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	Pointing at Aria and and raising her voice, seemingly angry, in a "LOO! LOO!", the girl stood up—		Pointing at Aria and and raising her voice, seemingly angry, in a "LOO! LOO!", the girl stood up—

	Apparently unable to do anything without the walking tank, the badge...no, medal attached to the swimsuit clinking, she tried to run away, barefoot. The eagle insignia which was visible for a second was—something that I had learned in Assault. It was a rank insignia.　Of the American army. And, it was that of a colonel's. This is a joke, right?		Apparently unable to do anything without the walking tank, the badge...no, medal attached to the swimsuit clinking, she tried to run away, barefoot. The eagle insignia which was visible for a second was—something that I had learned in Assault. It was a rank insignia. Of the American army. And, it was that of a colonel's. This is a joke, right?

	The opposite of me, who had slightly relaxed from this mood of escape,		The opposite of me, who had slightly relaxed from this mood of escape,
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	From ~~Aria;from~~ within Aria's own shadow— <!--You're right, it sounds too weird, even for nihonglish. Maybe a semicolon...-->		From within Aria's own shadow— <!--You're right, it sounds too weird, even for nihonglish. Maybe a semicolon...-->

	As if rising from the surface of a pool—		As if rising from the surface of a pool—
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	Hilda, her eyes shining with golden light akin to the Vlad of that time before, floated out of it, a half-smile on her lips!		Hilda, her eyes shining with golden light akin to the Vlad of that time before, floated out of it, a half-smile on her lips!

	"—Intâi gândeste, apoi porneste. Prilejui te face hot... [It would be better to confirm it before coming, wouldn't it.　~~Just~~ like a moth to flame...]"		"—Intâi gândeste, apoi porneste. Prilejui te face hot... [It would be better to confirm it before coming, wouldn't it. Just like a moth to flame...]"

	Aria tried to turn around to Hilda, muttering in Romanian from directly behind, but she could not.		Aria tried to turn around to Hilda, muttering in Romanian from directly behind, but she could not.

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	"That's right. I too love battles. I can drink as much lovely blood as I want."		"That's right. I too love battles. I can drink as much lovely blood as I want."

	My eyes were once against ~~drawn　towards~~ the space between the lips which had just released such a dangerous line.		My eyes were once against drawn towards the space between the lips which had just released such a dangerous line.

	Visible because the tip was coated with some sort of scarlet coating...those were fangs.		Visible because the tip was coated with some sort of scarlet coating...those were fangs.

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	Her short body wrapped in pitch black velvet, she was wearing a black peaked hat, and even a large raven was politely perching on her shoulder.		Her short body wrapped in pitch black velvet, she was wearing a black peaked hat, and even a large raven was politely perching on her shoulder.

	Even I, who was completely alien to SSR matters, understood with just one look.　If she wasn't a witch, she was a fake.		Even I, who was completely alien to SSR matters, understood with just one look. If she wasn't a witch, she was a fake.

	Looking around 14 years old, her black hair tied up into a bob, on one eye she was wearing a burgundy eyepatch.		Looking around 14 years old, her black hair tied up into a bob, on one eye she was wearing a burgundy eyepatch.

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	Trimmed with gold decoration, a sword that was so large it was like a joke.		Trimmed with gold decoration, a sword that was so large it was like a joke.

	"The Vatican had decided that IU was a necessary evil. Which organization IU, holding exceptional battle strength, was going to ally with was kept silent until the last, and as such, for fear of an "enemy who would receive IU's aid", none could take action against one another...the result being, for a long while, an armistice was realized.　Do you not wish to protect such a precious peace?"		"The Vatican had decided that IU was a necessary evil. Which organization IU, holding exceptional battle strength, was going to ally with was kept silent until the last, and as such, for fear of an "enemy who would receive IU's aid", none could take action against one another...the result being, for a long while, an armistice was realized. Do you not wish to protect such a precious peace?"

	The nun brought her hands together, clutching the rosary.		The nun brought her hands together, clutching the rosary.
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	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==
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	Despite being in the middle of such a dangerous　group, he's so composed.		Despite being in the middle of such a dangerous　group, he's so composed.

	"That is something which is unrealistic, right? Because, from the beginning, for as long as the '''Yangtze River''', tangled relationships and alliances have existed like in the '''Yellow River'''. Right?" <ref>The Yangtze river is long. The Yellow river is convoluted.</ref>		"That is something which is unrealistic, right? Because, from the beginning, for as long as the '''Yangtze River''', tangled relationships and alliances have existed like in the '''Yellow River'''. Right?" <ref>The [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Changjiang_River Yangtze] river is long. The [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yellow_river Yellow] river is convoluted.</ref>

	Saying that, he looked up at Reki, who was sitting on the wings of the wind generator.		Saying that, he looked up at Reki, who was sitting on the wings of the wind generator.
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	{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume8 Illustrations\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume8 Chapter2}}		{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume8 Illustrations\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume8 Chapter2}}
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	{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume8 Illustrations\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume8 Chapter2}}		{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume8 Illustrations\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume8 Chapter2}}
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Braiam: /* 1st Ammo: Night of Chaos -Turbulent- */

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	That name which I did not wish to remember echoed in the depths of my chest.		That name which I did not wish to remember echoed in the depths of my chest.

	With a nuclear submarine as its headquarters, it was ~~the~~ the name of that organization, the place where the Jeanne that was standing here and other outlaw superhumans were trained.		With a nuclear submarine as its headquarters, it was the name of that organization, the place where the Jeanne that was standing here and other outlaw superhumans were trained.

	Two months ago, I fought with their leader—Aria's great-grandfather, Sherlock Holmes...the result of that was, that organization was destroyed. It should have been.		Two months ago, I fought with their leader—Aria's great-grandfather, Sherlock Holmes...the result of that was, that organization was destroyed. It should have been.

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	Despite being in the middle of such a dangerous　group, he's so composed.		Despite being in the middle of such a dangerous　group, he's so composed.

	"That is something which is unrealistic, right? Because, from the beginning, for as long as the '''Yangtze River''', tangled relationships and alliances have existed like in the '''Yellow River'''. Right?" ~~[http://www~~.~~baka-tsuki~~.~~org/project~~/~~index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume8_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_1]~~		"That is something which is unrealistic, right? Because, from the beginning, for as long as the '''Yangtze River''', tangled relationships and alliances have existed like in the '''Yellow River'''. Right?" <ref>The Yangtze river is long. The Yellow river is convoluted.</ref>

	Saying that, he looked up at Reki, who was sitting on the wings of the wind generator.		Saying that, he looked up at Reki, who was sitting on the wings of the wind generator.
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	It would truly be fitting if one said that such a method was fitting.		It would truly be fitting if one said that such a method was fitting.

	"Clause three. The battle will primarily be split into two alliances, 'Deen' ~~[http:~~/~~/www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume8_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_1]~~ and 'Grenada' ~~[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project~~/~~index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume8_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_1]~~.　These ancient names are maintained as a sign of respect for the previous generations of fighters who had come before us, it is something that is not to be changed for all eternity.		"Clause three. The battle will primarily be split into two alliances, 'Deen' <ref>Unit</ref> and 'Grenada' <ref>Kin</ref>.　These ancient names are maintained as a sign of respect for the previous generations of fighters who had come before us, it is something that is not to be changed for all eternity.

	Which alliance each organization belongs to will be decided based upon the declarations here, but silence/unaffiliation is also allowed. Changing affiliations after the declaration is not forbidden, but based upon the prideful ones assembled here I believe that the matter will be resolved appropriately.		Which alliance each organization belongs to will be decided based upon the declarations here, but silence/unaffiliation is also allowed. Changing affiliations after the declaration is not forbidden, but based upon the prideful ones assembled here I believe that the matter will be resolved appropriately.
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	The man from earlier, the one in Chinese clothing with circular glasses, looked up　at her, smiling.		The man from earlier, the one in Chinese clothing with circular glasses, looked up　at her, smiling.

	"Ranban's ambassador, {{Hidan no Aria:Shokatsu Seigen}} will make his declaration. We will be 'Grenada'. Because, there is the debt to be repaid by Ulus' ''Reki'' for hindering our business a few days before. Then...you are the only one left?" [http://~~www~~.~~baka-tsuki~~.org/~~project~~/~~index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume8_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_1~~]		"Ranban's ambassador, {{Hidan no Aria:Shokatsu Seigen}} will make his declaration. We will be 'Grenada'. Because, there is the debt to be repaid by Ulus' ''Reki'' for hindering our business a few days before. Then...you are the only one left?" <ref>[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zhuge_Liang Zhuge Liang]</ref>

	So he said to another one standing in the midst of the mist.		So he said to another one standing in the midst of the mist.
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	Hilda, parrying Durandal with the fangs that had just left Aria's neck, turned, getting away. <!-- . . . -->		Hilda, parrying Durandal with the fangs that had just left Aria's neck, turned, getting away. <!-- . . . -->

	"What a happy miscalculation. Staying in Prime~~[http://www~~.~~baka-tsuki.org~~/~~project/index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume8_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_1]~~, I could remove my shell. Ohohoho...Ohohohohohoho!"		"What a happy miscalculation. Staying in Prime<ref>First form.</ref>, I could remove my shell. Ohohoho...Ohohohohohoho!"

	Bringing the back of her hand to her cheek—the blood from the gunshot wound which had been blown open by Reki had stopped—resounding in my ears, she laughed loudly in a voice bordering on ultrasonic.		Bringing the back of her hand to her cheek—the blood from the gunshot wound which had been blown open by Reki had stopped—resounding in my ears, she laughed loudly in a voice bordering on ultrasonic.

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	Former Nazi Germany's [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hakenkreuz#As_the_symbol_of_Nazism Hakenkreuz].		Former Nazi Germany's [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hakenkreuz#As_the_symbol_of_Nazism Hakenkreuz].

	With just her crimson left eye, that ~~eyepatch~~ witch glared up at the nun, Meiya.		With just her crimson left eye, that eye-patch witch glared up at the nun, Meiya.

	"You didn't have an [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Armistice armistice] at all. You attacked my familiar in [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dusseldorf Dusseldorf]. Peace? The hell are you saying."		"You didn't have an [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Armistice armistice] at all. You attacked my familiar in [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dusseldorf Dusseldorf]. Peace? The hell are you saying."
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	At the point in time where one's own organization no longer had any powerful warriors, one had to raise a white flag--was how it was, right?		At the point in time where one's own organization no longer had any powerful warriors, one had to raise a white flag--was how it was, right?

	The style of battle was rather ancient, but it wasn't nonexistent. It was like in Japan, where such a thing ~~occured~~ during the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heian_period Heian period]. Warriors carrying the names of their respective areas would duel in order.		The style of battle was rather ancient, but it wasn't nonexistent. It was like in Japan, where such a thing occurred during the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heian_period Heian period]. Warriors carrying the names of their respective areas would duel in order.

	It would truly be fitting if one said that such a method was fitting.		It would truly be fitting if one said that such a method was fitting.
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	"Yes. The Vatican was originally 'Deen', exterminating the tainted of 'Grenada'. The founders of Legio Deen."		"Yes. The Vatican was originally 'Deen', exterminating the tainted of 'Grenada'. The founders of Legio Deen."

	With her hand, clothed with gloves of white lace, she　gestured at the witch and the ~~vampiress~~.		With her hand, clothed with gloves of white lace, she　gestured at the witch and the vampires.

	"Ah. Of course, I too am part of 'Grenada'. Something like being Meiya's ally is unimaginable."		"Ah. Of course, I too am part of 'Grenada'. Something like being Meiya's ally is unimaginable."
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	With those eyes filled with irritation, he looked around at us and his face　was colored with face paint akin to the war paint of the natives of someplace.		With those eyes filled with irritation, he looked around at us and his face　was colored with face paint akin to the war paint of the natives of someplace.

	"Keh--this is laughable. I came here thinking that there'd be strong people, but, the hell is this?　This's just a gathering of errand boys.　All of you guys~~'re~~ pathetic. This was a waste of time."		"Keh--this is laughable. I came here thinking that there'd be strong people, but, the hell is this?　This is just a gathering of errand boys.　All of you guys are pathetic. This was a waste of time."

	Apparently, he too was the same as me, in the same "I-want-to-go-home team".		Apparently, he too was the same as me, in the same "I-want-to-go-home team".
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	I don't get it.		I don't get it.

	Still in a state of ~~uncomprehension~~, I looked around me, and the leftover balls of light were--		Still in a state of incomprehension, I looked around me, and the leftover balls of light were--

	Hilda, Katze Grasse, Havi, Shokatsu, Patra...		Hilda, Katze Grasse, Havi, Shokatsu, Patra...