HEAVY OBJECT:Volume4 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Rxls at 17:12, 18 November 2021

2021-11-18T17:12:14Z

Rxls: Remove edits from Zero2001

2021-11-18T17:04:21Z

Remove edits from Zero2001

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83.149.35.172: /* Part 16 */

2013-04-03T09:27:49Z

Part 16

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	"We still haven't gotten the white flag signal from the Capitalist Corporations. It seems they still wish to fight," replied the princess.		"We still haven't gotten the white flag signal from the Capitalist Corporations. It seems they still wish to fight," replied the princess.

	"Sink their lifeboats or something. They'll change their minds once they see firsthand that nothing but a watery grave awaits them if they do surrender here."		"Sink their lifeboats or something. They'll change their minds once they see firsthand that nothing but a watery grave awaits them if they don't surrender here."

	With that comment, Quenser headed for the bright ocean surface.		With that comment, Quenser headed for the bright ocean surface.

Hiro Hayase: Reverting back to Kamachi's style

2013-01-24T19:10:13Z

Reverting back to Kamachi's style

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SinsI: /* Part 2 */

2013-01-13T12:42:32Z

Part 2

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	"This Cardinal Oldnick had contacted Hyena from the Loyauté district. Some data we found in their headquarters after blowing them away made that clear enough."		"This Cardinal Oldnick had contacted Hyena from the Loyauté district. Some data we found in their headquarters after blowing them away made that clear enough."

	"But why? I would think a cardinal would insist on keeping things clean. Would he really contact a group using the restoration of Oceania as a chance to rob people?"		"But why? I would think a cardinal would insist on keeping things clean. Would he really contact a group that is using the restoration of Oceania as a chance to rob people?"

	"We still don't know what he's after. He's causing quite an uproar, but we still can't figure out what he hopes to achieve in the end. It's possible he's just fleeing to save his own skin," pointed out Heivia offhandedly. "It's possible he wanted to use them against the Faith Organization's Valkyrie. Those grim reapers are quite something, but they're still flesh-and-blood soldiers. There is a chance he was planning to use Hyena to deal with Valkyrie."		"We still don't know what he's after. He's causing quite an uproar, but we still can't figure out what he hopes to achieve in the end. It's possible he's just fleeing to save his own skin," pointed out Heivia offhandedly. "It's possible he wanted to use them against the Faith Organization's Valkyrie. Those grim reapers are quite something, but they're still flesh-and-blood soldiers. There is a chance he was planning to use Hyena to deal with Valkyrie."

Binboday: /* Part 9 */

2012-12-12T10:10:11Z

Part 9

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	''We were deployed because those impudent ideas of his reached a level where they violated our religious rules. But our reasoning means nothing to the Legitimacy Kingdom. We cannot avoid a conflict here.''		''We were deployed because those impudent ideas of his reached a level where they violated our religious rules. But our reasoning means nothing to the Legitimacy Kingdom. We cannot avoid a conflict here.''

	"Maria, Rachel." Sarasa gave instructions to her subordinates over the radio. "We must finish them off quickly. Prepare your 50 mm mortar. I will intentionally fire well off target. Once they know we are using short-range sniper rifles, they will assume we cannot hit them at this range and grow negligent. Fire at them once their heads surface.		"Maria, Rachel." Sarasa gave instructions to her subordinates over the radio. "We must finish them off quickly. Prepare your 50 mm mortar. I will intentionally fire well off target. Once they know we are using short-range sniper rifles, they will assume we cannot hit them at this range and grow negligent. Fire at them once their heads surface."

	"Understood. We can hold the mortar one-handed, so the setup takes no time at all."		"Understood. We can hold the mortar one-handed, so the setup takes no time at all."

Acolyte at 14:53, 21 November 2012

2012-11-21T14:53:50Z

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	"You can have his head," replied the Legitimacy Kingdom soldier immediately. "We just need to get DNA evidence. After Oldnick is dead, we'll give you some time. You can chop of his head, but leave the rest of him for us. We'll retrieve that."		"You can have his head," replied the Legitimacy Kingdom soldier immediately. "We just need to get DNA evidence. After Oldnick is dead, we'll give you some time. You can chop off his head, but leave the rest of him for us. We'll retrieve that."

	"..."		"..."
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	How did the Deep Optical interpret that attack?		How did the Deep Optical interpret that attack?

	Had the Baby ~~Mangum~~ been attempting to slow the Deep Optical's evasive speed by destroying its footing?		Had the Baby Magnum been attempting to slow the Deep Optical's evasive speed by destroying its footing?

	Had the Baby Magnum been trying to damage the delicate equipment within the Deep Optical by shaking the entire Object?		Had the Baby Magnum been trying to damage the delicate equipment within the Deep Optical by shaking the entire Object?

Zero2001: oops forgot this

2012-09-30T16:30:42Z

oops forgot this

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	Quenser and Heivia moved stealthily through the water. The outside of the square frames was made up of thin pieces of cloth one meter wide and a few dozen meters long. With all the frames lined up in a grid, those cloths stretching down looked something like rectangular pillars. They stretched straight down despite the slight rocking of the waves, so they must have had some kind of weight attached to the bottom.		Quenser and Heivia moved stealthily through the water. The outside of the square frames was made up of thin pieces of cloth one meter wide and a few dozen meters long. With all the frames lined up in a grid, those cloths stretching down looked something like rectangular pillars. They stretched straight down despite the slight rocking of the waves, so they must have had some kind of weight attached to the bottom.

	<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Amazing. Is that stuff glittering like aluminum foil all tungsten? It looks like you could make all the construction equipment for a mid-sized automobile factory with just one of those filters.</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Amazing. Is that stuff glittering like aluminum foil all tungsten? It looks like you could make all the construction equipment for a mid-sized automobile factory with just one of those filters."</span>

	<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Heh. It's almost as dazzling as my sexy face,</span> commented Heivia.		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Heh. It's almost as dazzling as my sexy face,"</span> commented Heivia.

	<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Man, I kind of want to take a souvenir home with me.</span>		<span style="color:DarkSlateGray">"Man, I kind of want to take a souvenir home with me."</span>

	Meanwhile, Oldnick ran down a pathway on the exterior of the frames and entered a facility made of steel. Even that facility was built atop the type of large float that was commonly used for floating airports.		Meanwhile, Oldnick ran down a pathway on the exterior of the frames and entered a facility made of steel. Even that facility was built atop the type of large float that was commonly used for floating airports.

Zero2001: Italicizing thought speech. Coloring murmers/whispers. etc.

2012-09-30T15:41:09Z

Italicizing thought speech. Coloring murmers/whispers. etc.

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Zakashi: oops

2012-09-23T13:38:30Z

oops

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	The type of explosive and distance from the explosive were also important factors, but Heivia had seen a report saying the deadliness of an explosive blast differed by over 70% depending on whether the target was standing or lying down.		The type of explosive and distance from the explosive were also important factors, but Heivia had seen a report saying the deadliness of an explosive blast differed by over 70% depending on whether the target was standing or lying down.

	Oldnick tried to pull up his hurting body, but it would not move the way he wanted it ~~tcroo~~. The old man could only breathe heavily as he lay on the ground.		Oldnick tried to pull up his hurting body, but it would not move the way he wanted it to. The old man could only breathe heavily as he lay on the ground.

	"You...idiot. Do you not know a good deal when you see one!?" said the old man.		"You...idiot. Do you not know a good deal when you see one!?" said the old man.

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	(We were deployed because those impudent ideas of his reached a level where they violated our religious rules. But our reasoning means nothing to the Legitimacy Kingdom. We cannot avoid a conflict here.)		(We were deployed because those impudent ideas of his reached a level where they violated our religious rules. But our reasoning means nothing to the Legitimacy Kingdom. We cannot avoid a conflict here.)

	“Maria, Rachel.” Sarasa gave instructions to her subordinates over the radio. “We must finish them off quickly. Prepare your 50 mm mortar. I will intentionally fire well off target. Once they know we are using short-range sniper rifles, they will assume we cannot hit them at this range and grow negligent. Fire at them once their heads surface.		“Maria, Rachel.” Sarasa gave instructions to her subordinates over the radio. “We must finish them off quickly. Prepare your 50 mm mortar. I will intentionally fire well off target. Once they know we are using short-range sniper rifles, they will assume we cannot hit them at this range and grow negligent. Fire at them once their heads surface.”

	“Understood. We can hold the mortar one-handed, so the setup takes no time at all.”		“Understood. We can hold the mortar one-handed, so the setup takes no time at all.”
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	“You can have his head,” replied the Legitimacy Kingdom soldier immediately. “We just need to get DNA evidence. After Oldnick is dead, we’ll give you some time. You can chop of his head, but leave the rest of him for us. We’ll retrieve that.”		“You can have his head,” replied the Legitimacy Kingdom soldier immediately. “We just need to get DNA evidence. After Oldnick is dead, we’ll give you some time. You can chop off his head, but leave the rest of him for us. We’ll retrieve that.”

	“…”		“…”
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	With an explosion, the steel door was blown off its hinges and into the room. It did not hit Oldnick directly, but the shockwave seemed to have hit him. They saw him thrown forcefully against the communications equipment inside.		With an explosion, the steel door was blown off its hinges and into the room. It did not hit Oldnick directly, but the shockwave seemed to have hit him. They saw him thrown forcefully against the communications equipment inside.

	Heivia fired his rifle into the now-doorless entrance and sparks flew from several devices within. But Oldnick moved his unsteady legs and ~~rand~~ towards the staircase further within the facility.		Heivia fired his rifle into the now-doorless entrance and sparks flew from several devices within. But Oldnick moved his unsteady legs and ran towards the staircase further within the facility.

	“That persistent bastard!!” shouted Heivia as he ran for the stairs after Oldnick.		“That persistent bastard!!” shouted Heivia as he ran for the stairs after Oldnick.
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	The type of explosive and distance from the explosive were also important factors, but Heivia had seen a report saying the deadliness of an explosive blast differed by over 70% depending on whether the target was standing or lying down.		The type of explosive and distance from the explosive were also important factors, but Heivia had seen a report saying the deadliness of an explosive blast differed by over 70% depending on whether the target was standing or lying down.

	Oldnick tried to pull up his hurting body, but it would not move the way he wanted it do. The old man could only breathe heavily as he lay on the ground.		Oldnick tried to pull up his hurting body, but it would not move the way he wanted it to. The old man could only breathe heavily as he lay on the ground.

	“You…idiot. Do you not know a good deal when you see one!?” said the old man.		“You…idiot. Do you not know a good deal when you see one!?” said the old man.
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	(A portion of the steel facility was vaporized!?)		(A portion of the steel facility was vaporized!?)

	The metal had turned into a hot vapor, had been sprayed ~~cross~~ the giant float, and then had cooled and hardened there. That made the surface of the float shine like it had been silver-plated.		The metal had turned into a hot vapor, had been sprayed across the giant float, and then had cooled and hardened there. That made the surface of the float shine like it had been silver-plated.

	(God dammit…)		(God dammit…)
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	The princess was targeting the ocean surface below the Deep Optical. A crater several dozen meters across was created and a spray of water that was closer to an explosive blast than a wave dyed the air white.		The princess was targeting the ocean surface below the Deep Optical. A crater several dozen meters across was created and a spray of water that was closer to an explosive blast than a wave dyed the air white.

	The Deep Optical floated in the air using its air cushions, but it could still be greatly ~~affect~~ by the condition of the ocean surface.		The Deep Optical floated in the air using its air cushions, but it could still be greatly affected by the condition of the ocean surface.

	As more and more metal shells were fired, the Deep Optical very nearly capsized.		As more and more metal shells were fired, the Deep Optical very nearly capsized.
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	How did the Deep Optical interpret that attack?		How did the Deep Optical interpret that attack?

	Had the Baby ~~Mangum~~ been attempting to slow the Deep Optical’s evasive speed by destroying its footing?		Had the Baby Magnum been attempting to slow the Deep Optical’s evasive speed by destroying its footing?

	Had the Baby Magnum been trying to damage the delicate equipment within the Deep Optical by shaking the entire Object?		Had the Baby Magnum been trying to damage the delicate equipment within the Deep Optical by shaking the entire Object?
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	She could hardly be blamed for being confused.		She could hardly be blamed for being confused.

	An explosion had suddenly occurred amongst the frames that made up large portion of the plant. And the explosion did not spread out evenly. It was vertical. A few of the frames were blown to pieces and a pillar of water shot a few dozen meters straight up into the air.		An explosion had suddenly occurred amongst the frames that made up a large portion of the plant. And the explosion did not spread out evenly. It was vertical. A few of the frames were blown to pieces and a pillar of water shot a few dozen meters straight up into the air.

	“Is there anything explosive there?”		“Is there anything explosive there?”
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	“We still haven’t gotten the white flag signal from the Capitalist Corporations. It seems they still wish to fight,” replied the princess.		“We still haven’t gotten the white flag signal from the Capitalist Corporations. It seems they still wish to fight,” replied the princess.

	“Sink their lifeboats or something. They’ll change their minds once they see firsthand that nothing but a watery grave awaits them if they do surrender here.”		“Sink their lifeboats or something. They’ll change their minds once they see firsthand that nothing but a watery grave awaits them if they don't surrender here.”

	With that comment, Quenser headed for the bright ocean surface.		With that comment, Quenser headed for the bright ocean surface.