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	It headed for the maintenance base zone where the princess waited.		It headed for the maintenance base zone where the princess waited.

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Hiro Hayase: Reverted edits by Zero2001 (talk) to last revision by Zakashi

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Zero2001 at 16:27, 30 September 2012

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Zero2001 at 16:27, 30 September 2012

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	"How should I know? But they came to a maintenance base on the front lines, so they had to have been prepared for some kind of trouble to occur. At the very least, it would have been written in tiny letters at the bottom of whatever paperwork they signed. Otherwise, that huge-breasted commander would never have allowed it."		"How should I know? But they came to a maintenance base on the front lines, so they had to have been prepared for some kind of trouble to occur. At the very least, it would have been written in tiny letters at the bottom of whatever paperwork they signed. Otherwise, that huge-breasted commander would never have allowed it."

	So is she kind or is she not...?)		''So is she kind or is she not...?''

	Quenser turned around once and looked at a cameraman who looked entirely exhausted. Had they been expecting a clean battle between Objects that was like an official sports competition?		Quenser turned around once and looked at a cameraman who looked entirely exhausted. Had they been expecting a clean battle between Objects that was like an official sports competition?

Zero2001 at 16:15, 30 September 2012

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Zero2001 at 16:09, 30 September 2012

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Zero2001: Italicizing thought speech. Coloring murmers/whispers. etc.

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Zakashi: Excellent chapter as usual :D

2012-08-23T11:23:26Z

Excellent chapter as usual :D

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Chapter 3: Honor is Priceless >> Emergency Interception at Victoria Island

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	“I am prepared. What is my punishment?”		“I am prepared. What is my punishment?”

	“That will be determined later,” said Quenser, passing on information from their commander. “As the emergency caused control of the unit to be lost temporarily, Froleytia has a lot of reports to ~~right~~, but she told me to pass on a message to you: any failures can be overwritten by results, and you are fortunate enough to have the technical skills needed to make her hesitant to get rid of you.”		“That will be determined later,” said Quenser, passing on information from their commander. “As the emergency caused control of the unit to be lost temporarily, Froleytia has a lot of reports to write, but she told me to pass on a message to you: any failures can be overwritten by results, and you are fortunate enough to have the technical skills needed to make her hesitant to get rid of you.”

	“…I see,” was all the old lady said.		“…I see,” was all the old lady said.

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	The two boys slowly put their hands up. The ground looked level at first, but it actually had small undulations like the waves on the ocean surface. A group of five foot soldiers were hiding behind those undulations.		The two boys slowly put their hands up. The ground looked level at first, but it actually had small undulations like the waves on the ocean surface. A group of five foot soldiers were hiding behind those undulations.

	<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"They have midrange sniper rifles and a portable antitank missile launcher. This is bad, Quenser. If we make any odd moves, we'll be in heaven the next thing we know. We need to get permission before even sneezing to ensure there are no misunderstandings.</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"They have midrange sniper rifles and a portable antitank missile launcher. This is bad, Quenser. If we make any odd moves, we'll be in heaven the next thing we know. We need to get permission before even sneezing to ensure there are no misunderstandings."</span>

	<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"What's with those ridiculous uniforms? And more importantly, the model of gun they're using.</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"What's with those ridiculous uniforms? And more importantly, the model of gun they're using."</span>

	<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"I know. It makes no sense. Why would the Capitalist Corporations show up here?</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"I know. It makes no sense. Why would the Capitalist Corporations show up here?"</span>

	"Okay, enough whispering, you two," said one of the Capitalist Corporation attackers in an oddly cheerful voice.		"Okay, enough whispering, you two," said one of the Capitalist Corporation attackers in an oddly cheerful voice.
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	As he lightly stroked the steering wheel, Heivia whispered to Quenser in the passenger seat.		As he lightly stroked the steering wheel, Heivia whispered to Quenser in the passenger seat.

	<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Aren't you going to make a joke about that?</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Aren't you going to make a joke about that?"</span>

	<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"I think we can let this one slide.</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"I think we can let this one slide."</span>

	The old maintenance lady climbed aboard and the off-road vehicle left.		The old maintenance lady climbed aboard and the off-road vehicle left.

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	“I analyzed the floats they used and I estimate the 6 dummy models each weigh less than 50,000 tons. …From the weight of this armor fragment and the ratio of steel to ceramic, the dummy models’ armor is likely a third the thickness of normal Object armor. And it is not steel with the proper heat resistant reactive materials. If they are made out of nothing but cheap ceramics, then their actual strength would be…”		“I analyzed the floats they used and I estimate the 6 dummy models each weigh less than 50,000 tons. …From the weight of this armor fragment and the ratio of steel to ceramic, the dummy models’ armor is likely a third the thickness of normal Object armor. And it is not steel with the proper heat resistant reactive materials. If they are made out of nothing but cheap ceramics, then their actual strength would be…”

	“They got us,” groaned the old lady. “We were tricked by the initial impact of their appearance. If she had calmly responded and dealt with one at a time, our princess’s main cannons could have stabbed straight through them. Their victory came from the idea of seven Objects causing us to ~~complete~~ lose our cool.” The old lady paused a second. “Do you understand what this means, boy?”		“They got us,” groaned the old lady. “We were tricked by the initial impact of their appearance. If she had calmly responded and dealt with one at a time, our princess’s main cannons could have stabbed straight through them. Their victory came from the idea of seven Objects causing us to completely lose our cool.” The old lady paused for a second. “Do you understand what this means, boy?”

	“Eh? That the armor is a lot thinner than normal Object armor, right?”		“Eh? That the armor is a lot thinner than normal Object armor, right?”
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	(Not good. They were located from the upped output on the radio signal!!)		(Not good. They were located from the upped output on the radio signal!!)

	But the dummy model stopped moving. Intense static came from radio and the GPS map stopped updating.		But the dummy model stopped moving. Intense static came from the radio and the GPS map stopped updating.

	(Did they find the hole in the jamming signal and blocked the line connecting the Indigo Plasma to the dummies!?)		(Did they find the hole in the jamming signal and blocked the line connecting the Indigo Plasma to the dummies!?)
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	That last bit seemed to have been spoken to Wydine and the others, but the mercenaries did not seem to agree. A PMC focused on profit took that kind of thing seriously.		That last bit seemed to have been spoken to Wydine and the others, but the mercenaries did not seem to agree. A PMC focused on profit took that kind of thing seriously.

	“They had a major weakness this entire time,” said Quenser slowly in attempt to calm down Heivia who was about to panic. “The armor has no high heat resistant reactive material in it. Nor does it function as onion armor. It’s just a mass of cheap ceramic. In other words, it has a poor resistance to extreme changes in temperature.”		“They had a major weakness this entire time,” said Quenser slowly in an attempt to calm down Heivia who was about to panic. “The armor has no high heat resistant reactive material in it. Nor does it function as onion armor. It’s just a mass of cheap ceramic. In other words, it has a poor resistance to extreme changes in temperature.”

	“What are you talking about!?”		“What are you talking about!?”
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	“No, Quenser…” said Heivia dull surprise. “The Indigo Plasma is a true Second Generation Object! Even if the princess had all 7 of her main cannons functioning, she would have trouble destroying that monster!! Right now, she only has one. And it’s not at full power either!! Even a direct hit isn’t going to stop Indigo Plasma here!!”		“No, Quenser…” said Heivia in dull surprise. “The Indigo Plasma is a true Second Generation Object! Even if the princess had all 7 of her main cannons functioning, she would have trouble destroying that monster!! Right now, she only has one. And it’s not at full power either!! Even a direct hit isn’t going to stop Indigo Plasma here!!”

	And when that first strike did not finish things, they would be blown away by a counterattack.		And when that first strike did not finish things, they would be blown away by a counterattack.