HEAVY OBJECT:Volume6 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Creqaw: /* Part 9 */

2014-07-05T21:33:20Z

Part 9

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	“The Object they secretly brought in for Princess Staivia is basically a pile of scraps. They chose it so they knew they had a target they could destroy on the first shot.”		“The Object they secretly brought in for Princess Staivia is basically a pile of scraps. They chose it so they knew they had a target they could destroy on the first shot.”

	“What if the princess catches on to Dimiksy’s conspiracy and refuses to board the ~~Objecct~~?”		“What if the princess catches on to Dimiksy’s conspiracy and refuses to board the Object?”

	“If they used an Object to torture the flesh-and-blood princess to death, they would receive nothing but the animosity of the people. …But it’s different if she has an Object but refuses to board it. People would assume she lost her nerve. And another thing. In our world, you are free to accept or decline a letter challenging you to a duel. But once you accept the duel, your social standing will drop like a rock if you don’t show up. That might even get your right to life revoked.”		“If they used an Object to torture the flesh-and-blood princess to death, they would receive nothing but the animosity of the people. …But it’s different if she has an Object but refuses to board it. People would assume she lost her nerve. And another thing. In our world, you are free to accept or decline a letter challenging you to a duel. But once you accept the duel, your social standing will drop like a rock if you don’t show up. That might even get your right to life revoked.”

Axyraandas: /* Part 16 */

2014-03-26T23:40:01Z

Part 16

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	While sipping on a chilled carbonated beverage, she thought of what had started all this.		While sipping on a chilled carbonated beverage, she thought of what had started all this.

	When the Object designer named Claire had first heard what was happening from the Night Edge Platoon (that was actually Unicorn in disguise), she had of course thought of the possibility it was trap. After all, putting on that kind of act was Unicorn’s specialty.		When the Object designer named Claire had first heard what was happening from the Night Edge Platoon (that was actually Unicorn in disguise), she had of course thought of the possibility it was a trap. After all, putting on that kind of act was Unicorn’s specialty.

	Prince Dimiksy was meticulously preparing a plan to assassinate Princess Staivia.		Prince Dimiksy was meticulously preparing a plan to assassinate Princess Staivia.
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	The man from the Night Edge Platoon muttered that last comment under his breath, but he likely intentionally let her read his lips.		The man from the Night Edge Platoon muttered that last comment under his breath, but he likely intentionally let her read his lips.

	He likely had the ability she spoke of us well, so she could not have him be jealous of her. For one thing, his ability for direct killing and trickery were likely greater than her own.		He likely had the ability she spoke of as well, so she could not have him be jealous of her. For one thing, his ability for direct killing and trickery were likely greater than her own.

	And so the woman wearing a lab coat over a swimsuit continued speaking.		And so the woman wearing a lab coat over a swimsuit continued speaking.
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	That was the opinion of someone who had succeeded in creating something from scratch.		That was the opinion of someone who had succeeded in creating something from scratch.

	She was overwhelmingly correct and ~~overwhelming~~ cold.		She was overwhelmingly correct and overwhelmingly cold.

	If you put enough effort into it, you will succeed. She did not mean that as a shallow platitude. She had truly achieved that, so she could not understand the anguish of those currently struggling through it. Why can’t you succeed even though you’re putting so much effort into this? How long will you be stuck back at that stage? Are you even trying? She was the kind of person who could innocently ask those much too cruel questions.		If you put enough effort into it, you will succeed. She did not mean that as a shallow platitude. She had truly achieved that, so she could not understand the anguish of those currently struggling through it. Why can’t you succeed even though you’re putting so much effort into this? How long will you be stuck back at that stage? Are you even trying? She was the kind of person who could innocently ask those much too cruel questions.

108.132.158.86: /* Part 17 */

2013-08-14T01:25:24Z

Part 17

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	No, that was not it.		No, that was not it.

	(The cannons on the front of the Object are only meant to hold an enemy in place. They may be enough to wear down the enemy’s armor, but they aren’t powerful enough to pierce the cockpit! That means he has no choice but to use the sky saber if he wants to kill ~~Princes~~ Staivia to ensure his spot on the throne!!)		(The cannons on the front of the Object are only meant to hold an enemy in place. They may be enough to wear down the enemy’s armor, but they aren’t powerful enough to pierce the cockpit! That means he has no choice but to use the sky saber if he wants to kill Princess Staivia to ensure his spot on the throne!!)

	In that case, he would focus on destroying the ECM equipment that was jamming him.		In that case, he would focus on destroying the ECM equipment that was jamming him.

Zakashi: /* Part 3 */

2013-02-19T15:50:01Z

Part 3

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	The interceptors waiting by the runway could not be scrambled in time. Several small shadows passed overhead and into the air above the naval base.		The interceptors waiting by the runway could not be scrambled in time. Several small shadows passed overhead and into the air above the naval base.

	When he saw something long and narrow leave one the wings, Quenser shouted out while still looking up into the air.		When he saw something long and narrow leave one of the wings, Quenser shouted out while still looking up into the air.

	“What!? Why didn’t the radar catch them!?”		“What!? Why didn’t the radar catch them!?”
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	It was blotted out by the flash of light.		It was blotted out by the flash of light.

	Quenser and Heivia were knocked over backwards by the side effects of the explosion they themselves had created and the pile of trash they had been using as a shield began to crumble. ~~The~~ frantically rolled out of the way, but then the wall of one of the worn-down barracks began falling towards them.		Quenser and Heivia were knocked over backwards by the side effects of the explosion they themselves had created and the pile of trash they had been using as a shield began to crumble. They frantically rolled out of the way, but then the wall of one of the worn-down barracks began falling towards them.

	“Why is it that I’m not expecting to get any praise for this victory!?”		“Why is it that I’m not expecting to get any praise for this victory!?”

EnigmaticRepose: /* Part 14 */ "To save on of them" to "To save one of them".

2013-02-07T00:25:28Z

Part 14: "To save on of them" to "To save one of them".

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	Mikfa stared at the two of them dumbfounded.		Mikfa stared at the two of them dumbfounded.

	To save on of them, the other had to be killed.		To save one of them, the other had to be killed.

	Dimiksy’s faction had spent many long years manipulating information to set up that condition. Mikfa had tried to resist it all, but that line of thinking had become entrenched in her mind without her even realizing it.		Dimiksy’s faction had spent many long years manipulating information to set up that condition. Mikfa had tried to resist it all, but that line of thinking had become entrenched in her mind without her even realizing it.

SinsI: /* Part 19 */

2013-02-06T08:45:51Z

Part 19

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	In other words…		In other words…

	Claire may have been an amateur at controlling an Object and she may have had to painstakingly check each command before ~~imputing~~ it, but she could still fire the main cannon and blow away Dimiksy Nikolaschka.		Claire may have been an amateur at controlling an Object and she may have had to painstakingly check each command before inputing it, but she could still fire the main cannon and blow away Dimiksy Nikolaschka.

	“…Excelsyla,” muttered Claire as she operated a control-column-like lever with one hand and brought her index finger to a trigger-like button.		“…Excelsyla,” muttered Claire as she operated a control-column-like lever with one hand and brought her index finger to a trigger-like button.

SinsI: /* Part 19 */

2013-02-06T06:52:49Z

Part 19

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	Heivia headed for the surface while feeling truly grateful that he was not still stuck inside the float. Due to being suddenly thrown out, he had little oxygen left in his mouth.		Heivia headed for the surface while feeling truly grateful that he was not still stuck inside the float. Due to being suddenly thrown out, he had little oxygen left in his mouth.

	His head started to pound painfully due to lack of oxygen, but he somehow managed to breach the surface		His head started to pound painfully due to lack of oxygen, but he somehow managed to breach the surface.

	“Bhahh! What the hell!? I finally get some air and it’s as hot as a sauna!!”		“Bhahh! What the hell!? I finally get some air and it’s as hot as a sauna!!”

Js06 at 01:08, 6 February 2013

2013-02-06T01:08:52Z

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SinsI: /* Part 17 */ Translation fix

2013-02-05T18:56:27Z

Part 17: Translation fix

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	“You idiot! He’s targeting you! If he could kill her with that, he wouldn’t have bothered with that over-the-top sky saber!!”		“You idiot! He’s targeting you! If he could kill her with that, he wouldn’t have bothered with that over-the-top sky saber!!”

	~~Both fragments~~ melted from the Assault Signal and an explosive roar that was similar to a shockwave rained down from above. Normally thinking, Quenser could not risk moving from behind the broken passenger plane.		Fragments of armor melted off from the Assault Signal and with an explosive roar that was similar to a shockwave rained down from above. Normally thinking, Quenser could not risk moving from behind the broken passenger plane.

	But if he did nothing, Mikfa would be caught in the blast next to the ECM equipment.		But if he did nothing, Mikfa would be caught in the blast next to the ECM equipment.

SinsI: /* Part 17 */

2013-02-05T10:26:10Z

Part 17

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	(If the pilot has been injured too badly to operate it or has lost consciousness, the maintenance workers need a way to open it.)		(If the pilot has been injured too badly to operate it or has lost consciousness, the maintenance workers need a way to open it.)

	While looking at his handheld device, Quenser pulled out a Hand Axe plastic explosive and attached it to the back of the powered suit. He attached a fuse shaped like a ballpoint pen and moved away from Mikfa as she continued to slide. Since he had no idea what ~~sate~~ the jamming was in, Quenser chose a timed fuse rather than a wireless one.		While looking at his handheld device, Quenser pulled out a Hand Axe plastic explosive and attached it to the back of the powered suit. He attached a fuse shaped like a ballpoint pen and moved away from Mikfa as she continued to slide. Since he had no idea what state the jamming was in, Quenser chose a timed fuse rather than a wireless one.

	After precisely 10 seconds, it detonated.		After precisely 10 seconds, it detonated.