Hidan no Aria:Volume10 Chapter1 - Revision history

Rxls at 04:21, 28 June 2018

2018-06-28T04:21:43Z

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Passwordrawr at 01:02, 24 August 2013

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Royaloyalz at 15:35, 23 July 2013

2013-07-23T15:35:17Z

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	“…Aaah! Don’t, don’t look, Tohyama!”		“…Aaah! Don’t, don’t look, Tohyama!”

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	Watson used both of her hands to cover my face, including my eyes. Good, good one, Watson!		Watson used both of her hands to cover my face, including my eyes. Good, good one, Watson!
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	Also, did you just say that your Porsche has an explosive function? I will never ride it again.		Also, did you just say that your Porsche has an explosive function? I will never ride it again.

	Sigh “In the future, is it that I will have to kill Onii-chan’s male friends? It feels like both of you are compatible. How do you put it… It’s like a double man team.”		<nowiki>Sigh</nowiki> “In the future, is it that I will have to kill Onii-chan’s male friends? It feels like both of you are compatible. How do you put it… It’s like a double man team.”

	“You… you, what kind of weird things are you thinking? Are you perverted?” said Watson, whose face was within spitting distance of GIV.		“You… you, what kind of weird things are you thinking? Are you perverted?” said Watson, whose face was within spitting distance of GIV.

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences, if any are not satisfied with it, please inform me in my talk

2013-07-23T13:40:05Z

Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences, if any are not satisfied with it, please inform me in my talk

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Pumkingboyz: "deduce that they were were on the" - removed extra were

2013-07-04T07:41:12Z

"deduce that they were were on the" - removed extra were

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	The place was...an urban area. On the roof? No, there seems to be something posted on the wall. Where the heck is this place? If I want to save Aria and the others, I need to confirm the location first......!		The place was...an urban area. On the roof? No, there seems to be something posted on the wall. Where the heck is this place? If I want to save Aria and the others, I need to confirm the location first......!

	I concentrated on the screen, examining the video, and saw a curved driveway about a hundred meters away from the camera. All the buildings and the countless neon lamps were all arc-shaped——and they outlined a large circular form, which led me to deduce that they ~~were~~ were on the inner side of the circle.		I concentrated on the screen, examining the video, and saw a curved driveway about a hundred meters away from the camera. All the buildings and the countless neon lamps were all arc-shaped——and they outlined a large circular form, which led me to deduce that they were on the inner side of the circle.

	Practically, it looked almost exactly like the Roman coliseum I had learned about in world history class—a replica that had been drastically changed with modern science.		Practically, it looked almost exactly like the Roman coliseum I had learned about in world history class—a replica that had been drastically changed with modern science.

Pumkingboyz: Changed G-3rd/G-4th to GIII/GIV for consistency with the other chapter

2013-07-04T07:38:01Z

Changed G-3rd/G-4th to GIII/GIV for consistency with the other chapter

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173.66.7.8 at 15:51, 30 June 2013

2013-06-30T15:51:04Z

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	Facing me, who had a look of suspicion, GIV gave me a playful wink. Then, she turned her back to me and walked away.		Facing me, who had a look of suspicion, GIV gave me a playful wink. Then, she turned her back to me and walked away.
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InfamousSoul: just some cleaning up

2013-06-29T23:51:34Z

just some cleaning up

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KanzakiAria: /* 1st Ammo - Descent of the Hawk -Crimson Geo- */

2013-06-28T09:05:07Z

1st Ammo - Descent of the Hawk -Crimson Geo-

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	What happened?		What happened?

	Displayed on the screen of my phone was Aria, Shirayuki, Riko and Reki. All four them were covered in blood and collapsed on the floor. Only I, who stood here, remained. All my teammates in Baskerville had actually been...wiped out!		Displayed on the screen of my phone was Aria, Shirayuki, Riko and Reki. All four of them were covered in blood and collapsed on the floor. Only I, who stood here, remained safe. All my teammates in Baskerville had actually been...wiped out!

	(How can this be......!)		(How can this be......!)
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	Up till now, I've been going through every difficulty by protecting or being protected by my teammates in Baskerville. In that time, they've become my irreplaceable friends. But just as I decided that I'd protect them with all my might..something like this suddenly happened!		Up till now, I've been going through every difficulty by protecting or being protected by my teammates in Baskerville. In that time, they've become my irreplaceable friends. But just as I decided that I'd protect them with all my might..something like this suddenly happened!

	My finger started to tremble as I depressed the multi-task function on my phone, so I could to try to record the video call ~~to GII~~.		My finger started to tremble as I depressed the multi-task function on my phone, so I could to try to record the video call.

	Unfortunately, Reki’s phone, which Haimaki brought to me, was a different model than mine. I could not activate the recording, and it would inevitably take me some time. I started to ask questions to stall for time.		Unfortunately, Reki’s phone, which Haimaki brought to me, was a different model than mine. I could not activate the recording, and it would inevitably take me some time. I started to ask questions to stall for time.

KanzakiAria: Addressed comments made by previous translators.

2013-06-28T08:49:02Z

Addressed comments made by previous translators.

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