to get the strongest Object to the battlefield in perfect condition.

	Tanks, ~~fighter jets -~~ weapons ~~which had been playing major roles in wars were then called "Old Generation Weapons"~~.		Tanks, fighters, and the other previous main players became weapons of a bygone era.

	~~Even rifles~~, ~~cannon rounds~~ and ~~missile~~ were ~~then~~ treated ~~as no more than~~ peashooters ~~and peas~~.		Normal machine guns, shells, and missiles were treated like mere peashooters.

	~~The combat strength of~~ the ~~ultra-sized weapon of OBJECT was of such an astounding scale~~.		That was simply how much more powerful the Objects were.

	A certain island nation ~~which introduced~~ the ~~weapon caused fear from all around~~ the world~~. The test model of OBJECT, having~~ a surprise attack ~~launched upon it by a joint expedition of fourteen nations, defeated~~ all ~~the intruders~~. By the end of the battle ~~it received~~ a nuclear ~~attack in~~ the Pacific Ocean~~. With~~ half of ~~its body melting~~ like ice under ~~strong sunshine, it still managed to sink~~ the ~~combined fleet with its remaining armaments. Images from such a scene were even published~~ in history ~~textbooks~~.		When a certain island nation presented the first of those weapons, the rest of the world feared it and an allied force from 14 other counties carried out a combined surprise attack on the prototype Object…and the Object repelled them all. At the end of the battle, a nuclear strike was carried out over the Pacific Ocean, but the scene of the Object continuing to sink the allied fleet even as half of it melted like ice under the hot sun was in every history textbook.

	~~One can understand how strong the OBJECT was as a weapon, from the fact that the said~~ island nation ~~had still maintained~~ the ~~top position in regard~~ of ~~OBJECT~~ development.		That island nation remained at the leading edge of Object development and it was clear just how powerful a presence the Objects were.

	~~Of course~~, ~~since then the term OBJECT had become a synonym for~~ war.		Unsurprisingly, Objects became synonymous with war.

	So.		So what about everyone else?

	~~How~~ about ~~other people~~?

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Ultimately, wars will never come to an end.

Even in the age when every inch on the planet of earth had been unearthed by development projects, when high-power laser could easy shoot shuttles into the space, and when certain persons-in-authority could build villas on the moon, it seemed to be impossible to fill up the cracks in the hearts of people.

No, even though it was true that companies that specialized in providing digitalized "healing" and "spiritual supplements" were far from rare, at the end of the day, there was no way to remove the inter-competing mechanism that lied in people's minds.

Isn't the fact that rules of war changes with the introduction of new weapons no more than a perfunctory salvation to mankind? Or even worse, shouldn't it be regretted as a sign of further retrogression?

Yes, there were changes.

Even to mankind, which was into worthless killings among themselves, had changes brought upon them.

The ultra-sized weapon - OBJECT.

The hull alone had a total length of 50 metres. If the length of the gun was also counted the total size was even larger. This new weapon overturned all common knowledge regarding wars. It is not even a stretch to say that it had become much more meaningful to let the troops to focus on preparing the OBJECTs to be deployed to the battlefield in perfect condition, instead of letting them to kill each other in battles.

Tanks, fighter jets - weapons which had been playing major roles in wars were then called "Old Generation Weapons".

Even rifles, cannon rounds and missile were then treated as no more than peashooters and peas.

The combat strength of the ultra-sized weapon of OBJECT was of such an astounding scale.

A certain island nation which introduced the weapon caused fear from all around the world. The test model of OBJECT, having a surprise attack launched upon it by a joint expedition of fourteen nations, defeated all the intruders. By the end of the battle it received a nuclear attack in the Pacific Ocean. With half of its body melting like ice under strong sunshine, it still managed to sink the combined fleet with its remaining armaments. Images from such a scene were even published in history textbooks.

One can understand how strong the OBJECT was as a weapon, from the fact that the said island nation had still maintained the top position in regard of OBJECT development.

Of course, since then the term OBJECT had become a synonym for war.

So.

How about other people?

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	Ultimately, wars will never come to an end.		Ultimately, wars will never come to an end.


	Even in the age when every inch on the planet of earth had been unearthed by development projects, when high-power laser could easy shoot shuttles into the space, and when certain persons-in-authority could build villas on the moon, it seemed to be impossible to fill up the cracks in the hearts of people.		Even in the age when every inch on the planet of earth had been unearthed by development projects, when high-power laser could easy shoot shuttles into the space, and when certain persons-in-authority could build villas on the moon, it seemed to be impossible to fill up the cracks in the hearts of people.


	No, even though it was true that companies that specialized in providing digitalized "healing" and "spiritual supplements" were far from rare, at the end of the day, there was no way to remove the inter-competing mechanism that lied in people's minds.		No, even though it was true that companies that specialized in providing digitalized "healing" and "spiritual supplements" were far from rare, at the end of the day, there was no way to remove the inter-competing mechanism that lied in people's minds.


	Isn't the fact that rules of war changes with the introduction of new weapons no more than a perfunctory salvation to mankind? Or even worse, shouldn't it be regretted as a sign of further retrogression?		Isn't the fact that rules of war changes with the introduction of new weapons no more than a perfunctory salvation to mankind? Or even worse, shouldn't it be regretted as a sign of further retrogression?


	Yes, there were changes.		Yes, there were changes.


	Even to mankind, which was into worthless killings among themselves, had changes brought upon them.		Even to mankind, which was into worthless killings among themselves, had changes brought upon them.


	The ultra-sized weapon - OBJECT.		The ultra-sized weapon - OBJECT.


	The hull alone had a total length of 50 metres. If the length of the gun was also counted the total size was even larger. This new weapon overturned all common knowledge regarding wars. It is not even a stretch to say that it had become much more meaningful to let the troops to focus on preparing the OBJECTs to be deployed to the battlefield in perfect condition, instead of letting them to kill each other in battles.		The hull alone had a total length of 50 metres. If the length of the gun was also counted the total size was even larger. This new weapon overturned all common knowledge regarding wars. It is not even a stretch to say that it had become much more meaningful to let the troops to focus on preparing the OBJECTs to be deployed to the battlefield in perfect condition, instead of letting them to kill each other in battles.


	Tanks, fighter jets - weapons which had been playing major roles in wars were then called "Old Generation Weapons".		Tanks, fighter jets - weapons which had been playing major roles in wars were then called "Old Generation Weapons".


	Even rifles, cannon rounds and missile were then treated as no more than peashooters and peas.		Even rifles, cannon rounds and missile were then treated as no more than peashooters and peas.


	The combat strength of the ultra-sized weapon of OBJECT was of such an astounding scale.		The combat strength of the ultra-sized weapon of OBJECT was of such an astounding scale.


	A certain island nation which introduced the weapon caused fear from all around the world. The test model of OBJECT, having a surprise attack launched upon it by a joint expedition of fourteen nations, defeated all the intruders. By the end of the battle it received a nuclear attack in the Pacific Ocean. With half of its body melting like ice under strong sunshine, it still managed to sink the combined fleet with its remaining armaments. Images from such a scene were even published in history textbooks.		A certain island nation which introduced the weapon caused fear from all around the world. The test model of OBJECT, having a surprise attack launched upon it by a joint expedition of fourteen nations, defeated all the intruders. By the end of the battle it received a nuclear attack in the Pacific Ocean. With half of its body melting like ice under strong sunshine, it still managed to sink the combined fleet with its remaining armaments. Images from such a scene were even published in history textbooks.


	One can understand how strong the OBJECT was as a weapon, from the fact that the said island nation had still maintained the top position in regard of OBJECT development.		One can understand how strong the OBJECT was as a weapon, from the fact that the said island nation had still maintained the top position in regard of OBJECT development.


	Of course, since then the term OBJECT had become a synonym for war.		Of course, since then the term OBJECT had become a synonym for war.


	So.		So.


	How about other people?		How about other people?


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