HanTsuki:Volume 2 Chapter 1 - Revision history

127.0.0.1 at 13:49, 28 July 2016

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 Their family will be quite happy, not to mention the patient themselves.
-Therefore, to grab
+Therefore, to grab the sweets from the stubborn, troublesome Mr Uchida, I can only shout.
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127.0.0.1 at 11:46, 28 July 2016

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	"wh--what are those? Those which you are holding?"		"wh--what are those? Those which you are holding?"

	~~真的想微笑。~~		I really want to smile.
	~~可是現在只能叫啊，罵啊，像個鬼一樣追著跑。如果患者能因此害怕自己的話，或許也不錯。~~
	~~害怕她，能聽她的話，他們就能活得更久了。~~		But now I can only shout, curse, chasing like a ghost. If the patient becomes afraid of me like that, it will not bad.
	~~能早點出院了。~~
	~~本人不用說了，家人也會很高興的~~		Afraid of her, listen to her, that then they can live longer.

			That then they can leave the hospital earlier.

			Their family will be quite happy, not to mention the patient themselves.

			Therefore, to grab

	所以現在爲了能從那個頑固、性格別扭的內田先生手裏把點心搶過來，只能怒吼了。		所以現在爲了能從那個頑固、性格別扭的內田先生手裏把點心搶過來，只能怒吼了。
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	黑暗中，嘴唇顫動著。		黑暗中，嘴唇顫動著。
	笨蛋!		笨蛋!
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127.0.0.1 at 11:41, 28 July 2016

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    本人不用說了，家人也會很高興的
+   所以現在爲了能從那個頑固、性格別扭的內田先生手裏把點心搶過來，只能怒吼了。
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127.0.0.1 at 11:26, 28 July 2016

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 Natsume laughs out loudly, ever louder and louder, even cracking out, shrinking the whole body, laughing endlessly. Finally, it turns to a hysterical laugh.
-好不容易制定了逃脫路線，但最終發現還是徒勞的我，終于完全放棄了。我決定還是等警衛江戶川先生上來巡邏。
+My effort to plan the escape route was in vein. In the end, I completely give up on it. I decide to wait for the security guard, Mr Edogawa, petrol here and rescue me.
-    我在風吹不到的水塔邊蹲了下來。吸了吸鼻子。也許是因爲寒冷吧。
-    也許是因爲悲傷吧。我嘟哝著：“裏香，不是我的錯…………”
+I kneel beside the water tower where no wind can reach. I snuffle, possibly due to the cold whether.
-    “內田先生，那不是食物，不可以!”
-    谷崎像往常一樣生氣。
+Or maybe it is due to sadness. "Rika, it is not my fault......"I murmured.
-    患者們都是一樣的任性。他們都認爲自己的遭遇很不幸，任性一點也是應該的。對家人撒嬌，沒關系。畢竟是家人嘛。

Energy at 07:41, 6 May 2016

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	don-don-don, just like kicking the stairs away. It seems very angry. Here comes the foot steps beside Natsume. In order to hide from her, Natsume shrink very hard.		don-don-don, just like kicking the stairs away. It seems very angry. Here comes the foot steps beside Natsume. In order to hide from her, Natsume shrink very hard.

			The foot steps passes through the emergent exit, fading in the ward of the west. Natsume laughs out loudly -- operation finished. If I left one minute later, it would be disastrous. Rika is very mad, the pair of cute eyes are shining with anguish.

	~~腳步聲穿過了緊急出口，消失在東邊的病房。夏目嘿嘿地笑了--作戰成功。要是晚離開一分鍾就慘了。裏香非常生氣，她那雙可愛的眼睛確實吊了起來。~~		I am very familiar with Rika's temper for I have met her such long a time. In this case, that kid will never be close with Rika again. Rika will not forgive him. Regardless of he kneeling down, crying out, Rika will never notice him again.
	~~認識裏香很久了，所以很了解她的性情脾氣。這樣，那個小鬼就不會再靠近裏香了。裏香不會原諒他的。下跪也好，哭喊也好，裏香都不會理他的。~~
	~~夏目嘿嘿地笑著，然後越笑越厲害，接著變成捧腹大笑，蜷曲著身體，不停地笑。最終演變成了歇斯底裏的笑。~~		Natsume laughs out loudly, ever louder and louder, even cracking out, shrinking the whole body, laughing endlessly. Finally, it turns to a hysterical laugh.

			好不容易制定了逃脫路線，但最終發現還是徒勞的我，終于完全放棄了。我決定還是等警衛江戶川先生上來巡邏。
			我在風吹不到的水塔邊蹲了下來。吸了吸鼻子。也許是因爲寒冷吧。
			也許是因爲悲傷吧。我嘟哝著：“裏香，不是我的錯…………”
			“內田先生，那不是食物，不可以!”
			谷崎像往常一樣生氣。
			患者們都是一樣的任性。他們都認爲自己的遭遇很不幸，任性一點也是應該的。對家人撒嬌，沒關系。畢竟是家人嘛。

Energy at 06:17, 28 March 2016

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	Oh, right, the weather forecast this morning said that today is the coldest day this year.		Oh, right, the weather forecast this morning said that today is the coldest day this year.

			===== 7 =====

			I put my hands on the fence, staring to the front, thinking if it is possible to go down to the balcony. I climb pass the chest-tall (?) fence and take a deep breathe. In the chilling wind of the winter, my hands and heart are turning very cold.

			don-don-don...

			Rika Akiba run down the stairs, her foot steps resonates in the void. The reddish ray of the sun shines from window near the ceiling, dyeing the stairs, walls and the girl with reddish paint. The long hair of the the girl is flying in the red light. The girl's hair is dancing, dancing like her illusory dream. That girl speaks to herself, idiot, what a big idiot! Her eyes are brimming with tear. The reason why Miss Tanizaki ask her to go up is kind of known in her heart. And she knows that the one who is waiting up there is not Tanizaki, but that idiot. If he beg for pardon, though a bit too hard, she is still going to give him a chance. Originally she planned not to forgive him so earlier and want to torture him a bit more. But he treat her like a dumb-head. He already has her, why does he need to store so many that kind of stuff? All the guys are idiot. Idiotic, perverted, shameless!

			However, it is likely that she is running out of time.

			And the time is passing quickly.

			There is no other way out. She don't want to end like this. And that idiot cannot stand her avoidance anymore, as he turn hopeless lately. He is cute being like that, just a bit.

			Therefore, she decided to forgive him.

			Yup, she want to forgive him.

			I sighed. I know this won't work, so I give up. It is more worthwhile to take a look over there. I sneeze again and again.

			Gorō Natsume is standing beside the emergency exit.

			The foot steps are getting closer and closer.

			don-don-don, just like kicking the stairs away. It seems very angry. Here comes the foot steps beside Natsume. In order to hide from her, Natsume shrink very hard.


			腳步聲穿過了緊急出口，消失在東邊的病房。夏目嘿嘿地笑了--作戰成功。要是晚離開一分鍾就慘了。裏香非常生氣，她那雙可愛的眼睛確實吊了起來。
			認識裏香很久了，所以很了解她的性情脾氣。這樣，那個小鬼就不會再靠近裏香了。裏香不會原諒他的。下跪也好，哭喊也好，裏香都不會理他的。
			夏目嘿嘿地笑著，然後越笑越厲害，接著變成捧腹大笑，蜷曲著身體，不停地笑。最終演變成了歇斯底裏的笑。

Energy at 11:56, 23 March 2016

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	(--lock)		(--lock)

			Then there is a foreboding sound. I put my hand on the handle in a panic. Seems like it can be turned, but actually not. Not again, I am locked. I pulled hard to find the door cannot be moved. Kicked which hurts my feet. Knock which hurts my hands.

			I stand there.

			Only to know that the sun has sat and the wind starts to turn cold.

			"I can't believe it..."

			Oh, right, the weather forecast this morning said that today is the coldest day this year.

	然後傳來了不祥的聲音。我慌慌張張地把手放在了門把上。似乎能轉動，但轉不動。被擺了一道，又被鎖住了。我用力拉，打不開；踢，腳痛；敲擊，手痛。
	~~我站著。~~
	~~太陽已經落山了，風開始變冷了。~~
	~~“不是吧……”~~
	~~對了，今天早上的天氣預報更新說今天是今年最冷的一天。~~

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Energy at 07:37, 6 March 2016

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 When tidying up my room, sometimes I will find out some books which are not yet read. At that time, I will be compassionate about the book because it is bought but never touched. It is the most tragic thing to a book.
-    就是這樣。
+I am not very willing to read it.
-知道亞希子的計劃。
+There is a shadow hanging over me. A thin shadow. I did not think closely and looked up.
-    但我最深刻明白的是自己的愚蠢。
-    明明知道裏香要來，爲什麽要翻開書?!
+It's Rika.
-     我是白癡吧?
-     “裏，裏香!”
+Standing here.
-     我丟掉書，叫著。
-     “不是的，不是這樣的。”
+I suddenly understand everything. Why Natsume is such anxious, why he carried this book, why he stuff it to me. That jerk, Natsume, must have known Akiko's plan.
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Energy at 08:47, 5 March 2016

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	I strain to hear and I found the sound of steps.		I strain to hear and I found the sound of steps.

			She is looking around. Maybe she is looking for Akiko. The foot steps are getting near and near. I took a deep breath and calculate the timing. Just a bit more, one step, two steps, three steps--

			Now.

			I rushed out and kneel on the concrete ground.

			"Rika, sorry."

			Look up.

			It in fact is Natsume.

			I don't know how long did the silent continued.

			I stared at Natsume's face meaninglessly, Natsume also looked at my face mindlessly.

			It is Natsume who reacted first.

			"What are you doing here?"

			He asked in a surprise.

			I immediately blushes and stand up.

			"Nothing."

			Darn it, I knelt before this guy.

			"Suddenly kneeling in front of me, I was nearly scared to death. By the way, Ezaki, let me show you something good."

			"What!"

			"Look!"

			Natsume pull out an imported porn book. It has such a strong image and so sexy that anyone who see it will avoid it.

			"There you are."

			"Huh? I don't want this kind of stuff."

			"Alright, alright. Take it. Gifts from the elder one has to be accepted."

			Natsume speaks in a fast pace, then stuff the book into my hands and leave in a hurry. What is he doing. Anyway, my hands is now left with that super sexy book.

			Well book is such thing that you want to flip over it when you hold one.

			Isn't it?

			When tidying up my room, sometimes I will find out some books which are not yet read. At that time, I will be compassionate about the book because it is bought but never touched. It is the most tragic thing to a book.


			就是這樣。
			也並不是很想看。
			我翻開了書。
			就在這個時候。
			腳邊多了個影子。細瘦的影子。我也沒細想，就擡起了頭。
			是裏香。
			站在那裏。
			我一瞬什麽都明白了。爲什麽夏目會那麽慌張，爲什麽他帶著這本書，爲什麽他硬要塞給我。夏目那混蛋肯定



			知道亞希子的計劃。
			但我最深刻明白的是自己的愚蠢。
			明明知道裏香要來，爲什麽要翻開書?!
			我是白癡吧?
			“裏，裏香!”
			我丟掉書，叫著。
			“不是的，不是這樣的。”

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Energy at 03:39, 5 March 2016

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	"Kneel down, or whatever, whatever you do, just beg her pardon. Though this is my own thoughts, but I think Rika wants to get back to normal relationship too. Kneel, or even better, cry. Then tell her you can be her servant for 100 years or something like that, then she will definitely forgive you."		"Kneel down, or whatever, whatever you do, just beg her pardon. Though this is my own thoughts, but I think Rika wants to get back to normal relationship too. Kneel, or even better, cry. Then tell her you can be her servant for 100 years or something like that, then she will definitely forgive you."

			Akiko smile and then putting the cigarette bud which she has finished into a pocket ashtray. Then she is gone. I watched until her shadows fades. Thank you very much! Akiko. Akiko really is an angel! God who reborn! Buddha who reincarnated!

			Still, I can hardly believe. I stand there like an idiot, day dreamed for half a day.

			I should first hide up.

			I peeked around anxiously. How about hiding beside the water tower? The sun was sat and is getting cold. But it is not the time to consider this.

			After five minutes, the door was opened.沒回過神

			Rika is here!

			Failure is not an option. Anyway, kneel down, cry, stick my head to the concrete ground. Whatever it is, if she can forgive me, I can swear to be her servant for one hundred years.

			I strain to hear and I found the sound of steps.